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[HerSmileWasBlack]

WIP

Fairytale name:


The Huntsman


Reborn name:


Hunter Manuel


Age:


23


Date of Birth:


January 7


Height:


6"1


Eye color:


Moss Green


Hair color:


Caramel Blonde


Distinguishing physical characteristics:


Is it his soft green eyes? Or his toned, rocking body? No. Its the big-ass, scar like birthmark on the left side of his neck.


Personality quirks:


Flaws:


Talents:


Marksmanship- Be it with archery or just throwing things around, the boy can never miss.


Acting- Man, can this guy lie.


Hobbies:


Personality:


Short Bio:


Twist: He's a lover instead of a Killer.

I like what you have so far, finish up and acceptance is yours deary.

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

Note: I am quite happy with our number of participants, one more day just in case and then we begin. ⌒.⌒

 

[Maddox Rainer]

Hello everyone. Smile asked me to inform everyone that her first post will be up soon. She got called into work, so it'll be up later today.

 

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

[QUOTE="Maddox Rainer]Hello everyone. Smile asked me to inform everyone that her first post will be up soon. She got called into work, so it'll be up later today.

[/QUOTE]
Nice. I look forward to it.

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

The Huntsman


Reborn name:


Hunter Manuel


Age:


24


Date of Birth:


January 7


Height:


6"1


Eye color:


Moss Green


Hair color:


Caramel Blonde


Distinguishing physical characteristics:

Is it his soft green eyes? Or his toned, rocking body? No. Its the big-ass, scar like birthmark on the left side of his neck.


Personality quirks:


Hunter has a lisp. It's rather noticeable. He also has a sweet side for dark haired girls with bright eyes--although he is totally gay.


Flaws: He hates the idea of killing any living thing and will go out of his way to keep from consciously doing so--even at the inconvenience of others. He's also kind of a push-over, unable to really think or act on his own...well, for now at least.


Talents:


Marksmanship- Be it with archery or just throwing things around, the boy can never miss.


Acting- Man, can this guy lie.


Survival- Hunter has exccedingly massive intellect on the forestry and all its wonders. From tracking to plant identification, he can do it all. He also keeps his body at peak condition, though he doesn't exactly know why he bothers.


Hobbies:


Archery, Volunteer Work, Knitting


Personality:


Hunter is a lively little fellow. When he is in a good mood it is rather infectious. He would offer you the clothes on his back if it helped you out. He hates seeing other lives in misery, which is a trait he carried over from his "stories". However, he has become rather spineless, taking orders from those who don't deserve their seat of power and actually carrying them out. It's not exactly who he is, and although he may want to claim their heads over it he simply cannot.


Short Bio:


Hunter was raised by his grandmother, who is alive and probably breaking her hip dancing in Boca Raton. He was an average student, who went to state and became a social worker. He specializes in domestic cases that deal with children. Usually, his cases involve little girls who's step mothers are brutal without end; or parents who send their kids to a relatives' house and take off. It breaks his heart, sometimes.


On weekends, he volunteers at a local pet shop. Occasionally, he'll foster a pet or two. They make great friends for his Cat named Wolf.

Twist: He's a lover instead of a Killer.
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Acceptance is yours. ^^

 

[Naka]

Hey, is it possible for nursery rhyme characters to be accepted, or is it strictly fairy tale characters? (:

 

[Killjoy]

Fairytale name

Prince Phillip

Reborn name

Detective Jackson Phillips

Age

24

Date of Birth

December 19

Height

6'4

Eye color

Brown

Hair color

Brown

Distinguishing physical characteristics

Jackson is a tall, muscular figure. He has dark brown eyes glimmer in the light

Personality quirk

Very obsessive personality, cannot let unsolved cases go.

Flaws

- Obsessive


- Has no regard for his own well-being.


- Cannot function well in a group he is not the leader of.

