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[CHIMNY]

Vincent, Nathaniel

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• Full Name	Nathaniel Crimson Vincent
  Codename	Reaper
  Gender	Male
  Age	28
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian"Canadian"
  Eyes	Greenish Blue
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level#4"Active"
  Notes	None

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	02	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	04	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	02	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  -Quick Witted: Due to his heightened brain functions he is efficient in almost anything he can do for example as he has higher brain functions and memory he can easily learn most weapons they can give him.
  
  
  -Reckless: Due to his ability to regenerate he becomes quite reckless regardless of his heightened brain functions and his actual efficiency for example during a training session he may charge ahead without thinking or strategizing a plan of attack.
  
  
  -Aggressive: Nathan's aggressiveness comes from his recklessness charging without thinking relying heavily on his ability to use weapons or hand-to-hand combat.
  
  
  -Confidential: Nathan is quite secretive to the other supers, rarely giving out any information about himself, due to this he maybe considered cynical or introverted.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Born 2012 to a middle-class family of a Mother and Father an older Brother and Sister. Growing up as a child was kind of rough for Nathan as his Mother and Father was night shift, only being able to interact with his older Siblings. 2022, now at the age of 10 during his elementary days he was bullied for his high intellect and being the top of his class, His 14 year old Brother Carmichael C. Vincent usually steps in to protect Nathan. As Nathan became 13 he started his life in middle school he now fights for himself though still not as strong as his older Brother or Sister he is able to fight off the bullies everything is normal until he became age 15 one night there was a break in at the Vincent Family Home as a rogue super robbed the place severely injuring Michael, later at the Hospital Michael is suffering from epilepsy but was stabilized before anymore damage could be done. Now 18 and several painful years in high school and His Father now fully healed from the robbery Nathan is enrolled into the Baltimore County Police Department: Training Academy, passing his academic part with ease while passing with an 85% in physical education. Graduating he becomes a Detective at the age of 25 for the Baltimore Police.
  
  
  Now a Detective for the Baltimore Police, Nathan is awarded a Silver Star for his Detective work and his time on the Force, giving a speech during the award he uses his deceased Father who was once apart of the Police Force as his inspiration to have joined the Police Force, after the awarding ceremony he continued his duty on the Force visiting His Mother during the holidays and drinking out with his Siblings during his leave. Now 26 he has been awarded 2 Silver Stars, 3 Distinguished Service Awards and 1 Medal of Honor, becoming the rank of Captain during his time he has lead multiple Raids, investigations and has thought Trainees on multiple occasions. Now Age 28 Nathan was walking through a city block until he was severely injured by an I.E.D. losing his left leg, waking up at the Baltimore Hospital he is shocked to see that his Left leg is gone, Carmichael entering the room, told Nathan what happened, Nathan didn't look to happy about it but was Hospitalized for his injuries, as two days pass by Nathan scratched his left leg, shocked Nathan called for a Doctor, as a Doctor passed by he entered to see what was wrong, shocked to see Nathan regenerated his leg he called AEGIS, assuring Nathan everything is alright, As Nathan was about to leave bed he was sedated by one of the Nurses until he could be transferred, As Nathan woke up he was trapped in a metal box currently being transported to Facility 108.
  
  
  
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  Family:
  
  
  -Father: Michael F. Vincent(Deceased)
  
  
  -Mother: Allison C. Vincent(Retired)
  
  
  -Older Brother: Carmichael C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  -Older Sister: Dianna C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  Friends: N/A
  
  
  Rivals: N/A
  
  
  Enemies: N/A
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	09	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	03	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	05	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  -Cellular Regeneration: Nathaniel's ability simple yet quite concerning is his ability to Regenerate Cellular Structure which means that he can regenerate any loss of limbs, organs, blood and other Cells in his body, how Nathan deals with any loss of limb is that his limb unless if it's an organ will Degenerate Quickly leaving in a Cryogenic Stasis until transferred into a Living Body while he can't get sick or be poisoned physically his Regeneration takes awhile until any drugs can be fully removed from his system.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  -Healing Blood: Nathaniel's Regenerative ability activated a Dormant Cell Type in his body which acts as Regenerative Blood Cells, allowing some Regeneration to happen to the recipient to Regenerate for a short time allowing said person to be brought back from the brink of Death, regain any lost limb or organ.
  
  
  -Active Brain(+50%): Due to his ability of Regeneration his brain is more active and has better memory and cognitive functions than most other supers, allowing him to easily learn the use of each weapon and gadget, with reasoning, planning, problem solving, recognition, perception of stimuli, visual processing, perception and recognition of auditory stimuli are quite heightened.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  -Susceptibility to Freezing Temperatures: Though Nathaniel's ability grants him Regeneration it has a single but quite Negative Impact on his body, his Cells has an increase in Susceptibility to Freeze over causing Nathan to be in a Cryogenic State until he reaches a core temperature of 70 fahrenheit.
  
  
  -Lose of Oxygen: Nathan like all other people can't Regenerate oxygen, once Nathan loses oxygen from his lungs he will blackout.
  
  
  
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@welian@Giyari


One of the Co-GM's said that recruitment starts at he 8th of March Again


*welian told me that you are the only other GM in the Rp other from helpers, so is it better?

Ever gonna make a character with a different name

 

[VirtualUnity]

Ever gonna make a character with a different name

Maybe sometime when I'm 18 xD

 

[CHIMNY]

Lol xD

 

[VirtualUnity]

Lol xD

I was Actually planning on changing my name to that when I become 20 maybe :/

 

[Giyari]

@CHIMNY, Alright concept, but this would be the 3rd increased healing factor we've had apply to the RP, and the 4th increased durability through some means. Not to mention, the healing factor possessed by salamander's is actually, really damn slow, not much faster than a humans. It's the extent at which they regenerate that is impressive, being able to regrow a lost limb over a month.


As for your character weaknesses, it needs to have a bit more detail added, maybe have his armour only on his skin, and not internally too? Or have the hexagons flake off on impact like reactive armour, giving a soft spot akin to a "missing scale" on a mythical dragon till it can reform later on, rather than simply weakening into smaller hexagons?


I'd ask you to expand on their personality, adding in some form of positive personality points as it looks to me like you have three negatives, or two negatives and one neutral in carefree.


I'd also ask for more than a single paragraph for their bio, maybe expand to two or three paras to expand on the more important points of their history.

 

[CHIMNY]

@CHIMNY, Alright concept, but this would be the 3rd increased healing factor we've had apply to the RP, and the 4th increased durability through some means. Not to mention, the healing factor possessed by salamander's is actually, really damn slow, not much faster than a humans. It's the extent at which they regenerate that is impressive, being able to regrow a lost limb over a month.
As for your character weaknesses, it needs to have a bit more detail added, maybe have his armour only on his skin, and not internally too? Or have the hexagons flake off on impact like reactive armour, giving a soft spot akin to a "missing scale" on a mythical dragon till it can reform later on, rather than simply weakening into smaller hexagons?


I'd ask you to expand on their personality, adding in some form of positive personality points as it looks to me like you have three negatives, or two negatives and one neutral in carefree.


I'd also ask for more than a single paragraph for their bio, maybe expand to two or three paras to expand on the more important points of their history.

Alright will work on those! Gonna change the healing factor to something more offensive.

 

[VirtualUnity]

@CHIMNY, Alright concept, but this would be the 3rd increased healing factor we've had apply to the RP, and the 4th increased durability through some means. Not to mention, the healing factor possessed by salamander's is actually, really damn slow, not much faster than a humans. It's the extent at which they regenerate that is impressive, being able to regrow a lost limb over a month.
As for your character weaknesses, it needs to have a bit more detail added, maybe have his armour only on his skin, and not internally too? Or have the hexagons flake off on impact like reactive armour, giving a soft spot akin to a "missing scale" on a mythical dragon till it can reform later on, rather than simply weakening into smaller hexagons?


I'd ask you to expand on their personality, adding in some form of positive personality points as it looks to me like you have three negatives, or two negatives and one neutral in carefree.


I'd also ask for more than a single paragraph for their bio, maybe expand to two or three paras to expand on the more important points of their history.

Is my Character ok cause Welian asked me to fix my capitalization

 

[Bag o Fruit]

KRAVITZ, CHRISTOPHER

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• Full Name	Christopher Markus Kravitz
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	M
  Age	17
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	White, slightly Asian
  Eyes	Blue
  Hair	Black
  Height	5'8"
  Build	Thin but muscular
  Limiter	Level 1, active

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	08	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	07	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	01	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	03	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Unassuming: Chris will start a conversation with a toddler or a teacher in just the same way as he would a peer. Unless someone provides sufficient evidence of being dickish, friendly, clever or foolish, he harbors no expectations as to their character.
  
  
  Brooding: Everything good that happens to Chris is a penny in the change dish. Everything bad that happens to him is the worst thing to ever ruin his life, and he'll have to spend some time in the corner with a dark hoodie and an Ipod to handle it.
  
