The Path From Fayland - Official RP

(( Sorry I haven't posted..hahah some dude kinda brought my mood down a level. Told me that I'm a jerk..and some other terrible things ewe, that he's never met anyone with such a shitty taste in music, and that my life is too boring to talk about. And then he throws in somewhere 'sorry for trying to be nice'


...trying to be nice? Hah, well you failed, dude. Lmao.


And aw, feel better Little*Dreamer!! Being sick does suck :cc ))
 
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(You're awesome -_- ignore that bish. He's just jelly of your awesomeness)


Varexes-


I shook my head and walked away from Nova, speeding up so I was walking next to Faye, feeling Juniper's head on my shoulder. I turned my head and spoke softly, "You can sleep if you want. I can carry you. I won't let you fall." I told her with a small smile, then focused on where I was stepping, ignoring the growing agony that was in my forearm.
 
(( Thanks ^^


Yeah, he's a spoiled rich popular kid who thinks he's a know it all, so. lmao. ))
 
(Nami don't listen to him, all of those things are opinions and his aren't worth anything if he only wants to bring you down. It's awesome how you manage to stay so posotive all the time xD


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(( Yeah, after he offended me over and over again after I was trying to be a good person I decided I'm not going to talk to him ever again xD I don't need people like that in my life :o


And lmfao, that picture made me laugh as well xDD Oh, and sorry if I bother you guys with my problems every now and then >.< You're just all my favorite people~ owo


@EkimAdonihs they all left the river and now they're walking through the forest during the morning and it's a super windy day since it's Fall :o )) 
(( Ohmygod I'm a Well Known Member :'o


//tears of joy// xDD ))
 
(Danke :D and btw, that guy sounds like a total jerk and needs to be told off. Let me at him! I'll get all ninja debater up in here!)


Ruineth walked behind the group. It wasn't on purpose. She was just so caught up with indulging herself with the sight of browning leaves. Once in a while a leaf would fall, landing with a sort of tapping sound. She listened to the birds and the wind blowing softly in the treetops, closing her eyes and taking in a deep breath. These were the moments she lived for. A leaf brushed her cheek, making her snap and jump to the side in a ninja like manner. Her heart was racing, but she immediately relaxed.
 
Nova concentrated on Ruineth, pondering the mysteries of her behavior. His concentration was so deep, he jumped when she did. 'Hope nobody saw that...'
 
((IMPORTANT NOTICE xD : So, I've been thinking about the next part of the roleplay for a while now. So, they're gonna come across a little village after hours of walking called Auchertown. Humans, Light Elves, Dark Elves, and Dihart Elves--Half Light/Half Dark Elves--live there. It's a secret town in the middle of the deep forest where only travelers can come across. The residents can't go to the Dark Elf village--Reddell--or Fayland since they've already escaped. If they returned they'd be imprisoned or worse. SO, this little village was created and no one knows about it unless they traveled deep out into the forest. There's not too many residents, but there's still quite a few. It's a small village, but it consists of anything a normal village would have.


So, once we get there feel free to have your character talk to residents, meaning you can pretty much create new 'minor characters' for while we're at the village for your character and other characters to communicate with. Like I'm saying, you can control residents of the town xD Not just me~ ^^ Just wanted to make you guys aware of that :0 ))


It'd been a few hours of walking with only two breaks to settle down and drink some water and eat some food. Faye's legs were aching from traveling, but it actually felt good in a way. Physically it didn't feel too great, but mentally she felt excited and relieved to have gotten so much further from Fayland. She wondered just how far they'd adventured through the woods.


It was now that she was even more grateful of the wonderful breeze, considering if it didn't exist on a day like today she'd be sweltering like crazy. She was breathing a little heavier than she had been earlier now, clearly needing another break but not wanting to stop or hold up the others. Her pupils watched as she put one foot in front of the other, taking more steps through the leaves. With every time she lifted her leather boot off the ground and put it back down there was a loud crunching of the leaves.


Faye turned her head, ensuring that the others were still following closely behind. When she saw that they were all there, she smiled pleasantly to both herself and the rest of the group. As she turned back around, she was startled to bump into some sort of sign.


She jumped back and held her bow up in defense, not knowing at first if it was an enemy. Her cheeks reddened a bit as she came to find that it was just an old wooden sign swinging back and fourth, creaking boorishly as it did so.


Faye reached her hand out to steady the sign, allowing her eyes to scan the bold writing painted on the wood in black. "Auchertown..?" she read aloud, her brows furrowing closely together with puzzlement. "Is this a joke?" she wondered with a little chuckle. A town...in the middle of the forest?


