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Fantasy It Ain't All Fun And Games... - OOC

@StoneWolf18


Yeeeeee. I'm gonna do that. I actually have some "work" to do on here for a friend. Good ol' BBC work. =w=
 
SimpleReading said:
Tried to make it look as doctory as possible, not sure how well of a job I did ;-;
You did fine. ^^ All I need is for you to read the rules and send me a Pm!
 
@Yaoke Saint Now...I love you an all, but when I read your CS, I had to stop and ask myself "What the fuck?"


1) Her middle name is a definite no. It's not entirely unrealistic but for someone that's suppose to be unnoticeable...yeah


2) Her personality worries me a bit. Does she had a mental disorder or is just extremely antisocial?


3) History...this needs to be changed. If she had done all that, why on earth would she be left alone? I mean...these people aren't suppose to be well known or even recorded extensively. Just another passing face in a crowd.


Trying not to sound too harsh, but from you this was...unexpected to say the least... >.<
 
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StoneWolf18 said:
@Yaoke Saint Now...I love you an all, but when I read your CS, I had to stop and ask myself "What the fuck?"
1) Her middle name is a definite no. It's not entirely unrealized but for someone that's suppose to be unnoticeable...yeah


2) Her personality worries me a bit. Does she had a mental disorder or is just extremely antisocial?


3) History...this needs to be changed. If she had done all that, why on earth would she be left alone? I mean...these people aren't suppose to be well known or even recorded extensively. Just another passing face in a crowd.


Trying not to sound too harsh, but from you this was...unexpected to say the least... >.<
Yeah, i was kinda expecting that. Seeing how its one in the morning and all.


The middle name can definatly change, I was just referencing a poem, which goes with Sweeney, Apeneck, and the Spanish cape. I feel a little crazy right now. Should i go to bed? It's like 90 degrees in this room and I'm getting chiils and a headache. And its one in the morning. did I mention that already? Yes, i did. And i'm definately insane at the moment. As for her personality, she is just extremely antisocial.


As for the history.... yeah I should definatlely go to bed and finish this CS tomorrow.
 
[QUOTE="Yaoke Saint]Yeah, i was kinda expecting that. Seeing how its one in the morning and all.
The middle name can definatly change, I was just referencing a poem, which goes with Sweeney, Apeneck, and the Spanish cape. I feel a little crazy right now. Should i go to bed? It's like 90 degrees in this room and I'm getting chiils and a headache. And its one in the morning. did I mention that already? Yes, i did. And i'm definately insane at the moment. As for her personality, she is just extremely antisocial.


As for the history.... yeah I should definatlely go to bed and finish this CS tomorrow.

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GO TO BED BEFORE I FORCE YOU TO, DAMN IT!


Sweet dreams <3
 
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12. Sweeney among the Nightingales


APENECK SWEENEY spreads his knees


Letting his arms hang down to laugh,


The zebra stripes along his jaw


Swelling to maculate giraffe.


The circles of the stormy moon 5


Slide westward toward the River Plate,


Death and the Raven drift above


And Sweeney guards the horned gate.


Gloomy Orion and the Dog


Are veiled; and hushed the shrunken seas; 10


The person in the Spanish cape


Tries to sit on Sweeney’s knees


Slips and pulls the table cloth


Overturns a coffee-cup,


Reorganized upon the floor 15


She yawns and draws a stocking up;


The silent man in mocha brown


Sprawls at the window-sill and gapes;


The waiter brings in oranges


Bananas figs and hothouse grapes; 20


The silent vertebrate in brown


Contracts and concentrates, withdraws;


Rachel née Rabinovitch


Tears at the grapes with murderous paws;


She and the lady in the cape 25


Are suspect, thought to be in league;


Therefore the man with heavy eyes


Declines the gambit, shows fatigue,


Leaves the room and reappears


Outside the window, leaning in, 30


Branches of wistaria


Circumscribe a golden grin;


The host with someone indistinct


Converses at the door apart,


The nightingales are singing near 35


The Convent of the Sacred Heart,


And sang within the bloody wood


When Agamemnon cried aloud,


And let their liquid droppings fall


To stain the stiff dishonoured shroud.
 
[QUOTE="Yaoke Saint]
12. Sweeney among the Nightingales
APENECK SWEENEY spreads his knees


Letting his arms hang down to laugh,


The zebra stripes along his jaw


Swelling to maculate giraffe.


The circles of the stormy moon 5


Slide westward toward the River Plate,


Death and the Raven drift above


And Sweeney guards the horned gate.


Gloomy Orion and the Dog


Are veiled; and hushed the shrunken seas; 10


The person in the Spanish cape


Tries to sit on Sweeney’s knees


Slips and pulls the table cloth


Overturns a coffee-cup,


Reorganized upon the floor 15


She yawns and draws a stocking up;


The silent man in mocha brown


Sprawls at the window-sill and gapes;


The waiter brings in oranges


Bananas figs and hothouse grapes; 20


The silent vertebrate in brown


Contracts and concentrates, withdraws;


Rachel née Rabinovitch


Tears at the grapes with murderous paws;


She and the lady in the cape 25


Are suspect, thought to be in league;


Therefore the man with heavy eyes


Declines the gambit, shows fatigue,


Leaves the room and reappears


Outside the window, leaning in, 30


Branches of wistaria


Circumscribe a golden grin;


The host with someone indistinct


Converses at the door apart,


The nightingales are singing near 35


The Convent of the Sacred Heart,


And sang within the bloody wood


When Agamemnon cried aloud,


And let their liquid droppings fall


To stain the stiff dishonoured shroud.

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I'm not sure if that helped or just confused me even more... X3
 
Since I brought up this topic...


Does anyone know what the fuck is going on with modern music? I mean, who'd listen to that shit. People think I'm crazy for liking a bit of classic an or dubstep.
 
@Yaoke Saint


...[smothers under a pillow] shhhhh sleep child, it'll all be over soon. o-o


@StoneWolf18


Bruh, ikr? I mean, some rap and such is okay (Linkin Park and Fort Minor) but just... No... I listen to metal and rock and such. o-o
 
MMMMMMMMMPHHHHHH @Javax


help me StonerWolf420, HELP ME FROM SUFFOCATIO-- MMPH

Javax said:
@Yaoke Saint
...[smothers under a pillow] shhhhh sleep child, it'll all be over soon. o-o


@StoneWolf18


Bruh, ikr? I mean, some rap and such is okay (Linkin Park and Fort Minor) but just... No... I listen to metal and rock and such. o-o
I happen to have a Linkin Park tab open on Youtub right now... O.o how u know
 
Javax said:
@Yaoke Saint
...[smothers under a pillow] shhhhh sleep child, it'll all be over soon. o-o


@StoneWolf18


Bruh, ikr? I mean, some rap and such is okay (Linkin Park and Fort Minor) but just... No... I listen to metal and rock and such. o-o
Most rap today is some white guy trying his dick off go be black be failing miserably. I like a bit of rock, but I'm more electronic. Yet I can't really pinpoint one specific genre I like considering each has its ups and downs.
 
Yaoke Saint]MMMMMMMMMPHHHHHH [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/18294-javax/ said:
@Javax[/URL]
help me StonerWolf420, HELP ME FROM SUFFOCATIO-- MMPH


I happen to have a Linkin Park tab open on Youtub right now... O.o how u know
-rips pillow off- There as much more effective way to do this... -grabs bottle of Nightquil-
 
cOW CHOP UPLOADED MORE DARK SOULS


time to get sucked in to a 14 and a half minute long vidya
 
I mean...I have everything from this...


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And hell, even this in my watch later playlist...


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