MagicPenguin
One Thousand Club
Now I feel called out because Magic agrees on how terrible I am.
I'm going to roll away tohyperfixate on how awful I am and have my anxiety play up about how I'm not worth writing with such great peoplesleep now
I didn't say that. I think what you sent me is perfectly fine. I just put that there because more than one person mentioned discomfort with writing this type of scene and it seemed appropriate to share that in case they wanted tips from an expert for how to do it better.
I haven't done very many of them, so I'm not super experienced with writing fight scenes either.