Mooalally
The Bringer of Odd Characters
You know what's so weird? I literally had a dream last night where my two dwarves were joined by a third ...MrLlama said:
Oh, and I think you had to review Sedrian's or something like that.
Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]
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Oh, and I think you had to review Sedrian's or something like that.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
*Scoff* You dare think one royal as I would dare accompany one of your... peasant status.Mooalally said:
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
I reviewed it already.
Wynn Kamui
Junior Member
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Goddess
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your post is not that long
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
YOU WERE BORN
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
The reviewing is still underway. Pai has given her opinion and I have sent her mine.
Wynn Kamui
Junior Member
The post wasn't long, the period in which there was a relatively lacking number of posts was.Goddess said:
Kagerou
Reaper
Omgomgomg The House of Hades came out today. Ashcgzhdhxgeqwhwgwwu so happu.y I can't even enlgish. I must go read it now.
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Wynn Kamui
Junior Member
[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]The reviewing is still underway. Pai has given her opinion and I have sent her mine.
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Ahhhhhhh
Thanks for clearing that up lol
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Ahhhhhhh
Thanks for clearing that up lol
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
I have received a golden sticker upon my forehead, so I believe you will be receiving a response shortly.
Mooalally
The Bringer of Odd Characters
@Wynn Kamui Why do you have an itty bitty picture of paipai liking one of your posts?
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
Yes. Yes she does.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Why would you even dream about your dwarves? e-eMooalally said:
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Since I can barely see due to how much computer/phone radiation I've been having recently, Sebastian here has done a great job in reviewing once again. I, PaiPai900 the Queen of Likes, knight thee, Sebastian. Rise, Sir Sebastian.
Anyway, here's your review @Wynn Kamui which is Sebastian's review:
I see Sue qualities and I'd like more detail about her ability to quickly analyze a foe to make sure it's not OP. I'm not so sure about the flying machines, since it contradicts that wind is overlooked and given no importance. If people saw others flying in the sky, I'm pretty sure they wouldn't overlook it. I'm also not keen on flying being preset whatsoever, unless it's with a contracted beast.
There's no detail about the raid that killed her loved ones, which is pretty important. I'd also like information on why she wanted to follow in her father's footsteps. Just saying he died doesn't give much information on that. Also, if she was near death before she was found, why would she be determined to follow in his footsteps. In a situation like that, it doesn't make sense.
How did she survive for those two weeks she was alone? She was near death after two days before being found, so how did she manage two weeks? When she met Erina, how did they not get caught stealing sooner and how did they do it in the first place? It doesn't seem very likely that two weak and hungry little girls could evade capture for that long.
Why was the orphanage owner like that and why did he treat them badly? How did nobody find out about this? Surely someone would've taken notice. Why wasn't Erina scared? She's in the same position as everyone else, so why did she not show fear?
For the end of the history, how did Erina carry Wynn so far? Again, it doesn't make much sense. How did Mr. Slohr find out they left? How did Erina get Wynn on a boat? Did nobody notice what was happening to them? Wouldn't someone have stepped in? Wouldn't the shipowner see there was somebody getting on his boat? If Slohr had already caught up, how did Erina hold him off? When was Wynn asleep? How does a broken leg prevent her from seeing what happened to Erina?
For the Wind abilities, no making the air super cold or super hot and other things of that nature. How does Wind redirect water?
Anyway, here's your review @Wynn Kamui which is Sebastian's review:
I see Sue qualities and I'd like more detail about her ability to quickly analyze a foe to make sure it's not OP. I'm not so sure about the flying machines, since it contradicts that wind is overlooked and given no importance. If people saw others flying in the sky, I'm pretty sure they wouldn't overlook it. I'm also not keen on flying being preset whatsoever, unless it's with a contracted beast.
There's no detail about the raid that killed her loved ones, which is pretty important. I'd also like information on why she wanted to follow in her father's footsteps. Just saying he died doesn't give much information on that. Also, if she was near death before she was found, why would she be determined to follow in his footsteps. In a situation like that, it doesn't make sense.
How did she survive for those two weeks she was alone? She was near death after two days before being found, so how did she manage two weeks? When she met Erina, how did they not get caught stealing sooner and how did they do it in the first place? It doesn't seem very likely that two weak and hungry little girls could evade capture for that long.
Why was the orphanage owner like that and why did he treat them badly? How did nobody find out about this? Surely someone would've taken notice. Why wasn't Erina scared? She's in the same position as everyone else, so why did she not show fear?
For the end of the history, how did Erina carry Wynn so far? Again, it doesn't make much sense. How did Mr. Slohr find out they left? How did Erina get Wynn on a boat? Did nobody notice what was happening to them? Wouldn't someone have stepped in? Wouldn't the shipowner see there was somebody getting on his boat? If Slohr had already caught up, how did Erina hold him off? When was Wynn asleep? How does a broken leg prevent her from seeing what happened to Erina?
For the Wind abilities, no making the air super cold or super hot and other things of that nature. How does Wind redirect water?
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
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My cutlery is at the ready, your highness.
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Mooalally
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Yes because I choose what I dream about. It's kind of like in a little jukebox, and I scroll through some CD's until I find the dream I want, I put in some money, and it starts playing.MrLlama said:
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
Are there ever going to be dragons put in here again? I know there was a thing about dragon riders and the like early on but it got removed.
Still. xDMooalally said:
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
You might be seeing that in the future from a certain someone.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
ERAGON?! 
Never knew he was a roleplayer...
Never knew he was a roleplayer...
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
...No...
evephy
unhealthy koreaboo
GUISE. Are partners being assigned? Or are we dividing amongst ourselves? :B
Also, someone should seriously be a member of the Three Elements, Fay's all alone. ;-;
Also, someone should seriously be a member of the Three Elements, Fay's all alone. ;-;
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
I never did like the ending of the Inheritance Cycle...
Arya's already OP enough and their romance was rushed and to the point. Eragon was sent off to a far off land to train new riders? Sequel series perhaps? Anyway, back to the riders thing, I wanted Elva to be the dragon rider SO BADLY.
MrLlama
As Straight As A Rainbow
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Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
You choose who you want to party with and we mark it down for you. I might be making the character you seek, if I can ever find the time.TheInfamousHavoc said: