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[Rage]

Name:Lynch


Age: 14


Gender: Male


Species: Human


Appearance:

Except make him a bit more wider and Muscular and give him a Raiders Cap, Football gloves and a Seattle Sea-hawks Jersey with 24 and LYNCH on it


Personality: Tough, Very Honesty and a Real OG


Lynch is the kid that you don't want to mess. He is a very Honesty Person, telling how things should go down and also tell them no to involve him. He is a Thug that will Knock you Out if you annoy him Greatly or are just Plain Stupid. He Loves no one and Hates being called a Kid.


Backstory: WHAT IS YO PUNK SELF ASKING ALL THESE QUESTIONS CUZ


... He don't want to talk about it


Powers: Lynch has no Magical Power but his Gloves and Jersey are somehow magically which give him unique attacks


Knock out: Heavy Clubbing Punch could KO alot of things


Get out the Way: Lynch will Run at you and Slam right into you, could send you flying or Just lay you on you Butt.


Stiffest Arm: Lynch will Put Arm out and Shove you out of his way with Abnormally Physical Strength.


Too Hard to Take Down: Lynch is Very Strong and Tough which make Hard to Stop as Row and Rows of attacks are need to Move Him.


I'M TOO STRONG: Lynch has so much strength that his Hp is Massive.


Stats:


Hp: 60


Attack: 50


Defence: 39


Extra:


Normal Song


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for reason he can hear other people theme songs and make Others Listen to His.

 

[Birdsie]

Name:Lynch
Age: 14


Gender: Male


Species: Human


Appearance:

Except make him a bit more wider and Muscular and give him a Raiders Cap, Football gloves and a Seattle Sea-hawks Jersey with 24 and LYNCH on it


Personality: Tough, Very Honesty and a Real OG


Lynch is the kid that you don't want to mess. He is a very Honesty Person, telling how things should go down and also tell them no to involve him. He is a Thug that will Knock you Out if you annoy him Greatly or are just Plain Stupid. He Loves no one and Hates being called a Kid.


Backstory: WHAT IS YO PUNK SELF ASKING ALL THESE QUESTIONS CUZ


... He don't want to talk about it


Powers: Lynch has no Magical Power but his Gloves and Jersey are somehow magically which give him unique attacks


Knock out: Heavy Clubbing Punch could KO alot of things


Get out the Way: Lynch will Run at you and Slam right into you, could send you flying or Just lay you on you Butt.


Stiffest Arm: Lynch will Put Arm out and Shove you out of his way with Abnormally Physical Strength.


Too Hard to Take Down: Lynch is Very Strong and Tough which make Hard to Stop as Row and Rows of attacks are need to Move Him.


I'M TOO STRONG: Lynch has so much strength that his Hp is Massive.


BeastMode: Beast Mode is a Form which makes Lynch's Soul turn this Green. As a Result his attack are Stronger and More Powerfully


Stats:


Hp: 120


Attack: 50


Defence: 30


BeastMode:


Hp: 300


Attack: 100


Defence: 70


Extra:


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Battle Song


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As Undertale explains, humans do not possess magic in any form. While I can allow him for a magic item like the gloves, don't make them that overpowered. I'd say delete BeastMode. Also, his Stats are way too overpowered for a human, gloves or not. 120 HP is above the final HP of the genocide run, lower it. Attack and Defence can stay, they're within reasonable amounts.


I can clearly understand what you're going for, so I'll allow the high stats and stuff, considering he's older and "tougher" than Frisk in all ways, but still: These are way too high.

 

[Rage]

As Undertale explains, humans do not possess magic in any form. While I can allow him for a magic item like the gloves, don't make them that overpowered. I'd say delete BeastMode. Also, his Stats are way too overpowered for a human, gloves or not. 120 HP is above the final HP of the genocide run, lower it. Attack and Defence can stay, they're within reasonable amounts.
I can clearly understand what you're going for, so I'll allow the high stats and stuff, considering he's older and "tougher" than Frisk in all ways, but still: These are way too high.

is that better?

