OOC Discussion

[sorrow made you]

I think generation and regeneration got mixed up. Maybe change it to chemical production? Terminology, yo. Its a pain.

 

[Swoob]

@Teh Frixz nah the age wasn't a problem at all, I'm just genuinely amused at how student and teacher isn't decided by age, its kinda cool almost


as long as being immune to pain isn't the big main focus of her power, sounds good to me

 

[Teh Frixz]

It's more so leaking out serotonin and making copious amounts of drugs while doing copious amounts of drugs

 

[sorrow made you]

nb4 just throws it all into chemical manipulation

 

[welian]

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz]It's more so leaking out serotonin and making copious amounts of drugs while doing copious amounts of drugs

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Calm down, Walter.

 

[Aldur]

Calm down, Walter.

@Teh Frixz , IT'S TIME TO COOK!

 

[Teh Frixz]

Fun fun fun!

 

[DJ MagicHat]

Okay, here are my thoughts on the profiles posted so far:

@welian[/URL]


One of the Co-GM's said that recruitment starts at he 8th of March Again

Overall, Nathaniel seems good to me, but I did notice that there only seem to be two listed weaknesses and I believe you need at least three. I also think the "woke up in a metal box" bit from his backstory seems...off. Why would he be treated that way? I understand that he was caught regenerating, but to me that seems like a completely different caliber from "We caught this guy robbing a bank and didn't seem to care if he got shot or not, so we did this to contain him for now" or something similar. I feel like that part of his story could use some work.

Blackwell, Safara

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• Full Name	Blackwell, Safara
  Codename	'Puma'
  Gender	Female
  Age	**18**
  Rank	A
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	African American, Kenyan Heritage
  Eyes	Purple
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level 3, Active
  Notes	She wears a necklace as a memento of her mother. Safara wears it at all times and never takes it off. (Also sections marked with green ** is under construction.)

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Courageous	7	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Altruistic	5	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Orderly	3	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Kind	6	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Proactive	5	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  • Curious
    
  
  
  
  When it comes to new ideas, Safara isn't interested in brooding – she wants to go out and experience everything, and doesn't hesitate to step out of her comfort zone to do so. She is imaginative and open-minded, seeing all things as part of a big, mysterious puzzle called life.[/SPOILER]
  
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    Observant
    
  
  
  
  
  She believes that there are no irrelevant actions, that every shift in sentiment, every move and every idea is part of something bigger. To satisfy her curiosity, Safara tries to notice all of these things, and to never miss a moment.
  
  
  
  
  • Friendly
    
  
  
  
  Safara is approachable, interesting and exciting, with a cooperative and altruistic spirit and friendly, empathetic disposition. She's a people person.
  
  
  
  
  • Independent
    
  
  
  
  Safara is independent, almost to a fault. She loathes being micromanaged and restrained by heavy-handed rules – she wants to be seen as a highly independent master of her own fate, even possessing an altruistic wisdom that goes beyond draconian law. Because of this, she doesn't follow rules very well--they are made to be broken or she will make her own.
  
  
  
  History
  
  
  ****UNDER CONSTRUCTION***
  
  
  Part of her childhood was in Kenya and her parents were killed by the terrorists.
• Character Name
  
  
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• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	2	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	5	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	3	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	6	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	4	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	3	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Safara was born with animal mimicry. She is able to take on the abilities of animals she has been in contact with. All she needs to do is touch and 'converse' with a new animal's essence to mimic it's abilities. Once she has done this, she can access it from then on--no need to commune with it.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  She has the empathic power to converse with and manipulate animal life.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  One drawback of Safara's powers is that she is not always able to control what abilities she receives from an animal. She get's the good with the bad. What's worse, the longer she uses her powers, the less human and more animal she seems to become.
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I only counted two weaknesses in the profile, but otherwise this looks good to me. The stats make sense to me, and follow with the general theme throughout.

DAVIS, MARCUS

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• Full Name	Marcus James Davis
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	19
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	African-American
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark Brown
  Height	6'
  Build	Slim
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Scar on eyebrow, tattoo of a floating Tibetan monk on his left shoulder. Earring on left ear.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	05	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	05	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	06	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	04	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  +Optimistic: There's not much that can put Marcus down. At all times, he always struggles to see the good in every situation, no matter what. There aren't many people aside from his family and some very close friends that can say they've seen him without a smile on his face.
  
