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Fantasy Valendor Kingdom |Strict RP|

NicotinePuffs said:
This has possibly been one of the most weirdest nights I have not slept through. I swear if I wasn't so jacked on sugar right now I would have just passed that whole thing off as an elaborate dream. But hey I got pizza so I'm A-Okay (pizza fixes a lot of things tbh)
xD while the only thing on my mind is what kind of fanart you'll do for Atrian
 
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xD while the only thing on my mind is what kind of fanart you'll do for Atrian

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Oh yea! Do you just want me to wing this thing or got any specific situations/RP moments. I kind of want to see their relationship developing a bit more and currently Aten seems all sorts of on-guard against Hadrian.
 
NicotinePuffs said:
Oh yea! Do you just want me to wing this thing or got any specific situations/RP moments. I kind of want to see their relationship developing a bit more and currently Aten seems all sorts of on-guard against Hadrian.
he is xD considering Hadrian just subdued the demon he depends on(since he had no one or nothing to act as his bad conscience)


What do you think tho? @WhosJack
 
Past Paradise Tears]he is xD considering Hadrian just subdued the demon he depends on(since he had no one or nothing to act as his bad conscience) What do you think tho? [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/38279-whosjack/ said:
@WhosJack[/URL]
I'm going to quote my character on this one and say that it is a pretty interesting concept. That he grew up with with these two people fighting for 'wrong' and 'right' that he actually starts depending on the demon to tell him whats not morally okay. Then again it's causing all sorts of problems for him, mainly the headaches and shaking knees. But I haven't forgotten the fact that Aten is also human so he must have some concepts himself without completely relying on both of them...basically what I'm saying here is that I have no clue. Steer me in the right direction here before I pummel this ship into anymore rocks.
 
WhosJack said:
I'm going to quote my character on this one and say that it is a pretty interesting concept. That he grew up with with these two people fighting for 'wrong' and 'right' that he actually starts depending on the demon to tell him whats not morally okay. Then again it's causing all sorts of problems for him, mainly the headaches and shaking knees. But I haven't forgotten the fact that Aten is also human so he must have some concepts himself without completely relying on both of them...basically what I'm saying here is that I have no clue. Steer me in the right direction here before I pummel this ship into anymore rocks.
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I applaud you good sir. I would honestly have just rage quit and completely sunk the ship like an idiot. #saveatrian2016
 
WhosJack said:
I'm going to quote my character on this one and say that it is a pretty interesting concept. That he grew up with with these two people fighting for 'wrong' and 'right' that he actually starts depending on the demon to tell him whats not morally okay. Then again it's causing all sorts of problems for him, mainly the headaches and shaking knees. But I haven't forgotten the fact that Aten is also human so he must have some concepts himself without completely relying on both of them...basically what I'm saying here is that I have no clue. Steer me in the right direction here before I pummel this ship into anymore rocks.
Well, if he had learned to control his angel side enough to just restrict the demon enough, he probably wouldn't have those problems but he'd been hiding what he is since he was adopted into the palace.


I just know that after depending so long on the demon, Aten is pretty much like a domesticated animal being chucked into the wild without any knowledge of his own to some extent. He'll definitely look lost and confused and unsure about stuff. The demon will be pissed at Hadrian, that much I know xD
 
so, probably will show distrust for a little bit before letting his guard down completely around Hadrian, without the demon anyway(that could epically screw over the demon because it doesn't want to make Aten sad if he does decide to kill people, he wouldn't attack Hadrian) @WhosJack
 
NicotinePuffs said:
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I applaud you good sir. I would honestly have just rage quit and completely sunk the ship like an idiot. #saveatrian2016
And yet I think I may need the help of a co-captain on this voyage. Would you do me a solid and throw me a life raft?

@WhosJack[/URL]
In conclusion I just need to play this right until the demon wakes up. The bad news is that there's a time limit. The second bad news is I have no idea how to approach this. @NicotinePuffs Now would be a nice time for a paddle.
 
WhosJack said:
And yet I think I may need the help of a co-captain on this voyage. Would you do me a solid and throw me a life raft?
In conclusion I just need to play this right until the demon wakes up. The bad news is that there's a time limit. The second bad news is I have no idea how to approach this. @NicotinePuffs Now would be a nice time for a paddle.
DEAR LORD I don't know whether to be honored or dying cuz you're literally putting me on the spot (-.-; ;)


Oke oke wait give me a minute to read things over and consult with my team. And by team I mean my stacks of yaoi manga.
 
SinningSloth said:
Quick question for all y'all, any idea on a good way to throw my character into the mix?
Intro with the King maybe? Since Alex is a 'business savvy' type of character I'm kind of imagining that she'd want to be talking to the big honcho himself.

*mutters* those sirens better back the fuuuuuck up.
 
