Futuristic Portals to the Afterlife - OCC

[Chordling]

Hello, Ronan ,

You may make reservations in the CS thread. Simply post as others have done. More roles will be available later as well, so you may also wait to see what those will be as well.

 

[Chordling]

Welcome to our First Mate, Elenion Aura !

 

[Elenion Aura]

Welcome to our First Mate, Elenion Aura !

YAy!! Thank you for all the help can't wait to get started )

 

[Kaerri]

Chordling Is it all right if I make a couple changes to Torrey's cs? I want to add a line or two to his description.

Ronan I can't read your cs on my phone because the text runs off the screen. Is there a width setting or something?
*doesn't know much about BBcode*

 

[Chordling]

Chordling Is it all right if I make a couple changes to Torrey's cs? I want to add a line or two to his description.

Yes, once your CS has been approved, you may make edits as you wish.

Ronan
While you may have posted your CS, please note that this does not count as reserving a position. I suggest reading the character sign-up information and all of the other supporting materials, such as the Lore and Rules. All of the links are provided at the bottom of the OP of every roleplay related thread.

 

[Chordling]

Vali Ulfr , please consider posting your CS soon so I may review it before time runs out.

 

[Elenion Aura]

Hey y'all! Anybody wanna start planning relationships/friendships/rivalries?

 

[Chordling]

Vali Ulfr , your reservation has expired. The Master role is now reversible to anyone.

Elenion Aura , I would love to discuss the relation between Rowan and Captain Woods. We can just keep using our PM for discussion!

 

[Chordling]

Alecto , this is a reminder that your two-hour extension has begun.

 

[The One Called X]

Elenion Aura yeah bruh. I was actually thinking that our characters have a lot in common.

Also just in general if anyone wants to plot things feel free to hit me up.

 

[Chordling]

The One Called X , PM me, give me a holler, whatever, if you want to talk about Woods, the Giovanni, and Angelica.

 

[whitepaperplates]

Yo yo, hook me up with these discussions lol

 

[Alecto]

Barely managed to finish my character sheet in time, whew!

Also someone pls tell me if the spinning gears are too much. I feel like I went overboard with that,

 

[Chordling]

Perfect, I am reading your CS now, and I will try to give you feedback before your reservation extension expires.

 

[Chordling]

Alecto

Spoiler

Everything looks great! Before I can accept your CS, the only suggestion I have is fixing the last bit of your character's background. It feels odd to me that he suddenly was introduced to pirates and just accepted into their society. It doesn't really feel like there was an event that greatly impacted him to make that decision. And how did his other family member feel about this? How did it affect the other people that Alek knew? Fix the transition between the scavenger life to the pirate life, then let me know when you would like me to review the sheet again.

Your reservation has expired and the role is no longer secured.

 

[The One Called X]

Also someone pls tell me if the spinning gears are too much. I feel like I went overboard with that,

bruh the gears are awesome

 

[Alecto]

Alecto

Spoiler

Everything looks great! Before I can accept your CS, the only suggestion I have is fixing the last bit of your character's background. It feels odd to me that he suddenly was introduced to pirates and just accepted into their society. It doesn't really feel like there was an event that greatly impacted him to make that decision. And how did his other family member feel about this? How did it affect the other people that Alek knew? Fix the transition between the scavenger life to the pirate life, then let me know when you would like me to review the sheet again.

Your reservation has expired and the role is no longer secured.

Alright! Thank you for the feedback! I did feel that that part was shaky so I'll get to working on it now!

 

[Kaerri]

I somehow gave myself the impression that Torrey was new to the crew (though highly recommended, of course, else he wouldn't hold the post he does). Does that work for everyone or shall he have been there longer? Everyone else seems to be pretty established on the ship so far.

The One Called X I love the gears

 

[The One Called X]

I somehow gave myself the impression that Torrey was new to the crew (though highly recommended, of course, else he wouldn't hold the post he does). Does that work for everyone or shall he have been there longer? Everyone else seems to be pretty established on the ship so far.

The One Called X I love the gears

Alecto it's official the gears are cool

But I mean it depends on HOW new he is, really. Angelica's only been there for about a year, though I am thinking about shaving that down a little.

 

[Kaerri]

Whoops, I should've tagged Alecto , they're her (his? sorry!) gears! Got the posts mixed up in my head. The gears are truly cool though.

 

[Kaerri]

Alecto it's official the gears are cool

But I mean it depends on HOW new he is, really. Angelica's only been there for about a year, though I am thinking about shaving that down a little.

Six to eight months, is what Musician and I are talking. Long enough to learn his way around the ship and start to get to know everyone, and they him. I'm very open to discussing relationships all the same!

 

[SentinelSevn]

Hey Chordling I think I messed up a bit when writing out my character's position. When you listed jobs like Gunner and Carpenter, I had assumed we were filling the spots of the leader of each job. I had written Emil Valentine like he was leading the Gunners on board the ship, but now looking over it another time I see that there I should filled out a Master position for the Gunners. Since I filled the standard Gunner spot, would my character be insufficient in leading others of his position?

If he is, would it possible to have my character listed as a Master for the Gunners? If not, that's quite alright, albeit its not what I had originally planned.

 

[The One Called X]

Six to eight months, is what Musician and I are talking. Long enough to learn his way around the ship and start to get to know everyone, and they him. I'm very open to discussing relationships all the same!

Yeah, that sounds pretty good to me. All us n00bs can chill.

 

[Chordling]

SentinelSevn All of the listed roles, with the exception of Captain, Quarter Master, Boatswain, and Master, do not have any responsibilities for delegating tasks to other members of the crew. They are responsible for working together and communicating with one another. I would rather keep Emil where he is for right now so that it is fair for our fellow roleplay members and so it doesn't get confusing. There may be possibilities for characters to be promoted, so don't feel like your character is "stuck".

 

[Alecto]

Chordling I've edited Aleksander's sheet now! Think I managed to make the transition from being a scavenger to being a pirate less shaky now. If there's still a problem, I'm all ears!

bruh the gears are awesome

Alecto it's official the gears are cool

Whoops, I should've tagged Alecto , they're her (his? sorry!) gears! Got the posts mixed up in my head. The gears are truly cool though.

Thank yous! I really wasn't sure whether I went overboard with them, but now I'm gonna keep them (also whichever pronoun works with me!)