  
  =Daydreamer: Sometimes, one might notice that Marcus is not paying extreme attention to things he should. It's because he's dreaming about all the things he could do. He might be scheming his next big plan on how he's gonna spend his weekend.
  
  
  =High-spirited: Marcus has a bold nature. Sometimes that's good and other times not so much.
  
  
  -Naive: In contrast to his optimistic nature, Marcus may sometimes be told he is too naive for trying to find the good in everything and everyone. It sometimes happened that he put his trust in people that he shouldn't have and even nowadays he tries to tell himself that there is good in everyone, but sometimes it just doesn't look that way.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Marcus is a Baltimore native. He's been born in the place 19 years ago and lived there ever since. His father was a police officer and his mother was a teacher. Interestingly enough, none of them displayed obvious supernatural abilities. Though his dad seemed to have a higher IQ than usual. Still, nothing to prepare young Marcus of the day he floated uncontrollably and continuously for 12 hours for the first time in his life. He was 17.
  
  
  It took him a while, but he got a hang of how to get down. It'd happen about once or twice a week before his parents finally sent him to AEGIS so he'd learn how not to just... float around for the rest of his life. Fast-forwarding 2 years into the future, Marcus now knows much better how to control his abilities and accidents happen much less than before.
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• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Levitation: Marcus can levitate to a maximum of around 6 feet up in the air.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Marcus can also spin around for a longer amount of time before he gets dizzy.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  He sometimes cannot control when he starts and stops levitating and cannot go higher than 6 feet. If he gets distracted too Marcus will suddenly stop in mid-air and fall.
  
  
  
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One thing stuck out to me here: the secondary power. Do you mean that he could, say, go through astronaut training and not feel it? Be left spinning at high velocity for an hour or so and still be able to walk a straight line? If that's the case, I'd say that you should at least re-word the secondary power so it describes someone who's "not easily disoriented" or something along those lines.

kHz[/URL], which is 1.6 octaves above the range of a human, and even 1 octave above the range of a dog. Izzy has an acute sense of smell. About fourteen times as effective as an average human. This is because she has about twice as many olfactory epithelium within her nose.


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Isabella has a tapetum lucidum, which is a reflective layer behind the retina that sends light that passes through the retina back into the eye. This improves her ability to see in darkness, though also reduces net visual acuity then detracting when light is abundant. Basically she has cat eyes and can see in the dark.

Weaknesses

Izzy's body temperature runs between 101-102 degrees and her heart beats between 140-180 at a resting rate. As such, Izzy Chase must in take a remarkable amount of food to stay fit and healthy. Where a normal human could go days without food, she could not. Her metabolism is very sensitive.

With the power of her eyes, Izzy can see in the dark. However, this leaves her eyes very sensitive to bright lights. Also the heightened sight straight on cuts down greatly on any peripheral sight. The same goes for her ears and hearing as well. With such sensitive and acute senses, they can be easily over whelmed.

The long slender tail coated in silver fur. If you had something attached to your spinal column and was made of sensitive little bones, you would be touchy about it too. Though it is not just that she does not like it touched. This is used for her balance and agility. As such, even a tug, pull, or stomp upon it can be very detrimental to its fragile form.

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Izzy Chase

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I really like the ideas here! Very well thought out, and everything about this character stays consistent based on who and what they are. No complaints from me here.

I present to you my second character watch out for all the edge.
Suggestion and critique are more than welcome.


D'Avolo, Gabrielle

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• Full Name	Gabrielle D'Avolo
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Female
  Age	19
  Rank	A
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian (Italian)
  Eyes	Pale grey
  Hair	Jet black
  Height	5'8"
  Build	Lithe
  Limiter	Level 3, Active
  Notes	Soft, almost melancholic facial feature

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	04	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	04	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	01	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	04	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Level-headed
  
  
  Always seems calm and composed no matter how chaotic or dire the situation is. She mostly approaches everything with dispassionate logic. Gabrielle would be the type of person you would like to depend on in an emergency situation, if only her other trait didn't exist.
  
  
  Esthetic
  
  
  Very much appreciate natures and beauty. It can be said that she is also artistic at heart. Although, her definition of 'beautiful' things might be a bit different than most people.
  
  
  Disarming
  
  
  Tranquil and earthy, there's a certain serene ambience about her that lead people to lower their guard. After all, there's nothing to worry about this seemingly calm and peaceful girl, isn't it? It's no wonder they feel comfortable and secure about her presence, until...
  