 

[Birdsie]

is that better?

Yep.

 

[Rage]

Yep.

So we with the Character and He is Accepted?

 

[Birdsie]

So we with the Character and He is Accepted?

If you actually read what said above the sheet, you'd know that a like from me: means he's accepted.

 

[Rage]

If you actually read what said above the sheet, you'd know that a like from me: means he's accepted.

........ you a awesome guy bro just telling you.

 

[Rage]

Name:
Akuma


Age:


24


Gender:


Female


Species:


Demon


Appearance:

Personality:


She is shown to be a sadistic demon who collects the souls of monsters and trap them in her masks or dolls to act as her slaves for the rest for eternity. It is said that if a couple were to pass by at her house, Akuma would be jealous and so she would appear out of nowhere and stab them to death, which is why many people fear her.


Backstory:


Before a long time ago, she was once a kind, beautiful and friendly demon on which many courted her to be their wife, however she came from a strict family of demons who didint allow any of those who courted her to marry her, as they would expect four attributes of their daughter's husband: Strong, Courageous, Invulnerable and Determined. One day a human fell and instantly she fell madly in love with him, as she spied on him and noticed that he slayed all of the dangerous monsters that came on his path, as the days went by she finally met him and confessed to him. At first he felt confused and disgusted, but later on he began to accept who she really is and fell in love with him, as well. One day Akuma brought him to her house and introduced her to the family, to which her parents agreed and so they now start their plan, however the only rule that will be implemented is that no stranger may enter the wedding for the sake of protecting the human from Asgore. The wedding was now set, as it took place in a temple hidden deep inside the woods, guests from the family arrived and so before the ceremony began the doors shut down behind to make sure they weren't caught in the act. As the ceremony began, Akuma who already sat on the middle of the temple surrounded by guests felt nervous and so she covered her eyes and upon opening it she was surrounded by pitch black, as the guests, the temple and everything disappeared and in front of her was a flower that spoke with an ominous and smiled suspiciously, he began to ask her questions about her marriage and why she is marrying a human, Akuma then answers carefully and cautiously. Flowey then begins to laugh and show his wicked side, he then tells her to accept who she is and that the human will die very soon, she then begins to cry and starts to lose control of her power and sanity. As soon as she opened her eyes, she then sees her lover burning to death and so she begins to have a mental breakdown, as flames start to spread everywhere burning everyone in the temple and leaving no one alive and so ever since that even she became conjured in grief and depression and since she has no control of her powers, she then wears the mask of jealousy and insanity signifying that she will never smile again. To this day many monsters are trapped in her masks and dolls and many have also seen crimson butterflies made of flames flying around her house signifying her anger, her emotions are destroyed and now insanity has became her new emotion that will never escape her and will lie on her soul for eternity.


Powers:


With her Mask (Applies to Neutral and Pacifist Route ONLY)


Crimson Butterfly - Many butterflies will surround the soul leaving a trail of blaze behind its track.


Masks of The Deformed - Masks will appear randomly and will try to eat the soul, it may use its tongue and once its eyes are open it can cry blood damaging the soul.


Banquet of the Dolls - Her dolls will appear holding weapons such as knives and will follow the soul, wherever it goes. Sometimes her doll's use their strings to attack the soul.


Umbrella of Doom - One of the trapped souls that resemble a japanese yokai will appear out of nowhere and hop to damage the soul.


The Giant's Wrath - One of the trapped souls that resemble another japanese yokai will appear as a giant skeleton that pops up in the ground and attempts to snatch the soul.


Without her mask (Applies to Genocide Route ONLY)


Green Soul - At some point Akuma will turn the soul green and only a katana acting as defense from the surrounding attacks.


Parade of Flames - Flames will start to spread everywhere which will be hard to dodge.


