Fantasy The Adept

[SilverSkyWolf]

*sigh* Fine, accepted. Just remember that he is no longer part of a noble household because the king certainly would have stripped them of that status for hiding an Adept. For my benefit, would you please tell me what is so horrible about being discovered early in life?

Because if you are discovered early in life the King will have his eye on you and take you away age 6. And I want my charter to be new to the castle because that will be instresting to roleplay but I don't want to roleplay a 6 year old.

 

[Shog]

Because if you are discovered early in life the King will have his eye on you and take you away age 6. And I want my charter to be new to the castle because that will be instresting to roleplay but I don't want to roleplay a 6 year old.

Like I said earlier, he doesn't have to keep you. Say someone is born with an adept in swimming. What use does a king have for that? Regardless, it's a mute point now. Post whenever.

 

[Shog]

Can't edit my post for some reason, so here's the updated one. o-o

Llywelyn Llaw Ereint

• Basic Information
• Adept Information
• Personal Information
• Other

• 
  
  Nicknames:
  
  Ridersbane
  
  Age:
  
  26
  
  Gender:
  
  Male
  
  Eye Colors:
  
  Purple|Gold
  
  

  Appearance Under Robes

  

  
  
  Height:
  
  180cm|5'11"
  
  Weight:
  
  108kg|238lbs
  
  Kingdom of Origin:
  
  Japura
  
  
• 
  
  Adept:
  
  Proprioception. Through incredibly precise spacial awareness and muscle control, Llywelyn has an overwhelming sense of "self". Through this sense, he can control his own body with amazing efficiency, allowing him to move freely according to his mind and balance himself in nearly any position. However, the pinnacle of his proprioception lies in the ability to generate power. Llywelyn precisely applies the contractile force of each skeletal muscle along the movement of the initial ground force of an action, culminating as explosive speed and power. However, he cannot overcome things such as the absolute refractory period of muscles, or his lactic threshold so his bursts of power cannot be used in rapid succession without risk.
  
  Other Skills:
  
  From being trained since a young age, Llywelyn has matured into an expert and very adaptable warrior, particularly excelling in swordsmanship and unarmed combat.
  
  Llywelyn is a good dancer and intertwines fighting forms and techniques into his dances.
  
  After residing in the desert in solitude, he has decently knowledgeable in survival and weather prediction. He is more tolerant than most to extreme temperatures due to ascetic training.
  
  
• 
  
  Personality:
  
  Llywelyn is a rather relaxed individual, generally keeping a level head and minding his own business. Though he seems distant, he has a protective demeanor and tries to help people to the best of his ability due to his past failures.
  
  Bio:
  
  Llywelyn was born during a civil war in Japura, his mother being a escort who was deemed to have desirable qualities. His father paid his mother a hefty sum in order to have her bear his son. After having the woman conceive his child, Llywelyn's father left a branch family member to make sure of the birth and to raise the infant while he was at the war front. Upon Llywelyn's birth, his heterochromacy was immediately noticed. Because of his potential as an Adept and the neutrality of the Ereints, Llywelyn was trained as a soldier from a young age. His Adept became apparent during his training as would tire more slowly compared to others due to his unnatural control over himself. Upon Llywelyn's father realizing this, when the two finally met he personally oversaw his son's training, pushing the boy even further under his harsh influence.
  
  His life was devoid of any affection, having no real connections besides as a promising investment and as a result Llywelyn resented his birth. During this time he was assimilated into to the mercenary community, and most importantly, he met his brothers and sisters. They were all just like him, children who were bred for combat. Even though it was a sad, awkward bond, it was the first time he made real friends and family. Despite only being half related, the siblings looked after each other if not as family then as comrades-in-arms. Regardless, those jovial thoughts were quickly washed away by the harshness of reality.
  
