MistyWinds
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I don't mean to be a bother, but was my character all good or do I need to change anything? I was just curious.
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Thanks!Isune said:Yup, I liked it so you're good!
If you could go into a bit more detail into the power then you're all set! @jole875jole875 said:Name: Zane Carthage
Appearance: Add a pair of sunglasses and a white t-shirt also that sword gtfo
Power: Able to bend light to his will but causes great pain to him and causes his body to change.
(Probably wont use it for more than little tasks.)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Bio(Not required if character can't remember anything before helicopter aside from name and
other basic things): Zane was born to a poor family from some European country and was sold into the underground slave markets. He know little about his family and could care less. From a young age he was said to have control of the lighting in his box, even when it was completely dark. Being bought the first time by some rich man he was used as a servant until he 'accidentally' blinded the man. After that he was sold to a team of scientists in Canada and for the last decade has been weaponized and experimented on like an animal. Before he could use his power to light up a room or darken a corridor, now he can use it to blind people and roast them alive. He never wanted to hurt anyone, he was always forced to test his abilities on others, unlike before every time he uses his power it is very very painful, even for the littlest of things. And even though he uses it rarely his body is scarred by the past. He can't remember how he got here, all he knows is that he's free from torture and pain.
Personality: Zane is a deeply nice person with a get it done attitude, he's very open and very likeable but everyone has their darkside. During the night he becomes mean, uncaring, and cruel, though during the day he is nice as can be and very caring.
Likes: Fish, Solitude, helping, the light.
Dislikes: Too many people, needles or knives, ignorant people, the darkness.
Crush:
Other: He hates when people stare at him, he doesn't believe in hurting people.
@TerrinX your character has way too many powers and no weaknesses. I'd like to ask for you to give her one/two powers, but also give her some form of weakness.TerrinX said:
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- General
N A M E :
Selena Ray
N I C K N A M E :
Sel
G E N D E R :
Female
A G E :
17
S E X U A L I T Y:
Homosexual
P O W E R :
Selena's body has an unsually large and powerful magnetic field, making her a lightning rod. She can redirect electric currents that are in her field can control metal objects near here (( Like magneto )) She also has Photokinesis and can bend and control light.
- Personal
P E R S O N A L I T Y :
L I K E S :
Being around others, sleeping,
D I S L I K E S :
Humans, being in wide open areas, cold
B I O :
No memory before her departure.
C R U S H :
N/A
- Physical
A P P E A R A N C E :
W E I G H T :
125 lb
H E I G H T :
5'7
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