  
  Compassionate: He may not say or do too much to suggest it, but he feels very deeply for other people. He'll be torn by even the least convincing sob story, and he always helps the helpless.
  
  
  Pugnacious: He doesn't like bullies. From playground dolt to untouchable lawmaker, there is little there for him but dislike. He knows that there's a reason they are that way, that they're really a good person and their actions are a result of their circumstance just like Rousseau said. Usually he acts upon this dislike because something is being done that needs to be stopped, but sometimes he just doesn't give a damn.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Chris never knew his father. For some reason, he was killed when Chris was a baby, or possibly before he was born. His mother never talked about it, but he deduced over the years of this clue and that clue that his father was killed by Commonwealth officers. He's still not sure how or why.
  
  
  His mother gave him identification with E stamps when he was very young, and would uproot the pair of them every few months to move to some other part of America. Sometimes they'd visit overseas countries, such as his great-grandfather in Taiwan, but they'd never stay long. She never talked about why any of this was. Now that he knows about his powers, it seems obvious that she was hiding from Commonwealth.
  
  
  A few weeks ago, Commonwealth uncovered their long trail of fake identities and test-evasion. They imprisoned Chris's mother and sent him into screening, where he was forced to submit to invasive medical procedures, to determine if his A6G23 gene was active. When he tested postive, the tests only got worse. He was, as the law requires, forced to display his powers to their fullest capabilites, during which time he fractured his tibia through means he'd rather not talk about.
  
  
  He was applied a class 1 limiter, and made a ward of the state, since he had no friends or family that could be contacted (he has his suspicions that the people who tried to contact his Taiwanese family purposefully failed). He was sent to a group home in Boston, where he and his mother ended up being found.
  
  
  A common story he grew up hearing was one of a vigilante who worked with Rapture "before they lost sight of a brighter world", as his mother always put it. He knew Rapture from the news, but the stories about this vigilante were exciting and inspiring. He wanted to be that, he wants to be that. That's why he applied to 108 for his Blue Card.
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  Ms. Kravitz
  
  
  Chris has a lot of conflicted feelings about his mother. She raised him and taught him how to get by, but every time he got used to a place she'd rip him up by the roots. Even though he understands the reason now, he has a lot of deep-seated anger directed towards his mother, for the moves, for keeping him in the dark, and, on some level, for letting his father go, even though he's sure that wasn't her doing. Of course he loves her just as much as any son. He really wishes she had told him her first name before it was too late...
  
  
  Mr. Kravitz
  
  
  Every angry feeling Chris has about his mother he feels twice as much about his father. Every feeling of love he gives his mother is a feeling of hatred that his father could leave her like this. Every feeling of compassion for her is a confused, bitter plea for understanding. What was it about fighting the Commonwealth that was so much more important than his mother? More important than him? But when he used to think about how his father was killed by Commonwealth, how Commonwealth was equally responsible for their renegade status, he caught the darkest image of comprehension. Now he doesn't need to think about it very hard. Just look at his limiter.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	03	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	03	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	05	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Mushin; Christopher possesses an instinctual and superhuman understanding of physical reactions to his own and others' actions, and is thereby able to do seemingly impossible things. He can dodge punches, throw with uncanny accuracy, literally bat (almost) 1000, and other such things merely by wanting to. He can apply his own strength in such a way as to lift insane weights, with no more physical strength than the average man. Put concisely, he has all the power and speed of the average man, but he knows exactly how to use it.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Zanshin; he has unusually high situational awareness. He can't quite fight more than five men in the dark, or by any means hear a heartbeat from across a room, but he's perfectly capable of dispatching whatever thug means to sneak up behind him and deliver a heavy blow to the head.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  As mentioned, he has only the power, speed, etc of the average man. He cannot actually break the laws of physics, which may seem like a cop-out weakness until one considers that half his classmates can shoot fire from their fingertips or teleport between trees. Since he is not any faster than the average person, he can't dodge a bullet once it's in the air and headed for him (but he can prepare for the shot beforehand if he can observe the angle of the barrel and move accordingly), and since he is no stronger, there is a limit to what he can move.
  
  
  Unfortunately, he doesn't know his own limits, and in order to maximize performance, he has no subconscious barrier preventing him from unwittingly harming himself. If he reacts to something too quickly, or if he tries to lift some 800 kilograms, he might not stop himself before muscles are torn and bones are broken.
  
  
  His powers are based in his mind, his abilities precise and mental, not physical. As such, strong emotions such as rage or sorrow, sometimes joy, may limit his abilities. By the same token, it is easier to disable him with a telepathic attack than most. Simply said, he doesn't function well while distracted. (note: His willpower is ranked at five. It's not always particularly easy to distract him, but it is effective.)
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[Giyari]

@CHIMNY, you know, I'd actually suggest considering something less offensive, and more saayyyy.... support based? In my experience, support based characters are a hell of a lot more fun to play than offensive based characters


That's completely my opinion though, haha!

 

[CHIMNY]

@Giyari I updated my CS but I couldnt add more to my history.

 

[Giyari]

@VirtualNotoriety, I think your biography needs quit e a bit of work, you have a lot of run on sentences with no clear breaks in punctuation, and it's wording makes it fairly awkward to read. Not to mention, there would be no reason he would ever find himself transported to 108 sedated in a metal box, super powered people are well known to exist in the world of Aegis, and as such are treated as an every day part of life. For the most part they are protected under law, and while they face some discrimination by the general populace, they aren't suppressed by the government in such severe ways.


I'd suggest you read your profile aloud as if you were talking naturally and reword it to make it flow better, adding commas, periods, and paragraph breaks.

@Bag o Fruit[/URL] I like your character's power, good explanation of it's working and down sides, but I would add more of a weakness than "He can't do other super powered things like dodge bullets" as, being at peak human fitness is far from a weakness. And frankly, not being able to doge a bullet is not something you'd expect unless you specifically had super speed


Their biography and personality are a little lacking. As I said to Virtual above, super powered people are known about as a fact of life, there's no manhut to bring them all in and register them. Sure, once a super's known about they are requested to register, which there is pretty much no down side to other than a limiter. In fact there are more up sides than down sides, such as specialised medical care


I'd rework their personality, try to be less conflicting with the brooding pesimist/hopeful optimist (seeing the good in everyone) factors.


For his bio, I'd clarify why his family were on the run, as the obvious reasons aren't obvious.

[QUOTE="Bag o Fruit]A few weeks ago, AEGIS agents found out Chris and his mother, imprisoned her, and sent him into screening, where he discovered that his strange skills (which his mother never talked about) were in fact 'superpowers'. With no friends or family, he was sent to an orphanage in Boston, where they were found.

This needs clearing up too, not to mention, there wouldn't be a manhunt for them as I've already stated. It reads to me as...


"He and his mother are discovered by commonwealth, she's locked in jail and he's sent to screening where his superpowers are noted. Afterwards he's sent into care (not an orphanage as his mother is still alive, he's not an orphan), where he and his mother are discovered by commonwealth."


Now, this obviously makes little sense, so I'd like some more clarification on what's happening, and to remove the being hunted by commonwealth factor of his background, as it doesn't fit with the setting.

 

[RemainingQuestions]

Here are my thoughts on the various applications already here. I'll try not to repeat what is already said, and if I do, sorry.

[QUOTE="Teh Frixz] ZDUNOWSKI, RILEY

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• Full Name	Riley Anne Zdunowski
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Female
  Age	20
  Rank	S
  Role	Security Guard
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Polish(American)
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Brown (Varies)
  Height	5’ 7” (Varies)
  Build	Muscular (Varies)
  Limiter	Level 4, Active
  Notes	Extra finger on Right Hand

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	08	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	04	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	08	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Joyful: Like then frickin’ sun, Riley never seems to burn out. Rainy day? The smell of rain makes her happy. Break an arm? Time to get some signatures from people. Every terrible thing, every detail of the day just seems to get turned around into a way to make her life better. Riley just seems to never get too down. She’s not immune to the downside of life, it just never shows on the outside.
  
  
  Always on: Need someone to go out with last minute? How about someone to stand watch all night? Riley has been called the energizer bunny on more than one occasion. It’s been theorized that exposure to her gene caused this but even when fully inhibited she manages to be the early bird and the night owl. Amazingly, this gets on the nerves of some people as sometimes low key is the answer and she seemingly can’t pull that off. Lengthy lectures, rigid schedules and keeping silent in movies just aren’t her thing.
  
  
  Opportunist: Life will often put up little chances to succeed. Riley jumps at these, taking full advantage of any situation that falls in her lap to further herself in any category. It’s led to a life that doesn’t quite follow a normal path but hasn’t been any less beneficial! This trait isn’t limited to the self as Riley will also take any chance she gets to use her entire arsenal to one up anyone in her way.
  
