Fantasy Immortal Hills University For Magical Aptitude

[1Lucker]

Not enough blood and gore, just my character trying to hold back the horde, defenses falling around him, buildings blowing up, and a lot of praying for group A to show up soon. I also made it so that many days passed in the Immortal hills before you came back.

 

[Thatguy1]

oh i dont know if you saw it or if i mentioned it in the original post but for 8 years in Immortal, 5 minutes passes in the real world. i did the math and that makes 1 day equal about 12-15 miliseconds

 

[1Lucker]

So we've been holding out for several decades? That certainly changes things.

 

[Thatguy1]

Time travel is funky like that :p

 

[1Lucker]

Post is up. Review it and tell me if I need to change anything.

 

[Thatguy1]

i liked it, though we're on Chapter 2, which includes a bit of backstory on how the character developed their magical powers, also i may have misread but is Dan caught up with the other three? i didn't see a reaction to Tell'sa

 

[1Lucker]

I don't think that he was with you guys right away, but instead met you a little bit later. So, another post for chapter 2? And should I include another 4th age segment?

 

[Thatguy1]

well i was thinking of wrapping 2 after Neptune's post, Chapter 3 will be called The March which is more backstory, less about powers and more about characters, some landscape/worldbuilding on the path to Immortal Hills and more character interactions. so you could either fix up this post or add the missing stuff to your chapter 3 post

 

[1Lucker]

Ill add the backstory to my chapter 3 post. It'll probably take too long at this point.

 

[fleetingfeathers]

So we've been holding out for several decades? That certainly changes things.

Ouch, the others be showing up super fashionably late So Ethan, Leo, and Ian will join Daniel and help out next?

Great post though 1Lucker , can’t wait for the rest of our characters to interact

 

[1Lucker]

Ouch, the others be showing up super fashionably late So Ethan, Leo, and Ian will join Daniel and help out next?

That's what I was going for. Ethan, Leo, and Ian should be able to help repel the attack in time to save the Immortal Hills from destruction.

 

[Thatguy1]

im thinking calvary will be swooping in during Chapter 3, though after Chapter 3 we'll be leaving this particular future on an open ended cliffhanger. I also have a reason as to why there are so many Followers Of Thoth, which will be revealed in due time

 

[fleetingfeathers]

im thinking calvary will be swooping in during Chapter 3, though after Chapter 3 we'll be leaving this particular future on an open ended cliffhanger. I also have a reason as to why there are so many Followers Of Thoth, which will be revealed in due time

Oooh can’t wait!

 

[Orin]

My post will be up later today, wanted to give our new comer a chance to post!

 

[Thatguy1]

ive got the perfect soundtrack for my next post here's a tease



thats just one song

 

[Thatguy1]

Hey fleet, i was thinking, do you think it'd be a good idea for Leo and Ethan to be an item in the future portion of the story, if not i was going to go with Tell'sa, just not sure which one is a better story beat

 

[Orin]

Tryna come up with a backstory that’s not generic af is killing me

 

[Thatguy1]

if you want to, you could use Humanity Forever, they're the kkk of this universe to like scare him into revealing his powers for the first time, and then use MAGIC (the government department) to rescue him and put him in witness protection

 

[Orin]

if you want to, you could use Humanity Forever, they're the kkk of this universe to like scare him into revealing his powers for the first time, and then use MAGIC (the government department) to rescue him and put him in witness protection

So Humanity forever hunt down kids with powers? That could be interesting, lemme see what I can cook up

 

[Thatguy1]

yeah, they use others with powers as kind of magical bloodhounds to hunt others, but they have a story reason for coming after our group

 

[Orin]

yeah, they use others with powers as kind of magical bloodhounds to hunt others, but they have a story reason for coming after our group

Ok so I think I’ll do that, is it ok if I say one of his parents or his brother was part of the group

 

[Thatguy1]

absolutely

 

[fleetingfeathers]

Ok so I think I’ll do that, is it ok if I say one of his parents or his brother was part of the group

OMG this is gonna be super heart-breaking for Ian, I love it

Hey fleet, i was thinking, do you think it'd be a good idea for Leo and Ethan to be an item in the future portion of the story, if not i was going to go with Tell'sa, just not sure which one is a better story beat

Tbh it’s hard to tell at this point in time if Leo and Ethan have chemistry or not because they haven’t interacted much, but I’m not opposed to the idea But in your point of view, do they seem compatible from what you’ve seen so far?

 

[Thatguy1]

oh did you think i was talking about the present? i was talking about the future subplot

 

[Orin]

yeah, they use others with powers as kind of magical bloodhounds to hunt others, but they have a story reason for coming after our group

Do they dress a certain way or have some sign they are part of the organization