Ampersand
I ♥ semicolons
Ha, yeah it did!
I think the best coop writing is when everyone knows what's coming so they can tailor their writing towards it, if necessary. So, here's what I had in mind.
We clear the way towards the maintenance access door and are about to leave when Rudii refuses to come with us. He insists on finishing the data transfer with Lodo, despite the basement filling with smoke and embers. We escape through the tunnels and as soon as we come surface-side, Vrath and his friends are waiting for us. I'm picturing us opening a manhole cover and literally being lifted out by two of his waiting goons. Down the street we see Rudii's shop collapse in a fury of flames as we're escorted at gunpoint into a waiting van.
I think the best coop writing is when everyone knows what's coming so they can tailor their writing towards it, if necessary. So, here's what I had in mind.
We clear the way towards the maintenance access door and are about to leave when Rudii refuses to come with us. He insists on finishing the data transfer with Lodo, despite the basement filling with smoke and embers. We escape through the tunnels and as soon as we come surface-side, Vrath and his friends are waiting for us. I'm picturing us opening a manhole cover and literally being lifted out by two of his waiting goons. Down the street we see Rudii's shop collapse in a fury of flames as we're escorted at gunpoint into a waiting van.