OOC Discussion

[Swoob]

Oh and also: students are allowed to pick their classes, though we wouldn't want everybody to be in the same one. As far as I remember from the discord discussions, first-year students have to take all classes, and from there each student talks with the director and takes only the classes they still need to work on. So if you're just starting out IC, you can join any class you choose, but if you've been there for a year+ IC, it would be best to choose a class you think your character would still have to attend

 

[Giyari]

Right this is gonna sound like a dicky thing from me, but could anyone with an application waiting to be looked over/accepted also sent it to me in a PM? I'm finding it exceedingly difficult to pick through the OOC and find active apps, especially when people have "reposted for convenience" (yes I mean you Scribble, but you're not the only one ) or qouted someone entire application in their criticism of it, as it makes it look like a fresh app, to me anyway.


So. Send me any apps you want me to look in a PM, as I assume people keeping up with this runaway train of an OOC have already seen said apps. I'll look them over and post my response in the OOC with your quoted app under a spoiler tag.


Also announcement soon, I'll post it tonight/tomorrow once I have everything pretty much sorted. Basically going to be the next stage of the RP after the exam.

Spoiler

@Chibii @Swimswamswom @TheDaftStudent @too much idea @ViAdvena @welian @Zahzi

 

[King Of Imagination]

@Giyari Hey, weli told me and hat to actually make an announcement, so, continuing off of your tag list:


Hey everyone! Micah here with a special announcement from the Entertainment department! Myself and Asher(@DJ Magic Hat) will be throwing a big party in the upcoming week to celebrate the end of exams. There will be food, drink, music, and a number of other fun things going on! Attendance is not mandatory(if you enjoy sitting in your room like a loner and being boring) but is highly recommended as it will be great fun! Yay, parties!

 

[Scribbler]

@Giyari


Is it possible you could create the Pm between us for the apps?


As I'm unable to do so at the moment given my lack of posts.

 

[welian]

@Necessity4Fun


Don't worry, I saw that you tagged me in character! It'll be a while before I can respond though. You're welcome to sit back and wait for me to respond, or if you get bored you can move on ahead. I don't mind.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

@Necessity4Fun
Don't worry, I saw that you tagged me in character! It'll be a while before I can respond though. You're welcome to sit back and wait for me to respond, or if you get bored you can move on ahead. I don't mind.

I was aware you are busy. But, hey! I don't mind waiting at all Take your time :33


*grabs a chair and sits down, reading Psychology articles for class*

 

[Suzuki Mine]

NOW THAT I'M NOT GETTING READY FOR ONE CAMPAIGN OR ANOTHER...!


[/skips off to PM Praxi's profile]

 

[Giyari]

So after saying all that I ended up bloody swamped for two and a half days... I'm here now though for a little while, so lets see how lost I can get trying to keep up with this fucking train wreck!

 

[Gus]

I was just wondering if anybody had put any thought into facility 108's physical location beyond just "Baltimore on the water"? I was just noodling around on google maps and found a nice desolate little spot labeled "Sparrow's Point" centered around coordinates 39.2180124689516, -76.47843997917175. Might be just me, but I like to have a sense of the lay of the land when I write, for better verisimilitude. Granted, things will likely change a lot between now and 2040, but until google adds a future coastline projection tool, that's the best I can think to do. Anybody have other suggestions for specificity of place within the city?

 

[Giyari]

I was just wondering if anybody had put any thought into facility 108's physical location beyond just "Baltimore on the water"? I was just noodling around on google maps and found a nice desolate little spot labeled "Sparrow's Point" centered around coordinates 39.2180124689516, -76.47843997917175. Might be just me, but I like to have a sense of the lay of the land when I write, for better verisimilitude. Granted, things will likely change a lot between now and 2040, but until google adds a future coastline projection tool, that's the best I can think to do. Anybody have other suggestions for specificity of place within the city?

That exactly where this is, on the grounds of what used to be Sparrows Point Shipyard Industrial Complex.

 

[Gus]

W00t! Go go google research!


Was this already posted elsewhere, and I just missed it?

 

[Suzuki Mine]

I needed to take this numbered post.


I just had to.