  
  Narrow minded: Tunnel vision doesn’t begin to describe it. Riley is absolutely terrible at seeing outside the range of her own perspective. It’s as if other people’s thoughts and opinions don’t exist. When she sets her mind on something, anything else outside the range of importance doesn’t even factor in.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Born in the ‘burbs, Riley was the second child of three to an exceedingly average middle class family. Her dad a businessman working 9-5 and commuting, mom staying at home and scheduling babysitting with the other moms in the area with the occasional jewelry party for fun.
  
  
  And you know what? That was absolutely wonderful. The best years of Riley’s life up until the manifestation of her abilities. At thirteen years of age she began acting incredibly strange. Emotional mood swings would hit hard and send her into the extremes of emotional range, physical changes far outside the normal ones a teen goes through both back and forth, and the complete non reaction of any sort of drug. With repeated trips to the doctor finding no cause for it up until her bloodwork was done. Riley tested positive for quite nearly every drug under the sun and then some. Just the quantities in her blood alone should have accounted for her death not to mention the insane variety of chemical interactions but somehow she hadn’t died.
  
  
  It took a curious doctor checking beneath the drug levels and automatic assumption of a terrible home life to realize that Riley was suffering from her no longer latent super gene. This came about as a shock and relief for her parents but to the incredibly addled Riley, it was a death sentence. Just like all the 13 year old kids in the world, she knew what was best for her and ran away from home the day she was due to go into the commonwealth for her testing.
  
  
  Irrational, young, and suffering from a range of drug symptoms while her powers continued to develop, Riley managed to somehow survive off of a life of theft and charity while she made her way eastward. This only continued for a short while as it was found out that Riley soon began to live a considerably more comfortable life on the run when she began selling copious amounts of street drugs.
  
  
  At age 16, she was picked up by undercover officers when selling nearly thirty pounds of pure heroin at prices equivalent to pennies on the dollar. A value of nearly a million for only ten grand tipped officers off that something was amiss. Brought in, it was found her bloodwork was inconclusive. This data was shared and intercepted by Commonwealth operatives and finally Riley was brought in for proper testing.
  
  
  After the agonizing process and subsequent collaring with an inhibitor, Riley began leveling out enough to function. Embarrassed and unwilling to return home, Riley emancipated herself legally and became a legal adult. At this time she was given a low level super designation and the inhibitor just barely managed to get hold her internal chemical levels in check. There was little effect to when she concentrated in an attempt to produce street drugs.
  
  
  Now operating legally, Riley got a job, her GED, and managed a decent enough living selling drugs on the side in considerably smaller amounts but this didn’t last long as her collar began reporting the usage of her abilities to Commonwealth. Given one last chance when she was brought in, Riley was shipped to AEGIS and put through considerably more rigorous testing and training.
  
  
  Now at seventeen, she is quite nearly finished with her weekly schooling. Counseling having put her on a much better path, she’s decided to shoot for her Blue Card in an attempt to make up for her past. Unfortunately, prying eyes far up have fallen upon her and a different goal has been decided upon for her yet to discover…
  
  
  
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  David Nguyen
  
  
  Currently the closest thing she has to a friend, David is an old criminal contact Riley met years back. While Riley is currently on the legally mandated straight and narrow, she keeps in contact with David who has more than once profited from the living Meth lab that is Riley.
  
  
  Miss Winters
  
  
  Landlady and go to for advice in all things adult, Riley is good friends with her and will spend evenings down the hall enjoying her company.
  
  
  Case Handler Ralph
  
  
  Ralph handles her case files and works as a quasi-caseworker for her. The relationship is strained to say the least as Riley’s own narrow-minded views on what she wants in life do not mesh well with the best options provided by him.
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	06	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	06	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	06	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	06	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	01	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	01	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  
  
  
  Chemical Generation: Any chemical compound that Riley has ever come into systemic contact with can be rapidly and in great volume generated by Riley.
  
  
  This at first glance seems incredibly mundane and was initially ranked as such. But upon deeper testing was found to be a possibly incredibly dangerous ability upon demonstration. Riley unfettered and focused is a sight to behold physically. She doesn’t bleed, her actions a blur as her body systems are sped up beyond the peak of human performance. Impossible to distract as focus on a target is permanent. Testing showing nothing managing to slow her down in search of a target, blindness negated, physical pain negated, neural dampening negated, and even electrical discharge negated. In fact, only grievous bodily harm has been shown to disrupt her functioning at peak levels. This too has been found temporary at best as healing levels function impossibly well. As such, she has been upgraded from an initial B ranking to an S ranking.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  
  
  
  In addition to internal chemical creation, Riley has been shown to produce chemicals externally when concentrating. This normally manifests in fluid generation. Tears laced with LSD, Oxycontin in her sweat, and so on. The only way to produce solid chemical output coming from nails, hair, and skin flakes. This process is much slower than her internal generation. The last of course is gaseous emission. If placed in a 10x10x10 room, Riley is capable of emitting rapidly enough to fill the room with 90% chlorine saturation in roughly twenty minutes.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  The most glaring weakness due to this mutation is of course the inherent instability mentally. Enough internal manifestation of Heroin and Riley will pass out. She must compensate or decompensate when generating multiple chemicals or be under threat of sliding too far into these imbalances. During these formally declared BETA states, Riley is a hazard to herself and others as emotional triggers formulate the base of her ability activation. During a nearly four day long LSD trip, she nearly mummified herself while her body tried to fight off dehydration. A string of orchestrated events caused her to fall into a ten hour fit of ‘roid rage’ that resulted in considerable damage to a small town. The mental stress this BETA state takes is also considerable as various aspects of her personality become pronounced by her emotional state. While these states are not enough to kill off Riley (Her body automatically compensating when incapacitated or she no longer is mentally capable of controlling her abilities), it is more than enough to send her spiraling down a path of self destruction leading to external factors that more than likely require another mobilization of Commonwealth reclamation forces to handle her.
  
  
  The secondary and less seen weakness is the nigh constant background generation of absorbed local chemicals. At a low level, she reflects small amounts of her environment back out as she processes this at a molecular level. This can range from giving those that come in skin to skin contact headaches, contact highs, or on the more dangerous scale, cyanide poisoning or acid burns. This in involuntary and has not been found to be controlled by anything.
  
  
  The tertiary result of this constant chemical imbalance in her bodily systems is a slow in a sense, shifting of her physical body. Coming and going in a cyclical fashion, the direction it takes is based on stress. Her hair and eye color changes over years along with birthmarks, freckles, skin tone, muscle mass, limb length, and body measurements. This could quite possibly result in disturbing ‘mutations’ as of so far she has grown three sets of wisdom teeth (removed), a series of bad outbreaks of skin tumors (removed), and a functioning sixth finger on her right hand (still there). There is a theory floating around regarding this drawback as to what she may look like if allowed to age beyond normal human years and if this state will maintain adequate mental capacity to function.
  
  
  Spoiler

  Blue card status has already been determined as non-negotiable. The continual and casual usage of her abilities is a danger to the US and her people.
  
  
  What has been recommended is asset allocation upon reaching 'blue card' status and being re-purposed for the special projects branch of COMMONWEALTH and and/or military applications, research projects, wet work operations.
  
  
  ZDUNOWSKI, RILEY is a ticking time bomb and a danger to herself and others. With proper handling, guidance and control she can possibly live a beneficial life in service to her country.
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Spoiler

Okay, I'm going to start with powers, because wow that's not something I had ever thought of. Here goes; like is said already, they are very strong for the setting, and I'd definitely consider adding the weaknesses that Welian mentioned. Also, you said that the ability points are that high because it's her at her doped up. I would change that to how she is without any, or as little as she can, extra stuff in her system. To take the edge of, maybe make it harder to make large amounts? And how well can she control in what way she secrets these chemicals?


With the History/Personality tab, I only really have one question, which kind of goes back to the Powers tab too, can she make pure heroin if she only ever came into contact with the impure version? How did she sort out which chemical to make and which one was just uhm 'filler'? Other than that, looks good, I think.

Blackwell, Safara

• General
• Biography

• Full Name	Blackwell, Safara
  Codename	'Puma'
  Gender	Female
  Age	**18**
  Rank	A
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	African American, Kenyan Heritage
  Eyes	Purple
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level 3, Active
  Notes	She wears a necklace as a memento of her mother. Safara wears it at all times and never takes it off. (Also sections marked with green ** is under construction.)

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Courageous	7	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Altruistic	5	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Orderly	3	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Kind	6	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	Proactive	5	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  • Curious
    
  
  
  
  When it comes to new ideas, Safara isn't interested in brooding – she wants to go out and experience everything, and doesn't hesitate to step out of her comfort zone to do so. She is imaginative and open-minded, seeing all things as part of a big, mysterious puzzle called life.

• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• 
  
  • 
    Observant
    
  
  
  
  
  She believes that there are no irrelevant actions, that every shift in sentiment, every move and every idea is part of something bigger. To satisfy her curiosity, Safara tries to notice all of these things, and to never miss a moment.
  