Talents

A very intuitive detective, he is a natural problem solver. He is very skilled with handguns and he is a very good climber

Hobbies

Jackson enjoys running and working out. He is an avid hiker and camper, and enjoys solitude.

Personality

Jackson is a very eager person. He is helpful to the community and likes to play the role of leader or hero. He is brave, seemingly fearless. He is a diplomat, solving problems between groups. He is very judicial, enforcing justice without prejudice.

Short Bio

Jackson was born into a family of lawmen, learning that justice trumped all at a young age. He took the job as a beat police officer at age 18 and has moved his way up the ranks, now serving as a homicide detective.




Twist

Jacson has uncontrollable spells of rage in which his alter ago rises, turning him into a calculated serial killer.
​

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

Hey, is it possible for nursery rhyme characters to be accepted, or is it strictly fairy tale characters? (:

I suppose nursery rhymes would be acceptable. They do teach lessons and sooth children.


 

Fairytale name

Prince Phillip

Reborn name

Virtus

Age

20

Date of Birth

December 19

Height

6'4

Eye color

Dark blue

Hair color

Jet black

Distinguishing physical characteristics

Virtus is a tall, muscular figure. He has dark blue eyes that seem to glimmer in the light.

Personality quirk

Virtus is very helpful, almost always willing to sacrifice his well-being for the greater good of others. He is heroic and chivalrous, a trait likely passed down to him through his nobility. He is almost too nice, often leaving others very uncomfortable around him.

Flaws

- Not a particularly quick thinker.


- Has no regard for his own well-being.


- Cannot function well in a group he is not the leader of.

Talents

A very well versed sword fighter and horseman. He is a master of diplomacy and is good at solving internal disputes among a group. Although not the smartest in terms of common sense, his by-the-book strategic skills are unrivaled.

Hobbies

Virtus enjoys talking with townspeople and making new acquaintances. In his free time he is reading or riding his horse.

Personality

Virtus is a very eager person. He is helpful to the community and likes to play the role of leader or hero. He is brave, seemingly fearless. He is a diplomat, solving problems between groups. He has a long temper and is good at rallying forces together against a common evil.

Short Bio

Virtus was born into a lineage of wealthy noblemen and warriors, quite the uncanny mix. His father, a fierce and strong knight, taught him how to fight and ride horses from an early age, while his mother, a peaceful noble taught him how to read and interact with others. As soon as he was of age, he enlisted in the King's army, choosing to follow his father's path for a short time before leaving the way of life years later. He now spends him time idling in town, helping citizens with odd-jobs that require a sword.




Twist

Virtus possesses an evil alter ego that shows itself when he loses his temper. He becomes ruthless and instinctually evil. This alter ego causes him to become destructive and evil.
​

Accepted, you may post now. Woot.

 

[Azerothii]

Appearance pic:

Fairytale name:


Alice in Wonderland


Reborn name:


Alicia Mari Blanc


Age:


23


Date of Birth:


February 12


Height:


5'4


Eye color:


Green eyes


Hair color:


Blonde


Distinguishing physical characteristics:


- Wears an omega symbol


necklace


- Eye bugs


Personality quirks:


- twirls her hair with fingers


- fixes her reading glasses when nervous.


- Has a bunny charm around her whenever she goes


Flaws:


-Often daydreams


-suffers from nightmares that leads her to become introverted


-usually quiet


Talents:


-Writing stories


-Violin


Hobbies:


-Reading novels


-Listening to instrumental music


Personality:


Introverted/Independent/Curious/Calm/Loner


Short Bio:


Her family died in a house fire when she was six. Alicia lived in an orphanage where she often gets bullied and suffers from nightmares everyday, while hoping that someone would take her and make a new start. Realizing that no one would eventually help her, She intermediately became mature at a young age and started living alone on an apartment by the age of 18 with a career as a writer until now.


Twist:


She has a chance of being into the brink of insanity if this wonderland dreams continue mixed with the horrid past. But would she be able to save herself from this and move on?