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WhosJack said:
And yet I think I may need the help of a co-captain on this voyage. Would you do me a solid and throw me a life raft?
In conclusion I just need to play this right until the demon wakes up. The bad news is that there's a time limit. The second bad news is I have no idea how to approach this. @NicotinePuffs Now would be a nice time for a paddle.
he should probably get Aten to trust him first xD

NicotinePuffs said:
DEAR LORD I don't know whether to be honored or dying cuz you're literally putting me on the spot (-.-; ;)
Oke oke wait give me a minute to read things over and consult with my team. And by team I mean my stacks of yaoi manga.
our poor characters, we're plotting against them with everything we've got

NicotinePuffs said:
Intro with the King maybe? Since Alex is a 'business savvy' type of character I'm kind of imagining that she'd want to be talking to the big honcho himself.
*mutters* those sirens better back the fuuuuuck up.
but I think they want to meet one of their own.. why don't we throw the Aten part of Atrian to the sirens and sail off into the sunset?


Aten: I hate you ppl.....
 
@WhosJack ALRIGHT OKE I THINK I GOT SOMETHING. First things first, you need to settle trust issues cuz that's the big red pimple on the face of this operation. And you know what they say right, 'honesty is the best policy'! Bullshit. Flip that you're going to literally screw yourself over if the words 'demon' and 'entity' passes through your lips. The big hit is to answer with a half truth//take the focus off whatever weird hocus pocus you just did. For example: "I'm not sure what you mean...are you feeling well?" BAM vague shit with an upfront question.


I re-read the text over again and am COMPLETELY assuming that Hadrian's hocus pocus part was meant to be invisible ('translucent' or 'transparent' whatever word you used you big shot scholar). Play it off m8. Imagine a soccer ball in front of you and you're going to take that damn thing and kick it into the goal. Soccer ball=Hadrian Goal=Demon now that we got that shit labeled MOVING ON. This part is going to be tricky I'm not gonna lie. The demon hates you. I don't know how else to tell you this but you fucked it up by trying to suppress the crazy beesh.


BUT YOU'VE STILL GOT A CHANCE. Hadrian has the powers of the black diamond as far as I'm concerned that should have him be a beacon of dark energy to any creature remotely in affinity with the dark. Demons would love to fester in whatever dark stuff you have spewing out of you. Now since I ain't the demon stuck in Aten's body I gotta consult with Sir/Mam @Past Paradise Tears on this one. How likely would demon boy like the chance to have harmony with Aten's angel side? To finally be able to work together instead of constantly trying to fight over a body they could both potentially share with equal footing?
 
I'm a she xD


And the demon probably wouldn't mind it as it would stop Aten from possibly getting into a lethal situation(if the angel and demon clash hard enough, Aten could end up dying but he has just about the minimal control over the angel part of himself)


though that should probably be consulted in rp with the demon himself. he probably wouldn't mind becoming a single entity with Aten and make him part demon too(angel/demon/merman/human)
 
NicotinePuffs said:
@WhosJack ALRIGHT OKE I THINK I GOT SOMETHING. First things first, you need to settle trust issues cuz that's the big red pimple on the face of this operation. And you know what they say right, 'honesty is the best policy'! Bullshit. Flip that you're going to literally screw yourself over if the words 'demon' and 'entity' passes through your lips. The big hit is to answer with a half truth//take the focus off whatever weird hocus pocus you just did. For example: "I'm not sure what you mean...are you feeling well?" BAM vague shit with an upfront question.
I re-read the text over again and am COMPLETELY assuming that Hadrian's hocus pocus part was meant to be invisible ('translucent' or 'transparent' whatever word you used you big shot scholar). Play it off m8. Imagine a soccer ball in front of you and you're going to take that damn thing and kick it into the goal. Soccer ball=Hadrian Goal=Demon now that we got that shit labeled MOVING ON. This part is going to be tricky I'm not gonna lie. The demon hates you. I don't know how else to tell you this but you fucked it up by trying to suppress the crazy beesh.


BUT YOU'VE STILL GOT A CHANCE. Hadrian has the powers of the black diamond as far as I'm concerned that should have him be a beacon of dark energy to any creature remotely in affinity with the dark. Demons would love to fester in whatever dark stuff you have spewing out of you. Now since I ain't the demon stuck in Aten's body I gotta consult with Sir/Mam @Past Paradise Tears on this one. How likely would demon boy like the chance to have harmony with Aten's angel side? To finally be able to work together instead of constantly trying to fight over a body they could both potentially share with equal footing?
That was...enlightening and very well written. Your guess was correct about the invisible 'hocus pocus' and was nearly stumped when Aten turned back and declared that Hadrian had done something. I see what you're trying to say though and would like to ask if I can rephrase your example to:


"Done something?" The incredulity in his voice was convincing, most likely because it wasn't far from the truth. Could the angel have seen what he had done? Surely Hadrian had been careful enough but a nagging thought wondered if he had underestimated the affinity between Aten and the demon itself. At this point could it have left enough of a lasting impression inside him that he would be unsettled by the silence? Whatever the reason he had to quickly regain control over the situation. "You look a little pale...are you sure you're feeling alright?"
 
@WhosJack[/URL] ??? OF COURSE YOU DIDN'T BECAUSE THIS IS TEXT ya ya I know. But there you go pal your prayers have been answered.