 

[Giyari]

@Strawberry Preserves

Spoiler

o3o


Lín, Jié Lún

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Lín Jié Lún "Jay" (林 杰伦)
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	16
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Asian (Taiwanese)
  Eyes	Silver
  Hair	Black
  Height	5'7
  Build	Normal
  Limiter	Level One
  Notes	Fluent in Mandarin Chinese and English

• Heroism Meter

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	03	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	03	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	05	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	05	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	02	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  Personality + Innovative: He always thinks of new methods to apply himself, or alternative procedures to anything complicated. Alternatively, Jay thinks of overly-complicated ways to go about something simple. Jay is very creative and imaginative, and makes for interesting conversation. He applies his ingenuity to his power most of all, so he can expands its uses. = Cheerful: A happy smile always adorns Jay's face, radiating joy 24/7. Very little stops him from smiling, and anything does causes a dramatic change in his demeanor. However, he keeps smiling even through traumatic events and disadvantageous situations. He also tends to joke around a lot, but it is difficult to discern whether or not he is being sincere. = Laidback: While he isn't the laziest kid on the block, Jay typically takes a relaxed and easygoing stance on life. He will let people have their way most of the time, and doesn't carry a concrete opinion on many things. His even temper makes him an easy person to talk to, as he doesn't judge people either. – Self-serving: Jay values his own well-being above anything else. If there's a chance he might become severely injured or killed in some situation, he would refuse to act no matter what. He'll frequently avoid anything that risks his well-being, and commonly hides behind other people instead. There are even times in which he'll manipulate others for his own interests. People who get to know this side of Jay label it as his nasty side. History If you ask anyone what they first noticed about Jay, their response would be that they did not notice a single thing. Or at least, that he looks completely average. Nothing really stands out about him. He was born in a normal family living near Taipei, with two parents who held stable jobs and gave him a decent home. When he was younger, they used to leave him at home with his grandma while they went into the city to work. Like any family, they had their up's and down's, but an amicable atmosphere always held steady. Jay held grades good enough to get him into the average public university. He ran for the track team, but he never won first place in any race, let alone second. While Jay had a decent amount of friends, there was no one he could necessarily say was his best friend. In essence, he was merely a background character. Even after Jay awakened his powers at age fifteen, they still maintained their cheerful mood. After all, his powers weren't obvious at all. Just like him, they were completely, utterly average. A salty orange? Unique, but not ground-breaking. Blue roses? Beautiful, but they didn't pass on their colors. Perhaps how he could smooth a rough surface could be of note. Or maybe how he can make glass slightly softer. All that didn't matter. His powers could be hidden easily. As long as he didn't use it in front of others, nobody would know. That way, Jay could stay with his family. His life continued in this way for one more year, until the opportunity to move to America opened up to his parents. His father had received a promotion, but the new location was in Baltimore. They couldn't miss such a wonderful opportunity, especially for Jay. The United States was rumored to be the golden land of opportunity, after all. Days after they moved in, Jay brushed the hands of someone with powers and lost control of his own for the first time. From a single touch, Jay unconsciously acted upon the modifications he could make upon the man's powers. The man had the ability to excrete weak acid in small quantities, but Jay caused his powers to strengthen. The man began secreting a powerful acid, stronger than the one he used to create before. His secondary power–resistance to his own acid–could not protect him from the new acid he produced. In a matter of seconds, the man had become a burning and blistering mess, and soon only a corroded hole in the street was all that remained of him. After that incident, Jay began going to AEGIS Facility 108.
• Character Name Description of relationship

• Ability	Points	17	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	05	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  Primary Power Jay's power is to "modify" an object. To anything that is not living, it is restricted to changing some of an object's physical properties–color, smell, taste, strength–and even then, the change is not very dramatic. For example, he cannot modify a red, fist-sized apple to grow into the size of a house, but he can modify it to become yellow and salty. His power's true value lies in modifying living beings, or the abilities of living beings. Jay can modify the superpowers or natural abilities of others by expanding their capabilities, adding rules, boosting the strength of the ability/superpower or vice versa, or changing the ability's effect. Secondary powers By touching an object, Jay automatically gathers information about its properties and usages. Possible modifications he can make to the object are also automatically inputted into his mind, though he can still think of his own ideas. Weaknesses
  • Any alteration Jay makes to a living being has a time limit that grows shorter the bigger the change he makes.
  • He must make physical contact with anything he wishes to modify. If it does not touch his skin, he cannot make changes to it.
  • He has no upgraded capabilities other than in thought. Jay is an average human being overall, and vulnerable to combat and action.
  • His powers restrict his very being from ever improving. He can never become more athletic or more sturdy. While Jay grows and retains injuries normally, any improvement in his phsyique reverses in a matter of hours.
  • Jay cannot modify himself, though he can modify his clothes. Not that he really wants to, unless he wants to color-coordinate or something.
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Some formatting issues to address, mostly to split the bio and history into readable paragraphs, it's a bit hard to read as the block of text it currently is.


