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[The Suspicious Eye]

WeaselThor Is the hero organization paying their workers?

 

[WeaselThor]

WeaselThor Is the hero organization paying their workers?

Yes depending on experience and fame. Many heroes also have endorsment deals with things like gatorade and Mcdonalds. Heroes earn between 6-10 figures depending on their public image.

 

[MikaboshiEinst]

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Name- Cyler Jacobius Yexam (Nightmare)
Age- 34
Birthday- June 9
Gender- Male
Appearance Details- Has green skin in this form
Personality- Sarcastic, but is helpful
Biography- Nightmare discovered his powers at the age of 7, and had a good grasp of them at the age of 12. His homeland was being taken over by beings with every power, the Savages. The dictatorship of their race was what brought Nightmare to rebel against them alongside his brother Phoenix. With their combined powers, they were able to push the Savages back, until the Savages took Phoenix captive. Nightmare went to stealing his way to survive. One day, Nightmare got cornered by the Savages, and Nightmare used the combined force of his powers to defeat his captors. This brought attention to the Undead Elemental Master. He took Nightmare to his hideout where he taught Nightmare how to hone his elemental power, sending him through a training that lasted 2 years. When Nightmare turned 16, he sought out on a quest to find more people like him.
Powers- Elemental, teleportation, shapeshifting, and agility.
Weakness- Depression and electricity
Fears- Being left alone when he needs his friends the most
Skills- Can control the elements, can build and fix almost anything, and can learn to do almost anything
Weaponry- Spirit Hook, Undead Sword, and Dual Pistols
Other- He's usually in his human form, which looks like this:
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Question .... I dont get the theme for this character.

 

[kasigi]

I'm a bit confused myself. I think the biography doesn't correlate with the story of the roleplay.

 

[Svisttt]

I feel like it could use a few more details, too~

 

[Svisttt]

TheNightmareSavage You read the lore, amirite?

 

[WeaselThor]

TheNightmareSavage im sorry but im gonna have to decline the character. Firstly the power set is Very undetailed. And without focus. Not to mention we already have a shapeshifter.

Second the lore does not fit with the world lore at all.

Third the Weapons all seem magical in origen and magic doesnt exist here.

Over all it just seems rushed.

Sorry mate. But imma have to ask for a complete redo here.

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Okay. I understand. After I read the lore a bit, I have started work on a new remake of Nightmare. Would you like me to put it here?

 

[Svisttt]

Personally, I'd edit the original post you made for him~

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Ok. Thank you!

 

[WeaselThor]

Okay. I understand. After I read the lore a bit, I have started work on a new remake of Nightmare. Would you like me to put it here?

Thank you, your acceptance is helpful.

 

[MikaboshiEinst]

Jennifer Opal reminds me of Lady Gaga's character in Machete 2

 

[Svisttt]

Jennifer Opal reminds me of Lady Gaga's character in Machete 2

holy shit you're right--

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Okay, I updated it and it should be up now. So sorry for my thing earlier! I just have gotten used to using that same character format for most of the roleplays that I'm in that I guessed it would be okay here. Again, super sorry about that!

 

[WeaselThor]

Okay, I updated it and it should be up now. So sorry for my thing earlier! I just have gotten used to using that same character format for most of the roleplays that I'm in that I guessed it would be okay here. Again, super sorry about that!

No need to apologize. I will need more for the personality and abilities. Such as how they originated, what they are capable of etc.

Also imma need you to pick either one element or teleportation. Both are high tier powers on their own so having the two of them is a bit much for now.

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Okay, I'll get that done in a bit.

 

[Svisttt]

Thank you for being so cooperative~ I've known a few people who'd get really pissy over needing to make a few adjustments to their characters, so this is a nice changee

 

[MikaboshiEinst]

Thank you for being so cooperative~ I've known a few people who'd get really pissy over needing to make a few adjustments to their characters, so this is a nice changee

God I experienced that like 3 times in a single RP on another site. It was hell to watch.

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Yeah, one of the other abilities that Nightmare has is being amazingly adaptable, but I thought that I would leave that out for this one. Also, I just got done adding some stuff to his bio. I would really like for him to be able to teleport, since that was one of the powers that he has had since his creation. I understand if I need to take that out, but if he can have it, I would love for him to have that power.

 

[Svisttt]

I think the main issue Hulk had was that the character had multiple powers that weren't really related to each other~

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Okay. Actually, now that you mention it, I do kind of see that. Anyways, thank you guys for being patient as I figure this stuff out.

 

[WeaselThor]

Exactly.

Say you wanted both an element and teleportation. Light could be a useful element. By bending light you could render yourself invisible, fire searing lasers, blind foes, and even turn into light and "beam" places, thus keeping your teleportation power and at least 1 element.

Agility can be explained via acrobatics and hand to hand training by the Hero organization. So list that in skills and voila, he is balanced. Also important to mention, his parents likely faced some legal repercussions for his abandonment.

 

[WeaselThor]

But alas i bid you all Adieu. I am going to sleep. Toodles.

 

[Svisttt]

Nightt my dude

 

[TheNightmareSavage]

Okay. Thanks and good night!