  The Ereint children were generally considered as viable soldiers during their early teens thanks to their genetics, and were usually sent to the battlefield in order to gain real combat experience. However, no amount of training or strength could fully prepare greenhorns for life or death combat. His teenage years were stormy as he couldn't fully acclimate to the life of a mercenary; making a living off the heads of others whilst traipsing on the threads of live. Llywelyn became a skilled and renown infantryman out of desperation to keep his comrades and self alive, appearing as a tireless madman in the battles he partook. Even with his frenetic actions, it became increasingly obvious that he was incapable of protecting everyone.
  
  The longer he survived the more despaired he became. He was not only haunted by what he couldn't do, but also by what he had taken from his opposition. Seeing his grief, Llywelyn's older sister, Enid urged him to retire from the battlefield and live a gentler life. Llywelyn resented the thought of abandoning his family, but he would never be free of his demons as long as he stayed under the authority of his father. With great pentinance, he eventually resolved to turn his back on the mercenary life and refused to continue on as a tool of war.
  
  For the next 5 years, Llywelyn has lived a secluded life in the deserts of Hasam as a farmer. During this time frame he turned to a form asceticism in order to punish and to make peace with himself. While he generally remains in solitude, Llywelyn does occasionally make contact with civilization for trading purposes or by guiding lost travelers. Else wise, he typically spends his days taking care of his crops and continuing to hone his martial prowess.
  
  
• 
  
  Through selective breeding, the Ereint clan possesses an inheritable genetic mutation which inhibits myostatin production, causing around 50% of its members to be naturally significantly stronger than the average person. This trait defines the entire clan's lifestyle, being that of hunter-gatherers and mercenaries. They are the leaders of a large nomadic community (Ereint and non-Ereint) who generally reside in the distant highlands of Camorin. In return for the right to roam the highlands, they invigilate the Kingdom's border. Some specialized groups within the community travel abroad to spread their reputation. While they are loyal to money, they have a code to never betray those whom they sell their sword.
  
  The members of the main family are identified with the name Llaw and are only considered a true Llaw if they express the myostatin deficiency. As such, Llywelyn is the Ereint clan head's 12th child out of many half siblings.
  
  Although he almost never draws it, Llywelyn wields the zanbato strapped on his back with great skill and is even able to swing it single handedly. During his time as a mercenary, he became infamous as the "Ridersbane" as he was reputed to be able to kill a mounted knight and his horse with one swing of an anti-cavalry sword.
  
  He conceals a yoroidoshi (armor piercing dagger) that has a hook on the blunt side beneath his shoulder plate for close quarters combat and convenience.
  
  

• Tab

• 
  I thought we decided he would be better in Camorin?

 

[laughmaker]

I thought we decided he would be better in Camorin?

Uhhhh, his old mercenary corps is based in there and since he abandoned them, he abandoned Camorin by extension. I figured the desert would be the most suitable environment for a hermit and it's a ways off from Camorin. If that doesn't sit well, then the next best option is Tanjung. :U

 

[SilverSkyWolf]

Like I said earlier, he doesn't have to keep you. Say someone is born with an adept in swimming. What use does a king have for that? Regardless, it's a mute point now. Post whenever.

I've changed it, I'll start writing my first post.

 

[Shog]

I've changed it, I'll start writing my first post.

Sorry, I didn't mean to have you change it. And I apologies for sounding like an ass earlier.

 

[Shog]

Uhhhh, his old mercenary corps is based in there and since he abandoned them, he abandoned Camorin by extension. I figured the desert would be the most suitable environment for a hermit and it's a ways off from Camorin. If that doesn't sit well, then the next best option is Tanjung. :U

What I mean is that everything in your CS is in Japura.

 

[SilverSkyWolf]

Sorry, I didn't mean to have you change it. And I apologies for sounding like an ass earlier.

It's fine, I've changed it now anyway and it would be a pain to change it back. So it doesn't matter.

 

[laughmaker]

What I mean is that everything in your CS is in Japura.

Aw snap, I accidentally removed a line, knew I forgot something. In the original CS he left Japura when he was a child and there was no specific setting after his childhood. Thanks for picking that up. e_e

 

[XTina]

Neri J'zarra


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Age:


Neri is 18 years old.