I'm also not fond of his power, powers that alter another's character are quite how would I say, they can be tricky. Although given that the limitations are the same as a current characters already, I think, as long as any effects you want to create are discussed with other RPers first things should be alright. Also note that his limiter would probably stop his powers from affecting living beings.

 

[Giyari]

@Bag o Fruit

Spoiler

You said to PM you our applications, and if there's a more effective PM system than this I don't know how to use it


KRAVITZ, CHRISTOPHER

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Christopher Markus Kravitz
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	M
  Age	17
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	White, slightly Asian
  Eyes	Blue
  Hair	Black
  Height	5'8"
  Build	Thin but muscular
  Limiter	Level 1, active

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	08	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	07	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	01	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	03	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Unassuming: Chris will start a conversation with a toddler or a teacher in just the same way as he would a peer. Unless someone provides sufficient evidence of being dickish, friendly, clever or foolish, he harbors no expectations as to their character.
  
  
  Brooding: Everything good that happens to Chris is a penny in the change dish. Everything bad that happens to him is the worst thing to ever ruin his life, and he'll have to spend some time in the corner with a dark hoodie and an Ipod to handle it.
  
  
  Compassionate: He may not say or do too much to suggest it, but he feels very deeply for other people. He'll be torn by even the least convincing sob story, and he always helps the helpless.
  
  
  Pugnacious: He doesn't like bullies. From playground dolt to untouchable lawmaker, there is little there for him but dislike. He knows that there's a reason they are that way, that they're really a good person and their actions are a result of their circumstance just like Rousseau said. Usually he acts upon this dislike because something is being done that needs to be stopped, but sometimes he just doesn't give a damn.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Chris never knew his father. For some reason, he was killed when Chris was a baby, or possibly before he was born. His mother never talked about it, but he deduced over the years of this clue and that clue that his father was killed by Commonwealth officers. He's still not sure how or why.
  
  
  His mother gave him identification with E stamps when he was very young, and would uproot the pair of them every few months to move to some other part of America. Sometimes they'd visit overseas countries, such as his great-grandfather in Taiwan, but they'd never stay long. She never talked about why any of this was. Now that he knows about his powers, it seems obvious that she was hiding from Commonwealth.
  
  
  A few weeks ago, Commonwealth uncovered their long trail of fake identities and test-evasion. They imprisoned Chris's mother and sent him into screening, where he was forced to submit to invasive medical procedures, to determine if his A6G23 gene was active. When he tested postive, the tests only got worse. He was, as the law requires, forced to display his powers to their fullest capabilites, during which time he fractured his tibia through means he'd rather not talk about.
  
  
  He was applied a class 1 limiter, and made a ward of the state, since he had no friends or family that could be contacted (he has his suspicions that the people who tried to contact his Taiwanese family purposefully failed). He was sent to a group home in Boston, where he and his mother ended up being found.
  
  
  A common story he grew up hearing was one of a vigilante who worked with Rapture "before they lost sight of a brighter world", as his mother always put it. He knew Rapture from the news, but the stories about this vigilante were exciting and inspiring. He wanted to be that, he wants to be that. That's why he applied to 108 for his Blue Card.
• 
  
  
  Ms. Kravitz
  
  
  Chris has a lot of conflicted feelings about his mother. She raised him and taught him how to get by, but every time he got used to a place she'd rip him up by the roots. Even though he understands the reason now, he has a lot of deep-seated anger directed towards his mother, for the moves, for keeping him in the dark, and, on some level, for letting his father go, even though he's sure that wasn't her doing. Of course he loves her just as much as any son. He really wishes she had told him her first name before it was too late...
  
