Fantasy Heart of the Forest - OOC

[Spacekitty]

Ewww, outlines. I can't write systematically like that.

its not even a real outline, its like a post split into bullet points so I can add/edit it easier. When its done I simply have to change wording a bit so it fits together


ill show you what i mean with a snippet from it:


A bittersweet memory stung Kamar as he saw a blue leafed bush laden with deep red berries. Those… Those had been her favorite.


-He had liked to tease her, boasting that he would find her favorite berry bus, a Yeut, and eat all the berries before she could have any. She would always get mad at him, telling him her better not with a angry but cute expression on her face. Of course he never actually eat all the berries, whenever he found them he left them all to her, eating no more than a few despite the being his favorite berry as well. Her loving look of delight was more than enough for him


-She had loved to explore the forest, especially in spring when all the flowers were starting to bud and the berry bushes producing their delicious harvest.

 

[Spacekitty]

ignore typoes, typed at 1000 words a minute an clicked "change" every time on autocorrect without looking

 

[Spacekitty]

Let's hope your a good dishwasher then, because if theres even a speck...
I'LL KNOW.


;3 Pal

Boi you aint even know what ima do


ima write this outline for like 2-3 days and then piece it together for my ROUGH draft. then have me mum go through it throurghly and maybe someone else. Then spate it into bullet point form again and edit it again. Get some one to look over it once more and change as needed.


Then boom, post Part 1 of two xD


Outline is 1000 words thus far wtf lol

 

[MoltenLightning]

Boi you aint even know what ima do
ima write this outline for like 2-3 days and then piece it together for my ROUGH draft. then have me mum go through it throurghly and maybe someone else. Then spate it into bullet point form again and edit it again. Get some one to look over it once more and change as needed.


Then boom, post Part 1 of two xD


Outline is 1000 words thus far wtf lol

I'll congratulate as I see fit :3


ALSO I'M A LADY >:0

 

[Spacekitty]

I'll congratulate as I see fit :3
ALSO I'M A LADY >:0

Oh


is everyone here a lady????


Also; if you haven't noticed I get super hyped/motivated for a month and put 1000% effort into my posts and then I crash and burn for like a week.

 

[JokerValentine]

Oh
is everyone here a lady????


Also; if you haven't noticed I get super hyped/motivated for a month and put 1000% effort into my posts and then I crash and burn for like a week.

I'm a papa.

 

[Spacekitty]

I'm a papa.

PAPA FRANKU?

 

[JokerValentine]

PAPA FRANKU?

Papa John.

 

[Anaxileah]

o-o I'm female :U


Papa John's makes me sick. o-o

 

[JokerValentine]

o-o I'm female :U
Papa John's makes me sick. o-o

hoLD ME BACK DON'T MAKE ME SMACK YOU YOU PIZZA-HUT / DOMINO'S SCUM.

 

[Spacekitty]

HEATHEN

 

[MoltenLightning]

If you haven't noticed I get super hyped/motivated for a month and put 1000% effort into my posts and then I crash and burn for like a week.

Lol, yeah


That happens to me in shorter spurts

 

[Anaxileah]

hoLD ME BACK DON'T MAKE ME SMACK YOU YOU PIZZA-HUT / DOMINO'S SCUM.

It literally makes me puke tho..like idk what they put in their pizza but it makes my stomach say no.


I eat Domino's and pizza from a small place nearby that I consider best.

 

[Anaxileah]

HEATHEN

(:'()

 

[Anaxileah]

And I don't like Pizza Hut either. It's ewwie.

 

[JokerValentine]

It literally makes me puke tho..like idk what they put in their pizza but it makes my stomach say no.
I eat Domino's and pizza from a small place nearby that I consider best.

Domino's makes me sick, so touché I guess.


I honestly get most of my pizza local, or I make it.


You know I splash that sauce 8D


BUT HOW CaN YOU NOT ADORE THE BIG PAPA PAPA JOHN

 

[Anaxileah]

Domino's makes me sick, so touché I guess.
I honestly get most of my pizza local, or I make it.


You know I splash that sauce 8D


BUT HOW CaN YOU NOT ADORE THE BIG PAPA PAPA JOHN

Local is fab, usually, and omg it's so much fun making pizza xD although I suck at tossing the crust o-o my dad is great at it (he used to work at a pizza place)

 

[Anaxileah]

And lel -w-

 

[JokerValentine]

Local is fab, usually, and omg it's so much fun making pizza xD although I suck at tossing the crust o-o my dad is great at it (he used to work at a pizza place)

I sorta just roll it out and hope for the best.

 

[Spacekitty]

Lol, yeah
That happens to me in shorter spurts

Essentially I want to build on ym last post success and make a post that is both emotional, fluent, detailed and really grabs the readers attention.


If it is successful enough part 2 will be even more amazing


Then ill flop down and die in my leather seat

 

[JokerValentine]

*dies of waiting for Nyx waiting for Cloud*

 

[MoltenLightning]

Then ill flop down and die in my leather seat

At least you'll be comfortably dead upon your kingly throne .w.

 

[StoneWolf18]

*dies of waiting for Nyx waiting for Cloud*

-dies and of waiting for cloud-

 

[JokerValentine]

-dies and of waiting for cloud-

RIP bromeo and juliet

 

[Spacekitty]

At least you'll be comfortably dead upon your kingly throne .w.

That is true


My next post after that will be like. "He looked at the thing and said hi"