  
  
  
  • Friendly
    
  
  
  
  Safara is approachable, interesting and exciting, with a cooperative and altruistic spirit and friendly, empathetic disposition. She's a people person.
  
  
  
  
  • Independent
    
  
  
  
  Safara is independent, almost to a fault. She loathes being micromanaged and restrained by heavy-handed rules – she wants to be seen as a highly independent master of her own fate, even possessing an altruistic wisdom that goes beyond draconian law. Because of this, she doesn't follow rules very well--they are made to be broken or she will make her own.
  
  
  
  History
  
  
  ****UNDER CONSTRUCTION***
  
  
  Part of her childhood was in Kenya and her parents were killed by the terrorists.
• Character Name
  
  
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• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	2	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	5	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	3	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	6	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	4	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	3	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Safara was born with animal mimicry. She is able to take on the abilities of animals she has been in contact with. All she needs to do is touch and 'converse' with a new animal's essence to mimic it's abilities. Once she has done this, she can access it from then on--no need to commune with it.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  She has the empathic power to converse with and manipulate animal life.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  One drawback of Safara's powers is that she is not always able to control what abilities she receives from an animal. She get's the good with the bad. What's worse, the longer she uses her powers, the less human and more animal she seems to become.
• 

Okay, the age thing is the first that jumped out at me, but that's still under construction so I'll leave it be. ONTO THE PERSONALITY! (I'm not going to mention the independent trait, since it's already been talked about) The traits look good, if a bit skeletal, especially without a backstory. This could be my personal preference speaking though, and likely with a backstory they will become more clear. ONTO POWERS! Lets be honest here, I had to read through them several times before I started understanding, and I still have a lot of questions. Lets get some clarity here first, she needs to have touched an animal to be able to take on their abilities? And I'm thinking it needs to be a conscious thought along the lines of "touching to take on ability" and not just a touch? How would this manifest? Would she change physically? How aware is she herself of the changes, since she can't cherry-pick abilities? For the secondary power, three things, one nice fit, two clearly said, and three, what are the limits? Is it easier to manipulate a dog than a chimp? How about when an animal is aware she is there? How does it work with humans, since they're technically animals too? Also, I'd consider adding a third weakness, since she is an A rank.

DAVIS, MARCUS

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Marcus James Davis
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	19
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	African-American
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark Brown
  Height	6'
  Build	Slim
  Limiter	Level 1, Inactive
  Notes	Scar on eyebrow, tattoo of a floating Tibetan monk on his left shoulder. Earring on left ear.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	05	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	05	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	06	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	04	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  +Optimistic: There's not much that can put Marcus down. At all times, he always struggles to see the good in every situation, no matter what. There aren't many people aside from his family and some very close friends that can say they've seen him without a smile on his face.
  
  
  =Daydreamer: Sometimes, one might notice that Marcus is not paying extreme attention to things he should. It's because he's dreaming about all the things he could do. He might be scheming his next big plan on how he's gonna spend his weekend.
  
  
  =High-spirited: Marcus has a bold nature. Sometimes that's good and other times not so much.
  
  
  -Naive: In contrast to his optimistic nature, Marcus may sometimes be told he is too naive for trying to find the good in everything and everyone. It sometimes happened that he put his trust in people that he shouldn't have and even nowadays he tries to tell himself that there is good in everyone, but sometimes it just doesn't look that way.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Marcus is a Baltimore native. He's been born in the place 19 years ago and lived there ever since. His father was a police officer and his mother was a teacher. Interestingly enough, none of them displayed obvious supernatural abilities. Though his dad seemed to have a higher IQ than usual. Still, nothing to prepare young Marcus of the day he floated uncontrollably and continuously for 12 hours for the first time in his life. He was 17.
  
  
  It took him a while, but he got a hang of how to get down. It'd happen about once or twice a week before his parents finally sent him to AEGIS so he'd learn how not to just... float around for the rest of his life. Fast-forwarding 2 years into the future, Marcus now knows much better how to control his abilities and accidents happen much less than before.
• ---

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Levitation: Marcus can levitate to a maximum of around 6 feet up in the air.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Marcus can also spin around for a longer amount of time before he gets dizzy.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  He sometimes cannot control when he starts and stops levitating and cannot go higher than 6 feet. If he gets distracted too Marcus will suddenly stop in mid-air and fall.
  
  
  
• 

I got to say, it looks amazing, especially that secondary power. Only one question, if he already has a lot of control, and no incidents (because the limiter is off) is he going in for his blue card?

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D'Avolo, Michael

• General Info
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers

• 
  
  
  

  Full Name	Michael D'Avolo
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	19
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	I
  Eyes	Gray-Blue
  Hair	Black
  Height	6'0"
  Build	Tall, thin, now scrawny, just thin
  Limiter	Level 4
  Notes	He is attractive, well dressed, well spoken, and looks confident.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	00	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	00	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	00	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	00	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	00	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Charismatic: Michael is a charismatic young man, speaks intelligently and with purpose, and knows how to talk to people to get them to like him and do what he wants
  
  
  Quick-witted: He's very quick to understand and respond with sharp, concise answers. This can be good for understanding someone and responding how they want, or making quick, sharp remarks to spite someone.
  
  
  Confident: He is powerful, and he knows he is. This can sometimes be seen as cocky, but this can also attract people to him.
  
  
  Narcissistic: He loves himself, thinks very highly of himself. He feels superior to others, and he's definitely a narcissist.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Michael spent his early years in Italy with his twin sister Gabriella. They were raised by a single parent, their father, until he was murdered in cold blood for his Mafia connections. They were orphaned, and sent to America to live with their only living relatives, their father's second cousin and his wife. They were humans who were incredibly anti-super, and when they found that the twins had the super gene, they treated the two horribly, verging on abuse. After a couple of years, however, the family "disappeared" leaving the twins to move between foster homes.
  
  
  Over the years mysterious disappearances continued, and after a few years the twins were arrested for inciting a riot which resulted in the injury of some normal humans(normies). They were sentenced to two years and some rehabilitation therapy, and now they are attending Facility 108 in addition to any outside schooling.
  
  
  
• Gabriella D'Avolo
  
  
  Twin Sister

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	07	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	08	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Telekinesis
  
  
  Using his mind, Michael can create force that can be used for a variety of uses, including but not limited to; moving shit, adding force to punches, kicks, and projectiles, flight, protective force fields, creating vacuums, etc... There are obviously weight limits, distance limits, etc.
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  There is a weight limit. Just like lifting weights, there is a maximum, but also just like lifting weights, the more you do it, the stronger you get, and the higher the maximum weight gets. There is definitely a cap, even if you continue to exercise it. Right now, his max weight is about that of a CUV.
  
  
  He can only use his telekinesis on things within line of sight. The further away something is, the harder it is to affect. Additionally, living things often struggle, so it's hard to do it on them as well.
  
  
  Using it too much can lead to migraines and nosebleeds. However, just like exercise, the more he does it, the longer he can go without getting a headache or a nosebleed.
  
  
  

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It looks good to me.

Gabriel, Nexus

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Gabriel Nexus
  Codename	Nex
  Gender	Male
  Age	33
  Rank	B
  Role	Teacher
  Subject	First Aid

  Race	American
  Eyes	Blue
  Hair	Black, slicked back. A small stubble.
  Height	6ft 1
  Build	Tall, very skinny.
  Limiter	Level 2 inactive
  Notes	If looked at VERY closely, Gabriels skin has a hexagonal pattern.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	05	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	04	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	08	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	05	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Sarcastic: Gabriel tends to over tone his sarcasm at every turn. And almost always doing it because he is either irritated or for the sake of sarcasm.
  
  
  Care free: Gabriel doesnt let circumstances affect him that much, he stays level-headed and relaxed.
  
  
  Cruel: Gabriel often tries to ruin peoples lives in the simplest of ways for no reason other than 'I dont like you', whether he brings up an embarrassing moment or a terrible mistake, he always has something to make people upset.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Gabriel grew up in a fairly wealthy family, his father being a doctor made Gabriel want to follow in his foot steps. So he attended Harvard studying microbiology and genetics. His rapid healing factor has been concealed as Gab rarely injures himself, the hardened skin however has been noticed by one of his college peers. After graduating and becoming a clinical pathologist, Gabs parents were ruthlessly murdered by wanted super criminals. This is when Gab decided to get a blue card and avenge his family while also teaching other supers.
• Andrew Macht
  
  
  The student who noticed Gabs hard skin, since he has always achieved more, Gabs feels jealous and resentful towards him.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	08	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	05	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	01	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Extremely hardened skin, about as hard as steel but flexible as a normal body. This and his healing factor are what cause the tiny hexagonal patterns all over his body, such as skin, organs, etc. Almost like he was made of hexagons.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Healing factor, almost as fast as a salamanders healing factor.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  If the hexagons are damaged they will begin to heal by generating a smaller fractal of other hexagons, BUT the damaged area will loose its strength and revert to normal human skin and it will stay like that for the amount of time needed to heal the wound. The hexagons act as armor and are not actually his organic skin, there are layers of these hexagons that make up the armored 'extra skin'. If damaged eternally then the wound will heal super fast.
• 

Okay, lets start with the heroism meter. You noted he was cruel as one of the traits, but he scores 7 on kindness? Also, you need a positive character trait too, or if you think sarcastic is the postive one (seems more like another negative but) you need another neutral one. Okay, this is the first time I've had a question regarding relations, but Andrew Macht isn't in the Facility, or did I miss something? Maybe clarify that he was a student in college or the lab(? where do pathologists work?) from before Nexus joined the Facility. As for powers, I think Giyari said most of what there was to say. Just one word, shedding? As for gallery, I don't know if it's applicable in this case, but it's preferred that you don't use actual photo's.