ALSO-

WhosJack said:
That was...enlightening and very well written. Your guess was correct about the invisible 'hocus pocus' and was nearly stumped when Aten turned back and declared that Hadrian had done something. I see what you're trying to say though and would like to ask if I can rephrase your example to:
"Done something?" The incredulity in his voice was convincing, most likely because it wasn't far from the truth. Could the angel have seen what he had done? Surely Hadrian had been careful enough but a nagging thought wondered if he had underestimated the affinity between Aten and the demon itself. At this point could it have left enough of a lasting impression inside him that he would be unsettled by the silence? Whatever the reason he had to quickly regain control over the situation. "You look a little pale...are you sure you're feeling alright?"
YES. Yep that is good stuff right there. Just send that in and forget about adding anymore stuff in. I know how you like to keep your posts blocky but you gotta just send in the essentials to speed this ship along alright Capt.?
 
NicotinePuffs said:
A MERGE WONDERFUL. DID YOU HEAR THAT @WhosJack ??? OF COURSE YOU DIDN'T BECAUSE THIS IS TEXT ya ya I know. But there you go pal your prayers have been answered.
YES. Yep that is good stuff right there. Just send that in and forget about adding anymore stuff in. I know how you like to keep your posts blocky but you gotta just send in the essentials to speed this ship along alright Capt.?
Thank you ^^ but I'm not sure I'm following you on the first bit, sorry ^^;
 
Funny thing is that William knows a guy that could probably make that happen, but also knows how dangerous it is. lol


Anywho, I have returned from sleep, and it has occurred to me I need to discuss with you guys about what point to have William make himself fully known without it seeming forced. @Past Paradise Tears @WhosJack
 
WhosJack said:
Thank you ^^ but I'm not sure I'm following you on the first bit, sorry ^^;
Don't worry about it you sweet summer child. What I'm saying is that after the demon wakes up you need to immediately start talking negotiations. Tell them that you had (<<EMPHASIZE THAT SHIT) to put them to sleep in order to have the angel focused and it's guard completely down for you to gain it's trust. Then bit by conniving bit break the strict morals it built up right down to a pile of rubble. If by some miracle it hasn't clawed your face off yet go on to stage 2 and explain that if it could play along (whispering 'sinful' suggestions if you know what I mean) then in the future it would no longer need to fight for control within Aten's body. That if Hadrian succeeded in his plans then he could fully merge with Aten and essentially not have to be just a voice screaming in his ear.


@Past Paradise Tears MISS does the above sound like a good idea??


OH YEA I FORGOT TO MENTION THOUGH @WhosJack You're gonna have to fuse more of your hocus pocus into him after Aten passes out after demon boy wakes up so you better be in a private setting.
 
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NicotinePuffs said:
Don't worry about it you sweet summer child. What I'm saying is that after the demon wakes up you need to immediately start talking negotiations. Tell them that you had (<<EMPHASIZE THAT SHIT) to put them to sleep in order to have the angel focused and it's guard completely down for you to gain it's trust. Then bit by conniving bit break the strict morals it built up right down to a pile of rubble. If by some miracle it hasn't clawed your face off yet go on to stage 2 and explain that if it could play along (whispering 'sinful' suggestions if you know what I mean) then in the future it would no longer need to fight for control within Aten's body. That if Hadrian succeeded in his plans then he could fully merge with Aten and essentially not have to be just a voice screaming in his ear.
@Past Paradise Tears MISS does the above sound like a good idea??


OH YEA I FORGOT TO MENTION THOUGH @WhosJack You're gonna have to fuse more of your hocus pocus into him after Aten passes out after demon boy wakes up so you better be in a private setting.
you guys really want to break Aten, don't you xD tbh they wouldn't need that much convincing. Aten and the demon would agree to it rather quickly(the angel side of Aten isn't it's own entity tho, it's just like a second immune system that tries to subconsciously protect Aten from darkness since Aten can't control his angel abilities to their full potential) Aten and the demon were 1/4 already merged though, Aten could use the demon's dark magic without the demon's control @WhosJack
 
NicotinePuffs said:
OH FOR FUUUUU I forgot about William loitering around! Jfc @WhosJack You're so damn lucky you made your hocus pocus stuff invisible or else all of my hard work would have gone up in flames CUZ YOU OPENLY POOFED IN FRONT OF SOMEONE. but it's cool, im good, im breathing
Now you have me wondering if I should have William position himself to notice what's happening and immediately say nope and appear to do something. lol

@WhosJack[/URL]
Interesting. So it's not two literal souls in the same body, just two parts of him that manifested as separate personalities? Or is it more complicated then that?
 
[QUOTE="Torma Ximnus]Now you have me wondering if I should have William position himself to notice what's happening and immediately say nope and appear to do something. lol

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Lord almighty spare me the need to have to make a character to TURN WILLIAM INTO A CHEESE BURGER. (pls don't do it man my brain is too fried from trying to come up with reasonable theories).
 

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