​

 

[Killjoy]

@HerSmileWasBlack My apologies, I had to completely revamp my character to make him acceptable for the time period

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

Appearance pic:

Fairytale name:


Alice in Wonderland


Reborn name:


Alicia Mari Blanc


Age:


23


Date of Birth:


February 12


Height:


5'4


Eye color:


Green eyes


Hair color:


Blonde


Distinguishing physical characteristics:


- Wears an omega symbol


necklace


- Eye bugs


Personality quirks:


- twirls her hair with fingers


- fixes her reading glasses when nervous.


- Has a bunny charm around her whenever she goes


Flaws:


-Often daydreams


-suffers from nightmares that leads her to become introverted


-usually quiet


Talents:


-Writing stories


-Violin


Hobbies:


-Reading novels


-Listening to instrumental music


Personality:


Introverted/Independent/Curious/Calm/Loner


Short Bio:


Her family died in a house fire when she was six. Alicia lived in an orphanage where she often gets bullied and suffers from nightmares everyday, while hoping that someone would take her and make a new start. Realizing that no one would eventually help her, She intermediately became mature at a young age and started living alone on an apartment by the age of 18 with a career as a writer until now.


Twist:


Hates dreams ((Wonderland)) as she suffers on nightmares instead.


((i might edit this a bit))
​

Accepted. The RP has begun. Feel free to post when you are ready.


 

@HerSmileWasBlack My apologies, I had to completely revamp my character to make him acceptable for the time period

That's perfectly fine, lol I just assumed he was quirky

 

[Lioness3009]

Appearance pic:


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Fairytale name: Rose Red


Reborn name: Rosalyn McGabe


Age: 18


Date of Birth: July 30, 1997


Height: 5'10"


Eye color: Green


Hair color: Red


Distinguishing physical characteristics:

• Tattoo of a butterfly on her shoulder blade
  
• Scar on her left forearm from a cat
  

Personality quirks:

• Bites her lip when nervous
  
• Has a hard time paying attention
  
• Can't be still
  

Flaws:

• Always on the run
  
• Over talkitive
  
• Gets distracted easily
  

Talents:

• Can sing
  
• Can cook
  
• Can make her own clothes
  

Hobbies:

• Reading
  
• Nature watching
  
• Chasing butterflies
  
• Sewing
  

Personality: Rosalyn is really hyper and fun loving. She can never sit still and always finds something to do. She is really kind and tries to help where ever she can.. She can be a bit too forward at times but she isn't easy to stay mad at.


Short Bio: Rosalyn was born with her twin sister but they were given up at birth. The woman who raised Rosalyn was the homemaker type and taught Rosalyn how valuable sewing, cleaning, and cooking are. Rosalyn was very happy there except for the cat. They had a cat named Prince but Rosalyn hated the cat, and the cat hated her. He proved this by leaving a scar on her.


Twist: Rosalyn hates animals and they hate her.

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

Appearance pic:
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Fairytale name: Rose Red


Reborn name: Rosalyn McGabe


Age: 18


Date of Birth: July 30, 1997


Height: 5'10"


Eye color: Green


Hair color: Red


Distinguishing physical characteristics:

• Tattoo of a butterfly on her shoulder blade
  
• Scar on her left forearm from a cat
  

Personality quirks:

• Bites her lip when nervous
  
• Has a hard time paying attention
  
• Can't be still
  

Flaws:

• Always on the run
  
• Over talkitive
  
• Gets distracted easily
  

Talents:

• Can sing
  
• Can cook
  
• Can make her own clothes
  

Hobbies:

• Reading
  
• Nature watching
  
• Chasing butterflies
  
• Sewing
  

Personality: Rosalyn is really hyper and fun loving. She can never sit still and always finds something to do. She is really kind and tries to help where ever she can.. She can be a bit too forward at times but she isn't easy to stay mad at.


