Naruto: Contract for Outcasts OOC

There are three spots in the RP, I havent picked anyone for those spots yet, so please go ahead and keep sending in Character Sheets. I will look over them when I get the free time to.
 
[QUOTE="pain-clown123]should I post it as a link instead

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It will be better if you put it on your character sheet. delete the appearance link and try adding it again. It should work if done properly.
 
[QUOTE="pain-clown123]kk sorry 
okay tell me now ;D

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SOrry my friend. It might be my computer, but your appearance link is still broken.
 
I'm starting to think some of you DO have the issue on your comps, because I've been seeing his pics for awhile. If it won't show the enlarged/pasted version, add the thumbnail to the post too so people who can't see the pic can view that instead.


And those of you who never see pics, is it because you view through phones?
 
Sorry guys, Im going to be real busy this week, have lots of work to take care of, so I will get to things slowly.
 
PyroWarriorZ said:
Name: Ken Esunada


Nickname/Alias: Fatherless Freak


Gender: Male


Age: 25


Height: 5,7


Sexuality: None of ya business!


Village of origin: Village Hidden Among Luck (Ungakure) in the Land of Silver


Former Clan/Bloodline: Unknown


Former Position: Regular Chuunin, tried being a Courier Ninja but he kept losing the letters.


Chakra Nature: Unknown


Specialty: Kenjutsu


Appearance:


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Personality: Ken can be a very cheerful or very grumpy individual depending on who he is with. He is not first with good impressions and doesn't like meeting new people. He is wary of most people he meets and doesn't trust people so easily, he is considered paranoid and always prepares for the worst situations as expects it to happen. When with he friends he is quite silly and can be fun to be around, he is very loyal and will do anything to protect someone he considers a friend.


He is trustworthy and has a strong sense of honor, he believes in keep his promises and protecting people when necessary, but he can also be dark when he needs to be.


History: Ken's father has always been a mystery, his mother refused to name despite being put under scrutiny. She explained it was simply her business and no-ones else. Due to this many of the kids in ninja school teased Ken due to his unknown father believe it was because he must have been someone embarassing. He grew quite cold and lonely, choosing to rather sit alone and practice his skills. As he grew he was able to develop a unique ability which the elders dubbed Gravity Style. These unseen abilities placed further interest on Ken's mysterious father and more scrutiny on his mother, who still refused to answer the question despite official orders. This made both Ken and his mother hated in the village and Ken was labelled a freak.


As Ken grew to a young teen, a legendary Jounin of the village took interest in him and his abilities. His name was Damasukaru (The Damasu) Euchre, a man who liked his nickname 'The Fool' was a great joker who loved to played jokes and have fun, despite this he was considered a great Shinobi. He trained Ken and three others personally. However after a few years, before he finished training them and explained what he was training them for, he disappeared, just disappeared from the village without a word or trace.


7 years ago, Ken's mother was found dead in her house. The evidence and the way she was killed could only have been done with Ken's unique abilities. Thus Ken was blamed for the death and put on trial, despite the evidence some felt it hard to believe Ken had killed his own mother and he was instead banished from the village before he could become a Jounin. He became a rogue ninja, taking odd jobs and trained himself to match a Jounin.


Theme Song:
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Equipped Weapons/Items:


Large Zanbato Blade - A very large blade that most people can barely lift let alone carry around. Ken is able to carry this large sword around with ease due his Gravity Style. It is also made with the special metal that can absorb chakra and lined with silver which is abundant in Ken's land adding to it's weight and power. This allows Ken to make the blade's strikes far stronger or faster by putting his chakra through it.


Ken keeps this sword in a large black sheath, strapped to his back. He also has a summoning scroll to keep it away for discretion or to summon it back to him if he loses it. Due to this sword's large weight and size, practically none except those with incredible strength can even lift it, save for Ken who carries it around like it weighs nothing.


15 Shuriken, 7 Kunai, 13 Explosive Tags, 7 Smoke Bombs, 3 Flash Bombs, 5 Soldier Pills, 1 Stink Bomb, Summoning Scroll for Sword and Rations of Food for a Week.