Sword Montage - Akuma will hold her sword and the soul must dodge her attacks.


Hide and Seek - There will be random boxes where the dolls will hide, if the soul finds the right box nothing will happen, if the soul finds the wrong box the dolls will deal great damage.


Lantern of The End - A hand with an extremely large lantern will appear and a flame like spirit will attempt to damage the soul.


Stats:


(Pacifist and Neutral Route ONLY)


HP: 200


ATK: 50


DEF:30


(Genocide Route ONLY)


HP: 300


ATK: 59


DEF: 48


Other:


Theme Song:


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Battle Theme Song:


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@Birdsie

Your character is awesome

 

[ShadowEntity]

Your character is awesome

Hey thanks bro, i based it on Japanese folklore and mythology.

 

[Rage]

Hey thanks bro, i based it on Japanese folklore and mythology.

Smart choice

 

[Birdsie]

Name:
Akuma


Age:


24


Gender:


Female


Species:


Demon


Appearance:

Personality:


She is shown to be a sadistic demon who collects the souls of monsters and trap them in her masks or dolls to act as her slaves for the rest for eternity. It is said that if a couple were to pass by at her house, Akuma would be jealous and so she would appear out of nowhere and stab them to death, which is why many people fear her.


Backstory:


Before a long time ago, she was once a kind, beautiful and friendly demon on which many courted her to be their wife, however she came from a strict family of demons who didint allow any of those who courted her to marry her, as they would expect four attributes of their daughter's husband: Strong, Courageous, Invulnerable and Determined. One day a human fell and instantly she fell madly in love with him, as she spied on him and noticed that he slayed all of the dangerous monsters that came on his path, as the days went by she finally met him and confessed to him. At first he felt confused and disgusted, but later on he began to accept who she really is and fell in love with her, as well. One day Akuma brought him to her house and introduced her to the family, to which her parents agreed and so they now start their plan, however the only rule that will be implemented is that no stranger may enter the wedding for the sake of protecting the human from Asgore. The wedding was now set, as it took place in a temple hidden deep inside the woods, guests from the family arrived and so before the ceremony began the doors shut down behind to make sure they weren't caught in the act. As the ceremony began, Akuma who already sat on the middle of the temple surrounded by guests felt nervous and so she covered her eyes and upon opening it she was surrounded by pitch black, as the guests, the temple and everything disappeared and in front of her was a flower that spoke with an ominous and smiled suspiciously, he began to ask her questions about her marriage and why she is marrying a human, Akuma then answers carefully and cautiously. Flowey then begins to laugh and show his wicked side, he then tells her to accept who she is and that the human will die very soon, she then begins to cry and starts to lose control of her power and sanity. As soon as she opened her eyes, she then sees her lover burning to death and so she begins to have a mental breakdown, as flames start to spread everywhere burning everyone in the temple and leaving no one alive and so ever since that even she became conjured in grief and depression and since she has no control of her powers, she then wears the mask of jealousy and insanity signifying that she will never smile again. To this day many monsters are trapped in her masks and dolls and many have also seen crimson butterflies made of flames flying around her house signifying her anger, her emotions are destroyed and now insanity has became her new emotion that will never escape her and will lie on her soul for eternity.


Powers:


With her Mask (Applies to Neutral and Pacifist Route ONLY)


Crimson Butterfly - Many butterflies will surround the soul leaving a trail of blaze behind its track.


Masks of The Deformed - Masks will appear randomly and will try to eat the soul, it may use its tongue and once its eyes are open it can cry blood damaging the soul.


Banquet of the Dolls - Her dolls will appear holding weapons such as knives and will follow the soul, wherever it goes. Sometimes her doll's use their strings to attack the soul.


Umbrella of Doom - One of the trapped souls that resemble a japanese yokai will appear out of nowhere and hop to damage the soul.