Short Bio: Rosalyn was born with her twin sister but they were given up at birth. The woman who raised Rosalyn was the homemaker type and taught Rosalyn how valuable sewing, cleaning, and cooking are. Rosalyn was very happy there except for the cat. They had a cat named Prince but Rosalyn hated the cat, and the cat hated her. He proved this by leaving a scar on her.


Twist: Rosalyn hates animals and they hate her.

Accepted. We have begun, feel free to post your introduction.

 

[DreamsAreForDreamers]

Appearance pic:

Fairy Tale name:

Mad Hatter

Reborn name:

Meri Hatt

Name Explanation:

Meri in Hebrew means bitter or rebellious and Hatt means Hat

Age:

19

Date of Birth:

July, 6th

Height:

5'9

Eye color:

Light greenish blue

Hair color:

Red

Distinguishing physical characteristics:

Her wild red hair


An medium scar on the left side of her face


Personality quirks:


She can lose focus on an conversation really quick


She tries out new words and riddles everyday


Always wears an old top hat

Flaws:

Doesn't like being boss around


Not very open about herself. Doesn't trust people easily


Needs to drink tea everyday at noon

Talents:

Smart


Wise


Distracting people


Telling stories


Learning


Hobbies:


Reading


Writing


Building

Personality:

Meri is the brave and silent type. She hates being the center of attention and likes to stay in the background. She does love learning new words and riddles, she can't hate someone if she tried. She has an too kind heart for that. She can go a little crazy when she has sugar or one of her friends is hurt. Protective and caring. She can give you amazing support and is actually very strong. She hates when people does wrong and is an rebel for that

Short Bio:

Meri grew up with two parents and twin little brothers until her village was burned down and her family was burned alive when she was 12. On that point on, she lived in the forest in an little shack that she found and rebuild. She worked in the town where she was an waitress at an dinner. She worked to get food and fix up the old shack. She was always alone since the townspeople called her strange and weird but she didn't mind though. She kept doing that until today. She stills lives in the shack but has grew into an larger shack and she is now the manger of the diner.

Twist: She doesn't hate the Red Queen. She has an crush on her and she hates fighting. Oh and she hates being the center of attention and is actually quite sane unless you give her sugar




​

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

Appearance pic:

Fairy Tale name:

Mad Hatter

Reborn name:

Meri Hatt

Name Explanation:

Meri in Hebrew means bitter or rebellious and Hatt means Hat

Age:

19

Date of Birth:

July, 6th

Height:

5'9

Eye color:

Light greenish blue

Hair color:

Red

Distinguishing physical characteristics:

Her wild red hair


An medium scar on the left side of her face


Personality quirks:


She can lose focus on an conversation really quick


She tries out new words and riddles everyday


Always wears an old top hat

Flaws:

Doesn't like being boss around


Not very open about herself. Doesn't trust people easily


Needs to drink tea everyday at noon

Talents:

Smart


Wise


Distracting people


Telling stories


Learning


Hobbies:


Reading


Writing


Building

Personality:

Meri is the brave and silent type. She hates being the center of attention and likes to stay in the background. She does love learning new words and riddles, she can't hate someone if she tried. She has an too kind heart for that. She can go a little crazy when she has sugar or one of her friends is hurt. Protective and caring. She can give you amazing support and is actually very strong. She hates when people does wrong and is an rebel for that

Short Bio:

Meri grew up with two parents and twin little brothers until her village was burned down and her family was burned alive when she was 12. On that point on, she lived in the forest in an little shack that she found and rebuild. She worked in the town where she was an waitress at an dinner. She worked to get food and fix up the old shack. She was always alone since the townspeople called her strange and weird but she didn't mind though. She kept doing that until today. She stills lives in the shack but has grew into an larger shack and she is now the manger of the diner.

Twist: She doesn't hate the Red Queen. She has an crush on her and she hates fighting. Oh and she hates being the center of attention and is actually quite sane unless you give her sugar




​

Accepted

 

[offbeat]

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Peter Pan


Reborn name:


Jack Montgomery


Age:


22


Date of Birth:


? March 23rd ?


