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[Yang Xiao Long]

Question for you @Mollisol


Would it be alright if I switch my weapon for shotgaunlets similar, yet different to Yang's?

 

[Quincunx]

@Mollisol[/URL]
Would it be alright if I switch my weapon for shotgaunlets similar, yet different to Yang's?

That'd be fine.

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

Kk because I was thinking and long range doesn't fit her personality. I may (probably) will change Semblance too. (Or more likely modify it)

 

[Quincunx]

[QUOTE="Revan The Courier]Kk because I was thinking and long range doesn't fit her personality. I may (probably) will change Semblance too. (Or more likely modify it)

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Also fine; just give me a chance to look at it and re-accept it.

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

Kkkkkk

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

@AssaultAndBattery , your CS is looking good, except for a few issues I noticed:

• Your semblance needs a name.
  
• 6'0 with a weight of 97 pounds = a BMI of 13.2. (To put this in perspective, someone who's 5'0'' and weighs 97 lbs would have a BMI just above normal.) I'm not saying you can't have a skinny or emaciated character, but with yours weighing as little as he does, I'm not sure how he's alive, let alone healthy enough to be a Hunter.
  

@The Unamed Beast , maybe we could bring out the side that manages to keep his cool. Maybe he could be like the Yin to Yang - someone who's fighting strength does come from his anger, but for finesse rather than sheer force. Depending on his fighting style, how about one of these:

• After taking a sufficient amount of damage and accumulating a sufficient amount of rage, he gains superior focus, weapon dexterity/accuracy, and speed (as opposed to Yang's brute strength and tankiness).
  
• Flames, energy bursts, or even small explosions occur in his vicinity that can be aimed based on the suppression of his anger.
  
• A red haze ("seeing red") appears in the area and grows thicker and heavier with his increasing anger, that only he has learned to see through.
  

I also ought to remind you that Marcus is already a name used in canon (Mercury's dad).

Very true....... but would it be acceptable because his character isn't Canon?

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

 

[Quincunx]

[QUOTE="The Unamed Beast]Very true....... but would it be acceptable because his character isn't Canon?

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I suppose. Besides, I've been operating under the assumption that this operates in the RWBY setting, but in a time period where Ruby and co aren't relevant yet. Have you made any headway on a semblance?

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

He likes your Ideas. We are talking about some other items as well

 

[Quincunx]

Cool, cool!

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

@Revan The Courier

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

Cool, cool!

He is appearently offline atm

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

xD

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

Anyways edits are made!

 

[Quincunx]

@Revan The Courier, nice. Your edits are approved.

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

As for pearl, who wudda thought that something so cute was so eeeeevvvvvviiiiiiillllllllll

 

[Quincunx]

And so angsty? All she wanted was to do something right.

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

yep

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

By killing everyone?

 

[Quincunx]

If you can't do the right thing right, do the wrong thing right.

 

[CombatReadyPenny]

LOL

 

[Yang Xiao Long]

I see your point

 

[Quincunx]

Anyways, I'll be drafting a starting post, as this starts tonight... >