JokerValentine
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@Idea Sounds great. I don't know if our characters have exactly met or not either.
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Seems like a very interesting and quirky character. The biggest issue I see, though, is that you confused flaws and handicaps. A handicap is about what someone is capable of doing- controlling her disk, holding a proper conversation. A flaw is about what someone is inclined to do. As of now, your character has a few handicaps, but is a mary sue due to the fact it has a flawless personality.NightCasterZ said:Hey @Idea ? Care to criticise Lola, the Sunpack pup? I've already posted so I won't make any adjustments unless they're tiny but I'd like feedback. I spent quite a bit of time on the backstory
May I ask in what sense you ask that?Bobisdead123 said:how has Ide become the roleplay expert here? xD
Not to say anything against that ofc
I am writing mine as we speak.JokerValentine said:I hate to sound complaining, but I wish there would be more replies in the Roleplay.
in the sense that everyone comes to you for help or to see if there characters are goodIdea said:May I ask in what sense you ask that?
well, that´s more likely because I volunteered to do it or because I tend to review characters (sometimes even when I´m not the GM) .Bobisdead123 said:in the sense that everyone comes to you for help or to see if there characters are good
or maybe ur a rp godIdea said:well, that´s more likely because I volunteered to do it or because I tend to review characters (sometimes even when I´m not the GM) .
I´m flattered. *bows*Bobisdead123 said:or maybe ur a rp god
actually, the correct IS "god" not "God". "God" is a word that should only be used for actually legimate gods, that is, ones you actually believe in as part of your religion. "god" is the word that designated one you don´t actually believe to be real or at least, to not be a divine entity.JokerValentine said:@Bobisdead123 based God*
Le Grammar Nazism is real.Idea said:actually, the correct IS "god" not "God". "God" is a word that should only be used for actually legimate gods, that is, ones you actually believe in as part of your religion. "god" is the word that designated one you don´t actually believe to be real or at least, to not be a divine entity.
The problem isn´t the grammar, it´s my religious sensitivity. While it would be absurd of me to call everyone on everytime thye use "God" instead of "god" (or vice-versa), I think I have the right to step up if someone tries to make a mistaken correction.Bobisdead123 said:Le Grammar Nazism is real.
Send him back to primary school, what a freaking peasant