Fantasy Swarovski Academy

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Discuss plot related matters here or simply have a nice, good chatter c:

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[Nozomu]

Hi c:

 

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@Mine when exactly will we be able to post a CS?

 

[Vii]

Tomorrow, after I finish setting the whole roleplay up, @RedLikeRoses

 

[AccountNotActive]

Awesome, thanks.

 

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As long as it's WIP, it's fine, don't worrry.

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]Okay.
Can you read what I have so far to determine if anything needs changing?

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I don't see why not





Just give me a few seconds please.

 

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She looks promising so far, @Salt Lord!


I have to apologize for something though, I meant to put Nationality instead of Ethnicity. I already edited it.


I love her name too, I'm rather curious about its origin.

 

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Clever, I like it!


Ahaha, is it that obvious? I'm from Europe actually.

 

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@acidust


I assume your character is still in making proccess but I would like to point some things wrong with her before the final result, if that's okay with you


Age and Year: Second Years's age is around 17. The age you put is far too young.


Attributes: You have to choose between the guardian or the weapon, you cannot have both. All students are allowed to choose a weapon for Crystal Training, in case you're interested.

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]Why thank you.
Not all that obvious. What gave it away was that the roleplay took place somewhere other than Japan (most American people would make academy roleplays there) and the fact that you didn't understand a few of my questions because of how I worded them.


Your English is pitch perfect. I don't think many would have noticed the other things.

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I thought it would be more interesting if we had more nationalities on the mix, I hope that's okay!


But damn, if it was from that, you have a good eye, nice going!


And thanks, I'm glad for that. Apologies ahead if I keep getting words wrong cx

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]I believe Acidust's character's age is 18. It's one year older than it should be.
That means I should probably change Aschen's age to 16, seeing as how she's a first-year student.

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Acidust followed my request, since it was 15 before.


I'm more flexible if they enter the school older than most people. Because owls get lost cx I kid, I kid But if you want her to have 16, go ahead of course. It's just if they manage to be a Second Year at even before people older than them, it just makes your character look like a special snowflake.


And I really hate those.

 

[acidust]

@acidust
I assume your character is still in making proccess but I would like to point some things wrong with her before the final result, if that's okay with you


Age and Year: Second Years's age is around 17. The age you put is far too young.


Attributes: You have to choose between the guardian or the weapon, you cannot have both. All students are allowed to choose a weapon for Crystal Training, in case you're interested.

I was twisted about age, when I saw starting at age thirteen, I thought that was how old first years were supposed to be D: I changed it three times really quickly, it started at 15 third year, then second year, then I saw Aschen's age, and was doubly confused. you must've caught it on the first one.


I'll change the attribute, my bad.

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]By the way, I just had an awesome idea. When the Crystal develops into a Gemstones, the Gemstone is in the shape of a weapon and can be used like what it turns into!
 



It's not often you see more than one nationality in a roleplay. This is a nice change.


Thanks. I've always been good at seeing through people I've interacted with.


From how you're doing now, I doubt you'll get words wrong anytime soon.

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That's an excellent idea but it's also one of the Attributes you can pick from Elements...


But seeing you give suggestions makes me feel like a monster to reject them...let me try twisting it a bit.


What if the Gemstone could be incorporated in the weapon given to you at Crystal Training (since some Attributes are non-combat ones), strengthening them?


I can see that!


Thanks! ^//^


 


[QUOTE="Salt Lord]Everyone hates those.
16 is the generic age, so I'll go change it back to 17, seeing as how Aschen went to school late because, you know, rich people and their homeschooling.


I am not a hypocrite.

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YES.


That is plausible!


xD


 

I was twisted about age, when I saw starting at age thirteen, I thought that was how old first years were supposed to be D: I changed it three times really quickly, it started at 15 third year, then second year, then I saw Aschen's age, and was doubly confused. you must've caught it on the first one.
I'll change the attribute, my bad.

Oh, okay, okay, my bad then!


Thank you!

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]That's even better than the Gemstone itself being a weapon!
Alrighty. Gonna go continue Aschen's sheet.

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Yaaaaay cx Thank you!


Good luck!

 

[acidust]

No not your fault! D: My brain is bad at processing information when I'm excited. I'm a nine year old stuck in this body, it's really unfortunate.


And I had a question. But I forgot.


/sob

 

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No not your fault! D: My brain is bad at processing information when I'm excited. I'm a nine year old stuck in this body, it's really unfortunate.
And I had a question. But I forgot.


/sob

You're a kid at heart, it's a good thing c:


Take your time, no rush.

 

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@StoneWolf18


A few things...


Change Ethinicity to Nationality instead, please. It's my mistake, I apologize.


Biography: Everyone needs to complete this, it's not optional. Just a few lines, no need to go into 10 paragraphs.

 

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Okay, since there are three girls, do you want me to make a guy for my character?

 

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Okay, since there are three girls, do you want me to make a guy for my character?

I don't want to force you but if you made one, I would be really grateful!


Also, @acidust @StoneWolf18 @Salt Lord, I forgot to add, my mistake, don't forget the Crystal form!


Props to @Carmelita for remembering it!

 

[acidust]

I can double!

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]I didn't. Also, there are five girls now. Should I switch Aschen's gender...?

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Only if you want!


I'll make some male characters when I get the time and my friend Kolchao is doing the same.


 

I can double!

I'll do the same so-


Go ahead if you want!

 

[acidust]

I'll make another character once everyone has theirs and pick a stone accordingly ^-^

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]I kinda wanna keep Aschen a female so it'll match her backwards Cinderella theme... and I'm too lazy to make a new character...

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Keep her female then. You're not obligated to do a male character after all ^^


 

I'll make another character once everyone has theirs and pick a stone accordingly ^-^

Thank you! c:

 

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[QUOTE="Salt Lord]Thanks.
I just asked someone if they'd like to join as a male character. Still waiting for a reply.

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Oh, thank you for that! :3