Appearance:


Neri has paled, ivory skin, accompanied by long, thick, curly black hair that practically engulfs her small, 5'5" frame. She has very little muscle on her, and can barely hold a sword up. She has brilliant doe eyes and angular features..


Eye Colors:


Neri has a deep burgundy overwhelming her left eye, set just next to a grey right eye that has a couple small spots of crimson.


Kingdom of Origin:


Neri is from Tanjung


Adept: Charisma. Neri has the most brilliant silver tongue in the land, being said to have captivated her targets with her speech. Her requests have always been made a reality, and she's extremely useful for negotiating-- when she wants to. She's yet to meet someone with a strong enough will to resist her influence, and she doesn't expect to have that encounter.


Personality:


In being someone who gets everything she wants, Neri has grown extremely stubborn in her ways. She has very little patience, and feels the world around her is twirled around her little finger. She ensures that her desires are made true, and will pursue them incessantly until they're made so-- although, she's never had to pursue much at all. For a sociopath, she's extremely successful in keeping influence.


Other Skills:


Neri is quick to examine her surroundings, and has a knack for knowing what people are worth. She's very sneaky and loves to eavesdrop, but otherwise she keeps to herself. To pass time, she enjoys forcing guards to dance with her.


Bio:


Neri was born into extreme wealth, looking up at her parents with doe eyes to get the dresses and shoes that she wanted. She's well adjusted to living in luxury, looking down on the markets and smiling at how small the people looked. Before her adept ability formed, she took to tricking peasant girls out of their dolls, often returning them torn to shreds by her faithful canine companion, Raxus. When it came to teasing, many boys were sent away after being framed-- and by the time she turned 6, she'd already planned what dresses she wanted to take with her to the palace, as well as what material she wanted her bed linens to be made up of. She hasn't left since, taking pride in making the king her puppet and relishing the wealth she leeches off of. Recently, she's taken interest in the king of Bandar, trying to figure out if their king could provide more for her.


Other:


Neri's dog, Raxus, is an extremely sore subject for her, and as such she generally views other animal-owner relationships with extreme jealousy.

 

[Shog]

Can't edit my post for some reason, so here's the updated one. o-o

Llywelyn Llaw Ereint

• Basic Information
• Adept Information
• Personal Information
• Other

• 
  
  Nicknames:
  
  Ridersbane
  
  Age:
  
  26
  
  Gender:
  
  Male
  
  Eye Colors:
  
  Purple|Gold
  
  

  Appearance Under Robes

  

  
  
  Height:
  
  180cm|5'11"
  
  Weight:
  
  108kg|238lbs
  
  Kingdom of Origin:
  
  Japura
  
  
• 
  
  Adept:
  
  Proprioception. Through incredibly precise spacial awareness and muscle control, Llywelyn has an overwhelming sense of "self". Through this sense, he can control his own body with amazing efficiency, allowing him to move freely according to his mind and balance himself in nearly any position. However, the pinnacle of his proprioception lies in the ability to generate power. Llywelyn precisely applies the contractile force of each skeletal muscle along the movement of the initial ground force of an action, culminating as explosive speed and power. However, he cannot overcome things such as the absolute refractory period of muscles, or his lactic threshold so his bursts of power cannot be used in rapid succession without risk.
  
  Other Skills:
  
  From being trained since a young age, Llywelyn has matured into an expert and very adaptable warrior, particularly excelling in swordsmanship and unarmed combat.
  
  Llywelyn is a good dancer and intertwines fighting forms and techniques into his dances.
  
  After residing in the desert in solitude, he has decently knowledgeable in survival and weather prediction. He is more tolerant than most to extreme temperatures due to ascetic training.
  
  
• 
  
  Personality:
  
  Llywelyn is a rather relaxed individual, generally keeping a level head and minding his own business. Though he seems distant, he has a protective demeanor and tries to help people to the best of his ability due to his past failures.
  
