OOC Discussion

[RemainingQuestions]

One of my friends is thinking about joining and he was thinking about making a ah, morally ambiguous, surgeon. Would that fit, because I know someone was talking about making a super nice nurse as a second character on discord.

 

[Caragia]

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz]Play up the negative aspects of that independent streak. I personally think you have an oppertunity to use sayings as the traits names and you are squandering it!
Lone Wolf: ..

[/QUOTE]
Hmmm.... Then I should not squander it...

 

[welian]

One of my friends is thinking about joining and he was thinking about making a ah, morally ambiguous, surgeon. Would that fit, because I know someone was talking about making a super nice nurse as a second character on discord.

A surgeon in particular might not fit, but as long as the character is qualified and licensed to be a general physician (and therefore be the facility's nurse/medic/whatever), then it's fine. It would just be difficult to fit a pure surgeon into the story without bringing up subplots that the students are not involved in yet.


@Teh Frixz Last night, I did say that the powers were the section that I hadn't yet read. There's definitely a cap on ability points based on rank. You'll have to modify your character's points based on that limit, but it's alright. To be quite honest, everyone in the RP knows that the points are a load of crap anyways, and that they only get used in special events (like the snowball fight we just had), and so that we can compare characters to each other.

 

[Teh Frixz]

Oh fie on you Weli for such trickery

 

[welian]

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz]Oh fie on you Weli for such trickery

[/QUOTE]
Sorry!! This is why I tend to save reviewing stuff for the morning. People have a way of asking me things riiiiight as I'm going to bed.

 

[Teh Frixz]

Already capped at 26 then. Took like, ten seconds.

 

[VirtualUnity]

Three reports, two tab requests, an item in the moderation queue, some posts in the staff forum, and the rest were this thread. I don't even have glasses on yet.
You have five days.

is my character accepted? *waits nervously

 

[welian]

is my character accepted? *waits nervously

Not yet, I'm still going through my daily staff routine. I've yet to read these profiles, honestly. However, feel free to revise as much as you'd like to, and do consider taking any advice or critique from the other RPers in here.

 

[Aldur]

DAVIS, MARCUS

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Marcus James Davis
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	19
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	African-American
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark Brown
  Height	6'
  Build	Slim
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Scar on eyebrow, tattoo of a floating Tibetan monk on his left shoulder. Earring on left ear.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	05	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	05	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	06	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	04	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  +Optimistic: There's not much that can put Marcus down. At all times, he always struggles to see the good in every situation, no matter what. There aren't many people aside from his family and some very close friends that can say they've seen him without a smile on his face.
  
  
  =Daydreamer: Sometimes, one might notice that Marcus is not paying extreme attention to things he should. It's because he's dreaming about all the things he could do. He might be scheming his next big plan on how he's gonna spend his weekend.
  
  
  =High-spirited: Marcus has a bold nature. Sometimes that's good and other times not so much.
  
  
  -Naive: In contrast to his optimistic nature, Marcus may sometimes be told he is too naive for trying to find the good in everything and everyone. It sometimes happened that he put his trust in people that he shouldn't have and even nowadays he tries to tell himself that there is good in everyone, but sometimes it just doesn't look that way.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Marcus is a Baltimore native. He's been born in the place 19 years ago and lived there ever since. His father was a police officer and his mother was a teacher. Interestingly enough, none of them displayed obvious supernatural abilities. Though his dad seemed to have a higher IQ than usual. Still, nothing to prepare young Marcus of the day he floated uncontrollably and continuously for 12 hours for the first time in his life. He was 17.
  
  
  It took him a while, but he got a hang of how to get down. It'd happen about once or twice a week before his parents finally sent him to AEGIS so he'd learn how not to just... float around for the rest of his life. Fast-forwarding 2 years into the future, Marcus now knows much better how to control his abilities and accidents happen much less than before.
• ---

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	02	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Levitation: Marcus can levitate to a maximum of around 6 feet up in the air.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Marcus can also spin around for a longer amount of time before he gets dizzy.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  He sometimes cannot control when he starts and stops levitating and cannot go higher than 6 feet. If he gets distracted too Marcus will suddenly stop in mid-air and fall.
  