The Giant's Wrath - One of the trapped souls that resemble another japanese yokai will appear as a giant skeleton that pops up in the ground and attempts to snatch the soul.


Without her mask (Applies to Genocide Route ONLY)


Green Soul - At some point Akuma will turn the soul green and only a katana acting as defense from the surrounding attacks.


Parade of Flames - Flames will start to spread everywhere which will be hard to dodge.


Sword Montage - Akuma will hold her sword and the soul must dodge her attacks.


Hide and Seek - There will be random boxes where the dolls will hide, if the soul finds the right box nothing will happen, if the soul finds the wrong box the dolls will deal great damage.


Lantern of The End - A hand with an extremely large lantern will appear and a flame like spirit will attempt to damage the soul.


Stats:


(Pacifist and Neutral Route ONLY)


HP: 200


ATK: 50


DEF:30


(Genocide Route ONLY)


HP: 300


ATK: 59


DEF: 48


Other:


Theme Song:


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Battle Theme Song:


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@Birdsie

Not sure if you're aware of how Undertale works at all, but there's no such race as "Demon". And even if there were, Monster souls would be pretty much less than useless to her, as they're explained to be incredibly weak. While trapping a monster soul in a mask, or a doll is probably possible: Again, it has no use, place or reason to be a thing. Even Flowey despises his form, and despite being determined he despises it in each way. It's weak, fragile, and can't feel love; or any other feeling.


Sorry, if you worked hard, but: Denied.

 

[Rage]

Not sure if you're aware of how Undertale works at all, but there's no such race as "Demon". And even if there were, Monster souls would be pretty much less than useless to her, as they're explained to be incredibly weak. While trapping a monster soul in a mask, or a doll is probably possible: Again, it has no use, place or reason to be a thing. Even Flowey despises his form, and despite being determined he despises it in each way. It's weak, fragile, and can't feel love; or any other feeling.
Sorry, if you worked hard, but: Denied.

wait can't they just move around somebits and turn Demon into Monster

 

[Birdsie]

wai can't they just move around somebits and turn Demon into Monster

Then the Backstory, personality, some of the powers and most likely appearance would need a change too. This whole thing needs reworking if it's going to work.

 

[ShadowEntity]

Not sure if you're aware of how Undertale works at all, but there's no such race as "Demon". And even if there were, Monster souls would be pretty much less than useless to her, as they're explained to be incredibly weak. While trapping a monster in a mask, or a doll is probably possible: Again, it has no use, place or reason to be a thing.

Well.. Its fine. But i will try to work something out and if there is nothing i can do, then she is scrapped out. I have deleted her and now i must do some work.. Also i will try to catch up in the RP.

 

[Birdsie]

Well.. Its fine. But i will try to work something out and if there is nothing i can do, then she is scrapped out. I have deleted her and now i must do some work.. Also i will try to catch up in the RP.

Alright.

 

[ShadowEntity]

Name:


Helen


Age:


12


Gender:


Female


Species:


Human (Known as a monster)


Appearance:

Personality:


It is said that she is mysterious and friendly among the inhabitants of the underground and because of her mask, they see her as a monster like them and not even knowing her true identity or even asking her to take her mask off. Because of this, she wants to hide her identity worried that the inhabitants will find her out to be a human and dislike her.


Backstory:


It is unknown how she fell into the underground, but what happened to her thereafter was known. She did live a normal and boring life, before she arrived in the underground and her wish was to go to a world where monsters and such creatures would exist and so one day she ended waking up deep in the forests of Snowdin. She began to feel curious where she was, so she walked miles towards a town filled with light and people and upon arriving, she felt puzzled and happy that her wish got granted. After she arrived, she decided to check out the shops and the locals that inhabit the town and so after hours of joy, she began to feel that something was missing, something that made her scared and terrified, something that she wasn't capable of affording and what she couldn't afford was a... LIFE. She knew that this would happen and so she felt as if she was a nobody to the inhabitants, she felt like living as a human will be difficult, so she ran back into the woods wherein she regretted what she wished and wanted to go back home. After hours of walking in the snow, she found a mask in the middle of nowhere and so she felt like if she were to wear it, she would be another person, so she wore the mask and felt as if she was different. She didin't feel any emotions, but she began to become insane and so she was attached to the mask she has worn, hoping no one would take it off and reveal who she truly was.


