Fandom Star Trek: Vigilance (OOC)

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

This is kinda a weirdo crew. I like it, but I don't know how well they could run a spaceship together.

I swear, Imogen is the most normal person aboard.

I really need to get a move on, on the posting front. I'm just bogged down with a school project I didn't realise was due in five days. Thought I had significantly longer than that.

 

[Darkraven]

Sorry it took some time got a rough cs together

I've read through it... And it needs to be combed through for grammar, punctuation and vocabulary mistakes. Please do that for me, and then I'll look it over again. I kept stumbling over the mistakes.

But otherwise, I like the character. Only thing I have against is that her personality seems tacked on, and her traits look like a random assembly. I'll read through it again to confirm.

EDIT: Okay, I think I got that feeling from how some parts of her personality clash with others. The positive traits VS the negatives in other words. Could you check that for me?

This is kinda a weirdo crew. I like it, but I don't know how well they could run a spaceship together.

Yeah well, in the eyes of the admiralty, they're all Starfleet officers, and they only need to run the ship long enough to find Voyager... Though in the future, there's likely going to be something preventing them from dismantling the crew... But whether it's because the crew have proven themselves capable or because of circumstances would depend on their performance

 

[Darkraven]

I swear, Imogen is the most normal person aboard.

I really need to get a move on, on the posting front. I'm just bogged down with a school project I didn't realise was due in five days. Thought I had significantly longer than that.

Now you have 2 days. Don't give up on me or there won't be a single normal person left on the ship Anyway, let me know if you need help.

But seriously, I think normal is subjective lol... By Kraekiran definition, the Captain is quite normal Most of the bridge officers are actually quite normal, if only subpar and somewhat troubled compared to the like of Jean Luc's bridge officers. The rest of the crew... Well, we'll see (muah haha)

 

[Error 420]

I put in Jack's bio that she was a crew member on the Enterprise. Could I use that as a sort of catch-all for her knowing stuff that a normal member of the crew wouldn't know much about (like the borg, the Q continuum, etc?).

 

[Darkraven]

I put in Jack's bio that she was a crew member on the Enterprise. Could I use that as a sort of catch-all for her knowing stuff that a normal member of the crew wouldn't know much about (like the borg, the Q continuum, etc?).

Since she was only there for a short period of time and was only an ensign, it would have to be very specific though. Like, I don't think she'd know everything that happened in the seven years for the season (and more outside of the series) and she'd only be privy to knowledge she need to do her job there - which is not a lot since she's an ensign and no where near to being a senior officer or bridge officer.

Edit: at the most, she'd know the rumors and hearsays from the various members there, and by specific I meant specific to the time period she spent there.

 

[Error 420]

Since she was only there for a short period of time and was only an ensign, it would have to be very specific though. Like, I don't think she'd know everything that happened in the seven years for the season (and more outside of the series) and she'd only be privy to knowledge she need to do her job there - which is not a lot since she's an ensign and no where near to being a senior officer or bridge officer.

fair enough.

 

[Darkraven]

fair enough.

I made an edit earlier...

At the most, she'd also know the rumors and hearsays from the various members there, and by specific I meant specific to the time period she spent there.

 

[Inactive User 002]

Darkraven
Yeah sorry about it not being finished and very rough. It was my first draft and just wanted to get it up so you knew I was working on it will try to iron out kinks as quickly and as soon as possible.

 

[MechanicalSnake]

I am glad everyone is a weirdo, if a normal person joined, they would go nuts just from reading the character sheets.
That said, I suppose (and hope?) more people will eventully join....

 

[MechanicalSnake]

Darkraven
Yeah sorry about it not being finished and very rough. It was my first draft and just wanted to get it up so you knew I was working on it will try to iron out kinks as quickly and as soon as possible.

I have read it and I really like her if I can say so myself. But it would be very helpful if you separated sentences by punctuation marks, otherwise it is very hard to follow.
I really love the picture btw.

 

[Inactive User 002]

I have read it and I really like her if I can say so myself. But it would be very helpful if you separated sentences by punctuation marks, otherwise it is very hard to follow.
I really love the picture btw.

Yeah I love the that image a lot and use it for a few different things. Also I know about the punctuation left it out and planned to put it back in once everything was down but, it’s really long so it will take me bit of time. Glad you like the general feel of the race I made. I always like the episodes were they came across generational ships or species that had left for a new world.

 

[Darkraven]

Darkraven
Yeah sorry about it not being finished and very rough. It was my first draft and just wanted to get it up so you knew I was working on it will try to iron out kinks as quickly and as soon as possible.

I understand. I'm sure the finished product would be awesome, because what you have now is pretty interesting

 

[Darkraven]

I'll hold off on posting until our 2 other fellow roleplayers come in. I think Polito has nothing more to do or say

 

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

I am glad everyone is a weirdo, if a normal person joined, they would go nuts just from reading the character sheets.
That said, I suppose (and hope?) more people will eventully join....

Hey, I resemble that implication that I'm a weirdo.

 

[Darkraven]

Hey, I resemble that implication that I'm a weirdo.

'resemble that implication'?

 

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

'resemble that implication'?

It's a play on "I resent that implication" that says the implication is true.

 

[Darkraven]

It's a play on "I resent that implication" that says the implication is true.

I suspected it, but the advent of smartphone autocorrect features have cast unnecessary doubt on puns and wordplay I get it now.

I guess I'll be expecting posts from you and Inactive User 002 within 24 hours? I'll go over Inkwell's CS after a refreshing jog in the night

 

[Darkraven]

I've added more physical descriptions to Captain Ke'varr's appearance, to prepare for when your characters meet him.

 

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

I guess I'll be expecting posts from you and Inactive User 002 within 24 hours? I'll go over Inkwell's CS after a refreshing jog in the night

Triple that and you may have it right. The most I can really do is post in OOC a little from my phone in the off moments. Sorry, I'm trying, but school tasks are taking up the vast majority of my time. Once I'm done with this I should be good for a bit though.

 

[Darkraven]

Triple that and you may have it right. The most I can really do is post in OOC a little from my phone in the off moments. Sorry, I'm trying, but school tasks are taking up the vast majority of my time. Once I'm done with this I should be good for a bit though.

You're aware that part of the rules is that you have to post within one week, right? You had all of last week to post (It's Monday for me now). I think it's only a matter of time management. I know people who had worst schedules and still made the commitment to write (professionally I might add) - multiple children to take care of, with a full-time job to handle no less. One post doesn't need long - just some brainstorming, which can be done while you're commuting or in the shower, and then at most 30 minutes to write an average length post, 1 hour maximum. If you spread an hour over six days, you just need 10 minutes of your time per day.

Anyway, I'm hoping that you can still post within one or two days - which is a 24-48 hours extension.

 

[Inactive User 002]

Sorry I am taking a while on cs. It always takes me a long time. Also I have university tests soon. Plus we had two days bad snowfall and bad internet as result.

 

[Darkraven]

Sorry I am taking a while on cs. It always takes me a long time. Also I have university tests soon. Plus we had two days bad snowfall and bad internet as result.

No worries, for you, you still have a few days on the clock.

 

[RPLongAndProsper]

Greetings! I have returned to RPN after several months and found this thread while running a search for Star Trek. Is it still open?

 

[Darkraven]

Greetings! I have returned to RPN after several months and found this thread while running a search for Star Trek. Is it still open?

Yes, it very much is. You're welcome to submit a CS and I'll vet through it. Your character would likely appear a little later from the looks of it though.

 

[CelticHero37]

*Peeks in.* Hey guys! How does everybody feel about Bajorans?