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Now I feel called out because Magic agrees on how terrible I am.

I'm going to roll away to hyperfixate on how awful I am and have my anxiety play up about how I'm not worth writing with such great people sleep now :)


I didn't say that. I think what you sent me is perfectly fine. I just put that there because more than one person mentioned discomfort with writing this type of scene and it seemed appropriate to share that in case they wanted tips from an expert for how to do it better.

I haven't done very many of them, so I'm not super experienced with writing fight scenes either.
 
I wrote one from a Naruto roleplay there a while back that I could send to you if ya want MagicPenguin MagicPenguin .
I think I did an okay job at getting across the action so if you do need some help, I'd be more than happy to provide it. :)
 
Fight scenes are always a pain for me to write. You have to get that balance between realistic combat and fantasy capabilities. Doesn't help that I've never been in a real fight before, so everything i know comes from tv and anime
 
Ooh! Plot idea.

A group that captures abnormal and pits them against each other in fights to the death. Underground criminal types take bets from people who pay to watch the abnormals beat each other. Like a Colosseum illegal chicken fight sort of deal.
 
Ooh! Plot idea.

A group that captures abnormal and pits them against each other in fights to the death. Underground criminal types take bets from people who pay to watch the abnormals beat each other. Like a Colosseum illegal chicken fight sort of deal.
Oooh, very cool!
 
Ooh! Plot idea.

A group that captures abnormal and pits them against each other in fights to the death. Underground criminal types take bets from people who pay to watch the abnormals beat each other. Like a Colosseum illegal chicken fight sort of deal.
I feel like I've seen this idea somewhere before, but I just can't put my finger on it. Hmmmmmm

Nope, just lost it. Hey a bit off topic, anyone else watch the new season of Young Justice yet? Just got done watching episode 13, man that was great.
 
I feel like I've seen this idea somewhere before, but I just can't put my finger on it. Hmmmmmm

Nope, just lost it. Hey a bit off topic, anyone else watch the new season of Young Justice yet? Just got done watching episode 13, man that was great.
I've seen bits of it buddy but the best thing I found out about it was my boy Jason Todd was in it! :D
 
I feel like I've seen this idea somewhere before, but I just can't put my finger on it. Hmmmmmm
They had that in X-Men Apocalypse. Nightcrawler ended up in a cage match with Angel-whotsit and couldn't teleport out because of plot contrivance and electricity.
 
Fight scenes are always a pain for me to write. You have to get that balance between realistic combat and fantasy capabilities. Doesn't help that I've never been in a real fight before, so everything i know comes from tv and anime

For someone who was worried about writing a fight scene, you did a pretty darn good one with that mugger if you ask me.
 

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