  
  Sadistic
  
  
  ...They end up in a situation that makes them realise the above impression is a complete and utter lie. By sadistic, it doesn't only mean causing usual distress. It ranges from psychological torment to outright physical cold-blooded torture. Breaking and molding mind through pain is a form of art, or so she thinks. It's one of the few things that could change her mood and expression from calm indifference into utter delight, much like a kid that receive a candy. Just ask her foster family....if they still could talk, that's it.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Gabrielle spent her early years in Italy with her twin brother Michael. They were raised by a single parent, their father, until he was murdered in cold blood for his Mafia connections. They were orphaned and sent to America to live with their only living relatives, their father's second cousin and his wife. They were people who were incredibly anti-super, and when they found that the twins had the super gene, they treated the two horribly, verging on abuse. After a couple of years, however, the family "disappeared" leaving the twins to move between foster homes.
  
  
  Over the years mysterious disappearances continued, and after a few years the twins were arrested for inciting a riot which resulted in the injury of some normal humans(normies). They were sentenced to two years and some rehabilitation therapy, and now they are attending Facility 108 in addition to any outside schooling.
  
  
  
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  Family
  
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  Michael D'Avolo
  
  Twin brother. Literal partner-in-crime.
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	07	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	06	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Umbrakinetic construct, the ability to solidify and manipulate shadow into any shape the user wishes.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Night Vision, the ability to see in the dark.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  • Limited range of control. Right now she can only control shadow within 5m radius from her.
    
  • Her shadow's strength is pretty much a reflection of her own physical strength. Meanwhile, the speed depends on how fast her mind reacts to a situation.
    
  • She can only control shadow that's touching her own shadow. So no, she can't control the darkness within someone's body. If she could get her shadow into it, however...
    
  • Very bright light can make her shadow dematerialized, at least until the light vanished. Yes, flashbangs are her natural enemy.
    
  
  
  
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Now I've seen some characters with a dark side here and there, but...WHOA, man. Just...WHOA. Very well written, very well captured, very well done! And the powers and stats seem consistent with that personality. No complaints here.


Overall, I think that with a little work on a couple different sections these would all be solid characters, if they aren't already as they are.


...Oh yeah, and one more thing:

Sorry!! This is why I tend to save reviewing stuff for the morning. People have a way of asking me things riiiiight as I'm going to bed.

Talking about me, much?



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[Teh Frixz]

I'm throwing out likes all over the place here.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

It’s time to p-p-p-p-plot!Okay everyone! Since the exam is going to end soon, and the posting break is tomorrow, I’d like everyone to take the time to start splitting into smaller RP groups. Students will be heading to their normal class…. Which class would that be? Well, that’s up to you. Right now, we have six teachers and twelve students (thirteen if we count Alb, who was unable to post during the exam but will be joining in on the normal posting after Tuesday). This means that in order to split everyone up evenly, we’re looking at six RP groups consisting of one teacher and two students (three, if any new RPers send in new student characters). Therefore, we all need to sit down – here in the OOC thread where everyone can participate, not just the people in the Discord server – and determine what classes we would like our student characters to participate in first. For the teacher characters – don’t panic if it seems no one is interested in RPing your class right now. If things shift around and we end up with, say, four class groups with three students each, then that leaves two teachers free for some fancy plotting I’d like to roll out. TLR: Teacher characters (@Swimswamswom @Chibii @ViAdvena @Cheshire Smile @TheDaftStudent) to form the basic groups of the in-class scenes we will be RPing next. Faculty characters (@Giyari @Lazy Rocktime @Manic Muse) will be receiving a PM from me shortly. New roleplayers will be absorbed into the groups as they join the RP.

Either 'Collateral Damage and You' or 'Emotional Composure' for Cecil. That is, if EC does get a teacher xD

 

[welian]

I'm working on a little project as a favor to a friend right now, when I get done I will resume reviewing profiles.

 

[Swoob]

so idk if some of u guys forgot but I ordered a commission for Eden (the original, not this one, but close enough) and boy it turned out beautiful

my baby boy, everyone

 

[sorrow made you]

Dat hair tho.

 

[Giyari]

"Garde-"


I C wot U did thar.

 

[Teh Frixz]

*instantly will be teased about pink having pink eyebrows*

 

[Caragia]

Tag me again when you're done! Also I will be very sad if her profile is not chock-full of animal puns.