  
  
• 

 

[King Of Imagination]

D'Avolo, Michael

• General Info
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Michael D'Avolo
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	19
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Italian American
  Eyes	Gray-Blue
  Hair	Black
  Height	6'0"
  Build	Tall, thin, now scrawny, just thin
  Limiter	Level 4
  Notes	He is attractive, well dressed, well spoken, and looks confident.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	02	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	01	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	02	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	06	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Charismatic: Michael is a charismatic young man, speaks intelligently and with purpose, and knows how to talk to people to get them to like him and do what he wants. He can be manipulative and has a sort of "cult of personality".
  
  
  Quick-witted: He's very quick to understand and respond with sharp, concise answers. This can be good for understanding someone and responding how they want, or making quick, sharp remarks to spite someone.
  
  
  Confident: He is powerful, and he knows he is. This can sometimes be seen as cocky, but this can also attract people to him. As a result of this confidence, he keeps up his appearance, and often looks down on others. They must earn his respect.
  
  
  Narcissistic: He loves himself, thinks very highly of himself. He feels superior to others, and he's definitely a narcissist. This is often a turn off for other people, who often find themselves originally interested in talking to him, but eventually turning them away.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Michael spent his early years in Italy with his twin sister Gabrielle. They were raised by a single parent, their father, until he was murdered in cold blood for his Mafia connections. They were orphaned, and sent to America to live with their only living relatives, their father's second cousin and his wife. They were humans who were incredibly anti-super, and when they found that the twins had the super gene, they treated the two horribly, verging on abuse. After a couple of years, however, the family "disappeared" leaving the twins to move between foster homes.
  
  
  Over the years mysterious disappearances continued, and after a few years the twins were arrested for inciting a riot which resulted in the injury of some normal humans(normies). They were sentenced to two years and some rehabilitation therapy, and now they are attending Facility 108 in addition to any outside schooling.
  
  
  
• Gabrielle D'Avolo
  
  
  Twin Sister

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	03	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	04	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	07	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	08	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Telekinesis
  
  
  Using his mind, Michael can create force that can be used for a variety of uses, including but not limited to; moving shit, adding force to punches, kicks, and projectiles, flight, protective force fields, creating vacuums, etc... There are obviously weight limits, distance limits, etc.
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  There is a weight limit. Just like lifting weights, there is a maximum, but also just like lifting weights, the more you do it, the stronger you get, and the higher the maximum weight gets. There is definitely a cap, even if you continue to exercise it. Right now, his max weight is about that of a CUV.
  
  
  He can only use his telekinesis on things within line of sight. The further away something is, the harder it is to affect. Additionally, living things often struggle, so it's hard to do it on them as well.
  
  
  Using it too much can lead to migraines and nosebleeds. However, just like exercise, the more he does it, the longer he can go without getting a headache or a nosebleed.
  
  
  
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[welian]

@Teh Frixz


Your writing is solid, and Riley's got a very interesting personality, but after reading the superpowers section I do feel she's too over-powered for this setting.


I have some suggestions for major limits for you to consider: An inability to produce chemicals that the body cannot naturally produce (or the opposite, perhaps she can produce non-bodily chemicals, but is unable to affect her normal, innate ones); a resistance to the chemicals she produces such as insulin, dopamine, serotonin, etc.; liver or kidney damage from the various compounds that her body may not be equipped to handle in toxic amounts; or any combination thereof.


The general idea is that the side effects and weaknesses of a power ought to be as severe as the power itself. As her power is not strictly catastropically destructive, it may also be worth considering lowering her to an A rank, especially if the powers can be (relatively) easily controlled or managed.


@VirtualNotoriety


On a side note, the only official co-GM is Giyari. However, the other players are absolutely right, I am recruiting again starting today!


First things first - please run your app through Word or some other document editing program. It's rife with capitalization errors. Once you've done that, as well as clarified the totals on the heroism meter, repost the app for further review.


@Caragia


Tag me again when you're done! Also I will be very sad if her profile is not chock-full of animal puns.


@Aldur


A simple and straightfoward character, I love him already. He seems better suited for a D rank, though I can understand wanting a limiter just so that he doesn't go floating off into the sunset.