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Special Traits (Optional)


Name of Kekkei Genkai: Gravity Style


Type: Unknown


Clan: Unknown


Description: Gravity Style is a unique ability controlled through the use of Yin and Yang Chakra that only Ken seems able to use. No one is sure of where it comes from as no one knows his father. It allows Ken to manipulate the gravity of objects, this could allow for some incredible abilities but due to no one being able to train Ken on it's use as no one knows of it, it is considered wasted on him.


Ken who is not so good at manipulating his own chakra find's it best used being channeled through his large blade. It allows him to carry and wield the blade despite it's incredible weight with extreme ease and proficiency. He can even throw the blade like a boomerang so that it spins and comes back to him. By increasing the gravity of the blade he can make it's swings far more power or manipulating gravity around his own body he can do incredible feats of agility and speed to further increase his kenjutsu skills. The unique chakra has possibility for far greater abilities, but Ken still has to figure out how to use it properly.


It has also allowed Ken to make the sword come to him without him touching it from a distance, but these instances have only happened in extreme circumstances and Ken is completely unable to control it.


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Shadow Clone Technique, Multiple Phantom Shuriken, Flash, Body Flicker Technique & Hiding in Shadows Technique

Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Cosmic Slash Technique


Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu


Rank: B Rank


Range: Close to Mid Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: None, but sword is required


Description: Ken channels his chakra into his large blade to allow him to swing it with incredible ease and speed. By increasing the gravity of the blade during the final part of the swing he can make the force behind far more powerful. Sometimes enough to leave a crater if enough chakra is used. Can be combined with Flash to create a more powerful Gravity Style: Cosmic Flash Technique.


This technique is what allows Ken to hold his sword when few can even lift it.


Weakness: The strength of the attack is equal to how much chakra he puts in, his chakra control isn't the best and Ken has a habit of putting in too much, sometimes his attacks are weaker or stronger than he wanted.


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Cosmic Force Technique


Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu


Rank: C Rank


Range: Close Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: Dragon, Tiger, ends with slamming fists together.


Description: Same as Gyro Slash technique, but done with his bare fists. Much weaker and harder to control then when he does it with sword. Uses it only if he has lost sword and is out of options.


Weakness: The strength of the attack is equal to how much chakra he puts in, his chakra control isn't the best and Ken has a habit of putting in too much, sometimes his attacks are weaker or stronger than he wanted.


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Orbit Barrier Technique


Type of Jutsu: Barrier


Rank: B Rank


Range: Close Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: Bird, Tiger, Dragon, Hare end with slamming fists together and holding palms out.


Description: Ken creates a small circular barrier in front of him which negates the gravity of objects and messes up chakra. This allows the barrier to block physical attacks and chakra attacks to a lesser extent. The barrier can be extended into a full sphere to cover Ken and others, but this takes far chakra and is very difficult for Ken to do.


Weakness: While a very good barrier it requires Ken to hold both his palms out otherwise the barrier fades, thus making Ken useless while holding the barrier. It can be done with one hand, but then the barrier is far weaker.


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Gyro Boomerang Technique


Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu


Rank: C Rank


Range: Long Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: None, but sword is required


Description: Ken channels his chakra into his large blade and then throws it such that it spins like a boomerang becoming like a saw to slice things up, it then arcs around and returns to him like a boomerang.


Weakness: Although unlikely due to the sword's great weight and cutting power due to gravity style if someone was able to stop the sword with a powerful enough force, Ken would be forced to retrieve it. Thankfully few can barely lift the sword...


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Dark Cosmic Orbit Crush Technique


Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu


Rank: A Rank


Range: Mid Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: Dragon, Bird, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Hare, ends with slamming fists together and then slamming palms into the ground.


Description: One of Ken's most powerful techniques in which he combines his barrier with a powerful crushing gravity. He creates a half sphere around himself about a meter a half wide. Anyone caught inside this barrier is submitted to an incredible increase gravity enough to crush the body of an ordinary man.


Weakness: This is technique absolutely exhausts Ken and this he refuses to ever use it, also due to the fact that he cannot control who is crushed. Anyone caught inside will be crushed regardless of his will. He claims the main reason he doesn't use it often is because it leaves him with no chakra and on his hands and knees, but truthfully it was a technique like this that was claimed to have killed his mother.


