Realistic or Modern OOC: Santa Monica Home for Boys and Girls [Reboot!]

[Dawnstar]

Oh Liam. You did make remind me or something yesterday during our chat though.

We were talking about halloween. I've never gotten to go trick or treating before! My parents never let me when I was young enough.
I still got a little candy, but never got to dress up in costume when I was your age and go out.

 

[KaiMedia]

He passed out for a bit of a nap but ill let him know you sent him a message when he wakes up.

 

[Dawnstar]

Awww. Well it's all cool. Let him nap.

If he doesn't see the message oh-well.

 

[KaiMedia]

well both of those posts are kinda short but I think I gave you enough to work with Bright if not let me know and I can try and add some more just having some serious writers block right now.

Also yeah I'm gonna let him sleep for sure rest is very good for him.

 

[Dawnstar]

Nah it's enough. I don't know if its just me but I'd struggle to write my normal amount if I have two characters of my own in the same scene.

But yeah. Though Asher does feel a little stiff in his dialoge, I assume that's just because he's all guilty and nervous. He doesn't want to screw up anymore.

 

[KaiMedia]

yeah it can be a bit difficult sometimes. when they are in the same scene.

yeah reading over it again I agree it does feel a little stiff not my best work but I suppose his current state of mind makes it kinda work

 

[Dawnstar]

*offers a hug*

 

[Edric Blight]

Hiya I'm back.

 

[Edric Blight]

Ok wow, just got my post up lol.

 

[Edric Blight]

Mighta unintentionally written a novel of internal monologue and thoughts + feelings. Oops.

 

[KaiMedia]

yeah that was quite the post but looks great man

 

[Dawnstar]

Im sensing we might be reaching a natural break point here for another timeskip soon. Felix and Asher and gonna have to go back to cleaning the van soon. And -i'll be honest unless Jack suddenly changes his tune which given how stubbornness seems like a no, their conversation seems like its about to end.

 

[KaiMedia]

yeah I was kinda thinking that

 

[Edric Blight]

yeah that was quite the post but looks great man

Thanks man. I went all out and it took a little while lol. I try not to make them too long as to not bore anyone.

 

[Edric Blight]

Im sensing we might be reaching a natural break point here for another timeskip soon. Felix and Asher and gonna have to go back to cleaning the van soon. And -i'll be honest unless Jack suddenly changes his tune which given how stubbornness seems like a no, their conversation seems like its about to end.

Yea me too tbh

 

[Edric Blight]

Oh, also, how does everyone like the new fancy code and the face claim for Jack? Y'all like it?

 

[littlemedia]

Another sleepy hello everyone.

I really liked Jack's even if I think he's being like frustrating with how stubborn he is.

Oo time skip does that mean we are gonna get to see what happens at the party!

 

[littlemedia]

Also I really like it edric!

 

[Edric Blight]

Aww thanks Liam. And yes, it certainly is frustrating how stubborn Jack is and how he feels he knows better and what's best for him, and refuses to get help or talk to people. Interesting to see how this will play out.

Your compliments are greatly appreciated!

 

[Dawnstar]

It looks great Edric. Good job!

 

[Edric Blight]

Thanks lol! I also love how in your next post you wrote "Jack seemed to write a small novel in his head." Lmao, not gonna lie that got a good chuckle out of me.

 

[Dawnstar]

Another sleepy hello everyone.

I really liked Jack's even if I think he's being like frustrating with how stubborn he is.

Oo time skip does that mean we are gonna get to see what happens at the party!

Oh also hi Liam!

And yes if we timeskip, that likely means beach party!

 

[KaiMedia]

The big question is... Is Asher going to drag Jack to the party whether he wants to go or not?
I've been contemplating it for a while and it seems like something he would do... Maybe it would force jack to at least be a little social even if he just sticks by Asher the whole time.

Plus I want the party to be a really fun scene and I feel like if jack is just at the house that kinda puts a little bit of a damper on the party scene

 

[Dawnstar]

Thanks lol! I also love how in your next post you wrote "Jack seemed to write a small novel in his head." Lmao, not gonna lie that got a good chuckle out of me.

It worked both as a great meta-joke, but it's also fitting given how quiet Jack was being.

 

[Edric Blight]

Haha, oh yea it totally worked. I loved it lol!