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[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

Origin of Powers/Abilities: Cedric was abandon when he was a baby. Left on the door steps of a local church. When he was born, his eyes had a tint of blackness to them that terrified them. They were very religious people and had assumed the devil possessed there baby. Hence why they left him at a church.

The church took care of him for the better part of his childhood. Teaching him everything of what a child should learn. Once he became 12, Cedric decided to leave the church. He was never sure why he left, it wasn’t as if they were treating him poorly there. Something inside of him was just telling him he needed to leave. He didn’t make it very far though as he was eventually picked up by child services. A couple months later, Cedric was placed in a home. The mother was nice and seemed to have a gently spirit, the father however, was different. Cedric could feel something off about him but the father had not shown it. One day, as Cedric was playing in his room, he heard an argument between his foster parents. He left his room and walked to the living room where he heard the shouting. As soon as he came within eyes view of them, he saw his foster mother falling to the ground with the father standing over her, with a clenched fist. To this day, this memory is still fuzzy to Cedric but that was the day his mutant power finally took over. A dark aura was leaking out of him. Surrounding him in a type of armor. The small tint of black in his eyes had now completely filled his sockets are were brighter than normal. The last thing Cedric remembers, was seeing his foster father being thrown through the walls of the house.

Cedric awoke not in his house, but in a different state completely. He didn’t know how or where he was, but he was now away of what he was. He had watched the news a few times with his foster mother and saw frequently the reports about “mutants.” He assumed that is what he was now. Always hunted, always afraid to be caught or killed, never resting, never being able to have a normal life with a family. He would now have to survive on his own. So that is what he did.

Cedric is now 22 years of age. He has picked up all his survival skills on his own. He found a mutant community that was living in hiding. He has been with them for about 5 years. He learned a lot from them. Also, he developed a very, strong dislike for the non-mutant community. Now he is trying to find his own path, keep his powers in check, and is strongly hoping to find a family again to call home…

 

[Its_Just_E]

I can honestly say, I was not trying to make shadow the hedgehog.

 

[Vsland]

You're guy is Shadow the Edgehog

 

[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

I can honestly say, I was not trying to make shadow the hedgehog.

Still super Edgy and also bits of the backstory is super dumb... like leaving the church at the age of 12 with little reason.

 

[Its_Just_E]

Alright then?

 

[Its_Just_E]

Still super Edgy and also bits of the backstory is super dumb... like leaving the church at the age of 12 with little reason.

Alright. My apologies. I will work on my back stories more in the future. Thanks for reading though and the criticism

 

[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

Alright. My apologies. I will work on my back stories more in the future. Thanks for reading though and the criticism

you need to rework the CS and maybe nerf him. Because I don't know why he knows martial arts... there was no mention of training in his backstory.

 

[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

Alright. My apologies. I will work on my back stories more in the future. Thanks for reading though and the criticism

also his powers feel more mystical than something that the X-Gene would give you.

 

[Its_Just_E]

also his powers feel more mystical than something that the X-Gene would give you.

I will give it all a rework.

 

[Its_Just_E]

you need to rework the CS and maybe nerf him. Because I don't know why he knows martial arts... there was no mention of training in his backstory.

Do you like the idea of the character just need to make changes to him?

 

[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

Do you like the idea of the character just need to make changes to him?

he's way too edgy for my taste

 

[Its_Just_E]

he's way too edgy for my taste

Noted

 

[The Mad Queen]

I think Vera is finally done if y'all want to take a look at her. I did tone her down a little bit with the edits so she's not as OP.

Noted

I've seen a lot worse, but I'd still work on it a little.
In future RPs I'm going to be posting the CS of the worst one (ever) as a guideline for how not to make a character.

 

[Crenando]

Do you like the idea of the character just need to make changes to him?

I can point out specific things, but it's mostly just fleshing him out.

1. In a world with anti-mutant hysteria, he'd have plenty of reasons to run away besides instinct
2. His powers are all over the place, whereas most mutants have very specific things that they can do under their umbrella of powers. The shadow thing would surely be enough, I don't think he needs to go full SpongeBob and enter peoples' dreams.
3. When did he learn martial arts if he moved around so much? That takes time and training at a dojo or a local stripmall.