Vincent, Nathaniel

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Nathaniel Crimson Vincent
  Codename	Reaper
  Gender	Male
  Age	28
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian"Canadian"
  Eyes	Greenish Blue
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level#4"Active"
  Notes	None

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	02	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	04	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	02	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  -Quick Witted: Due to his heightened brain functions he is efficient in almost anything he can do for example as he has higher brain functions and memory he can easily learn most weapons they can give him.
  
  
  -Reckless: Due to his ability to regenerate he becomes quite reckless regardless of his heightened brain functions and his actual efficiency for example during a training session he may charge ahead without thinking or strategizing a plan of attack.
  
  
  -Aggressive: Nathan's aggressiveness comes from his recklessness charging without thinking relying heavily on his ability to use weapons or hand-to-hand combat.
  
  
  -Confidential: Nathan is quite secretive to the other supers, rarely giving out any information about himself, due to this he maybe considered cynical or introverted.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Born 2012 to a middle-class family of a Mother and Father an older Brother and Sister. Growing up as a child was kind of rough for Nathan as his Mother and Father was night shift, only being able to interact with his older Siblings. 2022, now at the age of 10 during his elementary days he was bullied for his high intellect and being the top of his class, His 14 year old Brother Carmichael C. Vincent usually steps in to protect Nathan. As Nathan became 13 he started his life in middle school he now fights for himself though still not as strong as his older Brother or Sister he is able to fight off the bullies everything is normal until he became age 15 one night there was a break in at the Vincent Family Home as a rogue super robbed the place severely injuring Michael, later at the Hospital Michael is suffering from epilepsy but was stabilized before anymore damage could be done. Now 18 and several painful years in high school and His Father now fully healed from the robbery Nathan is enrolled into the Baltimore County Police Department: Training Academy, passing his academic part with ease while passing with an 85% in physical education. Graduating he becomes a Detective at the age of 25 for the Baltimore Police.
  
  
  Now a Detective for the Baltimore Police, Nathan is awarded a Silver Star for his Detective work and his time on the Force, giving a speech during the award he uses his deceased Father who was once apart of the Police Force as his inspiration to have joined the Police Force, after the awarding ceremony he continued his duty on the Force visiting His Mother during the holidays and drinking out with his Siblings during his leave. Now 26 he has been awarded 2 Silver Stars, 3 Distinguished Service Awards and 1 Medal of Honor, becoming the rank of Captain during his time he has lead multiple Raids, investigations and has thought Trainees on multiple occasions. Now Age 28 Nathan was walking through a city block until he was severely injured by an I.E.D. losing his left leg, waking up at the Baltimore Hospital he is shocked to see that his Left leg is gone, Carmichael entering the room, told Nathan what happened, Nathan didn't look to happy about it but was Hospitalized for his injuries, as two days pass by Nathan scratched his left leg, shocked Nathan called for a Doctor, as a Doctor passed by he entered to see what was wrong, shocked to see Nathan regenerated his leg he called AEGIS, assuring Nathan everything is alright, As Nathan was about to leave bed he was sedated by one of the Nurses until he could be transferred, As Nathan woke up he was trapped in a metal box currently being transported to Facility 108.
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  Family:
  
  
  -Father: Michael F. Vincent(Deceased)
  
  
  -Mother: Allison C. Vincent(Retired)
  
  
  -Older Brother: Carmichael C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  -Older Sister: Dianna C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  Friends: N/A
  
  
  Rivals: N/A
  
  
  Enemies: N/A
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	09	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	05	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  -Cellular Regeneration: Nathaniel's ability simple yet quite concerning is his ability to Regenerate Cellular Structure which means that he can regenerate any loss of limbs, organs, blood and other Cells in his body, how Nathan deals with any loss of limb is that his limb unless if it's an organ will Degenerate Quickly leaving in a Cryogenic Stasis until transferred into a Living Body while he can't get sick or be poisoned physically his Regeneration takes awhile until any drugs can be fully removed from his system.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  -Healing Blood: Nathaniel's Regenerative ability activated a Dormant Cell Type in his body which acts as Regenerative Blood Cells, allowing some Regeneration to happen to the recipient to Regenerate for a short time allowing said person to be brought back from the brink of Death, regain any lost limb or organ.
  
  
  -Active Brain(+50%): Due to his ability of Regeneration his brain is more active and has better memory and cognitive functions than most other supers, allowing him to easily learn the use of each weapon and gadget, with reasoning, planning, problem solving, recognition, perception of stimuli, visual processing, perception and recognition of auditory stimuli are quite heightened.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  -Susceptibility to Freezing Temperatures: Though Nathaniel's ability grants him Regeneration it has a single but quite Negative Impact on his body, his Cells has an increase in Susceptibility to Freeze over causing Nathan to be in a Cryogenic State until he reaches a core temperature of 70 fahrenheit.
  
  
  -Lose of Oxygen: Nathan like all other people can't Regenerate oxygen, once Nathan loses oxygen from his lungs he will blackout.
  
  
  
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Okay, personality traits. You say he's reckless, and aggressive because of it, and then list aggressive as it's own trait. In History, you say that he only recently, very, very recently, showed and tested for powers. However, he already has an alias, and he does he know what rank he is? How come? Also, the backstory and the heroism meter don't really match to me. Maybe it's just me, but I wouldn't think that a police Captain with several medals isn't courageous, or at least somewhat kind. I know that there were things said about his powers, but I don't really have the time to read through all that was said, so be warned, I'll likely repeat someone. First of, wow another person with healing skills. I understand the appeal, but I'd consider carefully reading through the accepted characters so you know you don't look too similar. Also, I'll be very fair, it's hard to understand what you mean. At least consider adding another weakness. Also, I don't understand the secondary power of active brain. First of, why is that 50% sign there? Second of, how would a super whose superpower is primarily based on healing be significantly smarter than a super whose powers are primarily based on cognizance? For the secondary power of healing blood, it seems a bit strong to be secondary, the way it is. Maybe limit it based on things like bloodtype? I won't offer any commentary on his primary power, because I just don't really understand it.

[QUOTE="Bag o Fruit]KRAVITZ, CHRISTOPHER

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Christopher Markus Kravitz
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	M
  Age	18
  Rank	C
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	White, slightly Asian
  Eyes	Blue
  Hair	Black
  Height	5'8"
  Build	Thin but muscular
  Limiter	Level 1, active

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Courageous	08	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Altruistic	07	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Orderly	01	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	Proactive	03	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Unassuming: Chris sees the value of all people, whether old, young, foolish or cruel. (However, he makes a notable exception for Commonwealth, which he monumentally distrusts.)
  
  
  Brooding: Everything good that happens to Chris is a penny in the change dish. Everything bad that happens to him is the worst thing to ever ruin his life, and he'll have to spend some time in the corner with a dark hoodie and an Ipod to handle it.
  
  
  Compassionate: He may not say or do too much to suggest it, but he feels very deeply for other people. He'll be torn by even the least convincing sob story, and he always helps the helpless.
  
  
  Pugnacious: He doesn't like bullies. From playground dolt to untouchable lawmaker, there is little there for him but dislike. He knows that there's a reason they are that way, that they're really a good person and their actions are a result of their circumstance just like Rousseau said. Usually he acts upon this dislike because something is being done that needs to be stopped, but sometimes he just doesn't give a damn.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Chris never knew his father. For some reason, he was killed when Chris was a baby, or possibly before he was born. His mother never talked about it but he deduced over the years that his father was killed by Commonwealth officers.
  
  
  For now obvious reasons, his mother gave him identification with E stamps he never earned and uprooted the pair of them every few months to move to some other part of America or sometimes overseas countries. She never talked about why this was.
  
  
  A few weeks ago, AEGIS agents found out Chris and his mother, imprisoned her, and sent him into screening, where he discovered that his strange skills (which his mother never talked about) were in fact 'superpowers'. With no friends or family, he was sent to an orphanage in Boston, where they were found.
  
