Fantasy Isekai isles the 3rd deity (Out of character)

[RealSync]

she

I didddddddddddd

She did*

 

[shallow grave]

She did*

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*also not in a position to reply for like 3+ hours but that first post gives a lot to work with, great post

 

[RoseAstasia]

Thank you

 

[RealSync]

Yeah the start text is great, I will write a response soon.

 

[shallow grave]

My first reply is 330 words, 4 paragraphs, but I don't have a preference for post length. It depends on the contents of the scenario and the fellow writers. I'm curious if anybody here has a preference for longer, or shorter?

 

[RoseAstasia]

My first reply is 330 words, 4 paragraphs, but I don't have a preference for post length. It depends on the contents of the scenario and the fellow writers. I'm curious if anybody here has a preference for longer, or shorter?

I actually enjoy writing shorter posts, but in ones that need detail I know how to do that

 

[CHUUYAS_HAT]

My first reply is 330 words, 4 paragraphs, but I don't have a preference for post length. It depends on the contents of the scenario and the fellow writers. I'm curious if anybody here has a preference for longer, or shorter?

I often do 3-7 paragraphs, but if there is too little to say I either wait a day(s) or just type a slightly shorter (I try my best for this occasions but like :<>) post.

 

[CHUUYAS_HAT]

question;

as he summons them, are we standing or laying down RoseAstasia ?

 

[RoseAstasia]

Probably laying down

 

[CHUUYAS_HAT]

when you realize...everyone is actually....taller than you.

Is what going to hit her ​

 

[shallow grave]

I definitely could have written more, and I was going to, but I desisted because I was under the impression RoseAstasia wanted to follow up with something specific after everybody posts an official reply, and I don't know the writing levels of everyone here. I remember when I first started, 2+ paragraphs intimidated me. I didn't want to dishearten anyone, make them feel pressured to drum up some fluff just to meet a superficial word requirement.

Additionally, saying or doing a lot in one post gives me a feeling that I'm hijacking the scenario rather than enhancing it or building cooperatively together with the people who are supposed to be my writing buddies.
♪～(￣、￣ )

 

[CHUUYAS_HAT]

I definitely could have written more, and I was going to, but I desisted because I was under the impression RoseAstasia wanted to follow up with something specific after everybody posts an official reply, and I don't know the writing levels of everyone here. I remember when I first started, 2+ paragraphs intimidated me. I didn't want to dishearten anyone, make them feel pressured to drum up some fluff just to meet a superficial word requirement.

Additionally, saying or doing a lot in one post gives me a feeling that I'm hijacking the scenario rather than enhancing it or building cooperatively together with the people who are supposed to be my writing buddies.
♪～(￣、￣ )

the same thing happens to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

I was actually scared of a few posters from (before)

1. Their profile (idrk why!)
or 2. Their ginormous post length including high detail

 

[RoseAstasia]

when you realize...everyone is actually....taller than you.

Is what going to hit her ​

Terrect is actually very smol, I put wrong number

 

[shallow grave]

the same thing happens to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

I was actually scared of a few posters from (before)

1. Their profile (idrk why!)
or 2. Their ginormous post length including high detail

Being detailed can be good. The problem I often see is people are so focused on minutiae that it transitions from enchanting to exhausting. I have a brain, and I have similar human experiences to you; I can connect the dots on my own just fine, as long as they're not too far apart. This is why I no longer have a preference for long vs short posts. As long as it reads like you're enjoying writing it, I'm sure it will be enjoyable to read and reply as well.

 

[Acethekidd]

oh right, I forgot to share..

Spoiler: ideas

Viloduvian Empire: the largest, and richest nation in Narva and govern high king governs the empire. this place is said to have the largest military in the world. Vilo often make trades with other kingdoms, it's also surrounded by lush green plains and some woods, with a few good water sources
inhabitants:mainly humans and a bunch of other races to.

Nohammland: A frozen nation to the north of the vildoduvian empire. currently, there are three tribes trying to take control of the land, but thanks to recent events, they have formed a treaty. only the strong can withstand the harsh cold and snow that covers the nation. Noha had many icey mountains, plains, and a few frosty mountains. They are famous for having strong warriors
inhabitants: humans, beastmen(half human/half animal), beastfolk(anthro like animals),dwarfs

Rochamland: a hot and dry land that was once allies of nohammland. Back in the day, Roch was more powerful than Vilo,but the empire was buried in sand and lost forever. There is an oasis city in the center of Rocha where traders like to come and settle.
inhabitants: multiple, besides merfolk and fishfolk

