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wat if mines terrible
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PyroWarriorZ said:=========================================Name: Ken Esunada
Nickname/Alias: Fatherless Freak
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Height: 5,7
Sexuality: None of ya business!
Village of origin: Village Hidden Among Luck (Ungakure) in the Land of Silver
Former Clan/Bloodline: Unknown
Former Position: Regular Chuunin, tried being a Courier Ninja but he kept losing the letters.
Chakra Nature: Unknown
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Appearance:
Personality: Ken can be a very cheerful or very grumpy individual depending on who he is with. He is not first with good impressions and doesn't like meeting new people. He is wary of most people he meets and doesn't trust people so easily, he is considered paranoid and always prepares for the worst situations as expects it to happen. When with he friends he is quite silly and can be fun to be around, he is very loyal and will do anything to protect someone he considers a friend.
He is trustworthy and has a strong sense of honor, he believes in keep his promises and protecting people when necessary, but he can also be dark when he needs to be.
History: Ken's father has always been a mystery, his mother refused to name despite being put under scrutiny. She explained it was simply her business and no-ones else. Due to this many of the kids in ninja school teased Ken due to his unknown father believe it was because he must have been someone embarassing. He grew quite cold and lonely, choosing to rather sit alone and practice his skills. As he grew he was able to develop a unique ability which the elders dubbed Gravity Style. These unseen abilities placed further interest on Ken's mysterious father and more scrutiny on his mother, who still refused to answer the question despite official orders. This made both Ken and his mother hated in the village and Ken was labelled a freak.
As Ken grew to a young teen, a legendary Jounin of the village took interest in him and his abilities. His name was Damasukaru (The Damasu) Euchre, a man who liked his nickname 'The Fool' was a great joker who loved to played jokes and have fun, despite this he was considered a great Shinobi. He trained Ken and three others personally. However after a few years, before he finished training them and explained what he was training them for, he disappeared, just disappeared from the village without a word or trace.
7 years ago, Ken's mother was found dead in her house. The evidence and the way she was killed could only have been done with Ken's unique abilities. Thus Ken was blamed for the death and put on trial, despite the evidence some felt it hard to believe Ken had killed his own mother and he was instead banished from the village before he could become a Jounin. He became a rogue ninja, taking odd jobs and trained himself to match a Jounin.
Theme Song:
Equipped Weapons/Items:
Large Zanbato Blade - A very large blade that most people can barely lift let alone carry around. Ken is able to carry this large sword around with ease due his Gravity Style. It is also made with the special metal that can absorb chakra and lined with silver which is abundant in Ken's land adding to it's weight and power. This allows Ken to make the blade's strikes far stronger or faster by putting his chakra through it.
Ken keeps this sword in a large black sheath, strapped to his back. He also has a summoning scroll to keep it away for discretion or to summon it back to him if he loses it. Due to this sword's large weight and size, practically none except those with incredible strength can even lift it, save for Ken who carries it around like it weighs nothing.
15 Shuriken, 7 Kunai, 13 Explosive Tags, 7 Smoke Bombs, 3 Flash Bombs, 5 Soldier Pills, 1 Stink Bomb, Summoning Scroll for Sword and Rations of Food for a Week.
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Special Traits (Optional)
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Gravity Style
Type: Unknown
Clan: Unknown
Description: Gravity Style is a unique ability controlled through the use of Yin and Yang Chakra that only Ken seems able to use. No one is sure of where it comes from as no one knows his father. It allows Ken to manipulate the gravity of objects, this could allow for some incredible abilities but due to no one being able to train Ken on it's use as no one knows of it, it is considered wasted on him.
Ken who is not so good at manipulating his own chakra find's it best used being channeled through his large blade. It allows him to carry and wield the blade despite it's incredible weight with extreme ease and proficiency. He can even throw the blade like a boomerang so that it spins and comes back to him. By increasing the gravity of the blade he can make it's swings far more power or manipulating gravity around his own body he can do incredible feats of agility and speed to further increase his kenjutsu skills. The unique chakra has possibility for far greater abilities, but Ken still has to figure out how to use it properly.
It has also allowed Ken to make the sword come to him without him touching it from a distance, but these instances have only happened in extreme circumstances and Ken is completely unable to control it.
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Shadow Clone Technique, Multiple Phantom Shuriken, Flash, Body Flicker Technique & Hiding in Shadows Technique
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Cosmic Slash Technique
Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Range: Close to Mid Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: None, but sword is required
Description: Ken channels his chakra into his large blade to allow him to swing it with incredible ease and speed. By increasing the gravity of the blade during the final part of the swing he can make the force behind far more powerful. Sometimes enough to leave a crater if enough chakra is used. Can be combined with Flash to create a more powerful Gravity Style: Cosmic Flash Technique.
This technique is what allows Ken to hold his sword when few can even lift it.
Weakness: The strength of the attack is equal to how much chakra he puts in, his chakra control isn't the best and Ken has a habit of putting in too much, sometimes his attacks are weaker or stronger than he wanted.
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Cosmic Force Technique
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Rank: C Rank
Range: Close Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: Dragon, Tiger, ends with slamming fists together.
Description: Same as Gyro Slash technique, but done with his bare fists. Much weaker and harder to control then when he does it with sword. Uses it only if he has lost sword and is out of options.
Weakness: The strength of the attack is equal to how much chakra he puts in, his chakra control isn't the best and Ken has a habit of putting in too much, sometimes his attacks are weaker or stronger than he wanted.
