Mooalally
The Bringer of Odd Characters
And I don't think 80 pounds is healthy for someone's who 4'4".
Tales of Salisonia: Rise of the Dragons [Official OOC Thread]
- Thread starter Sen Pai
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Kagerou
Reaper
Pai, your name's been bothering me. It makes me think of pie, and now I'm hungry.
Lucem
Ten Thousand Club
The same could be said for an infant, but for a different reason...
Kagerou
Reaper
Ironically, that's the only reason it bothers me. xD
[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]The same could be said for an infant, but for a different reason...
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Ohboi.
[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]The same could be said for an infant, but for a different reason...
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Ohboi.
Croissant
Piggu Lord
I'm so bored...
#YOLOMCSWAGGIN
#YOLOMCSWAGGIN
The Kaosophile
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Archon
Cressy, Mor, do you guys wanna play minecraft?
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
I'm on my computer now so I can judge properly. ^^
@Rai-Chan
@Rai-Chan
I'm very happy that you're joining, Rai-Chan! ^^ Here's my overview of your character now that I've read over it completely. Please remember that I am not insulting your character, because she has a wonderful concept, and this is just for improvement.
Name: Well, you can't really review a name. xD I love how her name is so close to a demon's name "Arias". Haha! That's going to cause something in the future~
Gender: If I reviewed this, I'd be sexist.
Age: Here's where it gets complicated. Because she's only ten years old she can't be wandering around without adult supervision. Due to the fact that Salisonia is just only finding out about the demons, there aren't any "wandering orphans" since her mother wouldn't let her go out of the house alone, right? Being young is fun, but has a huge disadvantage for exploring and freedom of this roleplay. :3
Race: Can't say anything about this, I'm not racist. *badum tsst*
Class: Contracters cannot summon beasts, those are Summoners. Contracters are those who make a strong contract with a beast who'll become their faithful companion for life. Being a Contracter is super difficult because it requires deep and strong bonds with another.
Appearance Notes: 80 pounds seems very overweight for someone 4'4, unless she's super chubby and stuff. Having an overweight person in this roleplay would be amazing though! She'd be considered obese with her weight and height though. ^^" The average weight of a 4'4 girl would be around 50-65 lbs? At least she's healthy though.
Personality: Here's where it get tricky, please add more to her personality and not everyone would love her, that's the roleplayers choice. It seems that all she is is cute, friendly, and a crybaby. Tip of advice; she most likely won't survive the drama that'll be happening on her own. Most of all, please add more to her.
History: You did say that you'll continue it later, but I'll work with what we have for now. How was Lady Alida destined to take care of the child? Was it just the goodness of her heart, or perhaps something else? Etc. Oh, and miscarriages are a pretty intense deal. Many mothers become heartbroken for weeks because their offspring is dead, lifeless. What did Lord Damion say about the baby? Did he just happily let his wife take her in? Why did they move to Bran? Where did they live before? And when it comes to Contractor and Summoner mix up, well, you know. :3
Thanks for applying though. ^^ Lucem and Cressy are mods, so they also have a say in this. xD
Name: Well, you can't really review a name. xD I love how her name is so close to a demon's name "Arias". Haha! That's going to cause something in the future~
Gender: If I reviewed this, I'd be sexist.
Age: Here's where it gets complicated. Because she's only ten years old she can't be wandering around without adult supervision. Due to the fact that Salisonia is just only finding out about the demons, there aren't any "wandering orphans" since her mother wouldn't let her go out of the house alone, right? Being young is fun, but has a huge disadvantage for exploring and freedom of this roleplay. :3
Race: Can't say anything about this, I'm not racist. *badum tsst*
Class: Contracters cannot summon beasts, those are Summoners. Contracters are those who make a strong contract with a beast who'll become their faithful companion for life. Being a Contracter is super difficult because it requires deep and strong bonds with another.
Appearance Notes: 80 pounds seems very overweight for someone 4'4, unless she's super chubby and stuff. Having an overweight person in this roleplay would be amazing though! She'd be considered obese with her weight and height though. ^^" The average weight of a 4'4 girl would be around 50-65 lbs? At least she's healthy though.
Personality: Here's where it get tricky, please add more to her personality and not everyone would love her, that's the roleplayers choice. It seems that all she is is cute, friendly, and a crybaby. Tip of advice; she most likely won't survive the drama that'll be happening on her own. Most of all, please add more to her.
History: You did say that you'll continue it later, but I'll work with what we have for now. How was Lady Alida destined to take care of the child? Was it just the goodness of her heart, or perhaps something else? Etc. Oh, and miscarriages are a pretty intense deal. Many mothers become heartbroken for weeks because their offspring is dead, lifeless. What did Lord Damion say about the baby? Did he just happily let his wife take her in? Why did they move to Bran? Where did they live before? And when it comes to Contractor and Summoner mix up, well, you know. :3
Thanks for applying though. ^^ Lucem and Cressy are mods, so they also have a say in this. xD
Croissant
Piggu Lord
YES! but I'm supposed to be doing german homework so maybe later.
FOCUS MODE ON!
*Exits RPnation*
FOCUS MODE ON!
*Exits RPnation*
Kagerou
Reaper
I have youth group soon, but maybe for a little. You still here?
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
We're all still here, I'm working on the results of the Attack On Nevenarius. :3
Kagerou
Reaper
I was suddenly greeted with ten alerts. T^T Pie...
I was talking to Kao, but okay.paipai900 said:
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Oh. Okay.... *sulks in a corner*
Kagerou
Reaper
*Huggles Pie's head and noms her finger.*
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Ewwww! *wet willy's Mor* Groddy! xDMordaedel said:
Kagerou
Reaper
Ah, my own spit. Dx Groddy's not a word.
I was just giving you the common greeting of where I come from.
I was just giving you the common greeting of where I come from.
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Chewing on someone's finger? Cool. lol and Groddy's a word in my world. xP
Kagerou
Reaper
And what world might that be?
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
The world of Pai. Oh. Em. Gee. I'll totally make a story/RP out of that one day. Haha!
Kagerou
Reaper
xD I'm scared you will. I'm scared of what might come out of it.
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Unicorns and rainbows. Unicorns and rainbows.
Kagerou
Reaper
And narwhals on a stick.
I don't know how or when to bring in Mordaedel. I'm always in a creative slump.
I don't know how or when to bring in Mordaedel. I'm always in a creative slump.
Sen Pai
I'm back, baby.
Just choose a city and then make your character go there. ^^ Or appear there, etc. :3Mordaedel said:
Mooalally
The Bringer of Odd Characters
Make him come in, riding on an NPC. That would be an impressive entrance.
Queen Rai
Self Proclaimed Queen of RPNation
paipai900 would she have to be wandering 
Kagerou
Reaper
Ohyes, I can picture it now. *Fantisization*:
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Reality:
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