 

[Its_Just_E]

I can point out specific things, but it's mostly just fleshing him out.

1. In a world with anti-mutant hysteria, he'd have plenty of reasons to run away besides instinct
2. His powers are all over the place, whereas most mutants have very specific things that they can do under their umbrella of powers. The shadow thing would surely be enough, I don't think he needs to go full SpongeBob and enter peoples' dreams.
3. When did he learn martial arts if he moved around so much? That takes time and training at a dojo or a local stripmall.

I appreciate the notes. I will look to improve my character

 

[Booperboy]

You've been watching Cobra Kai? Crenando

 

[Phantom Thief of Hearts]

You've been watching Cobra Kai? Crenando

Pretty sure the strip mall was a reference to Star vs. the Forces of Evil

 

[Booperboy]

. . . well now. don't i feel silly

 

[Crenando]

You've been watching Cobra Kai? Crenando

I really should be, it looks like a good time.

Pretty sure the strip mall was a reference to Star vs. the Forces of Evil

This is correct.

 

[Crenando]

Name: Jimmy Bennett

Nicknames: Irish Fist, Tully-Arsed Bastard, Puddin' Head, Knacker

Alias: The Immortal Iron Fist

Species: Human

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Appearance:

Spoiler: Civi-face

Spoiler: In-Costume

Personality: Jimmy is a bit of a knob. He's dedicated to martial arts and finding who killed his father, but sometimes he beats people up for doing something and does that very same thing. Usually,

Affiliations:

Relationships/Friendships: The people of Trim, especially the Franciscan Monks that trained him


M.O or Motivations: Avenging his father, and getting foreign investors on the way

Intelligence: 3/7
Strength: 2/7
Speed: 2/7
Durability: 3/7
Energy Projection: 3/7
Combat Skill Efficiency: 5/7

Power Class: Gamma


Origin of Powers/Abilities: Ol' Puddin Head was down on his luck. Investors weren't interested in an Irish martial arts film. The celebritied had incredibly localized popularity (like Mikey of Boyzone.) The villain was played by the sweetest old man they could find. There was a scene with a cowboy in a bathtub for no real reason. These factors and more kept the foreign studios from investing any money into further productions.

This led him down the path to find a new meaning in the land of Trim. Was there more than historical castles and affordable food from Londis in this quaint town? This, he asked the monks he had filmed with. Their wisdom had previously helped him through the cowboy bathtub scene, and it would once again. They told him of an ancient order known as the Black Friars, who had traveled to China and brought back knowledge of chi. As a martial artist, this was the path to follow.

To the Black Friary, Jimmy went. Five months later, he exited with the knowledge he gained in there. He doesn't talk much about it, because it makes himself seem more mysterious, but it's pretty clear he just trained with more monks.

Powers/Abilities:

• Chi Augmentation: Through his training, Jimmy has harnessed his inner power and pushed it beyond what is normal for a martial artist. This leads to several other powers, such as;
  • Energy Generation and detection
  • Heightened Awareness
  • Enhanced Healing
  • And of course, the famous Iron Fist Punch

Skills:

• Film-Making
• Martial arts

Weaknesses: Despite all of his skills as a martial artist, Jimmy is no Sentry. Nothing is stopping a higher-end threat from completely decimating him.



Trivia

• Hobbies: Fighting cretins, making films
• Habits: Saying "witty" one-liners that don't appeal to anyone in particular
• Likes: Boyzone, Martial arts, hitting things
• Dislikes: Cretins, Skinny Knackers, Symbiotes
• Fears: Losing his loved ones, Snakes
• Hopes/Dreams: Succeeding in the film industry
• Etc

 

[Safety Hammer]

Major Work In Progress
Accessing Fury File #(107348): [ORPHEUS]​

BASICS

Name: Mackay Redmont

Nicknames: Mickey, Assistant, Black Mickey

Alias: Orpheus, Black Rook,

Species: Mutant

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Closeted Gay

Appearance:

Personality: Mickey is a young guy. He's incredibly naive, and- to the annoyance of his boss, Black Peter- still believes that there is some inherent good in the world. Though he has some self confidence issues, as well as rather low self esteem, that doesn't stop him from trying his best. He is incredibly loyal to his boss, and views him as a hero who seeks only the best for the world. Mickey is also afraid that his homosexuality will destroy his social standing, and in turn, the social standing of his boss, so he is currently in the closet.