Alright, I will... And I'll work on the puns... (*^*)

...ONTO POWERS! Lets be honest here, I had to read through them several times before I started understanding, and I still have a lot of questions. Lets get some clarity here first, she needs to have touched an animal to be able to take on their abilities? And I'm thinking it needs to be a conscious thought along the lines of "touching to take on ability" and not just a touch? How would this manifest? Would she change physically? How aware is she herself of the changes, since she can't cherry-pick abilities? For the secondary power, three things, one nice fit, two clearly said, and three, what are the limits? Is it easier to manipulate a dog than a chimp? How about when an animal is aware she is there? How does it work with humans, since they're technically animals too? Also, I'd consider adding a third weakness, since she is an A rank.

Yes, she needs to touch the animal. And, yes, you're right, it is a conscious thought. Also, as for manifestation, if you are familiar with the Animorphs Series, they touch an animal and morph/change into that animal. Well Safara is similar yet different. She touches an animal and takes/copies it's abilities--she doesn't morph or outwardly change. So to an instructor or bad guy, it'd look like her gaining super hearing of say of a bat or cat. Or if she took on the powers of a rhino and charged at the bad guy. As I said in my earlier post, she's based off of DC Comics' Vixen, except no magic pendant.


As for her secondary power, think Aquaman but with most animals. She can't take on a bird's flight ability. (She'd need to have magic for that, and since there's no magic, no flight.) Her secondary power allows her to take control of it to allow her to take on it's abilities and command it to do something, if the situation calls for it. As for the limits when she takes on the abilities, I haven't thought that deeply into it. I'll work on that. Also, she cannot apply these powers to humans. I would like to say, it's because we humans have higher brain power, but that will need further thought.


And another weakness...got it.

 

[Bag o Fruit]

@Bag o Fruit[/URL] I like your character's power, good explanation of it's working and down sides, but I would add more of a weakness than "He can't do other super powered things like dodge bullets" as, being at peak human fitness is far from a weakness. And frankly, not being able to dodge a bullet is not something you'd expect unless you specifically had super speed

I agree with this, and I specifically said it might seem like a flop weakness when I wrote it, but I went on to say, in fewer words, that... well, isn't it a weakness? To be no more than a man in a world filled with gods? Don't get me wrong, your suggestion makes perfect sense. It just seems like being bound by the laws of physics is more than can be said for plenty of other characters here, and one man's expectation is another man's disability.


I also wrote it as a further clarification of my power set, because as long as I have to write three weaknesses I might as well kill two birds with one stone. Speaking of which, I'm still not sure I entirely understand the rule set for applications. Three weaknesses? Regardless of power level? The Flash doesn't have three weaknesses. Batman doesn't have three weaknesses. The Green Arrow doesn't have three weaknesses. The only superhero that immediately comes to mind with three weaknesses is Superman, who I should say is at least class S.


As long as I'm on this topic, I'd also like to voice this: we're ranked on our stats, and stat points, but we can also take powers that don't necessarily relate to them? Why doesn't it fly to have the E-class character 'magical nuclear explosion man' with one point in each stat? Just a thought.

Their biography and personality are a little lacking. As I said to Virtual above, super powered people are known about as a fact of life, there's no manhunt to bring them all in and register them. Sure, once a super's known about they are requested to register, which there is pretty much no down side to other than a limiter. In fact there are more up sides than down sides, such as specialised medical care

Unless you know more about this timeline than is written in the overview, which is not to say you don't, but unless you do there's no request involved. The only word I see describing the screening process is 'must', and whether there is a manhunt or isn't, the government tends to find out such things as obvious superpowers. Also, the beginning and end paragraphs of the overview seem practically designed to say 'Any violation of the Bill of Rights you can think of has been done to death.', which would make one think that 'probable cause' is no longer a thing. It was supposed to be implied that that was the reason his mother kept running, but I apologize if I didn't make that clear enough.

I'd rework their personality, try to be less conflicting with the brooding pessimist/hopeful optimist (seeing the good in everyone) factors.


For his bio, I'd clarify why his family were on the run, as the obvious reasons aren't obvious.

I'm pretty sure I see what you're trying to say... but conflict is how humans work. Hell, I'm all four of those things to some extent. People are not exceptionally positive with one minor dark note, nor are they exceptionally negative with minor light notes (well, maybe some people are) and Christopher is especially NOT on one end or the other of that spectrum.


Also, brooding isn't even in opposition to unassuming or compassionate as a trait.

This needs clearing up too, not to mention, there wouldn't be a manhunt for them as I've already stated. It reads to me as...


