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Fantasy Seiunita OOC

That's your problem. You've got a fourteen year old mind, but you have to extend beyond that!

Just get a reader app or something, and I'll give you, discreetly, a few books of... notorious SIZE...
Actually, I probably have a sixteen year old mind that has a tiny bit of sociopath and "don't feel like it" in it
 
Actually, I probably have a sixteen year old mind that has a tiny bit of sociopath and "don't feel like it" in it

Two years don't matter, except that you get less boners. That's the only difference.

You've got to think like 30 year old man! Think, damn it, think!!!
 
Couple of years? Man, you're only fourteen.
Yeah, I read books when I was twelve, believe it or not.

Two years don't matter, except that you get less boners. That's the only difference.

You've got to think like 30 year old man! Think, damn it, think!!!
I would actually like to have my boners last longer before- yeah, let's forget I said anything

I think you need to stop trying to get everyone to be your clone Elephantom Elephantom If you don't like the way someone RPs, don't RP with them. lmao
I need to improve my details in posts.

Seriously, people are starting to hate me over how paper thin my posts are when it comes to detail.
 
xD just someone calling you on it.



There's a difference between improving your writing and just copying someone else's.
Well, I have my own style, but it's not working.

I won't completely copy his own style of writing, but Eleph is a lot more experienced than I am at this shit for some reason.

So yeah, I'll just uh... stick with this idea.
 
Well, I have my own style, but it's not working.

I won't completely copy his own style of writing, but Eleph is a lot more experienced than I am at this shit for some reason.

So yeah, I'll just uh... stick with this idea.

lol he's like... twice your age, so that probably has something to do with it, plus he reads a lot. Reading really would help you improve.
 
Well, I have my own style, but it's not working.

I won't completely copy his own style of writing, but Eleph is a lot more experienced than I am at this shit for some reason.

So yeah, I'll just uh... stick with this idea.

It took time for me to develop my skills, and mostly became I'm in my mid twenties.

But, well, I'm only trying to teach you the basics. You can branch off, use my lessons as crutch for a moment, into your own brand of writing. One that everybody can recognize, one everybody will cheer over.

I hope, you become a better writer than me, bub, and less insufferable. Don't follow my path, bub, just keep to the books and set your eyes on the prize.
 
lol he's like... twice your age, so that probably has something to do with it, plus he reads a lot. Reading really would help you improve.
Yeah, that's what Eleph said 2 minutes ago.

Anyways,

Just know that I wasn't joking when I said people are hating me for my bullshit.
Nogoodname Nogoodname may have apologized, but Nogood didn't have to, because it was true.

It took time for me to develop my skills, and mostly became I'm in my mid twenties.

But, well, I'm only trying to teach you the basics. You can branch off, use my lessons as crutch for a moment, into your own brand of writing. One that everybody can recognize, one everybody will cheer over.

I hope, you become a better writer than me, bub, and less insufferable. Don't follow my path, bub, just keep to the books and set your eyes on the prize.
I'll try.

Guess I need to go find that book about the girl who fights aliens in a spaceship in the military and meets a cute boy and... oh god...
 
Yeah, that's what Eleph said 2 minutes ago.

Anyways,

Just know that I wasn't joking when I said people are hating me for my bullshit.
Nogoodname Nogoodname may have apologized, but Nogood didn't have to, because it was true.


I'll try.

Guess I need to go find that book about the girl who fights aliens in a spaceship in the military and meets a cute boy and... oh god...
Bitch ass I apologized because you deserved it, you're doing fine and the fact that you're looking to improve is really, really good.
 
Yeah, that's what Eleph said 2 minutes ago.

Anyways,

Just know that I wasn't joking when I said people are hating me for my bullshit.
Nogoodname Nogoodname may have apologized, but Nogood didn't have to, because it was true.


I'll try.

Guess I need to go find that book about the girl who fights aliens in a spaceship in the military and meets a cute boy and... oh god...

Damn, not that kind of book, bub! They're ruining your precocious mind!

Read fantasy books, or books that are better suited to your age. Read a couple of classics like Steinbeck or Stephen King. They're always helpful.

And then there's American Psycho...
 
It's an actual book, but I forgot the name.

Something Sky I think.


Honestly, I really don't deserve any praise I get nowadays.
You're fine, trust me, just keep working at it and keep trying to improve, you're on the right path.

Nogood reminds me of a like... younger, more brash, female version of Eleph. LOL
DON'T
 
Speaking of books, I have one book to recommend for everyone who wants to learn about the specifics of population, towns, cities, and food and all that shit. It was written in the 1970's and there are three volumes of this book, but I just have to show him here because I heard that he's a renown historian.

https://www.amazon.com/Structures-Everyday-Life-Civilization-Capitalism/dp/0060148454

The first volume is the hardest but it is SUPER-specific about food, cities, towns, etc. I do not have the other two volumes in my possession, but the second volume focuses more on markets and capitalism.... while the third volume? Don't know much, sorry.

All right, now I really have to go to school. Bye guys!
 

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