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Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

NyxDarling said:
thoughts on my own post? i am trying to improve and wondering how well i did. ShadowBroker ShadowBroker

sorry about that, ill respond soon
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I consider it a "wake up call." This RP is set in a dark world (pun not intended), bad things are and will happen. So far it's been relaxed, happy(ish), and easygoing. The fact that you chose to have that happen to your character is... I hate to say it, but "in place." I just hope you have a purpose for having Einua go through that. :)


Not that I have anything against happy things of course.

Thalia_Neko said:
ahhh i put up a good post -at least i think so ^^ <3 any comments on it? :3
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Oh. Oh? Showdown? Vira is like that vigilante that hunts evil (on her own terms) and people come help her after the initiation. I really love that duo character in Vira, and her real confliction. It's like subtle clues to an unsolved mystery that will only be solved through interaction and progression, not through idleness.

Speaking of idleness, don't start the party yet, I'm still stuck at the bar again haha
 
Syphe said:
I consider it a "wake up call." This RP is set in a dark world (pun not intended), bad things are and will happen. So far it's been relaxed, happy(ish), and easygoing. The fact that you chose to have that happen to your character is... I hate to say it, but "in place." I just hope you have a purpose for having Einua go through that. :)


Not that I have anything against happy things of course.



Oh. Oh? Showdown? Vira is like that vigilante that hunts evil (on her own terms) and people come help her after the initiation. I really love that duo character in Vira, and her real confliction. It's like subtle clues to an unsolved mystery that will only be solved through interaction and progression, not through idleness.

Speaking of idleness, don't start the party yet, I'm still stuck at the bar again haha
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yeah, i wanted everyone to see that there is realism in this as well, it cant just be happy. and eventually a character is going to die. and yes there was a reason!!
 
indeed this is a dark rp, with nasty bad stuffs that happen :( since Abnorms became a thing, and since society in its entirety died, inevitably darkness and horrors took a grip on the world <3

(wow, that shouldve been the blurb for the rp LOL dammit)

so yes, any sort of damn dark devilish thing that can happen -can happen :< it sucks i know >< lul but it makes the rp a fun and compelling scenario!

Syphe said:
Oh. Oh? Showdown? Vira is like that vigilante that hunts evil (on her own terms) and people come help her after the initiation. I really love that duo character in Vira, and her real confliction. It's like subtle clues to an unsolved mystery that will only be solved through interaction and progression, not through idleness.

Speaking of idleness, don't start the party yet, I'm still stuck at the bar again haha
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Oh?? you love the duo character in Vira, and her real confliction? Which is? ^^ hehe <3

but yes, you are right, im glad i can keep people interested and engaged! :D <3

she is vigilante-esque mhm :> glad you picked up on that!

as for a party? :P i wont really start anything without people knowing whats going on/following along with their characters ^^ so dont worry about that, its why my posts have been pretty sporadic to give people time :D
 
Kiroshiven Kiroshiven just remember to not have your charries be too omniscient and know exactly where the story is headed every second ^^ aka dun godmode too much ;P kay? hehe thanks! ^^
 
Thalia_Neko said:
Kiroshiven Kiroshiven just remember to not have your charries be too omniscient and know exactly where the story is headed every second ^^ aka dun godmode too much ;P kay? hehe thanks! ^^
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I just mentioned in Tanya's post there was a bounty out on Big One and the gang. Just never got to express it more. Not really omniscient. Just playing around with the info that was presented. But I'll change it if need be.
 
Kiroshiven said:
I just mentioned in Tanya's post there was a bounty out on Big One and the gang. Just never got to express it more. Not really omniscient. Just playing around with the info that was presented. But I'll change it if need be.
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no this is fine, cuz it makes sense, but im just alerting you for future plot points ^^
 
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