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Orbit Barrier Technique
Type of Jutsu: Barrier
Rank: B Rank
Range: Close Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: Bird, Tiger, Dragon, Hare end with slamming fists together and holding palms out.
Description: Ken creates a small circular barrier in front of him which negates the gravity of objects and messes up chakra. This allows the barrier to block physical attacks and chakra attacks to a lesser extent. The barrier can be extended into a full sphere to cover Ken and others, but this takes far chakra and is very difficult for Ken to do.
Weakness: While a very good barrier it requires Ken to hold both his palms out otherwise the barrier fades, thus making Ken useless while holding the barrier. It can be done with one hand, but then the barrier is far weaker.
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Gyro Boomerang Technique
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Rank: C Rank
Range: Long Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: None, but sword is required
Description: Ken channels his chakra into his large blade and then throws it such that it spins like a boomerang becoming like a saw to slice things up, it then arcs around and returns to him like a boomerang.
Weakness: Although unlikely due to the sword's great weight and cutting power due to gravity style if someone was able to stop the sword with a powerful enough force, Ken would be forced to retrieve it. Thankfully few can barely lift the sword...
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Dark Cosmic Orbit Crush Technique
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Range: Mid Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: Dragon, Bird, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Hare, ends with slamming fists together and then slamming palms into the ground.
Description: One of Ken's most powerful techniques in which he combines his barrier with a powerful crushing gravity. He creates a half sphere around himself about a meter a half wide. Anyone caught inside this barrier is submitted to an incredible increase gravity enough to crush the body of an ordinary man.
Weakness: This is technique absolutely exhausts Ken and this he refuses to ever use it, also due to the fact that he cannot control who is crushed. Anyone caught inside will be crushed regardless of his will. He claims the main reason he doesn't use it often is because it leaves him with no chakra and on his hands and knees, but truthfully it was a technique like this that was claimed to have killed his mother.
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Planet Quake Technique
Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Range: Mid Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: None, but sword is required
Description: Ken swings his sword over his head and to the ground after channeling a large amount of chakra into the blade, once it hits the ground it shatters the ground and this burying force travels in a straight line shattering the ground along it until it hits it's opponent and releases a powerful force of gravity upward to knock the opponent back.
Weakness: It must be done on the ground, earth, wood or metal is required. It won't work on water or air.
Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Eternal Multi-Blade Technique
Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Range: Long Range
Nature Type: Gravity
Handseals: Ram with one hand and sword is required
Description: Ken best technique, it starts by Ken increasing the gravity around his area and lowering his own gravity, allowing him to travel to his opponent with the Body Flicker Technique it what seems like an instant. He then vastly increases the gravity around the opponent and lowers his own and his own even more so that it seems like opponent is moved at super slow while his speed is increased. This allows him to attack his opponent with sword slashes multiple times in an instant without his opponent moving. This technique could theoretically be used to deliver 1,000 slashes in a second instead of one. However so far Ken can only manage 7, he has been training this technique for a long time and he continually trains and everyday it increases a little more. His next goal is to get to 8 slashes.
Weakness: If the opponent is able to escape the initial gravity surge, the rest of the attack is not really as effective. But this is very difficult and requires great speed as well as for the opponent to notice the attack and no what to do to escape it. Also doing the full 7 slashes does take quite a bit out of Ken.
Please let me know what I need to change and what is incorrect or too much...
OK, so I think this character sheet is good, but I feel I should warn you, if you dont tell me why he has gravity powers, then I will make something up and put it in the story later. Feel free to tell me via PM if you dont want the others to know, but understand that if you dont, then its like giving me a free license to surprise you with a history I make up.
I am afraid that I find a few issues with this character sheet, key amongst them being the earth grudge fear technique. We know nothing about this technique except for that it comes from Takigakure and is a forbidden technique, one that Kakuzo, the only known user of the technique, had already stolen before the start of this RP. He had already killed all the village elders, and had forced a virtual reformation of Takigakure. In short, there is no way that they would teach the technique to you, hell they didnt teach it to Kakuzo, and with the scrolls already stolen, I just dont see how you could learn it, much less accomplish something that Kakuzo could never do, even after a hundred years of training and practice.http://i.animecrazy.net/anime-guy-anime-guys-5284778-570-78.jpg[/URL] <- link to pic for those who wanna see
I hope its okay
The Technique is OP as f*ck as it is, the extra hearts thing wouldnt fly even if you did adequately explain how you managed to achieve it, but as it is, I dont see how you could have the earth grudge fear technique. Also, your history is severely lacking. You are a prodigy child, and you fail a mission, so instead of punish you, like they did Kakuzo, conceivably their strongest ninja, or attempt to train you more, they kick you out to become Rogue? That does not make a lot of sense to me, particularly after the whole Kakuzo Fiasco.
So rethink your character a bit, and if you MUST have the earth Grudge Fear Technique, then at least give me a plausible source for the technique to come from.
SirDurrHurrHurr said:General:
Shadow Clone Technique
Hiding in Shadow Technique
Body Flicker Technique
Barrier: Canopy Method Formation
Silent Killing
Chakra Suppression Technique
Dynamic Entry
Wild Lion's Mane Technique
Wind Release:
Blade of Wind
Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique
Wind Release: Wind Cutter
Earth Release;
Earth Release; Earth Spear (Tetsu often utilizes it on his entire body.)
Earth Release: Earth Dragon
Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall
Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Earth Release: Shadow Clone
Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
You need links.