Affiliations:

• The Hellfire Club
• Xavier's School For Gifted Youngsters (graduated)

Relationships/Friendships:

• Peter Nightengale (Black Peter)

M.O or Motivations:

• Pleasing his boss (Black Peter)
• The betterment of the Hellfire Club

BIOMETRICS

Power Class: Gamma
Intelligence: 3/7
Strength: 2/7
Speed: 2/7
Durability: 2/7
Energy Projection: 6/7
Combat Skill Efficiency: 4/7

Origin of Powers/Abilities: Mickey was born with his powers, thus making him a mutant

Powers/Abilities:

• Siren Song: Mickey uses his hypnotic singing to influence emotions and actions depending on what he sings. For example, if Mickey sings a sad song, whomever he directs the song towards will feel incredibly sad, and will be compelled to cry.
• Sonic Scream: Mickey can also use his voice to emit sonic screams which vary in power depending on how much effort Mickey puts into them. At maximum power, he can burst people's ear drums, push people and objects, and in the most extreme, reduce objects to piles of rubble

Skills:

Weaknesses: (Must match the power( and class level. Meaning they must have a weakness that enables them to actually be beaten if need be, whether physical or mental)

Equipment (Applies to costumes/supersuits too)

TRIVIA

Hobbies:

Habits:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Fears:

Hopes/Dreams:

Musical Theme:

 

[Thepotatogod]

Accessing Fury File #0412201605: Voltage Gangster
Basics
Name: Jonah Vytal

Nicknames: Jonah, Jones, Johnny

Alias: Voltech Bandit

Species: Pulse-Mutant

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Straight/Bi

Appearance: Picture and/or description since a model can't always portray the little things

Civilian

Voltech Pirate

Personality:
Jonah is a caring, thrill-seeking individual who is known for his antics of skipping class. Although he doesn't do it often, he is pretty much the talk of thr school because of it. He is shown to have quite a vulgar mouth, but avoids saying things like FUCK, and I'm uncultured. He's known to crack a joke or two, even a pun here and there, just to make someone laugh. He has a kind nature that springs up to those who are in dire need. Jonah would step in if things go out of hand, believing that no one should think too highly of themselves, even if he's beaten up.

Affiliations: N/A at the moment

Relationships/Friendships:
Avile Vytal - Adopted (Robot) Sister
Mr. Vytal - Dad.

M.O or Motivations:
To cherish and protect what he has from any threat he thinks of.

Biometrics
Power Class: Beta
Intelligence: 2/7
(Scale: 1. Slow/Impaired 2. Normal 3. Learned 4. Gifted 5. Genius 6. Super-Genius 7+ Omniscient)
Strength: 3/7 (1. Weak: cannot lift own body weight 2. Normal: able to lift own body weight 3. Peak human: able to lift twice own body weight 4. Superhuman: 800 lbs-25 ton range 5. Superhuman: 25-75 ton range 6. Superhuman: 75-100 ton range 7+ Incalculable: in excess of 100 tons)
Speed: 2/7
(1.Below normal 2. Normal 3. Superhuman: peak range: 700 MPH 4. Speed of sound: Mach-1 5. Supersonic: Mach-2 through Orbital Velocity 6. Speed of light: 186,000 miles per second 7. Warp speed: transcending light speed)
Durability: 3/7
( 1.Weak 2. Normal 3. Enhanced 4. Regenerative 5. Bulletproof 6. Superhuman
7. Virtually indestructible)
Energy Projection: 4/7
(1. None 2. Ability to discharge energy on contact 3. Short range, short duration, single energy type 4. Medium range, duration, single energy type 5. Long range, long duration, single energy type
6. Able to discharge multiple forms of energy 7.Virtually unlimited command of all forms of energy)
Combat Skill Efficiency: 3/7
(1. Poor 2. Normal 3. Some training 4.Experienced fighter 5. Master of a single form of combat
6. Master of several forms of combat 7. Master of all forms of combat) Courtesy of Power Grid

Origin of Powers/Abilities:
The Pulse altered his genetic make up into that of a Mutant's. And thus, his powers began to manifest a day after, being able to charge his phone without a charger.

