TheDragoon
RPN'S Resident Dragon Knight
[QUOTE="Fukushima Akira]((( I just realized what you do wrong;
You make Tyler turn evil, then you have him turn good a few posts later/next page. You should extend what you do, such as allow Nora and etc to mourn Tyler more and longer, then reveal he's alive. You should've also had the dragon actually be evil and not concern his self with Tyler's existence -after all, he's evil- and randomly attack his friends without mercy. Plus, having the dragon talk crap about Tyler seems a bit cliché xDD )))
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((I know, it was a bit cliché and I didn't actually plan this... But whatever, he turns evil whenever he's angry or depressed... Plus this already happened once...))
You make Tyler turn evil, then you have him turn good a few posts later/next page. You should extend what you do, such as allow Nora and etc to mourn Tyler more and longer, then reveal he's alive. You should've also had the dragon actually be evil and not concern his self with Tyler's existence -after all, he's evil- and randomly attack his friends without mercy. Plus, having the dragon talk crap about Tyler seems a bit cliché xDD )))
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((I know, it was a bit cliché and I didn't actually plan this... But whatever, he turns evil whenever he's angry or depressed... Plus this already happened once...))