Futuristic Portals to the Afterlife - OCC

[Chordling]

Oh but I do have a question, I see that there are some dogs on board. Would it be fine if my character has a cat?

Yes, felines are allowed.

 

[Elenion Aura]

No need. I'm not in the habit of bullying those weaker in the Ways of Angst.

Do you bite your thumb at Rowan's angst, sir?

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : Reserved the Surgeon! :')

 

[Syrenrei]

I would imagine given how perilous the surface is that a lot of birds now consider airships to be their "homes." A cat's dream!

 

[The One Called X]

Syrenrei Angelica does not start fights. She only finishes them. But yeah, I can see a burgeoning friendship there. Joey would definitely tolerate someone who doesn't try to get all touchy-feely with him or his human.

Elenion Aura Indeed I do. And that's ma'am to you.

 

[Kaerri]

YumenoTsukishiro Just to be sure I'm clear: Toki is still posing as a boy, right? It's just two or three people on the ship that know otherwise?

 

[YumenoTsukishiro]

YumenoTsukishiro Just to be sure I'm clear: Toki is still posing as a boy, right? It's just two or three people on the ship that know otherwise?

That is correct!

Only Angelica, the Captain, and Emil plus the Surgeon would know. XD

 

[Life.]

Chordling

I have finished my character application for my surgeon, I do hope she pleases you.

 

[Chordling]

Ronan

Spoiler

The text in your CS cuts off on the right hand edge and is preventing me from reading your entire CS! I can't read it. Can you please fix it so that it doesn't do this anymore?

Life.

Spoiler

Fun fact: Doctors' masks used to look like that in like.... the 18th century? Anyway, thought you would find it interesting. She's got a great personality! In her bio, the phrase should be "on the Giovanni", not "in Giovanni". I just want to make sure that you're aware that the Giovanni is an actual ship, not a town or city. Overall, there are a few grammatical errors here and there. Just skim back through and fine edit. They're really small but it'll make your CS even better than it already is!

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : Fixed it!

 

[Chordling]

Ronan , it's still cut off for me for some reason.

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : Huh... can you give me an extra day to make a new CS code? It's fine on my screen so I have no idea why it's cutting off on yours.

 

[Chordling]

Ronan the "height:218px; width:360px;" is causing the text to break for me. Is it okay if I remove it?

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : Give it a try. If not, I can whip up a new code that's better.

 

[Chordling]

Ronan , it worked! Thank you. I will spend the next few minutes going over your CS.

 

[Chordling]

Ronan

Spoiler

One huge thing you should remember: the government and the pirates are NOT friendly with one another. The Arcaine is a government associated ship. The Giovanni is a secret pirate mothership. They are far from one and the same. Scavengers serve under the government, therefore, they are also associated with the Arcaine. She could not flee from the government by going to the Arcaine (very counter productive). If she shot a government official, she would likely have been arrested and executed.

Additionally, sustainers are loyal to the government and are not likely to defect. Scavengers did. It would be odd to see someone go from a scavenger, promoted to a sustainer, then participate in piracy, and live. If your character is looking for peace, pirate ships are the last place she'll want to be. Belladonna would not be aboard the Cold Raven anymore in your character's timeline. She would already be established on the Giovanni.

I have no idea as to how your character becomes skilled as a surgeon. I think that would be a pretty significant part of your character's history, n'est pas? Please read over the lore again. All of it is crucial to this roleplay!

 

[Life.]

Chordling

I edited my CS.

 

[YumenoTsukishiro]

Everyone, Captain Woods is a meanie. xD

 

[The One Called X]

Everyone, Captain Woods is a meanie. xD

WHAT DID HE DO. DOES JOEY NEED TO SMACK A BITCH.

 

[Chordling]

Everyone, Captain Woods is a meanie. xD

And I hope that you are all not realizing this right now.

 

[Chordling]

WHAT DID HE DO. DOES JOEY NEED TO SMACK A BITCH.

Joey tries to touch him and he gets shot.

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : I'm probably just going to redo my entire CS since I thought of a better character concept on my morning jog. The one I have right now didn't really click with me, so I'm not surprised by your feedback.
Could I reserve a ship mechanic position?

 

[Chordling]

Chordling : I'm probably just going to redo my entire CS since I thought of a better character concept on my morning jog. The one I have right now didn't really click with me, so I'm not surprised by your feedback.
Could I reserve a ship mechanic position?

Absolutely. Post your reservation in the CS thread. I will remove your old CS and change your reservation once its made.

 

[Ronan]

Chordling : Thank you so much for your help and understanding! I really appreciate it, and I'm very excited to showcase a new, better character. :^)

 

[The One Called X]

Joey tries to touch him and he gets shot.

gasP HOW COULD YOUUUUUUU he is but a SMOL INNOCENT PUPPER you MONSTER