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Planet Quake Technique


Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu


Rank: B Rank


Range: Mid Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: None, but sword is required


Description: Ken swings his sword over his head and to the ground after channeling a large amount of chakra into the blade, once it hits the ground it shatters the ground and this burying force travels in a straight line shattering the ground along it until it hits it's opponent and releases a powerful force of gravity upward to knock the opponent back.


Weakness: It must be done on the ground, earth, wood or metal is required. It won't work on water or air.


Name of Technique: Gravity Style: Eternal Multi-Blade Technique


Type of Jutsu: Kenjutsu


Rank: A Rank


Range: Long Range


Nature Type: Gravity


Handseals: Ram with one hand and sword is required


Description: Ken best technique, it starts by Ken increasing the gravity around his area and lowering his own gravity, allowing him to travel to his opponent with the Body Flicker Technique it what seems like an instant. He then vastly increases the gravity around the opponent and lowers his own and his own even more so that it seems like opponent is moved at super slow while his speed is increased. This allows him to attack his opponent with sword slashes multiple times in an instant without his opponent moving. This technique could theoretically be used to deliver 1,000 slashes in a second instead of one. However so far Ken can only manage 7, he has been training this technique for a long time and he continually trains and everyday it increases a little more. His next goal is to get to 8 slashes.


Weakness: If the opponent is able to escape the initial gravity surge, the rest of the attack is not really as effective. But this is very difficult and requires great speed as well as for the opponent to notice the attack and no what to do to escape it. Also doing the full 7 slashes does take quite a bit out of Ken.


Please let me know what I need to change and what is incorrect or too much...


OK, so I think this character sheet is good, but I feel I should warn you, if you dont tell me why he has gravity powers, then I will make something up and put it in the story later. Feel free to tell me via PM if you dont want the others to know, but understand that if you dont, then its like giving me a free license to surprise you with a history I make up.

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I hope its okay
I am afraid that I find a few issues with this character sheet, key amongst them being the earth grudge fear technique. We know nothing about this technique except for that it comes from Takigakure and is a forbidden technique, one that Kakuzo, the only known user of the technique, had already stolen before the start of this RP. He had already killed all the village elders, and had forced a virtual reformation of Takigakure. In short, there is no way that they would teach the technique to you, hell they didnt teach it to Kakuzo, and with the scrolls already stolen, I just dont see how you could learn it, much less accomplish something that Kakuzo could never do, even after a hundred years of training and practice.


The Technique is OP as f*ck as it is, the extra hearts thing wouldnt fly even if you did adequately explain how you managed to achieve it, but as it is, I dont see how you could have the earth grudge fear technique. Also, your history is severely lacking. You are a prodigy child, and you fail a mission, so instead of punish you, like they did Kakuzo, conceivably their strongest ninja, or attempt to train you more, they kick you out to become Rogue? That does not make a lot of sense to me, particularly after the whole Kakuzo Fiasco.


So rethink your character a bit, and if you MUST have the earth Grudge Fear Technique, then at least give me a plausible source for the technique to come from.
 
Character Sheet


Name: Tetsuya Wakamoto (Unknown to all)


Nickname/Alias: Silencer


Gender: Male


Age: 40


Height: 1.85m


Sexuality: Straight


Village of origin: Iwagakure


Former Clan/Bloodline: Wakamoto


Former Position: Jonin.


Chakra Nature: Wind, Earth.


Speciality: Assassinations. Tetsu has honed his skills for one specific purpose, the elimination of single or multiple targets, be it loudly, or silently. He tends to focus exclusively on wind techniques for contracts that call for subterfuge and reserves his earth techniques for more direct and open encounters. He focuses on ninjutsu and taijutsu and is also a skilled swordsman, he often uses elemental jutsus to further increase the potency of his taijutsu skills. His genjutsu skills are somewhat below average, preferring to spend his time training to resist them rather then actually using them.


