I got so attached to Ellie over the past week or so and I'm psyched to be inside her head... I've literally gone over her CS like 3486723054 times just to correct bits and pieces... If that's considered an approval, I could go ahead and mull over some of my writing samples as her to get a fresh...
@StoneWolf18 Thanks for slowing me down, there, i was really falling into a trope and I needed to flesh out my character more. I actually looked up one of those fiction character worksheets to help me out :P . I think I wanted a good character with a bad side, but when you don't try to find...
Although resentful of the town, Kiara couldn't help herself. She weaved her way back through, tucking herself into the perfect eavesdropping spot as stealthily as she could manage. She knew the ways of the forest, but civilization was different altogether-- she could only hope she did her best...
Kiara scanned around, as if the man who had approached her would be speaking to anybody else. Instinctively, she secured her hood over her ears once more, appraising the man's form until her gaze spied the obnoxiously large sword he carried. Her eyes snapped back up to meet his gaze, pressing...
Kiara settled on a couple of fruits once more to maintain her guise, exchanging a few words about how 'freaky' the elves were.
Yeah... Freaky...
A subtle sense of loneliness came and went, the usual reaction to extended conversation about her false home, before she weaved her way through...
Neri stirred amongst the soft bed linens that surrounded her, stretching out from her balled formation with a huge yawn. It was natural to scold herself for the immediate rugged behavior, and yet the sole thing that accompanied her was the brilliant night sky. She trained herself to wake up at...
I know just the fool...
Kiara chuckled as she reminisced over her adventures amidst the pirates, how they'd complain and complain of leadership until the pirate queen would swoop in to knock them all back in place. The pirates needed the right push, and eventually their greed would destroy...
1) I think I illustrate a separation to express her struggle with her identity-- like a guise to give her an excuse for her lack of control. I'll try to make sure it's well established that they're one
2) I picked at the history a bit, I'll go back to add some information to what she's...
<p>Kiara was adamant about keeping her ears hidden, buzzing about the small, human town to stake out the territory. She knew it like the back of her hand, of course, and yet her curiosities always found boredom satiated by spying around. She seated herself on a small bench, chewing into an apple...
No I meant I looked through and I wasn't sure if liking was considered accepting, but it looks like you're working this all through the OCC to keep the CS page tidied up
A Slave to the Moon
"I've destroyed everything that I love, so I don't really see why it matters anymore."
General
Name: Elspeth 'Ellie' D'Voire
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Race: Lycan
Sexualtiy: Bicurious
Appearance
Height: Human: 5'6"| Lycan: 6'2"...
Quick question: If you look at my character does it have a box of code or the cute lil' bricks that you can click on to reveal information? I've been trying to play with the coding and idk if I've gotten it right yet.
Idk why or how, but it got deleted. I edited the original, but I'll post it here:
Adept: Charisma. Neri has the most brilliant silver tongue in the land, being said to have captivated her targets with her speech. Her requests have always been made a reality, and she's extremely useful for...