Powers:


Helen does not posses any form of powers, however outside the mask she stays determined, while her other emotions are entrapped inside of it. She also has a knife as a possession which is just... Ordinary.


Stats:


HP: 100


ATK: 20


DEF: 15


Other:


Theme Song:


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@Birdsie.

 

[Birdsie]

Name:
Helen


Age:


12


Gender:


Female


Species:


Human (Sometimes confused for a monster)


Appearance:

Personality:


It is said that she is mysterious and friendly among the inhabitants of the underground and because of her mask, they see her as a monster like them and not even knowing her true identity or even asking her to take her mask off. Because of this, she wants to hide her identity worried that the inhabitants will find her out to be a human and dislike her.


Backstory:


It is unknown how she fell into the underground, but what happened to her thereafter was known. She did live a normal and boring life, before she arrived in the underground and her wish was to go to a world where monsters and such creatures would exist and so one day she ended waking up deep in the forests of Snowdin. She began to feel curious where she was, so she walked miles towards a town filled with light and people and upon arriving, she felt puzzled and happy that her wish got granted. After she arrived, she decided to check out the shops and the locals that inhabit the town and so after hours of joy, she began to feel that something was missing, something that made her scared and terrified, something that she wasn't capable of affording and what she couldn't afford was a... LIFE. She knew that this would happen and so she felt as if she was a nobody to the inhabitants, she felt like living as a human will be difficult, so she ran back into the woods wherein she regretted what she wished and wanted to go back home. After hours of walking in the snow, she found a mask in the middle of nowhere and so she felt like if she were to wear it, she would be another person, so she wore the mask and felt as if she was different. She didin't feel any emotions, but she began to become insane and so she was attached to the mask she has worn, hoping no one would take it off and reveal who she truly was.


Powers:


Helen does not posses any form of powers, however the mask that she is currently wearing is a mask filled with dangerous powers, supposedly the mask's power would take control of her, but her emotions got in the way and is currently under her control.


Skills:


Happiness - A large sun with floating sun rays surrounding it will follow the soul.


Depression - Tears will fall of the mask and will follow the soul (Similar to Napstablook.), however later on the tears will later turn into a waterfall pattern wherein its tears form a river which can damage the soul.


Wrath - Multiple large fists may appear and attempt to hit the soul.


Bored - A large thick line will appear from the left and attempt to damage the soul.


Excited - Large thumbs up will appear on the bottom trying to hit the soul.


The Liar - Many words will appear and will try to hit the soul, some appear blue.


Stats:


HP: 250


ATK: 40


DEF: 35


Other:


Theme Song:


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Trivia:


- When she uses her skill "The Liar", the normal words represent the truth, while the blue words represent lies.


@Birdsie.

The stats are way too op.


The ATK and DEF are... pretty much tolerable. But 250 HP? Have you even played Undertale? With that much HP you probably wouldn't have to avoid attacks to survive, during encounters with weak monsters.


Also, how come all the stuff in the Skills exists, when Humans are incapable of magic? Determination? Go ahead, but not magic.

 

[ShadowEntity]

The stats are way too op.
The ATK and DEF are... pretty much tolerable. But 250 HP? Have you even played Undertale? With that much HP you probably wouldn't have to avoid attacks to survive, during encounters with weak monsters.


Also, how come all the stuff in the Skills exists, when Humans are incapable of magic? Determination? Go ahead, but not magic.

I will take note of it and yes i have played Undertale. I have changed everything and she currently possesses no skill and the stats are average.

