Fantasy TT&WW Rules & OOC

[Meme Machine]

Oof, I’m sorry. This week (last week technically) has been really inactive for me because I’ve had a lot going on. Next week I’ll be offline too, but I do plan on making a post before then.

 

[BreeDav]

I didn’t want to jump on before everyone else cause I haven’t typed with you guys yet. I wanted to kinda see flow, but if it would help I can post sometime today!

 

[Fable]

I didn’t want to jump on before everyone else cause I haven’t typed with you guys yet. I wanted to kinda see flow, but if it would help I can post sometime today!

Yup, don't wait on anyone else just jump in.

Oof, I’m sorry. This week (last week technically) has been really inactive for me because I’ve had a lot going on. Next week I’ll be offline too, but I do plan on making a post before then.

Yeah the deadline is nearing and a purge may be coming soon.

 

[Meme Machine]

Yeah the deadline is nearing and a purge may be coming soon.

Understood! Don’t worry, I’ll post within the day.

 

[Fable]

Birdsie Noble Scion Tarmagon shadowz1995 Alteras kevintheradioguy Pilgrim59 Kiroshiven fluticasone Doughnut LazyDaze Meme Machine EccentricFantasy Dalamus Ulom BreeDav Probably George

Last call for posts. If you've posted ignore this, but perhaps pester those who haven't lol. Those currently at risk of being purged:
Kiroshiven kevintheradioguy Birdsie Doughnut

I've spoken to Alteras .

Edit, spoke to Birdsie on discord, he is dropping so SURGEON POSITION OPEN MATES!

 

[Fable]

Reytian Okay here comes the review XD

The CurseGatzby was cursed by a witch doctor.The witch doctor took away his vocal cords and replaced them with a mockingbirds. Allowing Gatzby to copy ANY type of sound that he hears from a cannon, to a pirate, to maybe even some drunk yelling about seeing a mermaid. What ever the sound is and as long as he hears it clearly he's able to copy it perfectly.The second terrible deed the witch doctor did was bound Gatzby to a voodoo doll. This allows Gatzby unable to feel any pain or any feeling for that matter. Since Gatzby is bound to a doll it will take the damage for him and vice versa if the doll were damaged. Curse this Curse!Since the witch doctor took his original vocal cords Gatzby can't actually speak. He is limited to what he hears unable to edit it to form sentences. Hence why he brings a notebook, quill, and ink with him to communicate. But even then he gets bothered by it and just portrays what he's saying via facial expressions or sounds he mimicked.The witch doctor might have also made Gatzby unable to feel pain on his physical body but that doesn’t mean he’s invulnerable. So if he sustains any injuries then he won’t know before it’s too late. The only thing Gatzby can feel is whatever happens to the doll. He may also be manipulated via voodoo without the doll but this only controls his motor functions instead of Gatzby itself.

I'm confused here a bit on the damage aspect of the curse. I get the no-pain thing but the damage part is odd. It says the doll will take his damage, but that he isn't invulnerable because he can still be injured but won't know it. That sort of contradict's that the doll takes the damage. Additionally, I would say pass on the doll taking damage part because that would be a type of invulnerability because then the only way to harm him would be via the doll he holds. A bit like Naraku from Inuyasha: Who had taken out his mortal heard so he basically couldn't truly be killed unless the heart was destroyed.

Mockingbird’s mimicGatzby is able to copy one aspect of anything inanimate. Whether it’s how hard a cannon ball is, the heat of coal, or the sharpness of a sword. Mimic is a gimmickAlthough Gatzby can copy one aspect of anything inanimate he also gains those weaknesses. If he’s as hard as a cannon ball then he sinks very easily, if he’s as hot coal then water will weaken him, if he’s as sharp as a sword then a guess anything that touches him will be cut. He also can only copy one inanimate thing at a time.

This needs to limitations to it. If he can become as sharp as a sword then he could slice people with just his pinky. I would say to perhaps focus this more on a weapon than himself. Like he can manipulate and change one inanimate object into another that is similar. Like a metal cannon ball into a metal sword. A wooden oar into a staff. So long as he is touching it. So if he changed a cannon ball into a sword and let go it would revert back and crush whoever's toes it lands on.

My GM side is waving a red flag that this ability could get out of hand if abused. "I take on metal so now I am like Colossus from Marvel and only the stronk can stop me!" "I take on the power of this mighty relic and become a God!" I just have concerns. X3

 

[Reytian]

Reytian Okay here comes the review XD


I'm confused here a bit on the damage aspect of the curse. I get the no-pain thing but the damage part is odd. It says the doll will take his damage, but that he isn't invulnerable because he can still be injured but won't know it. That sort of contradict's that the doll takes the damage. Additionally, I would say pass on the doll taking damage part because that would be a type of invulnerability because then the only way to harm him would be via the doll he holds. A bit like Naraku from Inuyasha: Who had taken out his mortal heard so he basically couldn't truly be killed unless the heart was destroyed.


This needs to limitations to it. If he can become as sharp as a sword then he could slice people with just his pinky. I would say to perhaps focus this more on a weapon than himself. Like he can manipulate and change one inanimate object into another that is similar. Like a metal cannon ball into a metal sword. A wooden oar into a staff. So long as he is touching it. So if he changed a cannon ball into a sword and let go it would revert back and crush whoever's toes it lands on.