"He and his mother are discovered by commonwealth, she's locked in jail and he's sent to screening where his superpowers are noted. Afterwards he's sent into care (not an orphanage as his mother is still alive, he's not an orphan), where he and his mother are discovered by commonwealth."


Now, this obviously makes little sense, so I'd like some more clarification on what's happening, and to remove the being hunted by commonwealth factor of his background, as it doesn't fit with the setting.

I still don't think 'They can come and get screened on their own initiative if they want to' is Commonwealth's kind of policy, but if you say there's no manhunt, I suppose you know quite a bit more than I do about this setting. I'm sorry it doesn't make sense to you, and I'll clarify:


First of all, his mother hid from the government for over a decade, which is against the law as described in the Overview and Setting/locations tab because she knew her son had superpowers. I don't see Commonwealth or AEGIS as the type to need a better reason to get someone imprisoned.


I would like to clarify here that I did objectively fuck up, as orphanages apparently no longer exist in America. The care you mentioned would in fact be being made a ward of the state, as would an orphan, and then either getting sent to a foster home, as would an orphan, or to a group home, as would an orphan. I'll go now and edit it to say 'group home', as that's what makes sense for my character (I'll also make him seventeen because I'm pretty sure an eighteen-year-old would be able to opt out of a group home, which if given the chance he would absolutely do).


As a side note, and a response to the last sentence there, I now understand very well that you have strong feelings about the benevolent nature of Commonwealth. I will not state my opinions to do with this a third time, but 'removing the being hunted by Commonwealth factor of his background' is not a little bit of highlight and backspace, as you seem to treat it like it is. Being, not hunted, but in danger of being discovered by Commonwealth is literally referred to in every single paragraph of my history. If you think I should write an entirely new backstory for my character, I wish you would say just that.

 

[Swoob]

@Caragia tbh she sounds a bit more like B or C rank to me (but feel free to justify her strengths)

 

[Caragia]

@Caragia tbh she sounds a bit more like B or C rank to me (but feel free to justify her strengths)

I started her out as B-rank but her points wouldn't let me stay there...

 

[Swoob]

I started her out as B-rank but her points wouldn't let me stay there...

i mean its up to u but in that case I'd highly recommend putting her at B rank and finding a way to take off 3 points from her here and there—you probably already know this but remember that 2 points is average human capacity and 3 points is talented/the extent of normal human abilities

 

[Caragia]

i mean its up to u but in that case I'd highly recommend putting her at B rank and finding a way to take off 3 points from her here and there—you probably already know this but remember that 2 points is average human capacity and 3 points is talented/the extent of normal human abilities

Alrighty... I'll work on it.

 

[ManicMuse]

Alrighty... I'll work on it.

I don't personally really agree with that. I think the ranking is okay if you do a good job explaining her full powers. Someone that could use animals to create an army is dangerous. I mean I am going to be playing a catgirl and I made her a rank B, she only takes on the power of that one animal. I am feeling your ranking is reasonable. The description is lacking, I don't think you have gone into detail enough is all.

 

[Zahzi]

BRAHN, JORDAN

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• Full Name	Jordan Ortega Brahn
  Codename	TBA
  Gender	Male
  Age	Fifteen
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian
  Eyes	Yellow
  Hair	White
  Height	4'
  Build	Short, slim, and vulnerable to a rogue leaf.
  Limiter	Level 1; Inactive
  Notes	We're pretty sure he's broken a leg after an unfortunate clothespin incident.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	04	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	05	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	02	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	09	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Creative
  
  
  He isn't a fan of presenting anything in a boring manner. He tends to place a 'spin' on projects and assignments. Most of the time its harmless. Other times though....Well...This includes instances where such 'boring' scenarios are around for public safety. He felt a baking soda volcano was boring so he had one that sprayed the entire auditorium with liquid nitrogen. You can blame his father for this trait.
  
  
  Observant
  
  
  Jordan is known for picking up on any detail he sees in something that has his attention. Subtle movement, expression, color, it doesn't matter. Jordan seems to have a knack for keying into every little detail in front of him to an almost obsessive level....Probably a trait from his mother.
  
  
  Blunt
  
  
  Jordan has made it a habit to 'dumb down' his words for most people so they can actually follow along in what he's saying. Unfortunately, it never starts this way. It BEGINS with his technobabble, then when he catches on the others around him are lost, he will speak slowly, deliberately, and make sure everyone is on board in the most painful of ways. His mother didn't help at all with not making this habitual....
  