 

[Birdsie]

I will take note of it and yes i have played Undertale. I have changed everything and she currently possesses no skill and the stats are average.

The ATK and DEF were on an average, expected level. It was only the HP that was above the level of two genocide runs togehter that bothered me. Accepted.

 

[ShadowEntity]

The ATK and DEF were on an average, expected level. It was only the HP that was above the level of two genocide runs togehter that bothered me. Accepted.

Ok. Also is it ok, if I equip her with a knife.

 

[Birdsie]

Ok. Also is it ok, if I equip her with a knife.

You should RP finding one, geez.


Whatever, really. You can do it.

 

[SteakSauce2003]

Name: Selina


Age: 14


Gender: Female


Species: Skeleton


Appearance: tall two purple pupils (when mad one turns reds the other blue) Purple dress Star marking on her head Red shoes


Personality: Nice, caring, clueless, scary when mad, happy, perky, cocky, and childish


Backstory: Selina woke up in the outskirts of snowdin having no knowledge of her family or friends the few thing she remembers is her name age and powers at a young age she was shy and scared but as time went on she became a perky young lady and trys to make frineds with everyone in snowdin the few people she has not met most likely know her from the townsfolk some ask 'where are your parents' she says 'I dunno' with the same smile every day she still looks for her parents or someone who knew them


Powers: Bone attacks gravitational powers and other she has yet to learn


Stats: HP:1


ATK:1


DEF:1


Extraif not allowed ill fix it) is sans' daughter but nether of them know it and keeps a hoodie that is sans'


@Birdsie

 

[xXMulanrose3Xx]

Welp. I'm gonna make an Oc. Mainly because It's a little while before everyone gets to Waterfall. :3


Name: Lindsay, (Goes By Linda)


Age: 12


Gender: Female


Species: A HUMAN!!!


Appearance:

Personality: Lindsay/Linda is an all-around energetic child. She can easily figure out how a person acts, but doesn't really judge.


Backstory: Lindsay/Linda was on a Camping trip with her family, while hiking with them, she got lost, eventually finding the dark cave, falling without noticing. Currently at: Snowdin Inn. Sleeping.


Powers: None.


Stats:


LV: 9 (Filled with Love. Not L.O.V.E.)


HP: 50 (Has a lot to make up for the Horrible Defense)


ATK: 0 [6]


DEF: 4 [-8]


Extra: She was born with LV 9. She has never harmed another, always being very friendly.


That was way easier than BBCode.


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[SteakSauce2003]

Name: Papyrus


Age: Not known by me


Gender: Male


Species: Skeleton


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Personality: Papyrus is a flamboyant skeleton who presents a confident, charismatic image of himself. He works hard and, despite his brash personality, is a kind skeleton at heart. He is optimistic and innocent


Backstory: Papyrus the younger brother of sans has 3 goals be in the royal guard, be friends with everyone and meet the Underground TV star Mettaton. he spends his days hunting for humans in the town of snowdin and making puzzles to trap the humans. he has been training with Undyne to become a royal guardsmen.


Powers: Bone projectiles


Stats:HP: 680


ATK: 20


DEF: 20


Extra: he loves spaghetti, sans


@Birdsie

 

[Anime Freak]

Name: Atlas (forget about the picutres name xD )


Age: 20


Gender: Female


Species: Skeleton monster


Appearance:

Personality: Snarky, sarcastic, agressive, blunt, can be silly, untrusting, easily annoyed, and adventuors (basically the pic just added a few more traits)


Backstory: Not much is known about Atlas since she has just showed up in Snowdin out of nowwhere. The only memories she has are falling down a tree into a large pile of snow. She now serves as a part time solider in the royal guard.


Powers: Enhanced reflexes, speed, and of course bones


Stats:


HP: 5


ATK: 5


DEF: 5


Extra: She loves to listen to music; she normally wears red headphones.