Faye looked back down at the sign, no type of arrow on it to direct where the place was. However, when she lifted her head up it seemed like there was a path cleared out in front of them, possibly heading to the destination. In addition, near the end of the path up ahead she saw some sort of stone wall that looked like it was surrounding something...sort of like the one in Fayland, but less protected. 
((Oh and also, all the people here..not necessarily the humans, but the elves all escaped their main villages for a reason, so they don't hate the opposite species. Therefore, the Dark Elves here aren't gonna attack anybody or whatever xD Not saying they can't be jerks, but they don't hate Light Elves..since they're living with Light Elves in this village xD ))
 
Ruineth heard someone jump behind her, but before she could decide to look behind her shoulder, Faye'd found a sign leading to a town. She stepped up behind her, tilting her head and humming a low note. The pitch slowly grew higher, until she finally let out a breath as her mind finished making sense of it. "A town! Maybe I can buy some fabric and thread and...Oh how much money did I manage to throw in this pack?" She continued to ramble on, walking to the edge of the path. She pulled out three golden coins, which made her stop her chatter. "Hmm..." Not much I can get with this. Rune looked at the others and gave a squeamish smile. She put the coins in her pocket and gave them a quick pat. Maybe I'll shut up now. She looked at the wall ahead, then at Faye. "I think we should check it out." She said, her tone returned to normal.
 
Faye looks to Ruineth, seeing her pull out some golden coins. It was clear that she was more than ready to head to this supposed town and try to buy something. After all, a few of them were probably in need of some new supplies of some sort. For starters, she was aware that Varexes needed a new bow. She wasn't quite sure what to expect from this 'Auchertown' but maybe it was worth their while.


"Yeah, we might as well," she agreed, nodding at Ruineth in response. Faye was indeed curious, though a little bit wary. A town out here in the middle of nowhere..did that even make much sense?


Faye held her bow by her side cautiously, keeping one hand by her quiver just in case. At the same time, she wasn't sure if it'd be better to not look prepared to fight in case anyone thought she was going to attack them. However, she was only planning on doing so if her or her friends were in danger.


Faye began heading down the path alongside Ruineth, approaching the stone wall with each new step they took. She wanted to know what this place had to offer and what was living there, though she was a bit fearful that whatever did live there would try and harm her group. The thought made Faye grip the handle of her bow tighter.
 
(I want to motion for some rules regarding minor characters, writing my suggestions as you read)
 
(My thoughts for minor characters:


I think minor characters could really add to the plot.


1. Minors should be 'locked' when they enter meaning only their creator controls them.


2. When they are 'locked' their thouhhts are not revealed directly. You can't say " <name> felt tired", you should have then reveal feelings and thoughts through actions, not jjst words. When 'unlocked' you can say how they feel or what they think.


3. Each one has ONE plot effect called an 'intent'. Examples are: "fight one of the party members", "reveal information to the party members", "mislead tge party members"; a mjnors actions govern anything they do leading up to their intent. This intent is a mystery to everyone but the characters creator.


4. When the creator finally reveals the intent of a minor character, then the character is 'unlocked' and the intent is stated outright in the post.


5. An 'unlocked' character can be controlled by anyone. ) 
Nova clapped and cheered. "The greate Faye has defended us from the mighty sign-post of doom!" He said with all the enthusiasm he could, which was to say not much entgusiasm at all.
 
((Those are all great suggestions, it's just I was going for a little less complicated for these characters xD


Like I was thinking, everyone can make their own minor character and whoever creates the character gets to control them. And that's all xD


But everyone can interact with the character.


Also, you don't use them like you'd use your main character, you'd use them likes this for example:


Suppose the character's name is Nami,


'Nami came over to Faye, a bright smile on her face. "I have some questions," Nami asked. '


Instead of


'Nami was feeling like crap, she hated these new people here [insert thoughts here] "I have some questions," she asked.'


xD If that makes sense. Ya know, YOU'RE not like the character like your main one, even if you're controlling them, you can't say their thoughts.


And they just do whatever, you don't need like an intent or anything. They're just residents of the village xDD But describe them well enough so you know what they look like (or throw in a picture, 'cause I wanna put 'em under the minor characters on the site. xD ))
 
(That makes sense, the point of an intent was tgat people knew what the character was supposed to do when they became unlocked)
 
((Yeah, but I figured it's easier if everyone controls their own minor character xD


Everyone doesnt need to create a minor character btw, but feel free. They're only here while we're at Auchertown and then they disappear..for now anyway, unless they visit in the way future owo)) 
As they continued along the path, it was about two to three minutes later that they found themselves standing before a tall, stone wall that seemed to continue both east and west through the forest. From where they were standing it wasn't possible to see the end of it, meaning it was a pretty damn big wall. Even if they couldn't currently see beyond the wall, it was beginning to seem that 'Auchertown' did indeed exist. What of it existed..? Well, that's what they were going to try and find out.