Appearance:

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Personality: "It matters not who I am, where I'm from or what I've done. All that matters are two things, you pay me, and someone dies."


Tetsu is a silent, and aloof man, rarely fazed, talking only when necessary, and generally caring only about matters that affect him in some way. His responses, which are far few between, tend to be either sardonic or blunt. He makes no attempt to be subtle, and will state cold hard facts as they are. In truth though, while he likes to think that he has killed all his compassion and other unnecessary emotions, he does show occasional bouts of heroism or kindness to a random passer-by.


Killing has been a part of his life from very early on, and continues to be until the present day. As such, he is completely desensitised to violence and killings of any sort, while he may not agree with or like violence as a whole, it certainly does not emotionally impact him in any way. Despite the nature of his occupation, he does not like to kill unnecessarily and will only eliminate those that could potentially jeopardise his contract. Tetsu makes it a point to never lie to anyone except during hostile encounters, when hired he will state everything regarding the assassination to his client and whether or not he feels he can accomplish it, no deceptions or sugar coating, everything will be stated plain as day. He also makes it a point to pay back any debt ASAP, and also will not break promises, though this behaviour should not be confused with virtue.






History: Tetsuya was the son of two unknown parents, who both died under mysterious circumstances just a year after his birth. Subsequently he was taken to an orphanage on the outskirts of Iwagakure to be raised, where he would be reside for 9 years. Tetsu was a well behaved child, he never had many friends but he got along with most of them fine. He also performed well in both physical education as well as academic classes. The status quo was maintained for 9 years, until his tenth birthday. He was asked to visit a small neighbouring village under the pretence of running a few errands but in reality, they had wanted to prepare a small surprise party for him. Tetsu overheard the plans being discussed by a few other children and was extremely delighted. He left for the village at top speed, intending to complete the errand as fast as possible, but in his haste, he took a wrong turn. He had ended up near a house which he had never visited before. It had an unpleasant smell emanating from it, and being the curious lad that he was peered into through the side doors which were ajar. He was greeted with the horrible sight of several piglets, runts of the litter, being put down by a man with an axe, he had stumbled across a slaughterhouse. Sickened by the sight before him, he quietly left the scene, feeling vaguely nauseous and wanting to return to the orphanage as quickly as possible.


As he got closer and closer to the orphanage, he noticed a column of thick black smoke, which appeared to be rising from the area where the main building was located. He also noticed a number of large footprints leading towards the orphanage, but not away from it. Feeling increasingly uneasy, he broke into full sprint, intent on discovering what had happened. He didn't have to wait long to get his answer, as he climbed the steps up the hill where the orphanage was, he was greeted by the sight of the main building blazing, as well as dozens of corpses littered around the orphanage grounds. Most of the corpses were either children or caretakers, but a there were several corpses he did not recognise, they were dressed in light armor, and most still had weapons in their hands, bandits no doubt. Tetsu made his way slowly around the grounds, his young brain desperately trying to process the carnage around him, his entire life had crumbled around him, everyone was gone. As he rounded the final corner of the grounds, he came across something even worse than a dead person, a live one. A female teacher, one who Tetsu particularly adored, was lying spread-eagled across the ground, her chest had been sliced open, and her intestines were clearly hanging out but she was still visibly breathing. As Tetsu approached her, she mustered what little strength she had left to turn to face him. Giving him a pleading look , she took an axe, not unlike the one he saw earlier, and placed it in the callow youth's hands. In a ragged, barely audible voice, she uttered to him one word, "Help."


Understanding what she meant, Tetsu raised the axe, his hands shaking uncontrollably. With the weapon raised over his head, he tilted his head down, peering at the teacher, she had forced a small smile onto her face, and gave him a small nod. Gulping and shivering, he knew what he had to do, and in one swift movement, buried the weapon into her skull. As Tetsu swung the weapon down, something inside him changed, the boy known as Tetsuya Wakamoto was no more, and the person who would come to be known as the Silencer was born.