Arigh: A peaceful nation north of Vilo and is known as the city of water. They are known for their fishing and boat skill. normally people come here when they want to travel to the island that's off the mainland.
inhabitants:humans, merfolk,fishfolk,beastmen,beastfolk

Kingdom of Cueralira: a mystical and magical kingdom that's ran by the fairy queen. The kingdom is lushy and filled with life. it is said that a large white stag had created the kingdom to protect those living there form a war eons ago. Cueralira is known for its strong magic users and folks travel here to learn magic. However, those with pure hearts can enter the kingdom.
inhabitants: faries,elves,beastfolk

Kamoenai Empirereplacement name for tortian empire) a Japanese-styled nation ruled by an empress surrounded by misty mountains and ancient ruins. Kameonai is said to be where gods once lived and protected the secrets of the world. because of this,Kamonai has become a little strict and will allow only those who are trusted to enter. They are famous for their archaeology
inhabitants: humans, demons, beastmen,some beastfolk

Rinia: a land ran by outlaws and thugs, a very dangerous place that's located on the edge of the sea. they are famous for their black market
inhabitants: humans, werefolk, vampires, demons, elves(dark elves), beastmen, beastfolk

WaninukiaA nation that's ran by a beastmen whos known to be the king of the beast. The nation is basically a savanna like with different types of beasts and animals roaming about. they can be kinda ruthless with their ways, their hunting skills are the best in the world. they are famous for their hunting and beast taming skill. They're also a welcoming nation
inhabitants: beastman,beastfolk, werefolk, elves

Country of Norime: despite being up in the north, it's actually pretty hot and humid there. it's not governed by anyone, but it's a rather peaceful place. they are surrounded by many drylands and some woods. Norime is known for its weaponry
inhabitantsrcs, dwarves, trolls, beastfolk, and some humans

Monanih: Nothing really fancy about this place, just a peaceful place for those who can live in peace and build their homes. Monanih is a wetland-like place. It's not famous for anything, but there is a country is that is trying to take control over it
inhabitants:multiple

Country of Kauelia: A dark and cruel country ruled by the vampire king. they are a greedy nation that wants nothing but power and land. they have cruel tactics and don't tolerate the weak.
inhabitants:vampires, demons,werefolk, beastfolk,orcs

Duenhungia: a desolated and broken place. There is barely any life here, the sky is always dull and nasty creatures live here. long ago it was a place ruled by the elves, but was used as a battle ground and completely destroyed
inhabitants: monsters and creatures

Kaluelia: a very small place covered in nothing forset, in center of kalulia a rare species of beastman and beastfolk live here known as pixie beastman and beastfolk( just imagine smol versions of these two species) together, they live in peace,but is afraid of the outside world. They keep hidden so outsiders don't find them. kaluelia is know for their medical and nature skills
inhabitants: pixie beastman and beastfolk

Bornoinet: a beautiful tropical island off the main land. It's looked after the leader of the merfolk tribe. the island is used as a vacation spot for those in the mainlands
inhabitants: merfolk, fishmen. other races often vist

 

[RealSync]

Terrect is actually very smol, I put wrong number

Do we start at the temple? Bit confused.

 

[shallow grave]

RealSync
Terrect stood on a mountain, and then he hollowed out the same mountain to build the temple. I imagine the temple is within a massive cavern now. In my own post, I added the detail that the sun was low and shining into the cave because Terrect never mentions lighting, or time of day, or that he moved anywhere to summon our characters.

Given all this, it is most likely that Terrect built this temple to overlook his continent and summoned our characters in the temple.

 

[RoseAstasia]

RealSync
Terrect stood on a mountain, and then he hollowed out the same mountain to build the temple. I imagine the temple is within a massive cavern now. In my own post, I added the detail that the sun was low and shining into the cave because Terrect never mentions lighting, or time of day, or that he moved anywhere to summon our characters.

Given all this, it is most likely that Terrect built this temple to overlook his continent and summoned our characters in the temple.

Do we start at the temple? Bit confused.

Oh yes sorry, they will be spawned there to meet Terrect, and after they have small amount of time to talk or react to existing there, they will be put in the forest

The blue circle is where they currently are, the marks where they will be put

 

[shallow grave]

That ✗ gotta be way thiccer, buddy. Took me a long minute to find it.
* Actually, I forgot I'm colorblind, and red does not play nice with green. Never mind.
…ᘛ⁐̤ᕐᐷ

 

[RoseAstasia]

That ✗ gotta be way thiccer, buddy. Took me a long minute to find it.
* Actually, I forgot I'm colorblind, and red does not play nice with green. Never mind.
…ᘛ⁐̤ᕐᐷ

Sorry will do

 

[RoseAstasia]

 

[RoseAstasia]

oh right, I forgot to share..

