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Realistic or Modern To End A War (Angel/Devil/Mythology Rp) OOC

All of the companions for the virtues are posted in the NPC thread. I just need to finish the Bio for one then they will be finished. I have to go for a while but when I return I will work on getting the companions for the sins finished and posted.
 
The only thing I can see so far is that you have Hope's name as Gabriel when if memory serves me right should be Ramiel
Ah, I did not know that. Thanks for letting me know. It's fixed. :)

I dunno, everything looks pretty solid to me. Do you think you can pinpoint what you feel is lacking?
Sadly, no. Maybe when I start working on my first post that will change. My characters have a habit of changing a little on me.
 
Now that I think of it, maybe we can figure out another ability related to kindness? The light manipulation is cool however it needs to be balanced out with another kindness ability in my opinion.

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Now that I think of it, maybe we can figure out another ability related to kindness? The light manipulation is cool however it needs to be balanced out with another kindness ability in my opinion.

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I can't really think of anything to be honest. I talked to Dante Verren Dante Verren and he said that light manipulation could serve as a form of kindness by being a weapon of sorts by itself. I'm open to suggestions to add though.
 
ALL COMPANIONS ARE MOSTLY DONE! just need to do bio's for two of them. Feel free to hop over at the NPC thread , take a look, and offer me feedback.
 
ALL COMPANIONS ARE MOSTLY DONE! just need to do bio's for two of them. Feel free to hop over at the NPC thread , take a look, and offer me feedback.
I really like my ghoul companion! I just have a question! Other than his need to devour things constantly, what else is there to his personality?
 
I really like my ghoul companion! I just have a question! Other than his need to devour things constantly, what else is there to his personality?

Basically he would be like an intelligent but completely dependent dog. He really only thinks about when his next meal would be and how to obtain it.
 
My companion is... interesting xD I'm definitely going to have my work cut-out for me keeping him in line and keeping up with everyone else. (Am I the only one who finds pride scary btw?)
 
My companion is... interesting xD I'm definitely going to have my work cut-out for me keeping him in line and keeping up with everyone else. (Am I the only one who finds pride scary btw?)
Pride was actually supposed to be darker. Heck, she was originally going to invite the girl back to her home and force her to drink bleach. And when her father caught her doing it, he was all 'good job'. But damn, that was too much even for me.
 
If my font or colors are obnoxious let me know or the size of the text. My 2 n' 1 settings are off so everything looks bigger on my end than what everyone else is seeing.

Edit: Oh yeah, if my abilities are op feel free to holler, I'll tweek 'em.



I'm trying to think of what kind of history Gluttony and Temperance can have
 
That is a good point. I encourage all of you to talk with your counter parts and try and work out some kind of past interaction with each other if you want to.
 
ALL COMPANIONS ARE MOSTLY DONE! just need to do bio's for two of them. Feel free to hop over at the NPC thread , take a look, and offer me feedback.

Fae's adorable! I like her and don't see anything wrong with her. She and Hope will get along real well. :)
 
Also, I like to make this known to anyone I rp with. I'm fully open to criticism and if there's ever anything wrong with my characters or something I post, I won't be offended if you tell me! I can't wait to get this whole thing started.
 

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