Fandom Pokemon: A New Adventure! OOC

[Soulmuse]

I shall return to my hole then.

 

[spacepossum]

Lmaoo

 

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

Ok so I don't want to be too rude about this, but I have a few issues with this. First of all is the backstory, now this was never mentioned to be optional and I would like at least something more than "Rather not say" other characters in the story won't know about her backstory unless she tells them. If you want to keep some stuff secret than that's fine by me. And it'll help elaborate where and what Metropolis, Kansas is since it's just kind of out there with no context. Secondly putting "Rather not say" on her weaknesses is a no go, everyone has weaknesses and a large part of this rp is character development and growth with Weaknesses being a large part of said development, again characters wont know her weaknesses unless openly said in character. They don't have that elaborate just simple fears or phobias.

Again sorry if I sounded rude it's just right now there doesn't seem to be a lot of meat on this skeleton.

Would this be better?

#18

 

[Midnightclub]

Captain's not around so I've taken his spot in the interim.

I don't wanna overstep, but I have issues with the character. First, this takes place in the Pokemon World, not the real one. So she couldn't be from Connecticut and she can't live in Kansas.

 

[Midnightclub]

Hey guys, I'm still around and I'll get a post in when I can. Just been pretty busy.

 

[Theo713]

No worries. I believe its Mal's post anyway.