Fandom Undertale The Sequel [OPEN-ACCEPTING]

[VirtualUnity]

Gonna wait till OC CS is here

 

[ShadNova]

@VirtualNotoriety We are, at this point, in need of some Canon characters at first. But you can go for and try creating OC sheet. I am in charge of Originals here. But just keep in mind that Canon characters would be preferable at this point. In fact, I guess we all have chance to play both as Canon and OC as well. So don't hold the wait!

 

[ShadNova]

Judging by a rough draft, backstory is a little bit confusing. We learn only the thing that he tried to protect the fallen humans, plus - Toriel perhaps has already left after these humans being murdered. You may just use words to describe your characters or both, if you are lucky to have sprites. Just come up with some story, that has some bits of logic and does not really smell 'fishy'. Just a fair piece of advice. Take your time as well, don't really rush it, but go for it.


@VirtualNotoriety

 

[BDark]

WIP still need an example and a fight theme
Name: Marines


Appearance: Right now it's a work in progress


Stats:


HP:1150


AT:5


DF:5


Attacks:


Black Bone: Does Lingering Damage over 2 seconds


Orange Attacks: Keep moving to dodge


Orange Heart: Can't stay in place


Black Scythe: Does Lingering Damage over 5 seconds


Health Drain: For each successful lingering attack +1 hp over the time of the lingering damage


Everything else:


personality: imaginative, caring, serious and likes to prank people


bio: Marine's before his exilation to the unexplored areas of snowdin was a Royal Guard the reasons for his exilation was the charges of treason for helping the first three humans escape from the royal scientists experiment involving determination now years after his exilation he returns to confront Asgore for his crimes against humans but only finding that the monsters are celebrating about a human named Frisk and celebrating for their freedom thinking Asgore executed the last human needed he rushes to the throne room but only to see it empty hearing voices in the following room he investigates the voices seeing Asgore and Toriel there with the human shocked but happy he goes back to snowdin to prepare the opening of the wall that separates the underground from the surface.


language: Tele Marines


Fight Theme:


PROVE YOU CAN RP AS THEM >:L :


"Heh... Asgore finally stops the bloodshed and opens the seal, Though I thought he would have to sacrifice the other to gain either one. Well I guess there will be peace between Humans and Monsters now thanks to that Human"As Marine's heads towards the Capital like the other monsters to travel to the surface and start a new not as an Exiled Guard but as a free skeleton. As Marine's and ten other monsters turn to head to the surface, they smile at the scene of the sunset near the ground"Guess I still need to talk to Asgore about this... God I still don't approve him for what he's done in the past"As Marine's heads out to look for King Asgore"

OC 2 - CLOSED (for now)

It's up to ShadNova to open it though, if he wants to..

 

[Karcen]

so is sans ever going to say something?

 

[BDark]

I'm waiting for other canon characters (hopefully Alphys) to join.


Neither of us can do much without more canon characters.

 

[Karcen]

well they can talk i mean it is just them it is not like they need others

 

[BDark]

well they can talk i mean it is just them it is not like they need others

I wouldn't have enough crap to make 5 sentences.

 

[Karcen]

it is a conversation i am sure for those the general rules of 5 sentences can be waved as conversations often are light on words because they are just two people talking

 

[BDark]

it is a conversation i am sure for those the general rules of 5 sentences can be waved as conversations often are light on words because they are just two people talking

I'll see what I can do.

 

[Karcen]

i mean really if you need 5 sentences just ramble remember how he was a rather neglectful father how sans had to grow up fast because of that ect

 

[ShadNova]

@VirtualNotoriety


I suggest you to work with physical description, using words. Sprites and pictures aren't that nessesary. It is roleplay, not the gamemaking forum, where we are accepting comissions. Plus, make sure that you use punctuation in narration as well, since when looking at your post, its really hard to devide sentances, making them overcomplex, that what I assume. Fixing that - and you are good to go.


@Darkiplier


Karcen is right, Roleplay is stuck because Sans suppose to react to Gaster's apperance, after all - Undyne can't suddenly regain consciousness to move Roleplay further. We still waiting for more people to tag along, thats the fact, but where can we take people out? Out of the air? I don't think so. Unless somebody willing to play as another character - we shall stick to four or five of us, if we could also recommend thoes, who play as OC to take one of canon character. Also, we should not really limit the number of OCs in roleplay, because by the looks of it - we are just hate OCs because of their apperance, while we are not. So yeah.

 

[VirtualUnity]

Got it going to fix it now

 

[VirtualUnity]

Fixed it

 

[BDark]

@VirtualNotoriety
I suggest you to work with physical description, using words. Sprites and pictures aren't that nessesary. It is roleplay, not the gamemaking forum, where we are accepting comissions. Plus, make sure that you use punctuation in narration as well, since when looking at your post, its really hard to devide sentances, making them overcomplex, that what I assume. Fixing that - and you are good to go.


@Darkiplier


Karcen is right, Roleplay is stuck because Sans suppose to react to Gaster's apperance, after all - Undyne can't suddenly regain consciousness to move Roleplay further. We still waiting for more people to tag along, thats the fact, but where can we take people out? Out of the air? I don't think so. Unless somebody willing to play as another character - we shall stick to four or five of us, if we could also recommend thoes, who play as OC to take one of canon character. Also, we should not really limit the number of OCs in roleplay, because by the looks of it - we are just hate OCs because of their apperance, while we are not. So yeah.

I just don't want the OCs to take over instead of the canon ones. That's all.

 

[BDark]

Also, @ShadNova is @VirtualNotoriety accepted or not ?

 

[ShadNova]

Well, I think that 'Marine' seem to be ... a little bit cliche of 'Havens got the Hitman', with all that stuff like 'Protected Humans like a baws from Royal Guard'. But well, I think we can give it a try. Just lets hope it won't end up in bloodshed.

 

[BDark]

Well, I think that 'Marine' seem to be ... a little bit cliche of 'Havens got the Hitman', with all that stuff like 'Protected Humans like a baws from Royal Guard'. But well, I think we can give it a try. Just lets hope it won't end up in bloodshed.

I'll add him to the roster, then.

 

[Karcen]

considering marine help some humans he has likely clashed with Gaster then i have fun backstory for him that involved at least the first few humans and unspeakable horror

 

[BDark]

considering marine help some humans he has likely clashed with Gaster then i have fun backstory for him that involved at least the first few humans and unspeakable horror

Define 'first few humans'.

 

[BDark]

"loadWebfont('wingdings'); I am Wingdings Gaster . I was erased from reality. I am your father"

Don't you think it's a little too early for either of the big reveals ?

 

[Karcen]

he came to say that he wants it known he isn't hiding it and first 2 or 3 after chara and the war

 

[Karcen]

but i'll edit the reveal

 

[BDark]

he came to say that he wants it known he isn't hiding it and first 2 or 3 after chara and the war

I think Chara was actually the first.

 

[Karcen]

yeah chara was and i am saying the first few after chara when the monsters took the kill the humans and harvest their souls stance