M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
OK ill put in more detail... sorrySkyGinge said:
Sorry if that post is still too short i really couldn't find anything else to put in there.
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Sorry if that post is still too short i really couldn't find anything else to put in there.
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4KESH1FT : Belle and Ricky were outside, so he wouldn't have been able to see what went on their through several brick walls XP
CloudyBlueDay
made up of opposites
And also the issue was already solved, Jack came to the rescue ^^M4K3SH1FT said:
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
OK didn't notice that xD Sorry
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT : Apologies; I keep on getting your tag wrong 
Anyhow, you could have had him react to all of the others he's just met in a little more detail, for example. Like commenting on Cammy like Cojemo did, or having him have a little bit of thought about the small group.
Anyhow, you could have had him react to all of the others he's just met in a little more detail, for example. Like commenting on Cammy like Cojemo did, or having him have a little bit of thought about the small group.
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
Yeah i'm editing it right now... sorry.SkyGinge said:@M4K3SH1FT : Apologies; I keep on getting your tag wrong
I'll also read a bit more better nex time
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
Just as a general announcement, you'll all have noticed that some of us have been tagging those we are speaking to at the ends of our posts. If you don't already do that, you probably should, just to make it easier to know which posts want you to reply and which aren't refering to your character. This will stop everybody from having to read through every single post as your characters wouldn't neccesarily see everything that happens anyway. Cheers!
CloudyBlueDay
made up of opposites
So Ricky was inside for a brief moment and then the whole thing happened outside. ^^ Belle and Jack only just walked in once Ricky ran home.AikoMomone said:
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT : I know it's only happened because you editted out the stuff that was wrong, but now yourpost is far too short again XP Remember, describe!
@AikoMomone: Alcoholic drinks would be served at the bar, not kept in a cooler like you've put. Additionally, they'd only serve them to an 18 year old, so if your character wants a drink they'd have to either try and trick the barmen (they are pretty lax in there) or get an older character to buy them one. Also, like Cloudy just pointed out, the whole thing with Ricky happened outside so she wouldn't have noticed it. Please edit your post.
@AikoMomone: Alcoholic drinks would be served at the bar, not kept in a cooler like you've put. Additionally, they'd only serve them to an 18 year old, so if your character wants a drink they'd have to either try and trick the barmen (they are pretty lax in there) or get an older character to buy them one. Also, like Cloudy just pointed out, the whole thing with Ricky happened outside so she wouldn't have noticed it. Please edit your post.
AikoMomone
Mahou Shoujo
Lol sorry about that! I'll edit it so it makes sense!cloudyblueday said:
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT : Aiko tagged you and spoke to your character in the post above. Also, actions should be described instead of written in *'s. For example:
GOOD: 'Lauri pointed over at Axel.'
BAD: *points*
GOOD: 'Lauri pointed over at Axel.'
BAD: *points*
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
OK sorry didn't know that... I'm a real noob aren't i ? xDSkyGinge said:
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT : Well, we've all got to learn some time XP Sorry if it feels like I'm on your case, but you also didn't edit your previous post when I asked you to again. I'll let you off this time, but if you do so again in future, I will just delete the post and you'll have to do it again.
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
Wait... what post ?
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
You editted it to make it longer but then removed some stuff because it was wrong and stuff it got shorter again. I tagged you in this thread telling you about it.M4K3SH1FT said:
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
oh... well i'll edit in the future sorry...
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
That's fine, but remember you still have your most recent post to edit too: '
@M4K3SH1FT : Aiko tagged you and spoke to your character in the post above. Also, actions should be described instead of written in *'s. For example:
GOOD: 'Lauri pointed over at Axel.'
BAD: *points''
You need to edit to respond to Aiko and also to change that incorrect action stuff.
@M4K3SH1FT : Aiko tagged you and spoke to your character in the post above. Also, actions should be described instead of written in *'s. For example:
GOOD: 'Lauri pointed over at Axel.'
BAD: *points''
You need to edit to respond to Aiko and also to change that incorrect action stuff.
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
I'm on the case!SkyGinge said:
Done. made a mistake while editing fixed mistake while editing!
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT and @AikoMomone : You two are still very much on the borderline of the post limit. Please, try and just put a bit more detail into your posts. They don't have to be multiple paragraphs long like some of the other posts, but they could definitely do with a little more accompanying detail. I don't want to be on your case the whole time but if the posts don't comply to the detail rules I'm afraid I'll have to be.
Anyhow, almost everyone has posted which is good! I'll be slowly moving the plot on now, though we'll remain in the party scenario long enough for everybody to get some good interaction at it first. @Ozerath I suggest you don't read through everything when you get back, but instead read my first post and then the last page or so just to get a vague idea of what's going on
Anyhow, almost everyone has posted which is good! I'll be slowly moving the plot on now, though we'll remain in the party scenario long enough for everybody to get some good interaction at it first. @Ozerath I suggest you don't read through everything when you get back, but instead read my first post and then the last page or so just to get a vague idea of what's going on
AikoMomone
Mahou Shoujo
Sorry about that! I'll try to add more detail to my posts!SkyGinge said:@M4K3SH1FT and @AikoMomone : You two are still very much on the borderline of the post limit. Please, try and just put a bit more detail into your posts. They don't have to be multiple paragraphs long like some of the other posts, but they could definitely do with a little more accompanying detail. I don't want to be on your case the whole time but if the posts don't comply to the detail rules I'm afraid I'll have to be.
Anyhow, almost everyone has posted which is good! I'll be slowly moving the plot on now, though we'll remain in the party scenario long enough for everybody to get some good interaction at it first. @Ozerath I suggest you don't read through everything when you get back, but instead read my first post and then the last page or so just to get a vague idea of what's going on
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
Same here.
Shura
Pounce Ninja
Whow talk about a fast pace RP. This is great~!
CloudyBlueDay
made up of opposites
Got one last post in before I go, we're getting chinese food 
Like, not take-out! (Got nothing against take-out though) I'll be back in a few hours, and will be keeping tabs on my phone.
Like, not take-out! (Got nothing against take-out though) I'll be back in a few hours, and will be keeping tabs on my phone.
M4K3SH1FT
A rogue makeshift AI.
She slept just fine, huh?
SkyGinge
Sad Shroom
@M4K3SH1FT : I've seen no change in post size since I issued my last warning. Please, write more detail into your posts. Aim for about the size of Allcure's last post. I feel like I've repeated myself enough now so next time I'll have to issue a formal caution.