  
  Disrespectful
  
  
  He tends to follow in his mother's footsteps and to not exactly know how to listen to authority because he does not really see them as WORTH his time. Not that it only affects authority figures, but anyone he doesn't really see necessary of his patience. Blame his mother. Even though she tries to blame his father. She lies. LIES.
  
  
  History
  
  
  There are many theories behind Jordan's complications at birth. One, that in the womb, June received the majority of the proper nutrients for a fully functioning human. Another, that a foreign chemical in the father's bloodstream found its way into the child affected his development. Hell, maybe it was some weird conspiracy for why vaccinations cause autism like all the sheeple seem to think nowadays.
  
  
  Diagnosed with a syndrome that left his bones brittle, a poor immune system, stunted growth, and problems with his lungs, his mother decided that Jordan was, and technically still is, 'her baby' and was coddled to the point of smothering. It didn't help for the longest time doctors actually DID believe he was Autistic. You know, until he started working on his own to deal with his physical issues. Doctors changed their tune right-quick when he found a way to deal with Vrolik Syndrome at the age of ten after locking himself in his mother's old lab for a week. And from there, it became easy to accept why they suspected he was a Super.
  
  
  Between then and now, Jordan has done a few things of note; Helped his mother find a way to keep their father from having his organs fail due to complications caused nearly twenty years ago being the pinnacle of his success.
  
  
  And now he finds himself at Aegis Facility 108. Not exactly sure what they'd want him to do...
  
  
  
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  Morgan Brahn
  
  
  Jordan's older brother; the two seem to always be stuck in the same grade, most times in the same class just so that the teachers could keep both in check with one another.
  
  
  Fortunately, that isn't the case in Facility 108..
  
  
  Side Note; It was Jordan who first brought alarm to the house about Morgan's issues with his powers at night....He's still working through that trauma.
  
  
  June Brahn
  
  
  His twin sister. Unlike Jordan and Morgan, June has no powers to speak of. Which she hates with great intensity. Joke's on her because she's mean and deserves to GET FAT. She is the athletic one in the family outside of their father.
  
  
  Mr. & Mrs. Brahn
  
  
  The loving parents of the Brahn household. His father is ex-military that protects the family with near religious tendencies, while his mother is a scientist-turned baker that coddled him because of his physical shortcomings constantly.
  
  
  Hunter Ward
  
  
  Related to the family on his mother's side, Hunter Ward is his great uncle who had been frozen before even Morgan was born. All he was told about him is that he was a badass that took shit from no one and that is AWESOME.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	01	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	01	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	01	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	09	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Hyper-Intelligence
  
  
  Jordan possesses a level of intelligence that mimics state-of-the-art computer systems with their capabilities to go through algorithms and data in nanoseconds. While most would just brush this off as him just being very smart, one also has to take into account, that this goes beyond computation, and heads into the realm of science-fictional mad scientists creating bio-weapons and machinery capable of trampling continents with SCIENCE.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Eidetic
  
  
  Jordan exhibits the traits of a heightened photographic memory. Eidetic memory is the ability to recall visual information, such as pages from books, magazines, and license plate numbers, in great detail after only brief exposure to it. There is no 'studying' in Jordan's life. All is learned immediately upon the information first being introduced.
  
  
  Suffice it to day, a lot of people hated him on test day.
  
  
  Consensus
  
  
  Jordan's brain functions similar to our own, but runs at a capacity that would leave ours utterly destroyed. The brain itself seems to be capable of multitasking itself. In short, five separate functions are firing off at once where there should only be one. Five distinct, fully functional minds working in succession.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  Alright kiddies, time to go into your living room and look for that health dictionary that's even older than you and probably has cup rings from when you didn't have a TV tray that one time EVERYONE was at the house watching something.
  
  
  Jordan's hindrances come not from his powers, but from the unfortunate circumstances of his birth. They are, and as follows, complimented with some sappy tune:
  
  
  Albinism.
  
  
  Stunted Growth.
  
  
  Vrolik Syndrome (Treated, not cured.)
  
  
  Severe Asthma.
  
  
  Limited Immune System.
  
  
  
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[sorrow made you]

Oh god, finally there's a little genius. I've been waiting to see one of these.

 

[welian]

Aaaaand on that note, I will depart for the evening! I will continue reviewing profiles in the morning. I encourage everyone reading this to drop off apps as they finish them.