  Bio:
  
  Llywelyn was born during a civil war in Japura, his mother being a escort who was deemed to have desirable qualities. His father paid his mother a hefty sum in order to have her bear his son. After having the woman conceive his child, Llywelyn's father left a branch family member to make sure of the birth and to raise the infant while he was at the war front. Upon Llywelyn's birth, his heterochromacy was immediately noticed. Because of his potential as an Adept and the neutrality of the Ereints, Llywelyn was trained as a soldier from a young age. His Adept became apparent during his training as would tire more slowly compared to others his age due to his unnatural control over himself. Upon Llywelyn's father realizing this, when the two finally met he personally oversaw his son's training, pushing the boy even further under his harsh influence.
  
  His life was devoid of any affection, having no real connections besides as a promising investment and as a result Llywelyn resented his birth. For better or worse, at the age of 7 his father declared it was time for the mercenaries to continue their travels, as Japura had become too peaceful. During this time he was assimilated into to the mercenary community, and most importantly, he met his brothers and sisters. They were all just like him, children who were bred for combat. Even though it was a sad, awkward bond, it was the first time he made real friends and family. Despite only being half related, the siblings looked after each other if not as family then as comrades-in-arms. Regardless, those jovial thoughts were quickly washed away by the harshness of reality.
  
  The Ereint children were generally considered as viable soldiers during their early teens thanks to their genetics, and were usually sent to the battlefield in order to gain real combat experience. However, no amount of training or strength could fully prepare greenhorns for life or death combat. His teenage years were stormy as he couldn't fully acclimate to the life of a mercenary; making a living off the heads of others whilst traipsing on the threads of live. Llywelyn became a skilled and renown infantryman out of desperation to keep his comrades and self alive, appearing as a tireless madman in the battles he partook. Even with his frenetic actions, it became increasingly obvious that he was incapable of protecting everyone.
  
  The longer he survived the more despaired he became. He was not only haunted by what he couldn't do, but also by what he had taken from his opposition. Seeing his grief, Llywelyn's older sister, Enid urged him to retire from the battlefield and live a gentler life. Llywelyn resented the thought of abandoning his family, but he would never be free of his demons as long as he stayed under the authority of his father. With great pentinance, he eventually resolved to turn his back on the mercenary life and refused to continue on as a tool of war.
  
  For the next 5 years, Llywelyn has lived a secluded life in the deserts of Hasam as a farmer. During this time frame he turned to a form asceticism in order to punish and to make peace with himself. While he generally remains in solitude, Llywelyn does occasionally make contact with civilization for trading purposes or by guiding lost travelers. Else wise, he typically spends his days taking care of his crops and continuing to hone his martial prowess.
  
  
• 
  
  Through selective breeding, the Ereint clan possesses an inheritable genetic mutation which inhibits myostatin production, causing around 50% of its members to be naturally significantly stronger than the average person. This trait defines the entire clan's lifestyle, being that of hunter-gatherers and mercenaries. They are the leaders of a large nomadic community (Ereint and non-Ereint) who generally reside in the distant highlands of Camorin. In return for the right to roam the highlands, they invigilate the Kingdom's border. Some specialized groups within the community travel abroad to spread their reputation. While they are loyal to money, they have a code to never betray those whom they sell their sword.
  
  The members of the main family are identified with the name Llaw and are only considered a true Llaw if they express the myostatin deficiency. As such, Llywelyn is the Ereint clan head's 12th child out of many half siblings.
  
  Although he almost never draws it, Llywelyn wields the zanbato strapped on his back with great skill and is even able to swing it single handedly. During his time as a mercenary, he became infamous as the "Ridersbane" as he was reputed to be able to kill a mounted knight and his horse with one swing of an anti-cavalry sword.
  
  He conceals a yoroidoshi (armor piercing dagger) that has a hook on the blunt side beneath his shoulder plate for close quarters combat and convenience.
  
