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[Olissa]

Haha it would be a very interesting fandom story xD Probably a bit long as a backstory, as it likely could span over several chapters, but the short version of it could definitely make an appearance! (If you ever do write out the whole thing, do please let me read that haha)

 

[Sephera]

Who wants to see Sailor Neptune? I just finished all the dolls for her ^^

 

[Olissa]

It's up to you to decide if you want to post Neptune now, or when you post the entire character sheet And I think you already made up your mind about what you would rather want.

 

[Sephera]

I really just want to make sure I did it right xD So I don't X out and lose everything and have to remake it all.

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[Olissa]

I would prefer it if at this time you didn't include the princess appearance, as the royal attire will have certain guidelines that need to be followed.


It's a start, parts of it are good, but there are a number of things that are off on the remaining dolls.


I think it would be for the best if you didn't use a nail polish, as the nails then ends up above the glove, which is awkward since nails don't do that.


Since the dolls are so small it's hard to see the exact details that might be off, but from this image I can see quite a number of errors on the 4th stage doll. I could delve into them individually, or refer you to the tutorial that I posted for the female senshi in the Notes tab. Whichever you prefer.

 

[Sephera]

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[Olissa]

From an objective point of view, the 4 dolls are good now.


From a personal point of view I might have a suggestion or two, but I'll keep that to myself unless you wish to know.

 

[Sephera]

Go ahead ^^


I'm actually changing her hair right now xD So if hair is on the list, it's being changed.

 

[Olissa]

Nah it wasn't on the list. Hairstyles and colors are fully free-to-choose. After all, White/blonde (Serenity) + Black (Endymion) = Pink (Small Lady)... Where's the logic in that xD


What I noticed was you changed the accent color (bows, glove edge) from dark blue to black. I was hoping to try and keep black reserved for the only senshi that had that at the time (Pluto). If you have an argument as to why it should remain black feel free to convince me.


And while I was creating Saturn's look I noticed that she has a lot of dark colors. As a result, the dark colored gem was very difficult to see on the dark colored bow. (Especially the heart and star) What I did to combat that is color the gem 1 shade lighter so it pops a little more without completely throwing off the balance. You don't have too the same, but if you happen to agree about the dark colors on the bow/gem, you could see what happens if you fiddle with the color of the gem?

 

[Sephera]

It might just be my computer screen, the accent color on my screen is like really dark blue! xD


I could change it if you absolutely want me to! Even though I really lik it the color it is. But if I must, I must

 

[Olissa]

The game's settings mean that the black in that game doesn't actually read fully black, it has a purple/blueish tone to it. I take it that the color you chose was the most upper left color, above the variations of grey?

 

[Sephera]

Guys I just bought my first car!


& Could I keep it black, or would you prefer I change it?

 

[Olissa]

You already know my stance on the black color. The fact that it appears a shade blue/purplish isn't really compelling. I think I did place somewhere that the colors should be kept as the original, though I'll have to check the exact wording I used.

 

[Sephera]

I'll just change it.

 

[The Succubi Queen]

Oh, also, speaking along that thread, there's a variety of colors used in different interpretations of Sailor Mercury, at least that I can recall. Do I stick with the Cobalt/Cobalt, or use the Cobalt/Sky blue color scheme?

 

[Olissa]

I don't recall what you had exactly. I know it was blue, but which shades I totally forgot. Mercury has 2 different tones of blue. So keeping it two tones of blue is definitely what I would ask. Adjusting a color slightly (like a different shade or tone of blue) I can deal with, but changing an entire color to something else doesn't really sit well with me.


As for which exact colors to use when the original artist at times changed colors, I'll leave that in your hands.

 

[The Succubi Queen]

I don't recall what you had exactly. I know it was blue, but which shades I totally forgot. Mercury has 2 different tones of blue. So keeping it two tones of blue is definitely what I would ask. Adjusting a color slightly (like a different shade or tone of blue) I can deal with, but changing an entire color to something else doesn't really sit well with me.
As for which exact colors to use when the original artist at times changed colors, I'll leave that in your hands.

Alrighty! I'll do those up today and add them to my CS.

 

[The Succubi Queen]

Posting here to get aprroval before adding to CS!

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[Nico]

I'm sorry I'm going to have to back out. I'm feeling overwhelmed.

 

[Olissa]

@The Succubi Queen I think I see a few color differences between the dolls, but nothing that is worth fussing over. Looks good to me. Shoes remind me of Hisako's ^^


@Celebi noo you were doing great. I was looking forward to the complete character and interacting with her. I know I fuss a bit about the colors and appearance of the senshi, but that won't be the tone for the rest of the RP, that is much more free. I know I can't force you, but I would dearly love it if you stayed?

 

[Nico]

I can stay, I just need a little bit of time to write up the rest of her CS

 

[Olissa]

If there is anything I can do to help make things easier just let me know, okay? There's no specific time before you have to have the character finished (though perhaps a whole month might be a little much?) so go ahead and take the time you need to get comfortable with the character as you intend to write her.

 

[Nico]

Thanks ^^

 

[The Succubi Queen]

Shoot, I think I prestole @Sephera's thunder when I made Yume into music and composition. I can change it up a bit, if you want full claim on the music thing, hun!

 

[Olissa]

@Sephera, nice to see the character starting to form.


The Shoes part of the character sheet (as is written in the first post of the character sign up thread) is intended for the shoes they wear while transformed.


It isn't mandatory to make the appearance of the senshi, which is why it was added so that if someone didn't want to make the dolls, but did want to divert in shoe wear it would at least have a spot in the character sheet.