  
  One thing his mother did tend to talk about was the heroism of some vigilante who worked with Rapture 'before they lost sight of a brighter world'. He took a liking to the sound of that and, finding himself under legal scrutiny, went to 108 for his Blue Card.
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  Ms. Kravitz
  
  
  Chris has a lot of conflicted feelings about his mother. She raised him and taught him how to get by, but every time he got used to a place she'd rip him up by the roots. Even though he understands the reason now, he has a lot of deep-seated anger directed towards his mother, for the moves, for keeping him in the dark, and, on some level, for letting his father go, even though he's sure that wasn't her doing. Of course he loves her just as much as any son. He really wishes she had told him her first name before it was too late.
  
  
  Mr. Kravitz
  
  
  Every angry feeling Chris has about his mother he feels twice as much about his father. Every feeling of love he gives his mother is a feeling of hatred that his father could leave her like this. Every feeling of compassion for her is a confused, bitter plea for understanding. What was it about fighting the Commonwealth that was so much more important than his mother? More important than him? But when he used to think about how his father was killed by Commonwealth, how Commonwealth was equally responsible for their renegade status, he caught the darkest image of comprehension. Now he doesn't need to think about it very hard. Just look at his limiter.

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	03	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮​	05	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Mushin; Christopher possesses an instinctual and superhuman understanding of physical reactions to his own and others' actions, and is thereby able to do seemingly impossible things. He can dodge punches, throw with uncanny accuracy, literally bat (almost) 1000, and other such things merely by wanting to. He can apply his own strength in such a way as to lift insane weights, with no more physical strength than the average man. Put concisely, he has all the power and speed of the average man, but he knows exactly how to use it.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Zanshin; he has unusually high situational awareness. He can't quite fight more than five men in the dark, or by any means hear a heartbeat from across a room, but he's perfectly capable of dispatching whatever thug means to sneak up behind him and deliver a heavy blow to the head.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  As mentioned, he has only the power, speed, etc of the average man. He cannot actually break the laws of physics, which may seem like a cop-out weakness until one considers that half his classmates can shoot fire from their fingertips or teleport between trees. Since he is not any faster than the average person, he can't dodge a bullet once it's in the air and headed for him (but he can prepare for the shot beforehand if he can observe the angle of the barrel and move accordingly), and since he is no stronger, there is a limit to what he can move.
  
  
  Unfortunately, he doesn't know his own limits, and in order to maximize performance, he has no subconscious barrier preventing him from unwittingly harming himself. If he reacts to something too quickly, or if he tries to lift some 800 kilograms, he might not stop himself before muscles are torn and bones are broken.
  
  
  His powers are based in his mind, his abilities precise and mental, not physical. As such, strong emotions such as rage or sorrow, sometimes joy, may limit his abilities. By the same token, it is easier to disable him with a telepathic attack than most. Simply said, he doesn't function well while distracted. (note: His willpower is ranked at five. It's not always particularly easy to distract him, but it is effective.)
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Okay, the last one. For now. Personality! The first trait immediately sparked a question, because unassuming doesn't actually mean, doesn't make assumptions, it means 'Not pretentious or arrogant; modest' which is definitely a good trait, but it doesn't fit the description, which, also, is a good trait. The same goes for pugnacious, which means 'Eager or quick to argue, quarrel, or fight' again, good trait, not so fitting the description, same for the description, good trait, not so fitting the word. (I totally copied these definitions for the online Oxford dictionary btw). For the history, and I know that Giyari just made a post partially about that, how did he figure out that it was Commonwealth that killed his dad? I know that I had things figured out that proved to be monumentally untrue, so how can he be so sure to hate the entire Commonwealth? Oh, and the 'hunted by Commonwealth' returns in the relationship tab, so consider rewording that too. ONTO POWERS! Which... I think everything that I would say has already been said. So... that was an anticlimax.


I'm going to say it at the bottom again, but I sincerely apologize if I'm repeating someone, I wrote this while others where also commenting, and that makes it hard to take everything into consideration. Also, I don't mean any of this in a mean or rude way, and if I seem blunt, it's just that, well, I'm blunt irl too.



[/QUOTE]

 

[VirtualUnity]

Here are my thoughts on the various applications already here. I'll try not to repeat what is already said, and if I do, sorry.
Okay, I'm going to start with powers, because wow that's not something I had ever thought of. Here goes; like is said already, they are very strong for the setting, and I'd definitely consider adding the weaknesses that Welian mentioned. Also, you said that the ability points are that high because it's her at her doped up. I would change that to how she is without any, or as little as she can, extra stuff in her system. To take the edge of, maybe make it harder to make large amounts? And how well can she control in what way she secrets these chemicals?


With the History/Personality tab, I only really have one question, which kind of goes back to the Powers tab too, can she make pure heroin if she only ever came into contact with the impure version? How did she sort out which chemical to make and which one was just uhm 'filler'? Other than that, looks good, I think.


Okay, the age thing is the first that jumped out at me, but that's still under construction so I'll leave it be. ONTO THE PERSONALITY! (I'm not going to mention the independent trait, since it's already been talked about) The traits look good, if a bit skeletal, especially without a backstory. This could be my personal preference speaking though, and likely with a backstory they will become more clear. ONTO POWERS! Lets be honest here, I had to read through them several times before I started understanding, and I still have a lot of questions. Lets get some clarity here first, she needs to have touched an animal to be able to take on their abilities? And I'm thinking it needs to be a conscious thought along the lines of "touching to take on ability" and not just a touch? How would this manifest? Would she change physically? How aware is she herself of the changes, since she can't cherry-pick abilities? For the secondary power, three things, one nice fit, two clearly said, and three, what are the limits? Is it easier to manipulate a dog than a chimp? How about when an animal is aware she is there? How does it work with humans, since they're technically animals too? Also, I'd consider adding a third weakness, since she is an A rank.


I got to say, it looks amazing, especially that secondary power. Only one question, if he already has a lot of control, and no incidents (because the limiter is off) is he going in for his blue card?


It looks good to me.


Okay, lets start with the heroism meter. You noted he was cruel as one of the traits, but he scores 7 on kindness? Also, you need a positive character trait too, or if you think sarcastic is the postive one (seems more like another negative but) you need another neutral one. Okay, this is the first time I've had a question regarding relations, but Andrew Macht isn't in the Facility, or did I miss something? Maybe clarify that he was a student in college or the lab(? where do pathologists work?) from before Nexus joined the Facility. As for powers, I think Giyari said most of what there was to say. Just one word, shedding? As for gallery, I don't know if it's applicable in this case, but it's preferred that you don't use actual photo's.


Okay, personality traits. You say he's reckless, and aggressive because of it, and then list aggressive as it's own trait. In History, you say that he only recently, very, very recently, showed and tested for powers. However, he already has an alias, and he does he know what rank he is? How come? Also, the backstory and the heroism meter don't really match to me. Maybe it's just me, but I wouldn't think that a police Captain with several medals isn't courageous, or at least somewhat kind. I know that there were things said about his powers, but I don't really have the time to read through all that was said, so be warned, I'll likely repeat someone. First of, wow another person with healing skills. I understand the appeal, but I'd consider carefully reading through the accepted characters so you know you don't look too similar. Also, I'll be very fair, it's hard to understand what you mean. At least consider adding another weakness. Also, I don't understand the secondary power of active brain. First of, why is that 50% sign there? Second of, how would a super whose superpower is primarily based on healing be significantly smarter than a super whose powers are primarily based on cognizance? For the secondary power of healing blood, it seems a bit strong to be secondary, the way it is. Maybe limit it based on things like bloodtype? I won't offer any commentary on his primary power, because I just don't really understand it.


Okay, the last one. For now. Personality! The first trait immediately sparked a question, because unassuming doesn't actually mean, doesn't make assumptions, it means 'Not pretentious or arrogant; modest' which is definitely a good trait, but it doesn't fit the description, which, also, is a good trait. The same goes for pugnacious, which means 'Eager or quick to argue, quarrel, or fight' again, good trait, not so fitting the description, same for the description, good trait, not so fitting the word. (I totally copied these definitions for the online Oxford dictionary btw). For the history, and I know that Giyari just made a post partially about that, how did he figure out that it was Commonwealth that killed his dad? I know that I had things figured out that proved to be monumentally untrue, so how can he be so sure to hate the entire Commonwealth? Oh, and the 'hunted by Commonwealth' returns in the relationship tab, so consider rewording that too. ONTO POWERS! Which... I think everything that I would say has already been said. So... that was an anticlimax.


I'm going to say it at the bottom again, but I sincerely apologize if I'm repeating someone, I wrote this while others where also commenting, and that makes it hard to take everything into consideration. Also, I don't mean any of this in a mean or rude way, and if I seem blunt, it's just that, well, I'm blunt irl too.

