OOC Discussion

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]Nate's power is very similar to my character, Leo's, lol. Mine is molecular regeneration instead.
I'm a little bit confused though. So is he like the lizards that detach their tails and grow them back?


And I'm not sure if I understand the extent of heightened brain activity. I personally feel like his brain would be over flooding with different signals as his body is regenerating. So I'm not entirely sure that he would be able to utilize his brain activity exactly to that degree. Heightened senses makes sense, and maybe better reactionary times. But that also brings me to the question of how is his pain tolerance? xD I imagine any kind of regeneration hurts a lot.

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That is true and I only found out an hour ago that there was another Regenerator xD

 

[sorrow made you]

Side note, Leo's profile is toward the beginning in the sign ups

 

[sorrow made you]

Woop. I'm on my phone and all the posts didn't load. My bad.

 

[ManicMuse]

@VirtualNotoriety[/URL] Just an FYI you may want to look at the active member Critical Error, character name Leo De Luca. They seem to have very close powers to the one you selected. I am unsure if duplicate powers are being allowed.

An hour ago @VirtualNotoriety ? Really? We talked about it quite a bit what was last night for me. I have since slept and gotten up again.

 

[Teh Frixz]

Posted considerable updates on Riley, should be more concise in her powers

 

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]Woop. I'm on my phone and all the posts didn't load. My bad.

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with the Active Brain thing is that Nathan's new Cells in his body is helping his brain more active like how NZT affects Brian from Limitless

 

[VirtualUnity]

@VirtualNotoriety[/URL] ? Really? We talked about it quite a bit what was last night for me. I have since slept and gotten up again.

it's 2:32 am for me

 

[sorrow made you]

with the Active Brain thing is that Nathan's new Cells in his body is helping his brain more active like how NZT affects Brian from Limitless

Honestly, I don't know what you are talking about O_o;;

 

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]Honestly, I don't know what you are talking about O_o;;

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Watch Limitless NZT is a type of Experimental Drug that allows him to access everypart of his Brain or the Movie Lucy

 

[sorrow made you]

Watch Limitless NZT is a type of Experimental Drug that allows him to access everypart of his Brain or the Movie Lucy

So... you're saying that his brain can do something that's scientifically created in a pill?


//just googled

 

[ManicMuse]

@VirtualNotoriety[/URL] Just an FYI you may want to look at the active member Critical Error, character name Leo De Luca. They seem to have very close powers to the one you selected. I am unsure if duplicate powers are being allowed.

@VirtualNotoriety[/URL] one of the first few to be approved for the group.
link here AEGIS: Training Facility 108 - Characters

Comparing his to mine... I feel so Bad for making this one but looks like I need to make him an S rank since his is probably what I need to be The Basis :/

And well he has Better Regeneration Than Nathan so I guess he could become his Mentor and well Nathan was an Officer of the Law so he knows how to follow orders

@VirtualNotoriety[/URL]
I can see where you are coming from but a few things I would keep in mind.

• Weli may not allow duplicate powers. You may have to scrap the entire power and start over. As there is a whole wiki site dedicated to different powers, there are many to pick from. I would suggest planning for a back up.
  
• Ranking, IF your character is allowed with powers as is, I would find it even less likely they would want two S ranks running around with same powers.
  
• Ranking can be determined by many factors. Like my character can produce fire. However, she is limited in her creation of it. Not to mention handicapped by her emotional state being the trigger for creation of the fire. So while her power could have been more destructive, her limitation leave her at a C ranking. These are important things to keep in mind. Much like with your character, the onset of this gift was realized much later in life, therefore the adaptability of such skill may not be as great.
  

Considering these conversations, I know you were aware. So I am a bit upset you are claiming up until an hour ago you had no idea.

 

[TheDox]

Just gonna drop in here that the whole "you only use this much of your brain" thing is a myth.

 

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="Manic Muse]Considering these conversations, I know you were aware. So I am a bit upset you are claiming up until an hour ago you had no idea.

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No what I meant from an hour ago is that when you first said and showed me his CS, Sorry for the Misunderstanding

 

[Teh Frixz]

Look at is this way @VirtualNotoriety


Would your character still be interesting without your superpower? Is he cool? Is he overly edgy? Is the power building him or is he building the power?

 

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]So... you're saying that his brain can do something that's scientifically created in a pill?
//just googled

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yeah... now that I think of it it's confusing :I sorry I'll just fix it later sorry

 

[sorrow made you]

I just wanted to make sense of it all, that's all. Because the powers are incredibly similar in their own right, I figured I'd add in my two cents.

 

[VirtualUnity]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]I just wanted to make sense of it all, that's all. Because the powers are incredibly similar in their own right, I figured I'd add in my two cents.

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Well Nathan could be your Characters Student xD

 

[sorrow made you]

Ironically, most of the time I play Leo, he's a detective.


Gg, Doujima. Gg.

 

[Aldur]

One day, I'll make an asS-Rank just you wait.

 

[sorrow made you]

//pats Aldur


One day. Ooooone day.

 

[Swoob]

holy crap


ok guys ill give any help needed but just tag me/tell me if u want it ok

 

[Teh Frixz]

@Swimswamswom Hit me up with yo thoughts plz k

 

[ViAdvena]

I present to you my second character watch out for all the edge.