The ninjas sent to investigate found Tetsu slumped in a corner, his eyes wide open, babbling incoherently. They sent him to a hospital where he remained for a few days mulling over his current situation. When he was discharged, he declined an offer to stay at another orphanage within Iwagakure itself, he knew he could not go back to a normal life after what had happened, he was no longer normal. He needed something to focus on something, he needed an outlet, he needed a purpose. Using the inheritance his parents had left behind, he asked an elder to help by him a place, and to help him secure a place in the ninja academy.


Twenty one years down the road and Tetsu was now a Jonin, famous for his cold and ruthless character, executing and torturing his foes without so much as a twitch, always dead set on his goal, never faltering. He had primarily been sent on missions to eliminate targets, and had not failed a single one, eliminating his targets with precision and speed, becoming the village's go-to guy for assassinations. He was also however, treated with much suspicion as well, given his shady origins as well his general lack of loyalty to the village and willingness to bend rules.


One day, Tetsu received a mission completely out of his field of expertise, an S-ranked one as well to boot. A temporary ceasefire between the countries would be held a princess from Kumogakure would be travel across the land for political talks for the duration of several months. As part of a collaboration between the five countries, each one would send one highly skilled Jonin to serve as her praetorian guard.


Despite a rocky start, the team performed fairly cohesively, driving off their assailants each time. Despite Tetsu's cold and indifferent demeanour, the ninjas grew to respect each others abilities over time, and performed well as a team. His teammates weren't the only ones he was getting close to, the princess herself harboured a sort of attraction to his mystique and attempted to make friendly conversation with him numerous times. Tetsu brushed each attempt off with increasing irritation, but found himself unable to avoid her for too long and responded. She revealed to him that she had also once been the sole survivor of a horrific assassination attempt, but chose to hold her head high, and always be positive, to prove to the enemy that she would not lose heart that easily, something that Tetsu found extremely admirable. As the journey wore on, the two grew increasingly closer, she became more open around him, and would often crack jokes and ramble to him about whatever she was thinking at the time, conversely Tetsu became much more tolerant and receptive to her behaviour and would sometimes would aid her in pulling small pranks on his teammates, he also became more passive and willing to cooperate, something that startled his teammates greatly. Eventually, they fell in love, and as the end of their journey was in sight, she revealed to him her wish of abandoning her position, to leave all her titles behind and to explore the world together with him. Tetsu, by now almost completely infatuated with her as well, promised he would see to it that her wish would come true


That promise would never come to fruition however, on the final week the group was accosted by a large group of what appeared to be Uchiha clan shinobi. The group proved to be vastly outnumbered and within minutes they were overwhelmed. Tetsu was knocked unconscious and awoke to the sight of his entire party, massacred. He examine the aftermath, to search for clues alluding to the identities of the mysterious assailants but found naught but stray shurikens, the assailants had clearly been thorough in their clean up. As Tetsu finished examining the scene, finding nothing in the process, the reason he was still alive dawned on him, they needed a scapegoat, someone to pile the crime onto, and hey had done an excellent job of making him one. Realising the consequences of returning to the village, Tetsu fled, forever killing any chance of the truth being discovered, ensuring any sort of peace treaty would not come, and cementing his reputation as a dangerous missing-nin


These days, Tetsu goes by the alias Silencer, and travels the land, never leaving a trace, offering assassination services as he goes.


Theme Song:


Normal theme:
- Jose Gonzalez
Battle theme: Battle on the Big Bridge - Nobuo Uematsu


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Equipped Weapons/Items:


Ichigeki and Oborozuki (Twin Daitos. Main assassination weapons.)


Chirijiraden (Katana. Kept in scroll until needed)


15 x Kunai


Shuriken scrolls on forearms.


10 x Explosive tags.


3 x Smoke bombs.


5 x Flash bombs


Wire String (Used when needed)


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General:


Shadow Clone Technique


Hiding in Shadow Technique


Body Flicker Technique


Barrier: Canopy Method Formation


Silent Killing


Chakra Suppression Technique


Dynamic Entry


Wild Lion's Mane Technique


Wind Release:


Blade of Wind


Wind Release: Vacuum Wave


Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique


Wind Release: Wind Cutter Technique


Earth Release;


Earth Release: Earth Spear (Not just limited to his arms, Tetsu often utilizes it on his entire body or parts of it.)


Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon


Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique


Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall


Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave


Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique


Earth Release: Shadow Clone


Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique


Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique


Earth Release: Earth Style Rampart






Earth Release: Double Assault


Rank: C


Range: Short


Handseals: Snake, Tiger, Ram


Description: Creates two extra earthen arms around the shoulder area, for aid in taijutsu, or to allow for continued assaults whilst the user performs handseals.


Weakness: The arms are rather brittle, and can be destroyed with sufficient force.


Wind Release: Swift Claw


Rank: B


Range: Short


Handseals N/A


Description: The user concentrates wind chakra around his hands, and performs a thrusting motion, allowing the user to stab through opponents with just his bare hands. Tetsu often incorporates this into his taijutsu style.


Weaknesses: If not properly controlled, the user can cut his own hands, possibly severing entire fingers or the even the hand itself.


Wind Release: Shockwave


Rank: C


Range: Short - Medium


Handseals: N/A


Description: The user punches the air, sending a concentrated blast of wind at the opponent. Tetsu also uses this in close encounters.


Weaknesses: The attack has minimal piercing power, and is only meant to deal blunt force trauma.


Wind Release: Solid Air


Rank: B


Range: Short


Handseals; Ram, Snake, Dragon, Thrust palm.


Description: The user stops the air particles in a certain area from moving, this allows one to create walls made of air which can halt small projectiles, or slow an opponents advance, one can also use this technique to suffocate an enemy or extinguish flames, though the user must maintain concentration when using the technique on moving entities.


Weaknesses: While able to stop small projectiles, it can only slow down regular attacks. Powerful attacks or attacks specfically meant to penetrate pierce through it with ease.


Earth Release: Boost


Rank: D


Range: Self


Handseals: N/A


Description: The user causes a small area of ground around his feet to burst out at high speed, propelling the user in the desired direction.


Weakness: N/A


Wind Release: Tsubame Gaeshi


Rank: B


Range: Short - Medium


Handseals: N/A


Description: The user moves towards an opponent as fast as possible, once at the desired distance, he user unsheathes his blade and, using wind chakra to increase the blade's cutting power, delivers a powerful diagonal slash. This technique has been known to completely bifurcate lesser opponents. Tetsu often uses this in conjunction with Earth Release: Boost, in order to increase his speed.


Weakness: The user moves in a completely linear direction for the duration of the technique, making it easy to predict. Tetsu uses Earth Release: Boost to increase his speed in an attempt to mitigate this.


Earth Release: Cannon


Rank: A


Range: Short


Handseals: Snake ? Seal of Confrontation or Ram ? Dog ? Rat ? Snake ? Tiger


Description: The user first performs the Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique, however instead of making the earth completely cover the fist, the user leaves a small gap between the knuckle area and the earth. Using wind chakra, the user compresses the air in this gap to the desired level and then punches the opponent, shattering the fist and releasing the compressed air, making the punch far more devastating than it would be normally. The more the air is compressed, the stronger the impact. The user can also cause the earth to break before impact, causing the air to be prematurely released, allowing it to hit targets at a short distance, this method however causes the impact to be weaker than normal.


Weaknesses: This technique runs a high risk of injuring the user's hand if not properly executed. The seriousness of the injury can range to slight bruises or fractures, to the entire arm being completely blown apart. Compressing the air too much will also have a similar consequence.


Tiger Break


Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu


Rank: C


Range: Short


Handseals: N/A


Description; A swift barrage of punches and kicks, culminating in a powerful uppercut. Tetsu often enhances it with nature manipulation.


Weakness: N/A


Earth Release: Asura's Wrath


Rank: A - S (Depending on number of fists, speed and intensity.)


Range: Short - Medium


Handseals: Tiger, Ram, Snake, Dragon, Ox, Clap.


Description: Tetsu's ultimate technique, he causes dozens of earth arms to sprout from the ground and repeatedly barrage an opponent, while simultaneously attacking with his own barrage of punches, the technique ends with the arms combining into one giant fist and smashing down onto the opponent. The intensity of the final attack can leave behind a crater.


