CkSmalling
In the End, Death gets us all
@Lenny2000 Right so you're out of the roleplay ^^ Please leave now xP
CkSmalling Your CS dissection:
I might accept your character sheet after you fix these things.
- This is just a suggestion, but perhaps make your characters name more fantasy-like to fit in with the others? Not a problem if you decide not to tho ^^
- 'intelligent' isn't a personality trait, and 'charming' is rather vague, do you mean good with words? I'd like an explanation of 'snake tongue' please xP
- 'Jealous' isn't a personality flaw, do you mean gets easily jealous or envious? what do you mean by 'bloodlust', do you mean bloodthirsty or has great bloodlust? I'd like at least 4 viable flaws please xP
- disliking 'peasants' and 'those in royalty' basically means almost everyone? I'm not going to allow an edgy character which hates the world and everyone thanks xD
- Alright so basically your character is a walking disaster waiting to happen? Are you planning on him becoming an anatagonist after tricking the group? I can accept it if that was your plan. If not, please give some explanation, because I don't see why he wouldn't try and kill his team members O.o
- His 'blood-lust' spell is kind of over the top without much of a flaw. Chances are this roleplay won't go on until your character begins to age and die early, so can you create a better con to this ability and nerf it, sleeping for 24 hours isn't that bad either. How long can he rampage?
- His weakness is only a con to his blood-lust spell, add at least three different prominent weaknesses ^^
I have overhauled the personality section and hope the new additions fall according to the advice above.
I have changed the alignment to neutral evil. My character may be a bit crazy but he won't be a danger to the rest.
I have removed the cursed armour and replaced it with a custom armor. Nothing special about it but it looks cool and the color configuration is different from the normal white knight armor.
The bloodlust has been removed and the magic section removed as well. If I may ask it is possible for that section to be changed and add simple spells as the role play goes on?
If there is anything that need to be changed, please tell me. I apologize for the delay.
Thanks.