  
  Mr. Kravitz
  
  
  Every angry feeling Chris has about his mother he feels twice as much about his father. Every feeling of love he gives his mother is a feeling of hatred that his father could leave her like this. Every feeling of compassion for her is a confused, bitter plea for understanding. What was it about fighting the Commonwealth that was so much more important than his mother? More important than him? But when he used to think about how his father was killed by Commonwealth, how Commonwealth was equally responsible for their renegade status, he caught the darkest image of comprehension. Now he doesn't need to think about it very hard. Just look at his limiter.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	03	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	03	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	05	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Mushin; Christopher possesses an instinctual and superhuman understanding of physical reactions to his own and others' actions, and is thereby able to do seemingly impossible things. He can dodge punches, throw with uncanny accuracy, literally bat (almost) 1000, and other such things merely by wanting to. He can apply his own strength in such a way as to lift insane weights, with no more physical strength than the average man. Put concisely, he has all the power and speed of the average man, but he knows exactly how to use it.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Zanshin; he has unusually high situational awareness. He can't quite fight more than five men in the dark, or by any means hear a heartbeat from across a room, but he's perfectly capable of dispatching whatever thug means to sneak up behind him and deliver a heavy blow to the head.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  As mentioned, he has only the power, speed, etc of the average man. He cannot actually break the laws of physics, which may seem like a cop-out weakness until one considers that half his classmates can shoot fire from their fingertips or teleport between trees. Since he is not any faster than the average person, he can't dodge a bullet once it's in the air and headed for him (but he can prepare for the shot beforehand if he can observe the angle of the barrel and move accordingly), and since he is no stronger, there is a limit to what he can move.
  
  
  Unfortunately, he doesn't know his own limits, and in order to maximize performance, he has no subconscious barrier preventing him from unwittingly harming himself. If he reacts to something too quickly, or if he tries to lift some 800 kilograms, he might not stop himself before muscles are torn and bones are broken.
  
  
  His powers are based in his mind, his abilities precise and mental, not physical. As such, strong emotions such as rage or sorrow, sometimes joy, may limit his abilities. By the same token, it is easier to disable him with a telepathic attack than most. Simply said, he doesn't function well while distracted. (note: His willpower is ranked at five. It's not always particularly easy to distract him, but it is effective.)
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Righty! I've looked at your profile for Christopher before, and I think the last criticisms I gave more or less stand. His background/history is still confusing to read and contradictory,a s is his personality points. There's no point in saying he's Pugnacious towards bullies, yet also state that he might ignore bullying if he can't be bothered. Likewise, making his compassionate yet, not doing anything to suggest he is.


As for his powers, they're fine! I like the expanded weaknesses section, really outlines his limitations

 

[Giyari]

@Lazy Rocktime

Spoiler

Ayyy, whaddup. Here's a PM detailing my next character. Ignore the messed up sliders, I can't seem to edit them on mobile. Love to hear whatcha think. Especially on the powers. I think I really dropped the ball when writing the weaknesses.


Saotome, Minah

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Minato "Aminah/Minah" Saotome
  Codename	Revenant
  Gender	Female
  Age	18
  Rank	B
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Asian (Japanese)
  Eyes	Black
  Hair	Short with bangs covering a small part of her left face, sun-beaten dark brown
  Height	5'5"
  Build	Lithe and curvaceous
  Limiter	Level 3, active
  Notes	Looks deceptively mature for an 18yo

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	4	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	3	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	4	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	3	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	5	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  +Empathetic: Perhaps Minah's most prominent trait is her ability to feel and more importantly understand what others are feeling or could be feeling. She knows how it would feel like to be treated badly, so she refrains from doing so. Stemming from her own desire for being understood, she is probably the best person to vent you will ever be blessed to see.
  
  
  ~Desires Affection: Having been deprived of parents and still suffering a deficit of friendship, Minah has become somewhat of a 'hopeless romantic'. All she desires is to love and be loved. She tends to attach herself to someone of moral stature, so as to imitate having a father figure.
  
  
  ~Inquisitive: Plunged into a world devoid of warmth and innocence and then finally freed from said world only recently, fate now leaves her with an undying curiosity and anemoia: nostalgia for the time she never experienced. She wants to know what the hell she has been missing out on.
  