My GM side is waving a red flag that this ability could get out of hand if abused. "I take on metal so now I am like Colossus from Marvel and only the stronk can stop me!" "I take on the power of this mighty relic and become a God!" I just have concerns. X3

I’m sorry. I had about three drafts of Gatzby and must have forgotten to delete the first part on the doll taking damage for him. So would you like the doll to be the only thing he feels or no?

As for the mimic ability sure I found it difficult to actually use because if he was for example as sharp as a sword then he would probably slice his clothes, floor, walls, or anything else that he touches. I originally wanted to have him redirect offensive magical abilities but only those he can see and one at a time instead of multiple. But thought it was too close to power copy which is on the “no” list. Either way mimic will get changed so don’t worry

 

[Fable]

I’m sorry. I had about three drafts of Gatzby and must have forgotten to delete the first part on the doll taking damage for him. So would you like the doll to be the only thing he feels or no?

As for the mimic ability sure I found it difficult to actually use because if he was for example as sharp as a sword then he would probably slice his clothes, floor, walls, or anything else that he touches. I originally wanted to have him redirect offensive magical abilities but only those he can see and one at a time instead of multiple. But thought it was too close to power copy which is on the “no” list. Either way mimic will get changed so don’t worry

I hadn't approved your CS yet, so you really shouldn't have posted in the IC. >_>;; Not until I put your name on the crew list with everyone else...

You can go with him not feeling pain, just the whole concept of him not taking the damage himself but rather the doll taking it is a form of invulnerability. He needs to be the one to take damage and injuries.

Let me know when you when the mimicry as well and I'll re-review your CS. I'm going to go ahead and remove your IC post so it doesn't confuse the other players since your PC is still pending approval.

 

[Reytian]

Apologize, I already changed the cs. He can feel stuff now, including pain, and he takes the damage now. I also put the redirect magical ability as well.

 

[Meme Machine]

Forgot to put the interaction links, like a idiot. Lol.

 

[Fable]

Reytian Alrighty, I'll accept those abilities though it was fine with the lack of pain (another player has this already) XD It was just the lack of injury.

 

[Fable]

TheGuide I think you're the third player I've had to note this to so I'll be updating the character runs in a bit here. Basically 'Demons' are a racial slur for a specific race. They aren't cursed 'humans'. I might as well put up the racial lore for them when I get a chance as well since this is becoming a thing. >_>;; Nothing a fault on your part, just 'Demonic' racials aren't permitted for players for a lore reason.

So on your CS, you'd have to swap out 'Demonic/Demon' to perhaps just Infernal since that was a word you opted for his sight.

This would also extend to the Christian tropes of demons/angels. There can be bad entities and good one, but they aren't demons or angels. So sections about them would have to be altered and Theace wouldn't have allowed these kind of beings within their country. Underground and hidden, sure, any group of people could live that way. In the open would be basically them getting taken and executed.

But I have to note sections of your backstory is altering the set world lore yourself. :\ So most of it would have to be changed in regards to that.

 

[Fable]

Kiroshiven kevintheradioguy Birdsie Doughnut Have been removed from the RP. Should they have a named slot it is now open for grabs.

 

[Meme Machine]

Fable I wasn’t sure if I should PM you, or just talk here, but from your past conversations of wanting to talk here I just assumed.

Due to Pandora’s past in stealing medicine and having to know what to take, and how to improvise should something go wrong, would she be eligible for the Surgeon (Or assistant) role?

 

[Fable]

Fable I wasn’t sure if I should PM you, or just talk here, but from your past conversations of wanting to talk here I just assumed.

Due to Pandora’s past in stealing medicine and having to know what to take, and how to improvise should something go wrong, would she be eligible for the Surgeon (Or assistant) role?

Most likely more an assistant.

 

[Meme Machine]

Alright, could I claim that role then? Or is she too inexperienced.

 

[TheGuide]

Oh man, I’m so sorry Fable , I didn’t mean to mess with the lore at all X( I’ll go get rid of that.

 

[Fable]

Alright, could I claim that role then? Or is she too inexperienced.

Probs too [in]experienced for the Surgeon role, gotta slice people for that, slice them for health, lol.

Oh man, I’m so sorry Fable , I didn’t mean to mess with the lore at all X( I’ll go get rid of that.

It happens XD Just let me know when you do any edits and are ready for me to look again.

 

[Fable]

Still, perhaps her obsessive investigation will bear fruit someday. Until then, they do make some really nice paperweights!

This is great, lol. Welcome aboard.

 

[Fable]

Collidias Rex The new Lamia bosun!

 

[Fable]

And also Kimiwriter has joined the RP and accepted CS.

 

[Fable]

Alteras EccentricFantasy fluticasone Noble Scion shadowz1995 Pilgrim59

BreeDav Collidias Rex Kimiwriter Lord Mitmar Reytian

Last call for your post for this round. Everyone can be witnessing the scene with Dalamus Ulom 's PC in the center of the port town.

 

[Fable]

Archon Not sure I'll be able to review cs today, sliced open a finger on something as sharp as a razor so typing is a PITA.

 

[Fable]

Archon This is the only section I would alter:

Unbeknownst to himself, Theace has invested a King's sum into tracking the errant boy down; the books stolen from his high-ranked father were beyond heresy, but ancient and forbidden spelltomes the man was charged with destroying over two decades ago.

Change Theace to his father as why would his father admit to not destroying the books and get in worse trouble revealing to higher ups that he didnt do as told, but that his son ran away with them and was loose in the world. ;3

 

[Fable]

Archon You didn't tag me for your update so I've been sitting here waiting and just now took a peek, lol. Welcome aboard!