"Alright, now how do we get past this wall..?" Faye wondered aloud, walking a little further down as she peered up at the top which was high over her head.
 
Varexes-


As Juniper nodded off to sleep I felt her weight more on my arms and less on my shoulders. As the pain in my forearm mounted and I barely held in a gasp, I shifted her weight by hiking Juniper up higher, thus putting more of her weight higher on my arms and lessening the pain. Relieved, I released a breath I didn't realize I'd been holding and shot a glare at Nova for his sarcasm. "Jerk." I muttered under my breath and observed the sign. What's a town doing out here..? Is it ruined? Or is it perhaps a secret? Not sure what to do, I followed Faye up to the wall.


When we reached the wall I glanced around. "Well, it looks in decent repair. If it were ruins I feel like it'd be... worse for wear." I said softly. "Let's keep our voices down, shall we? Just in case..." I walked down a little ways each way down the wall, trying to see what there was. "Perhaps there's a gate somewhere we can get in? Or at the least, if I"m wrong and it is ruins, then perhaps a hole in the wall to get through. Supplies and shelter would be nice for the night." I was talking to Faye, but also to myself as I thought aloud.


"It's up to you Faye." I said, shrugging slightly.


(I like this idea. Although, we should keep it in moderation. After all, if everyone comes up with a minor character with an intent, then it could conflict with one another. Like, if Faye and I both come up with a villain, then we'll have to deal with two villains, and that could get confusing. Just... stories could conflict, so I think that we should figure out a way to either limit the intents or limit who can create a minor character.... just this way it's easier and there's less of a chance of screwing up?)
 
((Okai well, lemme clarify, the residents of Auchertown pretty much escaped their main villages--Reddell and Fayland--for similar reasons as our elves did. They don't hate our elves because we're Light Elves who traveled outside, they welcome elves like us to their town because it's a secret place for escaped elves to stay. They all pretty much dislike their homelands and the leaders, though. They're not 'villains'. Sure, some can be jerks or whatever, or even super sketchy and whatever, but it'd be odd for them to go after our elves like a 'villain' would. That'd be like a Caricon thing. lmfao. Like, I'm about to introduce a minor character that's going to kind of guide us around and answer any kind of questions we may have.


The minor characters you make are simply just residents of Auchertown and a chance to be another elf-Light, Dark, or Dihart. The Dark Elves here aren't evil, need I repeat. xD Some may be sketchy by nature, but not evil. The ones that don't escape Reddell are more dangerous since they're extremely loyal to their leader, Thiriston, who is a b*tch. xD And he despises Light Elves and wants them terminated. So those ones are pretty much brainwashed. The ones in Auchertown wanted to escape his brainwashing.))
 
"What was that?" Nova demanded, a feirce bite echoing in his voice. "You have something to say, Var?" He asked, subtly blocking Vars way, though not fully commiting to confrontation.
 
Faye turned to Varexes, seeing that Juniper was still on his back after this extremely long walk. It was really kind of him to do that for her..this entire time. Either he was determined to come off as strong even with an injured arm..or he was mainly trying to prove that to Juniper to impress her. Either way, it made Faye smile to herself.


"We'll figure something out," she said while beaming still, a small laugh breaking into the middle of her sentence. She wasn't the best at hiding her emotions, that was for sure.


As Faye turned around, her eyes widened as she saw someone standing right in front of the wall before her. On instinct, she swung an arrow from her quiver and threw it into her bow, getting ready to lift it and aim. However, before she was able to do so, the elf put her hands up in surrender with a fearful expression among her face. With that, Faye calmed down a bit and decided to keep her bow lowered, but her grey eyes focused on the girl.


She had long pink hair down to her chest and freckled olive skin. She had a very thin nose and big periwinkle eyes. She didn't look like any other elf she'd seen before, but judging by her long pointy ears she was most certainly an elf. Her cheeks and lips were both a rosy shade of pink, to match her silky hair and there were very dark circles surrounding her huge eyes. The girl had a very thing build and lanky arms..she was a little bit taller than Faye. She was wearing a white tank top and brown leather shorts, paired with green boots that came up to her ankles.


((Here's what she looks like~ owo

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