Futuristic EDENSEED: The Genesis War

[Solid_Glass]

it is fix

 

[Solid_Glass]

and how soon? tonight?

 

[Sincerely Me]

Uhh.. Within 12 hours.. Haha. Don't think we're in the same time zone

 

[Sincerely Me]

@Windows98 how big is your EVE BTW? Forgot about that

 

[Solid_Glass]

60 feet.

 

[Sincerely Me]

Mind adding that to your profile?

 

[Solid_Glass]

nope. Give me a second.

 

[Soviet Panda]

That's taller then my Atlas...

 

[Solid_Glass]

Well I mean, the Poison Launcher is large. So I had to make the EVE big enough to support it.

 

[Soviet Panda]

It could be small and wide. It doesn't have to be taller, the hydraulics just have to be able to support and move it so they'd be bigger and stronger. Or we can bump your mech up to artillery.

 

[Solid_Glass]

Well, Another reason for being tall is. I'm being a bigger target, so I may draw more fire away from the rest of the team.


But I'll go change it.

 

[Soviet Panda]

Don't worry. Roc also has a shield, and the plating to actually be able to take a hit.

 

[Sincerely Me]

@Beowulf feeling a little challenged xD ? Height wise..

 

[Soviet Panda]

Maybw a little. I just don't think a support should be bigger then the tank.

 

[Sincerely Me]

RP haz started! Feel free to make your intros!

 

[Shadow]

Sorry, I know it already started, but (as much as it kills me *drama face*) can/should I change Zander to a girl? The testosterone is getting stifling......


@Sincerely Me

 

[Soviet Panda]

Since you have not introduced your character into the actual rp, I see no reason why not.

 

[Soviet Panda]

@Throne Trinity I'm afraid I'm going to have to say no to your character. The name appears to be lazily done, simply taking the first name and adding dy onto the end, and not really thought out. Take a name from some other character you have made. Connor McKinley is the name I usually use, that and Buras. Recently I've been using Gareth Bryne, but only a couple times. And I have problems with one of your EVE abilities, the invisibility. The Scouts I'm petting slide because only half or one side of their mech blends into the background and they can't do anything. Your EVE, on the other hand, goes completely invisible and can still fire it's weapons. Yes it can he seen using thermals, but I very much doubt the average soldier will have thermal goggles and will be close enough to see you. Get rid of that, and the EVE is good. You are artillery after all, you shouldn't be anywhere near where you might get shot at. And change the name. There were a few other things that bothered me, but I think they are actually rather trivial and not worth changing.

 

[Hanzax]

Rewrote the background story. Brian is now the son of a carpenter

 

[Soviet Panda]

Actuly, giving the CS a second look, the only real problems, aside from the characters name, is the EVE. The Hermes sandals, allowing your EVE to fly, I'm a bit iffy about. All of the other EVEs have an ability to boos manuverability, so I'm fine with it, but it's the actual flight I'm debating. But that is just me.

 

[theunderwolf]

On my end I would like a name change or at least a solid reason he has such a silly name and I take issue with both the cloak and the sandals. I think they're both really cool, but I don't think the belong on the same eve, as the result is a bit OP in practice.. On my part (pending Sincere and Beo's opinions) I think you can keep your abilities as is but delete either the sandals or the mantle. Also as a minor nitpick, just something that bugs me, I would like it if you pick a mythology having both arthurian and greek is cool, but I'm sure you could find equivalents in both mythologies and not have to split between them.

 

[Soviet Panda]

Get rid of atleast the mantle, and I'll be happy. And it better be a good reason for his name to be what it is for me to accept it.

 

[theunderwolf]

To be frank even if its a good reason Gwyn will probably tease him about it mercilessly

 

[Killorkiller]

r u guys still accepting?


@Sincerely Me

 

[Soviet Panda]

A definite maybe. I'm not 100% sure, but I feel like we are. It wouldn't hurt to make a character. Just don't do that whole text speech thing. It'll get on my nerves quick.