The way I thought the heroism meter was that the left side=negative and right side=positive that's why there are two shades of red

 

[CHIMNY]

Here are my thoughts on the various applications already here. I'll try not to repeat what is already said, and if I do, sorry.
Okay, I'm going to start with powers, because wow that's not something I had ever thought of. Here goes; like is said already, they are very strong for the setting, and I'd definitely consider adding the weaknesses that Welian mentioned. Also, you said that the ability points are that high because it's her at her doped up. I would change that to how she is without any, or as little as she can, extra stuff in her system. To take the edge of, maybe make it harder to make large amounts? And how well can she control in what way she secrets these chemicals?


With the History/Personality tab, I only really have one question, which kind of goes back to the Powers tab too, can she make pure heroin if she only ever came into contact with the impure version? How did she sort out which chemical to make and which one was just uhm 'filler'? Other than that, looks good, I think.


Okay, the age thing is the first that jumped out at me, but that's still under construction so I'll leave it be. ONTO THE PERSONALITY! (I'm not going to mention the independent trait, since it's already been talked about) The traits look good, if a bit skeletal, especially without a backstory. This could be my personal preference speaking though, and likely with a backstory they will become more clear. ONTO POWERS! Lets be honest here, I had to read through them several times before I started understanding, and I still have a lot of questions. Lets get some clarity here first, she needs to have touched an animal to be able to take on their abilities? And I'm thinking it needs to be a conscious thought along the lines of "touching to take on ability" and not just a touch? How would this manifest? Would she change physically? How aware is she herself of the changes, since she can't cherry-pick abilities? For the secondary power, three things, one nice fit, two clearly said, and three, what are the limits? Is it easier to manipulate a dog than a chimp? How about when an animal is aware she is there? How does it work with humans, since they're technically animals too? Also, I'd consider adding a third weakness, since she is an A rank.


I got to say, it looks amazing, especially that secondary power. Only one question, if he already has a lot of control, and no incidents (because the limiter is off) is he going in for his blue card?


It looks good to me.


Okay, lets start with the heroism meter. You noted he was cruel as one of the traits, but he scores 7 on kindness? Also, you need a positive character trait too, or if you think sarcastic is the postive one (seems more like another negative but) you need another neutral one. Okay, this is the first time I've had a question regarding relations, but Andrew Macht isn't in the Facility, or did I miss something? Maybe clarify that he was a student in college or the lab(? where do pathologists work?) from before Nexus joined the Facility. As for powers, I think Giyari said most of what there was to say. Just one word, shedding? As for gallery, I don't know if it's applicable in this case, but it's preferred that you don't use actual photo's.


Okay, personality traits. You say he's reckless, and aggressive because of it, and then list aggressive as it's own trait. In History, you say that he only recently, very, very recently, showed and tested for powers. However, he already has an alias, and he does he know what rank he is? How come? Also, the backstory and the heroism meter don't really match to me. Maybe it's just me, but I wouldn't think that a police Captain with several medals isn't courageous, or at least somewhat kind. I know that there were things said about his powers, but I don't really have the time to read through all that was said, so be warned, I'll likely repeat someone. First of, wow another person with healing skills. I understand the appeal, but I'd consider carefully reading through the accepted characters so you know you don't look too similar. Also, I'll be very fair, it's hard to understand what you mean. At least consider adding another weakness. Also, I don't understand the secondary power of active brain. First of, why is that 50% sign there? Second of, how would a super whose superpower is primarily based on healing be significantly smarter than a super whose powers are primarily based on cognizance? For the secondary power of healing blood, it seems a bit strong to be secondary, the way it is. Maybe limit it based on things like bloodtype? I won't offer any commentary on his primary power, because I just don't really understand it.


Okay, the last one. For now. Personality! The first trait immediately sparked a question, because unassuming doesn't actually mean, doesn't make assumptions, it means 'Not pretentious or arrogant; modest' which is definitely a good trait, but it doesn't fit the description, which, also, is a good trait. The same goes for pugnacious, which means 'Eager or quick to argue, quarrel, or fight' again, good trait, not so fitting the description, same for the description, good trait, not so fitting the word. (I totally copied these definitions for the online Oxford dictionary btw). For the history, and I know that Giyari just made a post partially about that, how did he figure out that it was Commonwealth that killed his dad? I know that I had things figured out that proved to be monumentally untrue, so how can he be so sure to hate the entire Commonwealth? Oh, and the 'hunted by Commonwealth' returns in the relationship tab, so consider rewording that too. ONTO POWERS! Which... I think everything that I would say has already been said. So... that was an anticlimax.


I'm going to say it at the bottom again, but I sincerely apologize if I'm repeating someone, I wrote this while others where also commenting, and that makes it hard to take everything into consideration. Also, I don't mean any of this in a mean or rude way, and if I seem blunt, it's just that, well, I'm blunt irl too.

Thanks! Gonna work on them. Also I didnt notice that the image was not working xD

 

[RemainingQuestions]

The way I thought the heroism meter was that the left side=negative and right side=positive that's why there are two shades of red

I'm pretty sure it's just a range from 1 to 9, where numbers like 3 fall on the 'negative' side and numbers like 7 fall on the 'positive' side.

 

[VirtualUnity]

I'm pretty sure it's just a range from 1 to 9, where numbers like 3 fall on the 'negative' side and numbers like 7 fall on the 'positive' side.

ok going to fix it

 

[welian]

I'm pretty sure it's just a range from 1 to 9, where numbers like 3 fall on the 'negative' side and numbers like 7 fall on the 'positive' side.

That's one way to look at it. I always thought of it as 5 being average, not pulled to any particular trait - someone who has all fives in the meter would be a very dull and average person, personality-wise.

 

[RemainingQuestions]

That's one way to look at it. I always thought of it as 5 being average, not pulled to any particular trait - someone who has all fives in the meter would be a very dull and average person, personality-wise.

That is what I meant! I was going to make an elaborate metaphor with a seesaw, but well, that was too elaborate.

 

[welian]

Side note - if you guys are able to keep this roleplay active through July, even August, I will consider applying for a Hosted Project.

 

[CHIMNY]

Updated the CS.

 

[Aldur]

I got to say, it looks amazing, especially that secondary power. Only one question, if he already has a lot of control, and no incidents (because the limiter is off) is he going in for his blue card?

He wants to be able to fully control his powers. As in, no more randomly floating around.

 

[Father Gigantor]

applying for a Hosted Project.

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[RemainingQuestions]

He wants to be able to fully control his powers. As in, no more randomly floating around.

That... I forgot that good wasn't complete, yes, that is very obvious now.

 

[sorrow made you]

Vincent, Nathaniel

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Nathaniel Crimson Vincent
  Codename	Reaper
  Gender	Male
  Age	28
  Rank	S
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian"Canadian"
  Eyes	Greenish Blue
  Hair	Brown
  Height	5'9"
  Build	Athletic
  Limiter	Level#4"Active"
  Notes	None

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	02	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	02	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	04	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	02	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  -Quick Witted: Due to his heightened brain functions he is efficient in almost anything he can do for example as he has higher brain functions and memory he can easily learn most weapons they can give him.
  
  
  -Reckless: Due to his ability to regenerate he becomes quite reckless regardless of his heightened brain functions and his actual efficiency for example during a training session he may charge ahead without thinking or strategizing a plan of attack.
  
  
  -Aggressive: Nathan's aggressiveness comes from his recklessness charging without thinking relying heavily on his ability to use weapons or hand-to-hand combat.
  
  
  -Confidential: Nathan is quite secretive to the other supers, rarely giving out any information about himself, due to this he maybe considered cynical or introverted.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Born 2012 to a middle-class family of a Mother and Father an older Brother and Sister. Growing up as a child was kind of rough for Nathan as his Mother and Father was night shift, only being able to interact with his older Siblings. 2022, now at the age of 10 during his elementary days he was bullied for his high intellect and being the top of his class, His 14 year old Brother Carmichael C. Vincent usually steps in to protect Nathan. As Nathan became 13 he started his life in middle school he now fights for himself though still not as strong as his older Brother or Sister he is able to fight off the bullies everything is normal until he became age 15 one night there was a break in at the Vincent Family Home as a rogue super robbed the place severely injuring Michael, later at the Hospital Michael is suffering from epilepsy but was stabilized before anymore damage could be done. Now 18 and several painful years in high school and His Father now fully healed from the robbery Nathan is enrolled into the Baltimore County Police Department: Training Academy, passing his academic part with ease while passing with an 85% in physical education. Graduating he becomes a Detective at the age of 25 for the Baltimore Police.
  
