Nation Building Ghost in the Machine

[Spacekitty]

[QUOTE="Jarkov Malachai]Ah, thanks, I was wondering. Hope that when its finished it meets the GM's standards and is approved eh?

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I'm sure.he will approve

 

[Atom]

I'm rather picky.

 

[Jarkov Malachai]

[QUOTE="general ostruppen]Are Terrance refered to himans?

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They can be, it all depends really on just who is doing the talking. You can call them whatever you like.

 

[general ostruppen]

Alright well galactic Roma. Empire here I come

 

[Spacekitty]

I'm rather picky.

What specifically, are you looking for?

 

[Atom]

Specifically detail and something that shows competence. This is an extremely open ended RP, with the right people cooperating well it can be very fun and long term, but throw in a bad egg and all the fun gets sapped in the blink of an eye.


We ran into the issue the first time around.

 

[NeoLeaf]

I CAN'T WAIT TO DESTROY YOU

GIFSoup
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[Spacekitty]

Specifically detail and something that shows competence. This is an extremely open ended RP, with the right people cooperating well it can be very fun and long term, but throw in a bad egg and all the fun gets sapped in the blink of an eye.
We ran into the issue the first time around.

Finished with my CS. I'm in school so I couldn't write tons for the history so I did an overview of the timeline

 

[Atom]

Finished with my CS. I'm in school so I couldn't write tons for the history so I did an overview of the timeline

You've got time to add some more details, no worries. I don't intend this to start till Monday at the earliest. I've only added those three to the accepted factions because they're pre accepted basically. They're all from the old thread and I already know they're good, already rolled with their stuff, etc.

 

[Spacekitty]

You've got time to add some more details, no worries. I don't intend this to start till Monday at the earliest. I've only added those three to the accepted factions because they're pre accepted basically. They're all from the old thread and I already know they're good, already rolled with their stuff, etc.

Thanks, if u see anything bad/wrong with my CS, just tell me


Also your the first website staff I've seen in nation building lol. No one likes nation building

 

[Atom]

Thanks, if u see anything bad/wrong with my CS, just tell me
Also your the first website staff I've seen in nation building lol. No one likes nation building

I love nation building, but my primary love within this genre would be things like this RP. It's honestly more similar to a normal RP than your average nation builder as the RPing is done mostly from a character perspective. The difference being all your characters are typically rather important in your faction and all. Leaders, generals, etc.

 

[Spacekitty]

I love nation building, but my primary love within this genre would be things like this RP. It's honestly more similar to a normal RP than your average nation builder as the RPing is done mostly from a character perspective. The difference being all your characters are typically rather important in your faction and all. Leaders, generals, etc.

These also seems to last the longest. While I greatly enjoy these rps, I just can't get into non nation building rps

 

[Jarkov Malachai]

Its the perfect blend, I honestly cant deal with all the math, data and waiting, rolls and the like that normal nation building rps deal with (says the guy who used actual biological and physics to create his murder monsters) but this type... oh great things happen here. Sadly, tis only works if the community is great.

 

[Atom]

Exactly why I'm gonna be the pickiest fucker you've ever seen.

 

[Spacekitty]

Exactly why I'm gonna be the pickiest fucker you've ever seen.

There a such thing as being too picky...


or is there...?


Can you go through my app? I'd like a day or two to fix it before the RP starts

 

[Atom]

There a such thing as being too picky...
or is there...?


Can you go through my app? I'd like a day or two to fix it before the RP starts

Sometimes there is. In this case there isn't. If I happen to decide that the applicants aren't up to my standards I could simply close this and roll at it with myself, Jarkov, grieve, and Neo.


But new blood is fun! And always brings a new dynamic! So hopefully I don't have to turn to that.


Also I'll look at it tomorrow.


Also fair warning for any currently waiting applicants! If your CS is not at least matching in size to Neo's with detail and such then I'm highly highly likely not to accept you! Minus the WIP section. No WIPs for you newbies! >


Got till Monday!

 

[Spacekitty]

Been adding more and more details to my CS. its lookin good

 

[Jarkov Malachai]

Indeed, metric shit ton of Backstory for your race. Most of mine is the (FIND OUT AS YOU GET EATEN) type of info. Learn as you live it.

 

[Spacekitty]

[QUOTE="Jarkov Malachai]Indeed, metric shit ton of Backstory for your race. Most of mine is the (FIND OUT AS YOU GET EATEN) type of info. Learn as you live it.

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Still working on military. Gunna add a section describing each ship, soldier and weapon in further detail

 

[Atom]

Still working on military. Gunna add a section describing each ship, soldier and weapon in further detail

You can if you want but I'll likely not read it. Especially if you include pictures. I've dealt with so many people who fluff their CSes with weapons and pictures to the point that I don't even read sections like that anymore.


I'm far more concerned about the faction history, race history, and your leader character.


Also I might have to push this back further. I haven't had access to anything but my phone all weekend and that's extremely difficult to do a CS on. And since I'm demanding detail from you guys this time around I don't feel it's fair to give you all half assed work on my part.

 

[Spacekitty]

You can if you want but I'll likely not read it. Especially if you include pictures. I've dealt with so many people who fluff their CSes with weapons and pictures to the point that I don't even read sections like that anymore.
I'm far more concerned about the faction history, race history, and your leader character.


Also I might have to push this back further. I haven't had access to anything but my phone all weekend and that's extremely difficult to do a CS on. And since I'm demanding detail from you guys this time around I don't feel it's fair to give you all half assed work on my part.

but weapon details are amazing


Im abd with pictures so I don't put tons

 

[Jarkov Malachai]

*chuckles* I just put in metric fucktons of text. Never use pictures, and I cant for my beauties any who since they are entirely original in their purpose and design... okay maybe not their purpose but their design is all me.

 

[Spacekitty]

[QUOTE="Jarkov Malachai]*chuckles* I just put in metric fucktons of text. Never use pictures, and I cant for my beauties any who since they are entirely original in their purpose and design... okay maybe not their purpose but their design is all me.

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Damn, puts my character bio and species description to shame. I need to up my game.

 

[Jarkov Malachai]

Damn, puts my character bio and species description to shame. I need to up my game.

Naaah, not that big a deal, I got bored during a high school meeting one year and thought the first basis of these things up with the thought process of. "Bored out of mind, principle telling me and everyone else not to bully, smoking is bad, pre-marital sex is a bad idea, life is bad... this needs something to liven it up, wonder what would happen if a murder monster just exploded from her back and came into being?... Not a bad image matter of fact, shes killing me anyway from boredom."


And thus the Serai' Drakhoul (or Dredge) were conceived, such an illustrious heritage wouldn't you agree?

 

[Spacekitty]

[QUOTE="Jarkov Malachai]Naaah, not that big a deal, I got bored during a high school meeting one year and thought the first basis of these things up with the thought process of. "Bored out of mind, principle telling me and everyone else not to bully, smoking is bad, pre-marital sex is a bad idea, life is bad... this needs something to liven it up, wonder what would happen if a murder monster just exploded from her back and came into being?... Not a bad image matter of fact, shes killing me anyway from boredom."
And thus the Serai' Drakhoul (or Dredge) were conceived, such an illustrious heritage wouldn't you agree?

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Indeed, quite a remarkable heritage.