@King Of Imagination


Try and get a little more detail into those personality traits, and make sure to add the numeric totals into the heroism meter.

 

[welian]

And since that's done, I'm off to go visit the hospital now. @Giyari is in charge while I'm gone, and @TheDox will be assisting people who need help with the bbcode.

 

[Teh Frixz]

@welian


Interestingly enough, I sort of took that into consideration in regards to the inorganic v organic generation. Would it be possible to keep that as it ties into the story and remove secondary/


tertiary abilities instead?


As for control over the abilities, I think it should be made clear that she is terrible at controlling them. Sure can focus for short periods of time on creating a drug or something but when not collared the slightest imbalance can cause catastrophic changes.

 

[Aldur]

just so that he doesn't go floating off into the sunset.

I can imagine that would be pretty annoying for all the parties involved.

 

[CHIMNY]

Gabriel, Nexus

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers

• Full Name	Gabriel Nexus
  Codename	Nex
  Gender	Male
  Age	33
  Rank	B
  Role	Teacher
  Subject	First Aid

  Race	American
  Eyes	Blue
  Hair	Black, slicked back. A small stubble.
  Height	6ft 1
  Build	Tall, very skinny.
  Limiter	Level 2 inactive
  Notes	If looked at VERY closely, Gabriels skin has a hexagonal pattern.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	05	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	04	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	08	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	03	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	05	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Sarcastic: Gabriel tends to over tone his sarcasm at every turn. And almost always doing it because he is either irritated or for the sake of sarcasm.
  
  
  Care free: Gabriel doesnt let circumstances affect him that much, he stays level-headed and relaxed.
  
  
  Cruel: Gabriel often tries to ruin peoples lives in the simplest of ways for no reason other than 'I dont like you', whether he brings up an embarrassing moment or a terrible mistake, he always has something to make people upset.
  
  
  Helpful: While cruel and sarcastic, Gabriel can also be very helpful and decent...ish. He is always glad to help out a student or a friend when it comes to something productive like school.
  
  
  Giver: Gab has a strange fetish where he gives gifts to the people he likes at random times.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Gabriel grew up in a fairly wealthy family, his father being a doctor made Gabriel want to follow in his foot steps. So he attended Harvard studying microbiology and genetics. His rapid healing factor has been concealed as Gab rarely injures himself, the hardened skin however has been noticed by one of his college peers. After graduating and becoming a clinical pathologist, Gabs parents were ruthlessly murdered by wanted super criminals. This is when Gab decided to get a blue card and avenge his family while also teaching other supers. Gab then joined AEGIS after a few vigilante arrests he had made.
• Andrew Macht
  
  
  The student who noticed Gabs hard skin, since he has always achieved more, Gabs feels jealous and resentful towards him. Currently working in the lab that Gabs also works at.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	08	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	05	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	01	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Extremely hardened 'extra' skin, about as hard as steel but flexible as a normal body. This covers his skin in hundreds of layers of scales.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Enhanced body speed. Can move twice as fast and can be toggled on and off.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  When damaged the scales begin to fall out revealing Gabs actual skin. The hexagons act as armor and are not actually his organic skin, there are layers of these hexagons that make up the armored 'extra skin'. If damaged eternally then the scales will block out the wound acting as a super hard scab until its healed. The hexagon cells begin to grow from the inside causing Gabs to shed. This happens roughly each month over a span of a week. Gabs speed needs a lot of energy for it to work, even if standing still, as long as the speed is turned on he will get tired VERY fast and his hex skin will take longer to regenerate.

 

[Teh Frixz]

Healing factors, healing factors everywhere.

 

[Aldur]

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz]Healing factors, healing factors everywhere.

[/QUOTE]
My dream super power is complete control over bowel movements.

 

[Giyari]

@welian[/URL]
Interestingly enough, I sort of took that into consideration in regards to the inorganic v organic generation. Would it be possible to keep that as it ties into the story and remove secondary/


tertiary abilities instead?


As for control over the abilities, I think it should be made clear that she is terrible at controlling them. Sure can focus for short periods of time on creating a drug or something but when not collared the slightest imbalance can cause catastrophic changes.