  

• Tab

• 
  Accepted. And by the way, you are a really good artist.

 

[Shog]

Neri J'zarra
View attachment 292379


Age:


Neri is 18 years old.


Appearance:


Neri has paled, ivory skin, accompanied by long, thick, curly black hair that practically engulfs her small, 5'5" frame. She has very little muscle on her, and can barely hold a sword up. She has brilliant doe eyes and angular features..


Eye Colors:


Neri has a deep burgundy overwhelming her left eye, set just next to a grey right eye that has a couple small spots of crimson.


Kingdom of Origin:


Neri is from Devarr, Deva


Personality:


In being someone who gets everything she wants, Neri has grown extremely stubborn in her ways. She has very little patience, and feels the world around her is twirled around her little finger. She ensures that her desires are made true, and will pursue them incessantly until they're made so-- although, she's never had to pursue much at all. For a sociopath, she's extremely successful.


Other Skills:


Neri is quick to examine her surroundings, and has a knack for knowing what people are worth. She's very sneaky and loves to eavesdrop, but otherwise she keeps to herself. To pass time, she enjoys forcing guards to dance with her.


Bio:


Neri was born into extreme wealth, looking up at her parents with doe eyes to get the dresses and shoes that she wanted. She's well adjusted to living in luxury, looking down on the markets and smiling at how small the people looked. Before her adept ability formed, she took to tricking peasant girls out of their dolls, often returning them torn to shreds by her faithful canine companion, Raxus. When it came to teasing, many boys were sent away after being framed-- and by the time she turned 6, she'd already planned what dresses she wanted to take with her to the palace, as well as what material she wanted her bed linens to be made up of. She hasn't left since, taking pride in making the king her puppet and relishing the wealth she leeches off of. Recently, she's taken interest in the king of Bandar, trying to figure out if their king could provide more for her.


Other:


Neri's dog, Raxus, is an extremely sore subject for her, and as such she generally views other animal-owner relationships with extreme jealousy.

This doesn't say what her adept is.

 

[XTina]

This doesn't say what her adept is.

Idk why or how, but it got deleted. I edited the original, but I'll post it here:


Adept: Charisma. Neri has the most brilliant silver tongue in the land, being said to have captivated her targets with her speech. Her requests have always been made a reality, and she's extremely useful for negotiating-- when she wants to. She's yet to meet someone with a strong enough will to resist her influence, and she doesn't expect to have that encounter.

 

[Shog]

Neri J'zarra
View attachment 292379


Age:


Neri is 18 years old.


Appearance:


Neri has paled, ivory skin, accompanied by long, thick, curly black hair that practically engulfs her small, 5'5" frame. She has very little muscle on her, and can barely hold a sword up. She has brilliant doe eyes and angular features..


Eye Colors:


Neri has a deep burgundy overwhelming her left eye, set just next to a grey right eye that has a couple small spots of crimson.


Kingdom of Origin:


Neri is from Devarr, Deva


Adept: Charisma. Neri has the most brilliant silver tongue in the land, being said to have captivated her targets with her speech. Her requests have always been made a reality, and she's extremely useful for negotiating-- when she wants to. She's yet to meet someone with a strong enough will to resist her influence, and she doesn't expect to have that encounter.


Personality:


In being someone who gets everything she wants, Neri has grown extremely stubborn in her ways. She has very little patience, and feels the world around her is twirled around her little finger. She ensures that her desires are made true, and will pursue them incessantly until they're made so-- although, she's never had to pursue much at all. For a sociopath, she's extremely successful in keeping influence.


Other Skills:


Neri is quick to examine her surroundings, and has a knack for knowing what people are worth. She's very sneaky and loves to eavesdrop, but otherwise she keeps to herself. To pass time, she enjoys forcing guards to dance with her.