Height:


6'2"


Eye color:


Hazel


Hair color:


Amber brown, but leans toward a more reddish shade


Distinguishing physical characteristics:


Probably the smirk or the teasing look in his eyes, or perhaps the Ankh cross that is tattoed on his upper back as a symbol for eternal youth and immortality


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Personality quirks:


Teases everyone


Smirks, a lot.


Always up for little adventures


Flaws:


Stubborn


Childish


Selfish


Cocky


Impulsive


Talents:


Most games are a piece of cake as he is a competitive one


A graceful one allright, far from clumsy


Impersonations


Knife-wielding


Hobbies:


Painting


Fluteplaying


Personality:


One of the first things you will notice about him is his increddibly teasing and immature way of acting. He certainly isn't one to sit down and talk about politics. In fact, he prefers to live in a constant adventure without any worries, no matter the consequences. As he is very childish, he's also very stubborn and selfish. He wants things his way, and he wants them only for himself. For example: let's say you and him were friends, you wouldn't even be able to talk to another human being without having him being jealous of it.


But he can be mature when it is really required from him. It is very rare, but it might happen at times.


Jack will always, always, be up for any type of adventure. Even if the adventure is defined as going to the new restaurant at 5 a.m, and mot of the time he'll drag with him any person nearby. Let's just say that your life would never be boring if you had him in it.


Short Bio:


Jack grew up in a sweet, innocent home outside of London with his parents and a whole bunch of siblings. Even though they had a loving home, everything seemed so serious all the time. Few smiled more than a few times a day, and no one liked to play around. No one except the poor little Jack who was always running around playing games and teasing his siblings. When in school, Jack did surprisingly well for a boy of his concentration levels, and ended up with average grades to get him far enough in life to get into college.


Twist:


Well, he's not a child anymore and he isn't particularly afraid of growing up


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[Sibyl]

Appearance pic:

Fairytale name: Beauty


Reborn name: Desiree Montressor


Age: 20


Date of Birth: Febuary 14, 1995


Height: 5'8


Eye color: green


Hair color: red


Distinguishing physical characteristics: her hair


Personality quirks: when she is stressed out she cleans


Flaws: she is very promiscuous, curious,outspoken in her early past life she was very meek and submissive


Talents: cleaning, cooking, sewing


Hobbies: reading


Personality: Outspoken and flirtatious she will say whats on her mind and she doesn't care what others think of her. She is Blatant and confidant she will do what she wants and she loves to get what she wants. Curious by nature she loves to snoop around in other peoples business, she can also be very persuasive and she loves a good night out on the town. She is an extrovert and loves to socialize.


Short Bio: Desiree has lived in the town since birth and she lived with her father and two sisters until she was 18 then she left the house because she fought constantly with her sisters. She became a live in maid and used her seductive prowess to her advantage seducing her employees into giving her more money or just for a place to stay. Well known around town and generally well liked people seem to be attracted to her extroverted personality.

Twist: promiscuous

 

[HerSmileWasBlack]

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Peter Pan


Reborn name:


Jack Montgomery


Age:


22


Date of Birth:


? March 23rd ?


Height:


6'2"


Eye color:


Hazel


Hair color:


Amber brown, but leans toward a more reddish shade


Distinguishing physical characteristics:


Probably the smirk or the teasing look in his eyes, or perhaps the Ankh cross that is tattoed on his upper back as a symbol for eternal youth and immortality


View attachment 170733


Personality quirks:


Teases everyone


Smirks, a lot.


Always up for little adventures


Flaws:


Stubborn


Childish


Selfish


Cocky


Impulsive


Talents:


Most games are a piece of cake as he is a competitive one


A graceful one allright, far from clumsy


Impersonations


Knife-wielding


Hobbies:


Painting


Fluteplaying


Personality:


One of the first things you will notice about him is his increddibly teasing and immature way of acting. He certainly isn't one to sit down and talk about politics. In fact, he prefers to live in a constant adventure without any worries, no matter the consequences. As he is very childish, he's also very stubborn and selfish. He wants things his way, and he wants them only for himself. For example: let's say you and him were friends, you wouldn't even be able to talk to another human being without having him being jealous of it.


