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He still won XDI will eat you
Dead, but a winner
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He still won XDI will eat you
It wasn't really a competition. It was just a bird fight between you and me.
-w- Or so you think... tee hee (I'm forever BugDozer's x3)I can't come back from that
Oni won, he gets the girl, congratz
He still won XDI will eat you
Dead, but a winner
Lmao I don't think any dead man celebrates his victory
This is exactly why I do this. Letting you all have fun here, inspire each other and make the simple story I have into something epic.Purize I wanted to pm you but seeing as I cannot do that for reasons unknown,
Hi, it's Lark and I tried to contain myself but, I cannot. My love for you is too great. Your writing is just amazing! I haven't had the chance to read Kioko's bio, but I read it just now. Maybe 3 times. It inspired me to go and edit Luruke's cs, because I was suddenly aware of how it was lacking.
Your writing style is so picturesque, it's like looking at a chinese scroll. The way you put emphasis on the little things Kioko likes really gives me an idea of what sort of person she is, and how much she values peace and nature. It all seemed so personal, and so natural. At first, in her bio, you give a short introduction, and then bring us into a specific scene, like a camera zooming in. I had to go back a few times to see when and how exactly you did this, it was that subtle.
You tell us her life, and in doind so, how she came to be the person she is today. The scene with her sister was so intense, I swear to you, I got chills. I'm really sorry if I'm being too much, I just love your writing so much! It's so inspiring! *cries* and then, while you tell us that she pretty much hated her family, when she came to find them, they were gone. You made a turnaround, where she feels possible guilt, suspense with the amazingly creepy ending that we can all guess what happened, but just enough left out that we don't know the whole story. To top it off, the letter left no sign that her sister was currently fighting a big black spider, meaning it was a surprise attack. That her sister had to defend or die to, leaving no time to write anything else.
AAAAGH IM SORRY I wrote so much q v q I regret a lot now that I read yours. When I first wrote my cs, I approached it like my character was a meme, waiting to be explored. Now I'm left with a meme, and you have a deep, well-developed character that you brought to life. Okay I'll leave now, take my love and admiration, I'll leave it right here. *scurries off into the darkness*
I mean if other people end up reading it, it happens, I guess... Hopefully you're okay with this, Purize?
Lol! Yaaaay! I'm glad you liked it~This is exactly why I do this. Letting you all have fun here, inspire each other and make the simple story I have into something epic.
I also think your backstory was amazing Purize I swear I had half my fist in my mouth during the entire final fight.
OMG YESSSSSYou guys are all using the notes exactly as I had intended it. None of you can do anything wrong and I love you.
Also, Bacon had an ingenious idea, what about a discord for Beast Souls?
Which question?
I was tagged in something physics related... don't know whether to run through it with my equations booklet or not
You can if you want lol I kinda got carried away writing that post. But the math is pretty simple.
You're close. Its physically impossible to put all of ones weight behind a single swipe. Also we dont actually have any evidence of how fast polar bear swipes are in the post. 7.5/10 maths, needs more research.
Sounds good to me. Still need a name for that metal thoughBugDozer73 if you make that history specific to the species of Hawk Shikoba is I'll post it as canon lore.