Realistic or Modern Sorcery- OCC

[Svisttt]

well that sounds like im upset. im actually very happy with the result. feels...better. took some time to discuss with hulk, but much thanks to them for aiding me,. preferring the newer version much more.
though "a beast that bears mans skin" is out... poo

I'm glad you're happier with it!!

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

if your pleased with the character then I'm sure its great, ill go read

 

[Mistory]

to answer your question queendood, the lore wasnt lining up. and it felt...forced. im hoping to get an ok from the boss before i finish it. i may need some of the gods input before im done

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

to answer your question queendood, the lore wasnt lining up. and it felt...forced. im hoping to get an ok from the boss before i finish it. i may need some of the gods input before im done

that makes sense

 

[Mistory]

granted the history isnt finished, but it feels so much more...fluid.

 

[Mistory]

also, it may not have been up since i had not saved the changes to the cs. its saved now so you can get a looksie

 

[Svisttt]

will read!!

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

I love it, it gives a slightly unsettling mental image in the very beginning, but its really detailed and well written

 

[Svisttt]

^

hard agreeee, very well written. It shows off a lot of his early personality

 

[Mistory]

I had abit of aide from our lord hulk, but i apriciate it!
heres the big issue though. in the history he has suddenly appeared on earth...how do the current gods react?

 

[Svisttt]

How long ago did he appear?

 

[Mistory]

around 50,000 years ago

 

[Svisttt]

ahh alright just wanted to make sure because youngish Ra'zir would've been a pissy bitch about it.

I think Ra'zir would've reacted in a shocked and rushed manner, probably attempting to subdue him if it were possible.

 

[Mistory]

kasigi what do you think?

 

[Mistory]

lol im just imagining Kai'zen :"
pfft. stupid humans. stll looking for atlantis...idiots dont even know I sunk it in the pacific..."

 

[Svisttt]

lol im just imagining Kai'zen :"
pfft. stupid humans. stll looking for atlantis...idiots dont even know I sunk it in the pacific..."

now that's something Ra'zir would be pissy about cluttering up the ocean tsk tsk littering

 

[Mistory]

well, wheres the continent he sunk gonna go? he brought a continent down when he surfaced for the first time so...

 

[Mistory]

now im thinking Sol just be like" kids. educate your brother" and freaking ghosts on them, leaving this savage god with no form of knowledge for them to deal with. he's practically a baby at his rising so that should be fun

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

now im thinking Sol just be like" kids. educate your brother" and freaking ghosts on them, leaving this savage god with no form of knowledge for them to deal with. he's practically a baby at his rising so that should be fun

I'm cant speak for Idris officially as I don't own him, but if feel like he'd be the "I'm not mad, just disappointed " type

 

[WeaselThor]

Yo DorkyQueerDood

I just noticed one of Darcy's abilities us to detect essences within 25 miles. I need you to remove this. We currently have 4 characters who can sense essences. One is Izekiel and they are a part of him. The second Is Brogan and his slave girl who uses the Tracking mage (someone who dedicated their life to tracking magic sources.) the third is someone who posseses the essence of awareness. Finalky you have sun wukong who created an entire race solely to find them. Darcy has no reason to be able to do this, not only thats but to be able to do it better than all these beings is absurd. If you would be so kind as to fix this for me...

Also the fallen knights sense needs to go. The energy they give off is not magic but something else. Literally everyone can sense them coming so it doesnt need to be listed.

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

Yo DorkyQueerDood

I just noticed one of Darcy's abilities us to detect essences within 25 miles. I need you to remove this. We currently have 4 characters who can sense essences. One is Izekiel and they are a part of him. The second Is Brogan and his slave girl who uses the Tracking mage (someone who dedicated their life to tracking magic sources.) the third is someone who posseses the essence of awareness. Finalky you have sun wukong who created an entire race solely to find them. Darcy has no reason to be able to do this, not only thats but to be able to do it better than all these beings is absurd. If you would be so kind as to fix this for me...

Also the fallen knights sense needs to go. The energy they give off is not magic but something else. Literally everyone can sense them coming so it doesnt need to be listed.

I apologize for this, I was not intentionally trying to god-mod those aspects of my character. I hope there are no hard feelings

 

[WeaselThor]

I apologize for this, I was not intentionally trying to god-mod those aspects of my character. I hope there are no hard feelings

None whatsoever. Thanks for being understanding. I understand believe me.

 

[Damafaud]

Sorry for the short post. It's a bit late here.

 

[WeaselThor]

Sorry for the short post. It's a bit late here.

Not at all. It was good ?

 

[DorkyQueerDood]

wooo, 2 pages in IC