Faith Eliza Cord
Four Thousand Club
"Yes," Rikarah says steadily, unemotionally, continuing to hold Natalia's gaze. "That is what happened."
She can feel the same odd scrabbling sensation in her head, and she fights to tighten the shields of her mind, to keep any thoughts from being able to be seen...was it possible that Natalia not only could control shadows, but also read thoughts as Rikarah could? How strong of an empath or telepath was she...what was she seeing?
Rikarah was still too weakened to be able to tell how far into her thoughts Natalia was getting, and she reacted with defensive retaliation, both attempting to tighten her shields and also attempting to enter Natalia's thoughts herself, hoping that by doing so it would effectively knock her from her own mind. She couldn't let her see, she couldn't let her know one thing about herself that she didn't want Natalia to know...it was more than an invasion of her privacy, it could be dangerous to her.
It was a bad decision to try so soon to expend energy with her power, but Rikarah did so anyway, putting all her effort into pushing Natalia out, into penetrating her thoughts as well. It did not work as well as in the case of the men at the zoo. She saw only flashes of images that did not connect into a scene. A group of adolescent girls, their age or perhaps a bit younger, shouting and shoving in a school hallway, then outside on a sidewalk, namecalling, kicking her in the side, the rage and pain in Natalia's eyes as she struggles back against them. A man flashing a knowing, lustful look in Natalia's direction as Natalia tried to slip past him in a narrow apartment hallway, the way his lips curved as she passed. A man that Rikarah realized was her father, slamming a door...and then a woman she realized to be her mother, coming at her fast with a manic gleam in her eye, a knife held high in hand.
She does not realize she has either withdrawn or been ejected from Natalia's mind until she finds herself slumped back against the wall, breathing shallowly, her face again pallid and strained as Rikarah struggles to stay conscious. She does not understand Natalia's question or its meaning until several moments after it has been spoken, and then she tries to sit up, alert, though still unable to quite control her movements.
What had she seen? What did she know?
"My name," she says firmly, though her voice is hoarse, "is Rikarah." It is clear that this is the end of the subject with her; Susannah is no longer who she identifies as. She meets Natalia's eyes as if challenging her to argue the point.
(lol thanks Jo...I don't know what you're talking about though, your writing is always very impressive)
She can feel the same odd scrabbling sensation in her head, and she fights to tighten the shields of her mind, to keep any thoughts from being able to be seen...was it possible that Natalia not only could control shadows, but also read thoughts as Rikarah could? How strong of an empath or telepath was she...what was she seeing?
Rikarah was still too weakened to be able to tell how far into her thoughts Natalia was getting, and she reacted with defensive retaliation, both attempting to tighten her shields and also attempting to enter Natalia's thoughts herself, hoping that by doing so it would effectively knock her from her own mind. She couldn't let her see, she couldn't let her know one thing about herself that she didn't want Natalia to know...it was more than an invasion of her privacy, it could be dangerous to her.
It was a bad decision to try so soon to expend energy with her power, but Rikarah did so anyway, putting all her effort into pushing Natalia out, into penetrating her thoughts as well. It did not work as well as in the case of the men at the zoo. She saw only flashes of images that did not connect into a scene. A group of adolescent girls, their age or perhaps a bit younger, shouting and shoving in a school hallway, then outside on a sidewalk, namecalling, kicking her in the side, the rage and pain in Natalia's eyes as she struggles back against them. A man flashing a knowing, lustful look in Natalia's direction as Natalia tried to slip past him in a narrow apartment hallway, the way his lips curved as she passed. A man that Rikarah realized was her father, slamming a door...and then a woman she realized to be her mother, coming at her fast with a manic gleam in her eye, a knife held high in hand.
She does not realize she has either withdrawn or been ejected from Natalia's mind until she finds herself slumped back against the wall, breathing shallowly, her face again pallid and strained as Rikarah struggles to stay conscious. She does not understand Natalia's question or its meaning until several moments after it has been spoken, and then she tries to sit up, alert, though still unable to quite control her movements.
What had she seen? What did she know?
"My name," she says firmly, though her voice is hoarse, "is Rikarah." It is clear that this is the end of the subject with her; Susannah is no longer who she identifies as. She meets Natalia's eyes as if challenging her to argue the point.
(lol thanks Jo...I don't know what you're talking about though, your writing is always very impressive)