If you've thought about that you'll need to clarify it on your profile, as it sits I actually found i hard to work out what her power was. Chemical generation and then a list of increased bodily functions didn't immediately click in my head. A little more clarity would be a great help in solidifying her power. As for secondary power, I think it's not a bad one, so long as it comes from her body, and isn't randomly generated in the environment, so I'd actually leave it. It makes sense.


Weaknesses, as Welian said, should be more than "bad at controlling" or something along those lines. It needs to be a solid active down side to her power, especially at her level.


For example, maybe the presence of chemical residues in her body make her highly inflammable, meaning she must avoid open flames and excess heat or else she burns. Liver and kidney damage from the chemical's would have a high impact on her mobility, stamina, and strength meaning power usage knocks her out of it for a day or so after.


Merely "Bad at control" or mental instability are fairly subjective to the writer, and could be compared with the age old weakness "My character tires easily", which as we all know, is usually ignored by the writer as said character steamrollers everything till there's nothing left and then, suddenly needs a nap.


Oh! And in their bio actually! You've stated "Now at seventeen, she is quite nearly finished with her weekly schooling" but they're 20 and a qualified security guard. You might want to go through that and make sure it all fits the character you want her to be this time around

 

[Bag o Fruit]

Sorry about posting too early the other day. I was under the impression that we were free to apply until the eighth. D: Alright, posting an updated version with the full benefit of TheDox and Manic Muse's expert opinions

 

[Teh Frixz]

I'll clean it up a tad and refocus on the intent. I think retooling it back towards concept would work better: A human body capable of overclocking on chemicals. The idea was to make her pumped so full of adrenaline/serotonin as well as foreign things in her system that she'd literally be leaking them.


And yeah, forgot to update age

 

[Giyari]

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz]A human body capable of overclocking on chemicals. The idea was to make her pumped so full of adrenaline/serotonin as well as foreign things in her system that she'd literally be leaking them.

[/QUOTE]
Boom! That already makes more sense!

 

[TheDox]

yo @King Of Imagination I fixed your shit

[sh]D'Avolo, Michael[/sh]

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[tr][td]Full Name[/td][td]Michael D'Avolo[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Codename[/td][td]N/A[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Gender[/td][td]Male[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Age[/td][td]19[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Rank[/td][td]S[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Role[/td][td]Student[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Subject[/td][td]N/A[/td][/tr]
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[tr][td]Race[/td][td]I[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Eyes [/td][td]Gray-Blue[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Hair [/td][td]Black[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Height[/td][td]6'0"[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Build[/td][td]Tall, thin, now scrawny, just thin[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Limiter[/td][td]Level 4[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Notes[/td][td]He is attractive, well dressed, well spoken, and looks confident.[/td][/tr]
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[Tab=Biography][b]Heroism Meter[/b]
[table=none][tr][th]Less Heroic[/th][th]Points[/th][th]More Heroic[/th][th]Total[/th][th]Description[/th][/tr]
[tr][td]Flighty[/td][td]

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[/td][td]Courageous[/td][td]00[/td][td]Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Selfish[/td][td]


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[/td][td]Altruistic[/td][td]00[/td][td]Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Chaotic[/td][td]


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[/td][td]Orderly[/td][td]00[/td][td]Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Cruel[/td][td]


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[/td][td]Kind[/td][td]00[/td][td]Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Reactionary[/td][td]


[center][color=#9B30FF]▮▮▮▮[/color]▮▮▮▮▮[/center]


[/td][td]Proactive[/td][td]00[/td][td]Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?[/td][/tr]
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[b]Personality[/b]
Charismatic: Michael is a charismatic young man, speaks intelligently and with purpose, and knows how to talk to people to get them to like him and do what he wants

Quick-witted: He's very quick to understand and respond with sharp, concise answers. This can be good for understanding someone and responding how they want, or making quick, sharp remarks to spite someone.

Confident: He is powerful, and he knows he is. This can sometimes be seen as cocky, but this can also attract people to him.

Narcissistic: He loves himself, thinks very highly of himself. He feels superior to others, and he's definitely a narcissist.