  
  -Unstable: A former child soldier, it's safe to say that Minah has seen a lot, most of it horrible, horrible stuff. Years and years of both physical and sexual abuse and exposure to the horrors of war has left her not quite the stable girl she had been before (so she was told). Poor girl suffers night terrors, recurring flashbacks, trust issues and hypervigilant paranoia from the inescapable feeling of something dreadful out to get her. She is hesitant to call this fear, but it seems like fear.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Before everything went to hell, Minah was Minato Saotome, a wide-eyed girl from Kobe, Japan. Born on the 5th of March, she grew up in a fairly condusive environment. She had a twin sister, Minami, who competed with her in every aspect like children should. Her parents were caring and loving, both teachers at local high schools. Their paycheck was modest at best, but they managed to save up for a family vacation and they finally made it happen when Minato was 10 years old. Destination? South Africa. Everything was set and ready for a wonderful time for the family.
  
  
  
  
  
  But fate refused to cooperate.
  
  
  The flight boarded by the Saotome family never made it to South Africa. After engine complications coupled with turbulent weather, it crash landed in Aceh, leaving almost the entirety of its passengers and crew dead. That is, save for Minato. Against all odds, the young girl survived, but was left to survive in the tropic jungles of Sumatra. Thankfully, she quickly found a group of people with guns residing in the jungle who were willing to take her in. And foolishly, she followed them, not knowing that they were Acehnese insurgents.
  
  
  Aceh had always been a land synonymous with conflict, but that year marked the rise of a new rebellion, one that once more fights the 'infidel government'. The rebels that took in Minato did so out of false good faith. Poor girl would later be shocked to find herself forced onto the battlefield. She was not the first, for she met dozens of fellow children, most older and some even younger than her, ousted onto guerilla warfare. Their lives were pitiful. Forced to fight and kill under threat of execution by day and imprisoned, abused mercilessly by night. At the very least she shared that horrible fate with others. At the very least she found camaraderie amongst her brothers and sisters in arms.
  
  
  At the very least Minah, as she had been called, was not alone.
  
  
  But still, days filled with bloodshed did not bode well for her psyche. All that mental strife piled up bit by bit until finally, when she was 15, she broke. One day on the battlefield, she decided to not take up arms. Her rebel captors went up to kill her immediately, but just as they approached her, they let out screams of terror and ran into the jungle. Everyone in the vicinity soon followed, cowering before her as if she were some sort of demon. In the panic, one dropped his fully loaded assault rifle.
  
  
  You can see what's going to happen.
  
  
  Heart filled with vengeance, Minah opened fire on the fleeing insurgents. Too scared to return fire, they made for easy targets. Unlike all those times, she relished the deaths, every corpse dropping to the ground filling her with sick euphoria. In her frenzy of bloodlust, she had also slain her fellow child soldiers without realizing it. Once there was nothing left to kill, she went off into the wilderness a lone wolf.
  
  
  Minah carved her own path of destruction throughout Aceh, killing anyone she came across out of sheer paranoia. Those few who saw her and lived returned bearing legends. Soldiers from both sides alike feared her as a ghost-like entity. The Revenant was born. Her chaotic actions drew the attention of central Indonesian command. Special agents, the Detachment 88, were deployed into Aceh to hunt down the Revenant. Despite Minah's best efforts, she could not escape the country's finest and they managed to subdue her and subsequently sent to Jakarta for detainment.
  
  
  Minah found that the government treat her fairly well. Her time with them could be better referred to as rehabilitation as they taught her how to function better in society. They also conducted research concerning her fear-inducing powers. Agents from a place called the Commonwealth were brought in. These guys told her after some experimentation that Minah was a B-level super. Well, not that she cared.
  
  
  But she was interested in the mutual agreement made between the government and the Commonwealth people. It had been decided that she was to be given American citizenship and sent to a facility for supers where she could safely augment her powers. Never had she been so excited. And so on the day of her 18th birthday, she departed for the United States, to be interred at Facility 108. They also informed her of her legal guardian while in the facility, as good as a godfather as far as she was concerned.
  
  
  His name was Klaus vos Scheiffer.
  
  
  
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  Klaus vos Scheiffer, 50: Her legal guardian/godfather, the German figure was a mystery to Minah (seeing as, you know, she hadn't met hin yet), but trustworthy people told her that he was a decent enough person and that was enough for her.
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	3	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	2	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	2	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	5	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	3	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	5	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Horror Aura: Minah's presence invokes fear into the human mind, so much so that it could rout and even cripple others. How much fear depends on the fortitude of the mind experiencing the fear as well as how unstable her own psyche is. Unlike what some believe, she does not appear to be what people fear the most. Rather she only makes the brain perceive her presence as a severe threat, thereby stimulating a fight or flight response, where fight is not an option.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Telepathic immunity: Minah's power comes from the mind. Ergo, anyone who looks into her mind is subject to the full brunt of the horror aura, akin to staring down the barrel of a shotgun. Once, a mind reader attempted to delve into her mind and the sheer intensity of her powers gave him a heart attack.
  