  
  Now a Detective for the Baltimore Police, Nathan is awarded a Silver Star for his Detective work and his time on the Force, giving a speech during the award he uses his deceased Father who was once apart of the Police Force as his inspiration to have joined the Police Force, after the awarding ceremony he continued his duty on the Force visiting His Mother during the holidays and drinking out with his Siblings during his leave. Now 26 he has been awarded 2 Silver Stars, 3 Distinguished Service Awards and 1 Medal of Honor, becoming the rank of Captain during his time he has lead multiple Raids, investigations and has thought Trainees on multiple occasions. Now Age 28 Nathan was walking through a city block until he was severely injured by an I.E.D. losing his left leg, waking up at the Baltimore Hospital he is shocked to see that his Left leg is gone, Carmichael entering the room, told Nathan what happened, Nathan didn't look to happy about it but was Hospitalized for his injuries, as two days pass by Nathan scratched his left leg, shocked Nathan called for a Doctor, as a Doctor passed by he entered to see what was wrong, shocked to see Nathan regenerated his leg he called AEGIS, assuring Nathan everything is alright, As Nathan was about to leave bed he was sedated by one of the Nurses until he could be transferred, As Nathan woke up he was trapped in a metal box currently being transported to Facility 108.
  
  
  
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  -Father: Michael F. Vincent(Deceased)
  
  
  -Mother: Allison C. Vincent(Retired)
  
  
  -Older Brother: Carmichael C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  -Older Sister: Dianna C. Vincent(Working)
  
  
  Friends: N/A
  
  
  Rivals: N/A
  
  
  Enemies: N/A
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	09	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	02	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	03	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	03	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	05	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	04	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  -Cellular Regeneration: Nathaniel's Ability Simple yet quite Concerning is his Ability to Regenerate Cellular Structure which means that he can regenerate any loss of Limbs, Organs, Blood and other Cells in his Body, how Nathan deals with any Loss of Limb is that his Limb unless if it's an organ will Degenerate Quickly Leaving in a Cryogenic Stasis until Transferred into a Living Body while he can't get Sick or be Poisoned physically his regeneration takes awhile until any Drugs can be fully removed from his system.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  -Healing Blood: Nathaniel's Regenerative ability activated a Dormant Cell Type in his Body which acts as Regenerative Blood Cells, allowing Some Regeneration to Happen to the Recipient to regenerate for a short time allowing said Person to be brought back from the Brink of Death, Regain any Lost Limb or Organ.
  
  
  -Active Brain(+50%): Due Though his Ability of Regeneration his Brain is more Active and has better Memory and Cognitive functions than Most other Supers, allowing him to Easily Learn the Use of Each Weapon and gadget, with reasoning, planning, problem solving, recognition, perception of stimuli, visual processing, perception and recognition of auditory stimuli are quite Heightened.
  
  
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  -Susceptibility to Freezing Temperatures: Though Nathaniel's Ability Grants him Regeneration it has a Single but quite Negative Impact on his Body, His Cells has an Increase in Susceptibility to Freeze over causing Nathan to be in a Cryogenic State until he reaches a core temperature of 70 Fahrenheit.
  
  
  -Lose of Oxygen: Nathan like all other people can't regenerate oxygen, once Nathan loses oxygen from his lungs he will blackout.
  
  
  
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@welian


One of the Co-GM's said that recruitment starts at he 8th of March Again

Nate's power is very similar to my character, Leo's, lol. Mine is molecular regeneration instead.


I'm a little bit confused though. So is he like the lizards that detach their tails and grow them back?


And I'm not sure if I understand the extent of heightened brain activity. I personally feel like his brain would be over flooding with different signals as his body is regenerating. So I'm not entirely sure that he would be able to utilize his brain activity exactly to that degree. Heightened senses makes sense, and maybe better reactionary times. But that also brings me to the question of how is his pain tolerance? xD I imagine any kind of regeneration hurts a lot.

 

[ManicMuse]

CHASE, ISABELLA

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• Full Name	Isabella (Izzy) Chase
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Female
  Age	13
  Rank	B
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Alaska Native
  Eyes	Icy Blue
  Hair	Silver Gray
  Height	5'
  Build	Fragile Small
  Limiter	Level 2, Active.
  Notes	A large pair of furred ears that Izzy attempts to always keep covered. A long slender tail at the base of back about seven feet in length.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????	Courageous	3	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????	Altruistic	2	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????	Orderly	3	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????	Kind	6	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????	Proactive	7	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  
  Innocence
  This is an interesting part of Izzy. While she is well versed in the hardships of the world, Izzy has managed to keep a whimsical belief of magic and beauty in the world. Believing in things like Santa Claus and the Easter bunny.
  
  
  
  Mischievous
  Izzy is unable to help herself. Without even trying the girl seems to always be getting into trouble. Normally, such things blow up in her face. All the same, she seems to have a fondness for causing trouble in playful ways.
  
  
  
  Compassionate
  When Izzy forms an attachment to something or someone, the connection runs deep. Izzy can be a very sympatric individual. Sometimes showing great concern for her friends and even standing up for them when they need it.
  
  
  
  Impulsive
  This plays into her compulsive stealing. She can't help herself and often barrows things without asking. Izzy is not great about thinking things over and often reacts without any means of a plan. Often resulting in a poor outcome for all parties involved.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Isabella Chase was born with some very unique features. Born with a long tail, feline like ears, eyes and teeth, her mother was frightened. Already, with no father in the picture and now a child with such an odd mutation was unthinkable. Such things were not allowed in the bush of Alaska. The mother, however did the honorable thing. Once the snow was just starting to melt, Isabella's mother took the three month old and had a supply plane take the babe back with them. Izzy was soon placed for adoption, however struggled to find a long term home. Not many people were interested in a creature like her for a daughter.
  
  
  To amuse herself growing up in the orphanage Izzy would barrow other children's belongings. It did not take long before she started to look for more of a challenge. Taking up pick pocketing and the like. Though on fine day when she was about eight, she got caught. In a strange turn of events, it was the very man who caught her picking his pockets, who decided to adopt Izzy.
  
  
  Richard Chase, had been in Alaska on business and ended up flying back home to Maryland, Baltimore several months later with his new daughter. He had lost his own wife and daughter in a horrid accident, only a year prior to crossing paths with Izzy.
  
  
  Isabella never did drop her habit of theft, but with her father's influence in his line of work with oil, gave him many connections. Richard Chase seemed to always have someone on speed dial to get them out of a jam. Which sadly, just gave Isabella all the more reason to pick more and more valuable targets.
  
  
  Finally, two months ago, Izzy stole a 1961 Ferrari 250GT Spyder while at a dinner party for some of her father's business partners. With the threat of lawsuits and pressing charges, her father had now enrolled her Aegis. There had been a long standing agreement that she would not have to go until she was 15. Perhaps, having a taste of real life outside of her private school will shake some sense into Izzy Chase. Thirteen might be a bit young but Aegis is Richard's only hope for teaching his daughter her place, before she ends up getting into real trouble.
  
  
  
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• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????	4	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????	2	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????	2	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????	7	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????	2	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????	3	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  
  Izzy has physical mutations that are similar to that of a feline. This is reflected in her very light and durable skeletal structure. Much like cats she has seven cervical vertebrae, thirteen thoracic vertebrae, seven lumbar vertebrae and three sacral vertebrae. Her tail consists of twenty-three caudal vertebrae. The extra lumbar and thoracic vertebrae are what make up her mobility and flexibility. These physical traits also extend to her physical appearance. Finger nails and toe nails grow at a quickened rate and are denser than a humans. As such, Izzy will sometimes sharpen them into points. Her canine teeth are more prominent, coming down to create subtle fangs. Directional ears made up of thirty-two muscles set high on the sides of her head. When frightened, scared or angry these large fur coated ears normally rotate back.
  
  
  
  
  
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  Izzy has heightened scene of smell and hearing. Humans and cats have a similar range of hearing on the low end of the scale, but cats can hear much higher-pitched sounds, up to 64kHz, which is 1.6 octaves above the range of a human, and even 1 octave above the range of a dog. Izzy has an acute sense of smell. About fourteen times as effective as an average human. This is because she has about twice as many olfactory epithelium within her nose.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Isabella has a tapetum lucidum, which is a reflective layer behind the retina that sends light that passes through the retina back into the eye. This improves her ability to see in darkness, though also reduces net visual acuity then detracting when light is abundant. Basically she has cat eyes and can see in the dark.
  
  
  
  
  
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  Izzy's body temperature runs between 101-102 degrees and her heart beats between 140-180 at a resting rate. As such, Izzy Chase must in take a remarkable amount of food to stay fit and healthy. Where a normal human could go days without food, she could not. Her metabolism is very sensitive.
  
  
  
  With the power of her eyes, Izzy can see in the dark. However, this leaves her eyes very sensitive to bright lights. Also the heightened sight straight on cuts down greatly on any peripheral sight. The same goes for her ears and hearing as well. With such sensitive and acute senses, they can be easily over whelmed.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  The long slender tail coated in silver fur. If you had something attached to your spinal column and was made of sensitive little bones, you would be touchy about it too. Though it is not just that she does not like it touched. This is used for her balance and agility. As such, even a tug, pull, or stomp upon it can be very detrimental to its fragile form.
  
  
  
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