Weakness: This technique requires a tremendous amount of chakra, and leaves the user severely exhausted after use and even has the potential to break the user's bones due to overexertion. Tetsu can only use this technique once per day, twice if little or no chakra was expended beforehand.
 
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SirDurrHurrHurr Put Links to your cannon list jutsus. 


SirDurrHurrHurr said:
General:


Shadow Clone Technique


Hiding in Shadow Technique


Body Flicker Technique


Barrier: Canopy Method Formation


Silent Killing


Chakra Suppression Technique


Dynamic Entry


Wild Lion's Mane Technique


Wind Release:


Blade of Wind


Wind Release: Vacuum Wave


Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique


Wind Release: Wind Cutter


Earth Release;


Earth Release; Earth Spear (Tetsu often utilizes it on his entire body.)


Earth Release: Earth Dragon


Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet


Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique


Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall


Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave


Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique


Earth Release: Shadow Clone


Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique


You need links. ^_^
 
Name: Zabemaru momochi


Nickname/Alias: the beast of red mist, zabe


Gender: male


Age: 19


Height: 6 ft 2


Sexuality: bisexual


Village of origin: village hidden in the mist


Former Clan/Bloodline: momochi


Former Position: mystery 8th swordsmen of the mist


Chakra Nature: water and lightning


Specialty: taijutsu, as well as the weilder of the executioner blade mark 2, his ninjutsu is exceptionally high as well, and even has a way to nullify genjutsu (nothing like a sharingans level)


Appearance:
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Personality: He is very laid back, and quite calm in battle. He normally enjoys brushing off enemies and will only fight if he gets cut or someone attacks a fellow member of the mist


History:


Zabuza Momochi was nicknamed the demon of the mist, but before that he was still a low ranking anbu, it was only after he arrived that he met marizo, another low level anbu ninja wanting the position of mist ninja. They both became good friends, going on missions together and even sharing dango with each other. Soon there friendship turned to a relationship and they decided to be together for the rest of there lives, after 10 years they tried and had a young black haired son. The young child not only had strange dragon like eyes but a strong grip, zabuza knew he had a son.


Almost years went by, the boy was now 10 years old as zabuza was showing him how to wield a blade. Zabe did sometimes drop the blade but zabuza didn't care, he just knew that Zabemaru would become the greatest warrior with a blade. a few weeks on as zabuza and Zabe came back, disaster struck as they saw the building on fire, they quickly ran in and dragged out a dead mizuno, angered by this zabuza vowed on his blade that he would find who ever done this. Zabe could see the angar in his fathers eyes and even took on the angar himself.


Eventually Zabuza found out that it was from the vicious crime lord Ienzai, He went to go kill the man responsible, but only until he arrived did he see his boy, Zabemaru fighting the crime lord himself. Ienzai was a genjutsu warrior, to a sword wilder this would mean death. But Zabemaru did more then make him suffer, he killed Ienzai and burned the rest of his warriors to the ground. Zabuza was both amazed and shocked this boy, no his son did the impossible and fend off the genjutsu, it wernt until he noticed it was the dragon eye that helped him.


Another 2 years had passed and zabuza had passed on, when Zabemaru arrived it was too late he saw zabuza and haku lying dead on the floor, he couldn't do nothing but run, he left the village but soon vowed he would return with more then a vengeance. After training for the next 7 years he returned only to find, his fathers blade removed from his grave. So now he decided to create his own blade, a blade similar to his fathers but all his own, he'd want to be known as the 8th final swordsmen.


Theme Song: celldweller - our little world


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Equipped Weapons/Items: the executioner blade mark 2


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Special Traits (Optional)


Name of Kekkei Genkai: Draco eye


Type: ( Bloodline, Dual-Element, etc... ) blood line


Clan: hidden Momochi


Description: The legendary technique passed down to only those of a mixed race, e.g. zabuza and marizo (Momochi + erenzia = Zabe), this allows the dragon eye technique to give the user power to escape some levels of genjutsu, the eye also enables him to sense levels of charkra and determine strategies to evade, Thanks to the eye it also enabeled him to use the lightning style as well.


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