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as someone who plays thousand sons, I approve of this space wolf hatered.

however, Battle brother Mastodas, the hammered head reporting for duty. tech marine of the space sharks and veteran of the badab wars, reporting for duty
 
Ollieoftheveil Ollieoftheveil I am assuming it's a work in progress, so i won't say anything about the length. I will say stuff about things I've noticed

I may have to say no to the terminator armor, just cause I can't find anything supporting it. Also, can you define the number of servoarms and their functions? Do they have weapons attach to them? Also don't forget, I'm pretty sure tech marines can have turrents following them.
 
he would be a minimum of 3000 years old and is not a dreadnaught i mean that would make him the most veteran spacemarine in the imperium that is not in a dread
 
Ollieoftheveil Ollieoftheveil I get what your going for
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And i think it's awsome, but I kinda want some consistency in this rp, what little we have.

I'll let you have a terminator of the Space Sharks, if you make another space marine of the basic Specialty of a different chapter.
Or, you can just have teh terminator, but you can't have both in one.
 
no comment on him being twice the age of the current oldest known space marine?
Again, we have little concistency as is, as I can't figure my head around ages and how they fit in with each founding, in all honesty.

I mean, if it's a problem, i'd like that fixed, but for now it ain't my highest of concerns.
 
Again, we have little concistency as is, as I can't figure my head around ages and how they fit in with each founding, in all honesty.

I mean, if it's a problem, i'd like that fixed, but for now it ain't my highest of concerns.
On secound thought, yeah, I dunno if even the Chapter Master of the Space Shark is that old.
 
Ollieoftheveil Ollieoftheveil I am assuming it's a work in progress, so i won't say anything about the length. I will say stuff about things I've noticed

I may have to say no to the terminator armor, just cause I can't find anything supporting it. Also, can you define the number of servoarms and their functions? Do they have weapons attach to them? Also don't forget, I'm pretty sure tech marines can have turrents following them.
what do you mean turrents?
Yeah it's a work in progress, everything is just an idea so far.
However I've seen models of tech marine terminators.

I have 4 servo arms, one that works like a massive spiked hammer, a regular servoarm that have chainsaws on the ends, a medicae/Torture mechadendrite similar to the medicae/torture mechadendrites of chaos forces but isn't heretical. And lastly I have the manipulator mechadentrite.

I go with these because I feel personally that they are the best for a tech marine from the blood thirsty space sharks/carcharodon Astra.
 
what do you mean turrents?
Yeah it's a work in progress, everything is just an idea so far.
However I've seen models of tech marine terminators.

I have 4 servo arms, one that works like a massive spiked hammer, a regular servoarm that have chainsaws on the ends, a medicae/Torture mechadendrite similar to the medicae/torture mechadendrites of chaos forces but isn't heretical. And lastly I have the manipulator mechadentrite.

I go with these because I feel personally that they are the best for a tech marine from the blood thirsty space sharks/carcharodon Astra.
Give me proof in the lore somewhere and I might allow it, cause I'm reading a lot of counters to the idea of a tech marine in terminator armor.

Also, good on the servo arm, just put it in the wargear tab.
 
Ollieoftheveil Ollieoftheveil I get what your going for
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And i think it's awsome, but I kinda want some consistency in this rp, what little we have.

I'll let you have a terminator of the Space Sharks, if you make another space marine of the basic Specialty of a different chapter.
Or, you can just have teh terminator, but you can't have both in one.
the terminator armour can be scrapped and was just an idea. my main idea was a carcharodon. if a carcharodon tech priest is not a good idea, I can scrap my character and start from new. my only requirement is to be a carcharodon.
 
the Carcharodons have been around for at least 8,000 years given they served in Vengeance from the Void (ca. M32) meaning somone as old as the chapter is by far the oldest none chaos marine not in a dreadn
 
what do you mean turrents?
Yeah it's a work in progress, everything is just an idea so far.
However I've seen models of tech marine terminators.

I have 4 servo arms, one that works like a massive spiked hammer, a regular servoarm that have chainsaws on the ends, a medicae/Torture mechadendrite similar to the medicae/torture mechadendrites of chaos forces but isn't heretical. And lastly I have the manipulator mechadentrite.

I go with these because I feel personally that they are the best for a tech marine from the blood thirsty space sharks/carcharodon Astra.
Btw, if I sound rude, I do apologize. THis is just how I am when I'm "critiquing" character she ets.
Honestly, I just want things balanced, but I wanna give you as much leeway so you can have fun purging later.
 
the terminator armour can be scrapped and was just an idea. my main idea was a carcharodon. if a carcharodon tech priest is not a good idea, I can scrap my character and start from new. my only requirement is to be a carcharodon.
I'm not complaining on the tech marine and the chapter, my main concern is that the tech marine in terminator armor. Everything else we can work on.
 
and him beign nearly 10,000 years old is ignored i am surprised he can even move space marines sadly do age
 
I do not see how my character is unbalanced. he is only powerful in close combat and posses no ranged weaponry at all.
Again, the problem was not him or even most of his weapons. THe problem was the potential terminator armor.

Also, this what i meant by turret:
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your chapter the Carcharodons were recorded to have taken part in a war in m 32 8,000 years ago you said he is as old as the chapter
 
Again, the problem was not him or even most of his weapons. THe problem was the potential terminator armor.
I will probably not have a turret. because that would mean my character would be pretty immobile. maybe for certain mission who requires it? but mainly he will run and slash xenos to pieces across the battlefield and repair broken vehicles And other tech.
 
I will probably not have a turret. because that would mean my character would be pretty immobile. maybe for certain mission who requires it? but mainly he will run and slash xenos to pieces across the battlefield and repair broken vehicles And other tech.
Probably, you can list all the weapons he may potentially have, but you are only going in with what is needed. I mean, the inital strike is going to involve a Dreadnaught in the mix, sooooo...

Do what you want though, I'll let you know if it's fee-sable. Again, I think most other equipment on him is fine, long as it's not terminator.
 

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