Spoiler: ideas

Viloduvian Empire: the largest, and richest nation in Narva and govern high king governs the empire. this place is said to have the largest military in the world. Vilo often make trades with other kingdoms, it's also surrounded by lush green plains and some woods, with a few good water sources
inhabitants:mainly humans and a bunch of other races to.

Nohammland: A frozen nation to the north of the vildoduvian empire. currently, there are three tribes trying to take control of the land, but thanks to recent events, they have formed a treaty. only the strong can withstand the harsh cold and snow that covers the nation. Noha had many icey mountains, plains, and a few frosty mountains. They are famous for having strong warriors
inhabitants: humans, beastmen(half human/half animal), beastfolk(anthro like animals),dwarfs

Rochamland: a hot and dry land that was once allies of nohammland. Back in the day, Roch was more powerful than Vilo,but the empire was buried in sand and lost forever. There is an oasis city in the center of Rocha where traders like to come and settle.
inhabitants: multiple, besides merfolk and fishfolk

Arigh: A peaceful nation north of Vilo and is known as the city of water. They are known for their fishing and boat skill. normally people come here when they want to travel to the island that's off the mainland.
inhabitants:humans, merfolk,fishfolk,beastmen,beastfolk

Kingdom of Cueralira: a mystical and magical kingdom that's ran by the fairy queen. The kingdom is lushy and filled with life. it is said that a large white stag had created the kingdom to protect those living there form a war eons ago. Cueralira is known for its strong magic users and folks travel here to learn magic. However, those with pure hearts can enter the kingdom.
inhabitants: faries,elves,beastfolk

Kamoenai Empirereplacement name for tortian empire) a Japanese-styled nation ruled by an empress surrounded by misty mountains and ancient ruins. Kameonai is said to be where gods once lived and protected the secrets of the world. because of this,Kamonai has become a little strict and will allow only those who are trusted to enter. They are famous for their archaeology
inhabitants: humans, demons, beastmen,some beastfolk

Rinia: a land ran by outlaws and thugs, a very dangerous place that's located on the edge of the sea. they are famous for their black market
inhabitants: humans, werefolk, vampires, demons, elves(dark elves), beastmen, beastfolk

WaninukiaA nation that's ran by a beastmen whos known to be the king of the beast. The nation is basically a savanna like with different types of beasts and animals roaming about. they can be kinda ruthless with their ways, their hunting skills are the best in the world. they are famous for their hunting and beast taming skill. They're also a welcoming nation
inhabitants: beastman,beastfolk, werefolk, elves

Country of Norime: despite being up in the north, it's actually pretty hot and humid there. it's not governed by anyone, but it's a rather peaceful place. they are surrounded by many drylands and some woods. Norime is known for its weaponry
inhabitantsrcs, dwarves, trolls, beastfolk, and some humans

Monanih: Nothing really fancy about this place, just a peaceful place for those who can live in peace and build their homes. Monanih is a wetland-like place. It's not famous for anything, but there is a country is that is trying to take control over it
inhabitants:multiple

Country of Kauelia: A dark and cruel country ruled by the vampire king. they are a greedy nation that wants nothing but power and land. they have cruel tactics and don't tolerate the weak.
inhabitants:vampires, demons,werefolk, beastfolk,orcs

Duenhungia: a desolated and broken place. There is barely any life here, the sky is always dull and nasty creatures live here. long ago it was a place ruled by the elves, but was used as a battle ground and completely destroyed
inhabitants: monsters and creatures

Kaluelia: a very small place covered in nothing forset, in center of kalulia a rare species of beastman and beastfolk live here known as pixie beastman and beastfolk( just imagine smol versions of these two species) together, they live in peace,but is afraid of the outside world. They keep hidden so outsiders don't find them. kaluelia is know for their medical and nature skills
inhabitants: pixie beastman and beastfolk

Bornoinet: a beautiful tropical island off the main land. It's looked after the leader of the merfolk tribe. the island is used as a vacation spot for those in the mainlands
inhabitants: merfolk, fishmen. other races often vist

now that we have the map and stuff already worked out we probably cant use this for the main continent much… HOWEVER. there are 2 continents where the other 2 gods went their separate ways. So they could be used in one or both places

 

[RoseAstasia]

shallow grave is it better now that both are bigger and thicker

sorry for how that sounds i mean the markings on the map

 

[CHUUYAS_HAT]

shallow grave is it better now that both are bigger and thicker

 

[RoseAstasia]

shallow grave is it better now that both are bigger and thicker

I MEAN THE MARKINGS ON THE MAP