[b]History[/b]
Michael spent his early years in Italy with his twin sister Gabriella. They were raised by a single parent, their father, until he was murdered in cold blood for his Mafia connections. They were orphaned, and sent to America to live with their only living relatives, their father's second cousin and his wife. They were humans who were incredibly anti-super, and when they found that the twins had the super gene, they treated the two horribly, verging on abuse. After a couple of years, however, the family "disappeared" leaving the twins to move between foster homes.

Over the years mysterious disappearances continued, and after a few years the twins were arrested for inciting a riot which resulted in the injury of some normal humans(normies). They were sentenced to two years and some rehabilitation therapy, and now they are attending Facility 108 in addition to any outside schooling.
[/Tab]
[Tab=Relationships][b]Gabriella D'Avolo[/b]
Twin Sister[/Tab]
[Tab=Superpowers][table=none][tr][th]Ability[/th][th]Points[/th][th]Total[/th][th]Description[/th][/tr]
[tr][td]Health:[/td][td]


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[/td][td]03[/td][td]The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Strength[/td][td]


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[/td][td]02[/td][td]Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Toughness[/td][td]


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[/td][td]02[/td][td]Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Agility[/td][td]


[center][color=green]▮▮▮[/color][color=orange]▮[/color]▮▮▮▮▮[/center]


[/td][td]04[/td][td]Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Intelligence[/td][td]


[center][color=green]▮▮▮[/color][color=orange]▮▮▮[/color][color=red]▮[/color]▮▮[/center]


[/td][td]07[/td][td]Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.[/td][/tr]
[tr][td]Willpower[/td][td]


[center][color=green]▮▮▮[/color][color=orange]▮▮▮[/color][color=red]▮▮[/color]▮[/center]


[/td][td]08[/td][td]Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.[/td][/tr]
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[b]Primary Power[/b]
Telekinesis

Using his mind, Michael can create force that can be used for a variety of uses, including but not limited to; moving shit, adding force to punches, kicks, and projectiles, flight, protective force fields, creating vacuums, etc... There are obviously weight limits, distance limits, etc.

[b]N/A[/b]


[b]Weaknesses[/b]
There is a weight limit. Just like lifting weights, there is a maximum, but also just like lifting weights, the more you do it, the stronger you get, and the higher the maximum weight gets. There is definitely a cap, even if you continue to exercise it. Right now, his max weight is about that of a CUV.

He can only use his telekinesis on things within line of sight. The further away something is, the harder it is to affect. Additionally, living things often struggle, so it's hard to do it on them as well.

Using it too much can lead to migraines and nosebleeds. However, just like exercise, the more he does it, the longer he can go without getting a headache or a nosebleed.
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[Teh Frixz]

ohh as for synth chemicals, she'll not generate them naturally but able to synthesize them if put into her system.

 

[yoikes]

More people = more power = more options for Mitch!

 

[VirtualUnity]

Vincent, Nathaniel

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• Full Name	Nathaniel Crimson Vincent
  Codename	Reaper
  Gender	Male
  Age	28
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian"Canadian"
  Eyes	Greenish Blue
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level#4"Active"
  Notes	None

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  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	07	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	07	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	06	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	05	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	07	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  -Quick Witted: Due to his heightened brain functions he is efficient in almost anything he can do for example as he has higher brain functions and memory he can easily learn most weapons they can give him.
  
  
  -Reckless: Due to his ability to regenerate he becomes quite reckless regardless of his heightened brain functions and his actual efficiency for example during a training session he may charge ahead without thinking or strategizing a plan of attack.
  
  
  -Aggressive: Nathan's aggressiveness comes from his recklessness charging without thinking relying heavily on his ability to use weapons or hand-to-hand combat.
  