Bio:


Neri was born into extreme wealth, looking up at her parents with doe eyes to get the dresses and shoes that she wanted. She's well adjusted to living in luxury, looking down on the markets and smiling at how small the people looked. Before her adept ability formed, she took to tricking peasant girls out of their dolls, often returning them torn to shreds by her faithful canine companion, Raxus. When it came to teasing, many boys were sent away after being framed-- and by the time she turned 6, she'd already planned what dresses she wanted to take with her to the palace, as well as what material she wanted her bed linens to be made up of. She hasn't left since, taking pride in making the king her puppet and relishing the wealth she leeches off of. Recently, she's taken interest in the king of Bandar, trying to figure out if their king could provide more for her.


Other:


Neri's dog, Raxus, is an extremely sore subject for her, and as such she generally views other animal-owner relationships with extreme jealousy.

Would you mind changing it to Tanjung? It's the only country that hasn't been used yet and I think, for your purposes, it would be for the best. Just a bit of background information so you know what to expect. Bandar, Hasa, and Japura are on one side of a war and Deva, Camorin, and Tanjung are on the other side. This means that you need to have a reason for her to accept an alliance during the war.

 

[XTina]

Would you mind changing it to Tanjung? It's the only country that hasn't been used yet and I think, for your purposes, it would be for the best. Just a bit of background information so you know what to expect. Bandar, Hasa, and Japura are on one side of a war and Deva, Camorin, and Tanjung are on the other side. This means that you need to have a reason for her to accept an alliance during the war.

Yeah, I'll make it work

 

[Shog]

Neri J'zarra
View attachment 292379


Age:


Neri is 18 years old.


Appearance:


Neri has paled, ivory skin, accompanied by long, thick, curly black hair that practically engulfs her small, 5'5" frame. She has very little muscle on her, and can barely hold a sword up. She has brilliant doe eyes and angular features..


Eye Colors:


Neri has a deep burgundy overwhelming her left eye, set just next to a grey right eye that has a couple small spots of crimson.


Kingdom of Origin:


Neri is from Tanjung


Adept: Charisma. Neri has the most brilliant silver tongue in the land, being said to have captivated her targets with her speech. Her requests have always been made a reality, and she's extremely useful for negotiating-- when she wants to. She's yet to meet someone with a strong enough will to resist her influence, and she doesn't expect to have that encounter.


Personality:


In being someone who gets everything she wants, Neri has grown extremely stubborn in her ways. She has very little patience, and feels the world around her is twirled around her little finger. She ensures that her desires are made true, and will pursue them incessantly until they're made so-- although, she's never had to pursue much at all. For a sociopath, she's extremely successful in keeping influence.


Other Skills:


Neri is quick to examine her surroundings, and has a knack for knowing what people are worth. She's very sneaky and loves to eavesdrop, but otherwise she keeps to herself. To pass time, she enjoys forcing guards to dance with her.


Bio:


Neri was born into extreme wealth, looking up at her parents with doe eyes to get the dresses and shoes that she wanted. She's well adjusted to living in luxury, looking down on the markets and smiling at how small the people looked. Before her adept ability formed, she took to tricking peasant girls out of their dolls, often returning them torn to shreds by her faithful canine companion, Raxus. When it came to teasing, many boys were sent away after being framed-- and by the time she turned 6, she'd already planned what dresses she wanted to take with her to the palace, as well as what material she wanted her bed linens to be made up of. She hasn't left since, taking pride in making the king her puppet and relishing the wealth she leeches off of. Recently, she's taken interest in the king of Bandar, trying to figure out if their king could provide more for her.


Other:


Neri's dog, Raxus, is an extremely sore subject for her, and as such she generally views other animal-owner relationships with extreme jealousy.

Accepted. I do, however, reserve the right to ask you to pull your power back if I think it becomes too powerful.

 

[XTina]

Accepted. I do, however, reserve the right to ask you to pull your power back if I think it becomes too powerful.

