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You took Lance (With the dragon thing, his build, reluctance to fight unless he has to, embarrassment problem Lance has around new people, monster complex about his heritage: Which doesn't make sense for his character btw, as he doesn't express any dragon traits outwardly. He looks human as far as I can tell, no one could tell he's half dragon unless he somehow displayed some draconic traits of some sort) and turned him into the 80's awkward protagonist trope (tries to help everyone and is seen as a weirdo and gets the girl when she realizes how good he is at piano). I have nothing against taking a trope and turning it on it's head but they're eerily similar lol
 
Um Ya but that is only because of Authurian legend. He isn't even close to Lance in height, and their aren't many guy builds. I mean Jayce is already freakishly skinny so I couldn't do that. I am not even sure as to whether I am going to have Jonathan in any relationship, and the n piano is just going to be a hobby of his, like Jayce's driving except not quite as in your face "Oh I can do this!" Like Jayce is about his driving. I kinda went for the opposite of Jayce and that's what I got. I can edit it yo make the angle I am going for clearer. I figured since he has minimal skills that I would give him the piano thing as his skill.
 
However I may take the authurian legend portion out. Also the embarrassment thing will be explained, he will randomly spit sparks when he is flustered, or feels any strong emotion really. Additionally his breath reeks unless he cleans his mouth out like 4-5 times a day
 
That's not a problem, but surely you see where I'm coming from yeah? why I would think he's very similar to Lance? Granted Lance isn't who he was when I started this- I've been here since pretty early one (though I can't say the beginning) and Lance has had a lot of character development since then, but I can already see his character heading down the same path. Also, not many guy builds? Let's have this conversation lol there are plenty of human body builds, for guys and girls. There just aren't many conventionally attractive guy builds. What we've got in the CS tab is proof enough of that tbh, but I can dig through to find you some reference sheets on different build types, though I have to dig through my archives on that lol
 
OK Ya but build wise he is over a foot shorter than Lance. I get why you would have seen the guardian thing... Actually that was what I was going for early on but I changed it. (I may have forgotten to delete Tbh )
 
http://goldenagefigurines.com/8179/...nt-male-body-types-resources-u-tutorials-jpg/ (sorry if it's a bit nsfw and that its an artist's ref sheet, but I find it to be a good ref sheet for developing body types^^) There's a lot more to body types than height my dude lol allow me to update the list: With the dragon thing, his build, reluctance to fight unless he has to (maybe), embarrassment problem Lance has around new people, monster complex about his heritage (maybe). Hm, I think that's enough similarities knocked off to qualify as different. Take another shot at it and we'll see where we go from there lol
 
Got rid of the authurian legend portion. I have been craving that kind of rp lately, but haven't found any rps for it. And while I am more familiar than average on the concept, I am certainly no scholar on the subject.
 
I don't expect you to kiddo, I just wanted to show you that the possibilities there are for characters lol I don't mind the similarity in build, Andy has a similar build to Lance, it's that combined with everything else that had me iffy about it and I made a list of the similarities so that you could pick and choose which ones you were willing to change lol
 

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