Suggestion and critique are more than welcome.


D'Avolo, Gabrielle

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Gabrielle D'Avolo
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Female
  Age	19
  Rank	A
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian (Italian)
  Eyes	Pale grey
  Hair	Jet black
  Height	5'8"
  Build	Lithe
  Limiter	Level 3, Active
  Notes	Soft, almost melancholic facial feature

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	04	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	04	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	01	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	04	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Level-headed
  
  
  Always seems calm and composed no matter how chaotic or dire the situation is. She mostly approaches everything with dispassionate logic. Gabrielle would be the type of person you would like to depend on in an emergency situation, if only her other trait didn't exist.
  
  
  Esthetic
  
  
  Very much appreciate natures and beauty. It can be said that she is also artistic at heart. Although, her definition of 'beautiful' things might be a bit different than most people.
  
  
  Disarming
  
  
  Tranquil and earthy, there's a certain serene ambience about her that lead people to lower their guard. After all, there's nothing to worry about this seemingly calm and peaceful girl, isn't it? It's no wonder they feel comfortable and secure about her presence, until...
  
  
  Sadistic
  
  
  ...They end up in a situation that makes them realise the above impression is a complete and utter lie. By sadistic, it doesn't only mean causing usual distress. It ranges from psychological torment to outright physical cold-blooded torture. Breaking and molding mind through pain is a form of art, or so she thinks. It's one of the few things that could change her mood and expression from calm indifference into utter delight, much like a kid that receive a candy. Just ask her foster family....if they still could talk, that's it.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Gabrielle spent her early years in Italy with her twin brother Michael. They were raised by a single parent, their father, until he was murdered in cold blood for his Mafia connections. They were orphaned and sent to America to live with their only living relatives, their father's second cousin and his wife. They were people who were incredibly anti-super, and when they found that the twins had the super gene, they treated the two horribly, verging on abuse. After a couple of years, however, the family "disappeared" leaving the twins to move between foster homes.
  
  
  Over the years mysterious disappearances continued, and after a few years the twins were arrested for inciting a riot which resulted in the injury of some normal humans(normies). They were sentenced to two years and some rehabilitation therapy, and now they are attending Facility 108 in addition to any outside schooling.
  
  
  
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  Family
  
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  Michael D'Avolo
  
  Twin brother. Literal partner-in-crime.
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	03	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	07	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	06	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Umbrakinetic construct, the ability to solidify and manipulate shadow into any shape the user wishes.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Night Vision, the ability to see in the dark.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  • Limited range of control. Right now she can only control shadow within 5m radius from her.
    
  • Her shadow's strength is pretty much a reflection of her own physical strength. Meanwhile, the speed depends on how fast her mind reacts to a situation.
    
  • She can only control shadow that's touching her own shadow. So no, she can't control the darkness within someone's body. If she could get her shadow into it, however...
    
  • Very bright light can make her shadow dematerialized, at least until the light vanished. Yes, flashbangs are her natural enemy.
    
  
  
  
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[Swoob]

@Teh Frixz ah, ok, the security guard character


this isn't against your character but i just wanna say i still love how there can be staff members only 1 year older than or even younger than students

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Is there any reason for that extra finger?
  
  
  Judging by the history, she sounds like a student as opposed to a security guard. Was this a mess-up or
• Personality seems nice, bright and is easily understood. First part of the backstory reminded me of my own char (Eden) just a little bit with the running away from home and all, just not for the same reason aside from that, backstory seems fine enough, just 2 things: Make sure to refer back to her past/get tempted multiple times as a period of living on the streets and selling massive amounts of drugs, especially for that long, isn't going to disappear. Also, the reason for running away from home didn't really seem that strong—I would suggest explaining it more. At that point, the Rapture incident would have happened a while ago and have faded from society's focus, so did she have an irrational fear of Commonwealth or maybe were her parents distrusting of them still? Idk, some ideas. To be honest, I'm not sure if the personality fits with the backstory to me
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• The power itself seems well thought out enough and passable. But what I'm concerned with is that what really makes her dangerous and strong is the whole regeneration-nearing-immortality thing. Honestly, right now we have 3 De Lucas (first regeneration power, only one accepted so far) including yours. I'm not going to speak for welian, but I'd really rather keep the powers and their uses unique, so if there's any way you could potentially get rid of that aspect and focus more on the others, that would be cool, and I know at least one other person agreed with me in discord. It would most likely lower your ranking to A which you may be unhappy with but would also vastly boost your chances of getting accepted. But it's your character and welian's job to decide that, so it's up to you whether to take that advice or not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
• Drawing fits the name "Riley" and fits the personality well enough—seems like the pic should be smiling but that doesn't really matter

Overall, decent character, just the backstory and personality clash a bit and the power's focal point is rather overdone already.

 

[Teh Frixz]

she doesn't regenerate, she just doesn't feel the pain. Her body could theoretically manufacture medicine to deal with/staunch wounds but she's not healing any faster than modern medicine supped up.


She is 20 years old, verging on 21. I must have missed it someplace


And I'll take an A rating, S is more for when Commonwealth gets control over her