Divine Rising - OOC

I think a partial solution to this children vs adult idea is the entrance of a young adult female character, as a sort of mothering figure ^^
 
Flutterby said:
I think a partial solution to this children vs adult idea is the entrance of a young adult female character, as a sort of mothering figure ^^
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Something like that could work, yeah. My character, at least, has partially good relations with her parents so seeing a parental figure in the group would help her out.
 
Flutterby said:
I like this one. Can we keep it?
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Hell ya. Hell Yahaga. X'D Arpee arpee!


@Lioness075 I've RPed the only young kid in a group of just teens+adults before, she was a little frustrated by how they patronised her and acted like they could make decisions for her. Fo sho if all the characters are adults except yours, yours might lose a bit of their agency and that can be a major plotblocker. But I don't think you have to fear that from my older character, at least! 
 
@Yahaga Just started reading your CS and in your appearance paragraph, you mention your character worshipping Ra and knowing about Horus and stuff. Our characters aren't supposed to be aware of the gods they house or anything whatsoever. Not until they start awakening and all.
 
Lioness075 said:
@Yahaga Just started reading your CS and in your appearance paragraph, you mention your character worshipping Ra and knowing about Horus and stuff. Our characters aren't supposed to be aware of the gods they house or anything whatsoever. Not until they start awakening and all.
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He lived in egypt and still worshiped those deities. He's entirely unaware of the fact he is Horus. I mean, I can change it, but I thought it would be decent irony. I did put a note on the top of the sheet saying I'm likely to edit it, cause I wasn't sure I was happy with it or not.
 
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Yahaga said:
He lived in egypt and still worshiped those deities. He's entirely unaware of the fact he is Horus. I mean, I can change it, but I thought it would be decent irony.
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Yeah, sorry. I kinda jumped to a conclusion before reading everything. Anyways, that stuff is up to Silver so I can't make you change anything. It was just some criticism I came up with. ^^' It just seems like he's blissfully unaware, yet subconsciously also aware that a god is within him since he's worshipping the very god he houses. Like I said, that's Silver's call to make, though.
 
Lioness075 said:
Yeah, sorry. I kinda jumped to a conclusion before reading everything. Anyways, that stuff is up to Silver so I can't make you change anything. It was just some criticism I came up with. ^^' It just seems like he's blissfully unaware, yet subconsciously also aware that a god is within him since he's worshipping the very god he houses. Like I said, that's Silver's call to make, though.
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Yeah I also had a few concerns with that as well, don't worry. Again, I'm willing to change anything about my character if need be. I mean, that character on the sheet is like... my third draft of him.
 
Yahaga said:
Yeah I also had a few concerns with that as well, don't worry. Again, I'm willing to change anything about my character if need be. I mean, that character on the sheet is like... my third draft of him.
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Haha, I understand how that feels. I always post my CS and then find, like, 10 things wrong with it and edit it 3 more times before I like it. xD
 
Oh yeah, one thing to keep in mind: I don't know when Egyptians in history began migrating to Great Britain, but it might be something worth noting since I doubt there were many doing that in the 1800s without having some kinda studying reason for it. I know Silver really wants us to be historically correct for this RP.
 
Yahaga said:
My original idea was to make him elderly. I immediately decided that was a bad idea lol.
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Oh dear haha. Knowing Silver, there will be action moments where our characters need to fight. Although, if he were like Iroh in Avatar: The Last Airbender, then I wouldn't be too worried about him. xD
 
Lioness075 said:
Oh yeah, one thing to keep in mind: I don't know when Egyptians in history began migrating to Great Britain, but it might be something worth noting since I doubt there were many doing that in the 1800s without having some kinda studying reason for it. I know Silver really wants us to be historically correct for this RP.
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From what I read, there was a bit of political drama between "europe" and the ottoman empire around 1840. I just kind of took that and assumed there was some sort of interconnection between the two places. And of course "europe" could literally mean anywhere northwest of Egypt so its a pretty rough translation there.
 
Yahaga said:
From what I read, there was a bit of political drama between "europe" and the ottoman empire around 1840. I just kind of took that and assumed there was some sort of interconnection between the two places. And of course "europe" could literally mean anywhere northwest of Egypt so its a pretty rough translation there.
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Well, the British did kinda take control of Egypt at one point and rule over them. Idk if the ruling was a nice one so there could be reasons for Egyptians to greatly dislike the British as a result.
 
Lioness075 said:
Well, the British did kinda take control of Egypt at one point and rule over them. Idk if the ruling was a nice one so there could be reasons for Egyptians to greatly dislike the British as a result.
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Mhm. That's thirty years after the RP takes place, though. 1882 is the start of the British rule over Egypt, so at the moment, things might not be too bad.
 
Yahaga said:
Mhm. That's thirty years after the RP takes place, though. 1882 is the start of the British rule over Egypt, so at the moment, things might not be too bad.
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Ahh, okay. My history knowledge tends to be spotty at best, so I typically am not good at remembering any dates.
 
@LoneSniper87 I know your CS is a WIP, but unless you have claimed a god/goddess and gained permission from the GM (SilverFlight) then you have to make a human. Humans can only manipulate one of the four elements (fire, earth, water, air).


Also, I only mention this because I do not recall seeing you claiming a god/goddess so I'm just being safe here. >.<
 
Ooooh I did not know this yes I was making a human character so thanks for callin me out in that, I will fix that as I try to find a revolver to use and think up a good bio
 
LoneSniper87 said:
Ooooh I did not know this yes I was making a human character so thanks for callin me out in that, I will fix that as I try to find a revolver to use and think up a good bio
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Also, just a fair warning (probably one that just about any of us could use since we all make mistakes), just try to reread your CS throughout the editing process for general grammar/spelling mistakes. It's no fun to finalize your CS only to see all sorts of little mistakes mixed in with the awesomeness, yeah? ^^

Yahaga said:
Hey neither am I lol. I literally just had a page open looking at the history of Egypt while I was talking to you lol.
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Haha, right? That's me nearly every time history is mentioned for this RP. Google helps me so much. xD
 
Yeah I always do, and typing on IPad isn't exactly easy lol, and I will most likely settle on the Colt Peacemaker as it is the revolver I'm most familiar with
 
LoneSniper87 said:
Yeah I always do, and typing on IPad isn't exactly easy lol, and I will most likely settle on the Colt Peacemaker as it is the revolver I'm most familiar with
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I can understand that. I botch up my writing on my iPad and phone all the time. They can be buggers when it comes to those kinda mistakes.


Also, keep in mind that your character will need a valid reason for carrying such a weapon around (like, they're a police officer or guard of some kind in Great Britain or wherever they came from). Our characters can't just be randomly carrying around weapons for no good reason. :P


^ As mentioned above, also keep in mind years lol. History is a big deal for this RP, so you gotta put some research into making your character.
 
OH MY GOD SOMEONE KNOWS GUN BETTER THAN I DO!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH I NOW LOVE YOU AS A MUTUAL GUN LOVER, but back to the drawing board...
 
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