But he can be mature when it is really required from him. It is very rare, but it might happen at times.


Jack will always, always, be up for any type of adventure. Even if the adventure is defined as going to the new restaurant at 5 a.m, and mot of the time he'll drag with him any person nearby. Let's just say that your life would never be boring if you had him in it.


Short Bio:


Jack grew up in a sweet, innocent home outside of London with his parents and a whole bunch of siblings. Even though they had a loving home, everything seemed so serious all the time. Few smiled more than a few times a day, and no one liked to play around. No one except the poor little Jack who was always running around playing games and teasing his siblings. When in school, Jack did surprisingly well for a boy of his concentration levels, and ended up with average grades to get him far enough in life to get into college.


Twist:


Well, he's not a child anymore and he isn't particularly afraid of growing up


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Accepted. Delightful.


 

Appearance pic:

Fairytale name: Beauty


Reborn name: Desiree Montressor


Age: 20


Date of Birth: Febuary 14, 1995


Height: 5'8


Eye color: green


Hair color: red


Distinguishing physical characteristics: her hair


Personality quirks: when she is stressed out she cleans


Flaws: she is very promiscuous, curious,outspoken in her early past life she was very meek and submissive


Talents: cleaning, cooking, sewing


Hobbies: reading


Personality: Outspoken and flirtatious she will say whats on her mind and she doesn't care what others think of her. She is Blatant and confidant she will do what she wants and she loves to get what she wants. Curious by nature she loves to snoop around in other peoples business, she can also be very persuasive and she loves a good night out on the town. She is an extrovert and loves to socialize.


Short Bio: Desiree has lived in the town since birth and she lived with her father and two sisters until she was 18 then she left the house because she fought constantly with her sisters. She became a live in maid and used her seductive prowess to her advantage seducing her employees into giving her more money or just for a place to stay. Well known around town and generally well liked people seem to be attracted to her extroverted personality.

Twist: promiscuous

Accepted.


Both of you feel free to post. My copilot and I will be back. Soon with any luck.

 

[InactiveCoffee]

Just to let those who will be applying, HerSmileWasBlack has asked me to look over profiles and acceptance or denial until she and Maddox return. She has put much faith in me, and I hope not to disappoint.

 

[Obi-Wan Kenobi]

Just to let those who will be applying, HerSmileWasBlack has asked me to look over profiles and acceptance or denial until she and Maddox return. She has put much faith in me, and I hope not to disappoint.

Congrats. Always a good sign when the GM feels like they can trust you.

 

[Foogels]

Spoiler

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Fairytale name:

(There was not a name xP)

Reborn name:

Claire Blane

Age:

18

Date of Birth:

June 19th

Height:

5'9

Eye color:

Pink

Hair color:

Pink

Distinguishing physical characteristics:

Nah

Personality quirks:

She doesn't talk much

Flaws:

She tries to be quite but is sometimes loud

Talents:

She's fast

Hobbies:

Stealing...

Personality:

Up to a challenge and doesn't talk

Short Bio:

She had left her father down a path and tried to join a bandit camp and they didn't believe her so she stole Ox's to get in then they left anyway. She then found a guy and had too impress the father by stealing things and got the Marriage after all.

(Full Story: The Master Thief - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia )

Twist:

It's a girl instead of a guy.

 

[InactiveCoffee]

The Master Thief - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia[/URL] )

Twist:

It's a girl instead of a guy.


The idea is good, but Short Bio is difficult to understand. And the twist could use a little more to it. I believe HerSmileWasBlack is looking for more than just a gender change for a twist. Something like The Master Thief turning out to be someone who doesn't steal at all or likes to steal but isn't good at it.... as examples.

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