That's reasonable, I'll keep it under control

 

[Trust]

Name: Lucy Lucatiel


Age: 16


Gender: Female


Appearance

Eye Colours: Red and Silver


Adept: enhanced eyesight, allowing her to see things from farther away along with more precision than average eyesight, better eyesight at night too but not as good as during the day


Kingdom of Origin: Deva


Personality: a little shy, can be aggressive, dislikes combat


Other Skills: experienced at Ranged combat,


Bio: a wanderer that has travelled almost everywhere after losing her family to a group of bandits, spent a large amount of time learning how to use a bow from a friendly forest hunter/huntress (someone can take this as a role if they want) where she learnt about her skill with the bow


Other:always covers her silver eye, carries a bow and arrows

 

[Trust]

Name: Lucy Lucatiel
Age: 16


Gender: Female


Appearance

Eye Colours: Red and Silver


Adept: Control over wind


Kingdom of Origin: Deva


Personality: a little shy, can be aggressive, dislikes combat


Other Skills: experienced at Ranged combat,


Bio: a wanderer that has travelled almost everywhere after losing her family to a group of bandits, spent a large amount of time learning how to use a bow from a friendly forest hunter/huntress (someone can take this as a role if they want) where she learnt about her powers, using them to control the arrows as she lets them loose, almost assuring a hit each shot


Other:always covers her silver eye, carries a bow and arrows

@Shog sorry, really want to get into this rp because it sounds interesting :3

 

[Shog]

Name: Lucy Lucatiel
Age: 16


Gender: Female


Appearance

Eye Colours: Red and Silver


Adept: Control over wind


Kingdom of Origin: Deva


Personality: a little shy, can be aggressive, dislikes combat


Other Skills: experienced at Ranged combat,


Bio: a wanderer that has travelled almost everywhere after losing her family to a group of bandits, spent a large amount of time learning how to use a bow from a friendly forest hunter/huntress (someone can take this as a role if they want) where she learnt about her powers, using them to control the arrows as she lets them loose, almost assuring a hit each shot


Other:always covers her silver eye, carries a bow and arrows

First I need you to read the rules. Other than that, the only real problem is that she has a superpower, not an adept. An adept (as described in the rules) is a skill that you are amazing at. There often seems to be supernatural elements to it like how people may not realize they see my character even if they look at him or how another can bend in ways that are seemingly not possible, but they all start as a skill that any human can possess. No one can control the wind so it cannot be an adept.

 

[Trust]

First I need you to read the rules. Other than that, the only real problem is that she has a superpower, not an adept. An adept (as described in the rules) is a skill that you are amazing at. There often seems to be supernatural elements to it like how people may not realize they see my character even if they look at him or how another can bend in ways that are seemingly not possible, but they all start as a skill that any human can possess. No one can control the wind so it cannot be an adept.

Sorry, i mis-understood it xD , changed it to enhanced eyesight, is that okay?

 

[Shog]

Sorry, i mis-understood it xD , changed it to enhanced eyesight, is that okay?

You still need to read the rules. One rule in particular requires an adept to be explained in more than just a couple of words. This is simply to give me a better idea of the extent of your adept.

 

[Trust]

You still need to read the rules. One rule in particular requires an adept to be explained in more than just a couple of words. This is simply to give me a better idea of the extent of your adept.

Really sorry for the hassle, changed it again >~<

 

[Trust]

Really sorry for the hassle, changed it again >~<

So... Accepted now..? @Shog

 

[Shog]

Name: Lucy Lucatiel
Age: 16


Gender: Female


Appearance

Eye Colours: Red and Silver


Adept: enhanced eyesight, allowing her to see things from farther away along with more precision than average eyesight


Kingdom of Origin: Deva


Personality: a little shy, can be aggressive, dislikes combat


Other Skills: experienced at Ranged combat,


Bio: a wanderer that has travelled almost everywhere after losing her family to a group of bandits, spent a large amount of time learning how to use a bow from a friendly forest hunter/huntress (someone can take this as a role if they want) where she learnt about her skill with the bow


Other:always covers her silver eye, carries a bow and arrows

Accepted. If you want to add slight night vision as well then go ahead.