Powers/Abilities:
Electrokinesis - Jonah can generate and manipulate electricity all on his own. His natural generated electricity is strong enough to run a vehicle. Roughly around 13 to 14 Volts. He discovered that he can increase it to right 50 kV, although he couldn't handle holding the current of or no longer than 5 Seconds. (40 kV, a minute. 20kV, 10 Minutes. 5kV, about an hour.)

Electro Ball - Jonah conjures a small electric ball containing his natural 14V current. He can increase it's Voltage to his established limit of 50 kV.

Electric Beams - Waves of static electricity amplified to his current Voltage.

Skills:
Wham-Bam-Pow! - Fighting style that consists of whacking people with a blunt object. He'd occasionally use his powers to gain the upperhand.

Basic Mechanical Knowledge - Due to the discovery of his power, Jonah studied many kinds of engines and/or machinery and voltage required to make them move.

Weaknesses:
When Jonah's electrical current is above 14V, it's dangerous to be splashed by water due to it being a conductor. Think of his body as an Electronic device. When his current is above 14V, it's on. When water is applied, it'll make wrong connections and he'll short circuit--Shocking him depending on how much Volts he has on.
In the case of voltage above 1kV, when he lets the electricity run long after his limit, his body would release a great shock and soon faint, or even die.

Equipment (Applies to costumes/supersuits too)
Skull Mask-His Arts Project that was supposed to be used at Prom Night 2 years ago. Glad he gets to use it now.
Biker Jacket -His biker jacket he uses to wear as Voltech Bandit.
Slacks - Slacks.
Yellow Gloves - Gloves.
Metal Pipe - He usually finds a random pipe to use as a weapon and a conductor.
MotorBike - A Bike his father bought for him. He usually rides it to school or when he takes Avil for a walk.
Headphones +.MP3 - His daily leisurely devices

Trivia

• Hobbies: Video Games, Reading Comics, watching Super Hero Movies, Practicing his Power, Riding his Bike, listen to punk music.
• Habits: Swearing. A Lot.
• Likes:
• Dislikes:
• Fears: Losing his Father and Sister
• Hopes/Dreams:
• Etc

 

[Neon Valkyrie]

Booperboy , bud, dude, pal, amigo, calice, what's the plan? I think we need a little guidance here.

 

[Neon Valkyrie]

So here's what I'm thinking; an army of mole men and their mad scientist leader steal new york ... It's a classic tale.

EDIT:
Alternate ideas:
- An alien queen on the run from enemy forces crash lands in New York, and ask Charles xa-I mean ... Asks for help in general.
- The government has decided superhuman are too dangerous and want a registry.
- A powerful psychic and his potentially magnetic-powered arch nemesis' subconsciouses meld into an omnipotent psionic entity.
- Everyone is sent to Mars as punishment for breaking things all the time.
- Everyone becomes an edgy teenager, and promptly dies horrifically.

MOREEDITZ:
- Everyone gets cloned a million times, and we spend nearly a decade figuring out who, if anyone, is the original.
- Everyone, look under your chairs... You get a symbiote, and you get a symbiote, and EVERYONE GETS A SYMBIOTE.
- Giant robot jackasses.
- The cure (for meta-humanism, not the band), blah blah fake, blah blah conspiracy, blah blah chicanery.
- Some big ugly mug says he's gonna eat the planet.
- Space... Reality... Gameshow

 

[Booperboy]

Our subplot villain will enter and steal yhe show soon. If you'd like to know who it is, go to the CS and you'll find it Neon Valkyrie