  
  -Confidential: Nathan is quite secretive to the other supers, rarely giving out any information about himself, due to this he maybe considered cynical or introverted.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Born 2012 to a middle-class family of a Mother and Father an older Brother and Sister. Growing up as a child was kind of rough for Nathan as his Mother and Father was night shift, only being able to interact with his older Siblings. 2022, now at the age of 10 during his elementary days he was bullied for his high intellect and being the top of his class, His 14 year old Brother Carmichael C. Vincent usually steps in to protect Nathan. As Nathan became 13 he started his life in middle school he now fights for himself though still not as strong as his older Brother or Sister he is able to fight off the bullies everything is normal until he became age 15 one night there was a break in at the Vincent Family Home as a rogue super robbed the place severely injuring Michael, later at the Hospital Michael is suffering from epilepsy but was stabilized before anymore damage could be done. Now 18 and several painful years in high school and His Father now fully healed from the robbery Nathan is enrolled into the Baltimore County Police Department: Training Academy, passing his academic part with ease while passing with an 85% in physical education. Graduating he becomes a Detective at the age of 25 for the Baltimore Police.
  
  
  Now a Detective for the Baltimore Police, Nathan is awarded a Silver Star for his Detective work and his time on the Force, giving a speech during the award he uses his deceased Father who was once apart of the Police Force as his inspiration to have joined the Police Force, after the awarding ceremony he continued his duty on the Force visiting His Mother during the holidays and drinking out with his Siblings during his leave. Now 26 he has been awarded 2 Silver Stars, 3 Distinguished Service Awards and 1 Medal of Honor, becoming the rank of Captain during his time he has lead multiple Raids, investigations and has thought Trainees on multiple occasions. Now Age 28 Nathan was walking through a city block until he was severely injured by an I.E.D. losing his left leg, waking up at the Baltimore Hospital he is shocked to see that his Left leg is gone, Carmichael entering the room, told Nathan what happened, Nathan didn't look to happy about it but was Hospitalized for his injuries, as two days pass by Nathan scratched his left leg, shocked Nathan called for a Doctor, as a Doctor passed by he entered to see what was wrong, shocked to see Nathan regenerated his leg he called AEGIS, assuring Nathan everything is alright, As Nathan was about to leave bed he was sedated by one of the Nurses until he could be transferred, As Nathan woke up he was trapped in a metal box currently being transported to Facility 108.
  
  
  
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  Family:
  
  
  -Father: Michael F. Vincent(Deceased)
  
  
  -Mother: Allison C. Vincent(Retired)
  
  
  -Older Brother: Carmichael C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  -Older Sister: Dianna C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  Friends: N/A
  
  
  Rivals: N/A
  
  
  Enemies: N/A
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	09	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	03	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	05	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  -Cellular Regeneration: Nathaniel's ability simple yet quite concerning is his ability to Regenerate Cellular Structure which means that he can regenerate any loss of limbs, organs, blood and other Cells in his body, how Nathan deals with any loss of limb is that his limb unless if it's an organ will Degenerate Quickly leaving in a Cryogenic Stasis until transferred into a Living Body while he can't get sick or be poisoned physically his Regeneration takes awhile until any drugs can be fully removed from his system.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  -Healing Blood: Nathaniel's Regenerative ability activated a Dormant Cell Type in his body which acts as Regenerative Blood Cells, allowing some Regeneration to happen to the recipient to Regenerate for a short time allowing said person to be brought back from the brink of Death, regain any lost limb or organ.
  
  
  -Increased Tolerance To Pain: Due to his Cellular Regeneration kicking in when he lost his leg, his Nervous System was hardened in a way that Nathan would not feel pain when he is Regenerating.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  -Susceptibility to Freezing Temperatures: Though Nathaniel's ability grants him Regeneration it has a single but quite Negative Impact on his body, his Cells has an increase in Susceptibility to Freeze over causing Nathan to be in a Cryogenic State until he reaches a core temperature of 70 fahrenheit.
  
  
  -Lose of Oxygen: Nathan's New Cell Type can't produce any form of oxygen so if Nathan is either chocked or drowned than he will most likely blackout and fall on the floor.
  
  
  -Total Incineration: If Nathan's body if fully incinerated and no Cells of any kind is still alive outside of anything than congrats you killed someone who is near Immortal but if athleast a puddle of Nathan's blood is still out there than he will slowly Regenerate himself but he will suffer from amnesia
  
  
  
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@welian@Giyari


One of the Co-GM's said that recruitment starts at he 8th of March Again


*welian told me that you are the only other GM in the Rp other from helpers, so is it better?