  
  Spec Ops: Carrying over from her experience as a soldier, Minah is proficient in marksmanship and unconventional warfare. She is handy with an assault rifle, all the better since her targets are usually not firing back. Her stealth capabilities are also not to be ignored.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  Indiscriminate: Minah's aura knows not who is friend or foe. It affects all in a radius and the only thing she can do to help is tell hed friends to get out of her effective range. Which is 6 meters, by the way.
  
  
  Your Mileage May Vary: Everyone has varying breaking points of terror. Her aura has a fixed amount of fear, but everyone takes it differently. Someone brave will deal with it well, obviously, but weak-willed individuals will not.
  
  
  Overpowering: Sometimes her own powers may backfire on her. In truly extreme cases, such as during a panic attack, her aura would actually implode on her own mind, delivering her into a coma. Minah has requested usage of a higher level limiter so as to truly seal her powers as it has been documented that test subjects would still fear her even though a limiter is on tight.
  
  
  
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I'm unsure about your character, their history is alright, but I'm unsure if someone so psychologically unbalanced and dangerous should be in a public facility. Like, sure Aldur's character Ioana could be seen as in the same corner, but his character is also at the moment in control of their reactions, where as Minah sounds like she's not.


As for her power, I'm against it, as it's a power that has a stated solid effect on another character, therefore alters another character against their will, which is god mode stuff. As also stated it's always on, and affects everyone in it's radius, which would make i too dangerous for her to be in a public facility given it's effects.

 

[Suzuki Mine]

Aww yeeeeah~ Praxi was accepted!

 

[Teh Frixz]

Hey what kind of guard is Praxi? Riley got in too and I want to establish their working relationship

 

[MISTER UN. 0W3N]

Looks like we have a creepy teacher afoot. :U

 

[Suzuki Mine]

@Teh Frixz


Eee, Praxi has a co-worker~! > u <


Praxi pretty much lives and breaths duty, so she takes her job as a security officer at AEGIS pretty seriously.


She miiiight sometimes do things in a little bit of an unorthodox method, but it's all to get her job done in the most efficient manner.

 

[Teh Frixz]

So she's like an actual cop then, someone armed and able?


Riley is a glorified mall cop armed only with a notepad and pen. She's essentially a friendly face to unlock and lock doors in between getting occasionally stoned on accident. She's just doing this job to get her classes and training paid for as well as make ends meet with her apartment.

 

[Suzuki Mine]

@Teh Frixz


Indeed~ Praxi had been an actual cop before this, so she just kinda took her methods and transferred them over to AEGIS when she got the job.


Hm... From what I'm feeling from Praxi, she'd treat Riley kinda like a senior officer would a rookie.


A senior officer who may or may not as well be a detective out of a Noir film.


She also may or may not wait until she's in a designated smoking zone to light up.


Praxi might give Riley a kick in the pants when she catches her in one of her states, but it'd be more of the "You're doing it again so get yourself together" kinda thing as opposed to anything malicious. She doesn't expect everyone to take a security officer job as seriously as she does, or be in it for the same reasons as her. Praxi's also rather understanding of others situations despite her hard-boiled persona. She still expects them to do their part though.


So yeah, love taps~


Mang, I'm getting a good balancing vibe from the two of them as co-workers. I'm super hyped for them to interact~ 3

 

[welian]

I'm really glad to see everyone getting along well. I think I should be back next weekend, so please don't give @Giyari a hard time! Or do, it's your choice.

 

[MISTER UN. 0W3N]

Naw, naw. No hard times for peeps. xD


Aight, let's go whip up a format.

 

[Giyari]

@Teh Frixz @Suzuki Mine


Indeed! It's like, each of them balances out the others flaws, a proper unorthodox buddy cop duo


@welian plz... I'm trying my best to stay sane over here as it is xD

 

[King Of Imagination]

None of us are sane here @Giyari. I mean, just recall DesuDesu