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Purize Purize I wanted to pm you but seeing as I cannot do that for reasons unknown,
Hi, it's Lark and I tried to contain myself but, I cannot. My love for you is too great. Your writing is just amazing! I haven't had the chance to read Kioko's bio, but I read it just now. Maybe 3 times. It inspired me to go and edit Luruke's cs, because I was suddenly aware of how it was lacking.
Your writing style is so picturesque, it's like looking at a chinese scroll. The way you put emphasis on the little things Kioko likes really gives me an idea of what sort of person she is, and how much she values peace and nature. It all seemed so personal, and so natural. At first, in her bio, you give a short introduction, and then bring us into a specific scene, like a camera zooming in. I had to go back a few times to see when and how exactly you did this, it was that subtle.
You tell us her life, and in doind so, how she came to be the person she is today. The scene with her sister was so intense, I swear to you, I got chills. I'm really sorry if I'm being too much, I just love your writing so much! It's so inspiring! *cries* and then, while you tell us that she pretty much hated her family, when she came to find them, they were gone. You made a turnaround, where she feels possible guilt, suspense with the amazingly creepy ending that we can all guess what happened, but just enough left out that we don't know the whole story. To top it off, the letter left no sign that her sister was currently fighting a big black spider, meaning it was a surprise attack. That her sister had to defend or die to, leaving no time to write anything else.
AAAAGH IM SORRY I wrote so much q v q I regret a lot now that I read yours. When I first wrote my cs, I approached it like my character was a meme, waiting to be explored. Now I'm left with a meme, and you have a deep, well-developed character that you brought to life. Okay I'll leave now, take my love and admiration, I'll leave it right here. *scurries off into the darkness*

I mean if other people end up reading it, it happens, I guess... Hopefully you're okay with this, Purize?
 
Purize Purize I wanted to pm you but seeing as I cannot do that for reasons unknown,
Hi, it's Lark and I tried to contain myself but, I cannot. My love for you is too great. Your writing is just amazing! I haven't had the chance to read Kioko's bio, but I read it just now. Maybe 3 times. It inspired me to go and edit Luruke's cs, because I was suddenly aware of how it was lacking.
Your writing style is so picturesque, it's like looking at a chinese scroll. The way you put emphasis on the little things Kioko likes really gives me an idea of what sort of person she is, and how much she values peace and nature. It all seemed so personal, and so natural. At first, in her bio, you give a short introduction, and then bring us into a specific scene, like a camera zooming in. I had to go back a few times to see when and how exactly you did this, it was that subtle.
You tell us her life, and in doind so, how she came to be the person she is today. The scene with her sister was so intense, I swear to you, I got chills. I'm really sorry if I'm being too much, I just love your writing so much! It's so inspiring! *cries* and then, while you tell us that she pretty much hated her family, when she came to find them, they were gone. You made a turnaround, where she feels possible guilt, suspense with the amazingly creepy ending that we can all guess what happened, but just enough left out that we don't know the whole story. To top it off, the letter left no sign that her sister was currently fighting a big black spider, meaning it was a surprise attack. That her sister had to defend or die to, leaving no time to write anything else.
AAAAGH IM SORRY I wrote so much q v q I regret a lot now that I read yours. When I first wrote my cs, I approached it like my character was a meme, waiting to be explored. Now I'm left with a meme, and you have a deep, well-developed character that you brought to life. Okay I'll leave now, take my love and admiration, I'll leave it right here. *scurries off into the darkness*

I mean if other people end up reading it, it happens, I guess... Hopefully you're okay with this, Purize?
Is it not letting you pm me? o-o
 
Oh shit he's right. I can't PM you...
Maybe I have it blocked or something....? That's really weird. I'll go check my settings. It lets me pm people...

Edit: I fixed it. For some reason, it was set to where no one could start a conversation with me xD
 
Can I respond to Larke's post? Or should I wait for Onikmey and/or Fluffy to go first...?
 
Can I respond to Larke's post? Or should I wait for Onikmey and/or Fluffy to go first...?

I mean, im fine with it just being larke there. The forests are rather large. No need for us all to show up at the same spot by coincidence
 
Purize Purize I wanted to pm you but seeing as I cannot do that for reasons unknown,
Hi, it's Lark and I tried to contain myself but, I cannot. My love for you is too great. Your writing is just amazing! I haven't had the chance to read Kioko's bio, but I read it just now. Maybe 3 times. It inspired me to go and edit Luruke's cs, because I was suddenly aware of how it was lacking.
Your writing style is so picturesque, it's like looking at a chinese scroll. The way you put emphasis on the little things Kioko likes really gives me an idea of what sort of person she is, and how much she values peace and nature. It all seemed so personal, and so natural. At first, in her bio, you give a short introduction, and then bring us into a specific scene, like a camera zooming in. I had to go back a few times to see when and how exactly you did this, it was that subtle.
You tell us her life, and in doind so, how she came to be the person she is today. The scene with her sister was so intense, I swear to you, I got chills. I'm really sorry if I'm being too much, I just love your writing so much! It's so inspiring! *cries* and then, while you tell us that she pretty much hated her family, when she came to find them, they were gone. You made a turnaround, where she feels possible guilt, suspense with the amazingly creepy ending that we can all guess what happened, but just enough left out that we don't know the whole story. To top it off, the letter left no sign that her sister was currently fighting a big black spider, meaning it was a surprise attack. That her sister had to defend or die to, leaving no time to write anything else.
AAAAGH IM SORRY I wrote so much q v q I regret a lot now that I read yours. When I first wrote my cs, I approached it like my character was a meme, waiting to be explored. Now I'm left with a meme, and you have a deep, well-developed character that you brought to life. Okay I'll leave now, take my love and admiration, I'll leave it right here. *scurries off into the darkness*

I mean if other people end up reading it, it happens, I guess... Hopefully you're okay with this, Purize?

XD if you keep complimenting my girlfriend we’re going to have a beak battle lol
 
XD if you keep complimenting my girlfriend we’re going to have a beak battle lol

Man why are none of you nice enough to let me have a pretend pm, just give me some public privacy why don't you

And oh teh big guns come out XD
Where doth thou suggesteth this battle of beaks to occur? In the forest at sundown? I'll be waiting. I'll be beakful.
 
XD if you keep complimenting my girlfriend we’re going to have a beak battle lol

Man why are none of you nice enough to let me have a pretend pm, just give me some public privacy why don't you

And oh teh big guns come out XD
Where doth thou suggesteth this battle of beaks to occur? In the forest at sundown? I'll be waiting. I'll be beakful.

You boutta lose a lotta feathers, feathers.
 
XD if you keep complimenting my girlfriend we’re going to have a beak battle lol

Man why are none of you nice enough to let me have a pretend pm, just give me some public privacy why don't you

And oh teh big guns come out XD
Where doth thou suggesteth this battle of beaks to occur? In the forest at sundown? I'll be waiting. I'll be beakful.

3:30, the playground. Be there or be square
 

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