AllHailDago
Rough Tough Creampuff
Just like to say, when you talk about not having time for things.... this is one of the reasons why you dont. o-o Just saiyan.
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Add me to your conversation if you guys have one, if not I'll add you to oursArkytior said:Win might be waiting on me. So I'll get back to Red and you soon. Like this afternoon.
I can't add people to the conversation, so you'll have to add me to yours.BLUR said:Add me to your conversation if you guys have one, if not I'll add you to ours
Caitlyn is developing into a nice character. While Cayleb is already a well-done character. However, Cayleb's character is in a situation that limits his development, in the same vain it allows you to expand upon it by showing his reaction to these events taking place around him. Ultimately, I will give you a criticism as a friend: Having collabed with you/the character a lot, I realize the character is immature and focuses a lot on self-image and that he's "fresh" and developing attachments to begin show-casing traits and quirks, however.... I do feel Cayleb is a bit.... not... reserved but... kinda more "sparse" in his thoughts/feelings, outbursts than I PERSONALLY imagined. He is YOUR character, but this is my take and friendly criticism. ^^AllHailDago said:So just as a general conversation starter I'd like to ask a couple questions of literally anyone willing to answer.
What do you all think of Caleb and Caitlyn (Rose)? How do you feel about how I've played them so far? Thoughts on their abilities?
Comments, compliments, criticisms all welcome. I'm trying to improve my writing so I'd love any possible feedback. Especially as these characters will be around for some time.
I did take this into account. Nathan was born in Crocus and raised on the streets, which means he has a bit of a prime reason to be in or around the proceedings. The next step is just following the bystander law that any random passerby to a situation could get dragged in via their own curiosity or other causes. Of course I'm looking to discuss said entry rather than randomly throw him into someone's scene.Lexielai said:It's an unfortunate time you've joined. Right now's probably the least likely time for players to be available to working on another adventure, since the Main Story is in progress and commanding most of everyone's attention here. There's a risk you might not be able to get involved until after the Kingslayer arc is over! I hope someone already told you that though and you're proceeding regardless, which would be cool
Like.... not as much talking and.... restlessness as I would expect from someone his age (I feel old now xD ) who is as his CS describes him.AllHailDago said:Caleb without the y btw. Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. May I ask what you mean by sparse and the like?
[media]AllHailDago said:Ah. Yes. Actually I was thinking that over. Mostly I'd attribute it to his discomfort in his environment. And his desire to disprove Wyatt and impress Cipher. But don't you worry. His restlessness and such IS coming. C:
Falcon Pu....er...Fire Dragon's Iron FistBlackknifeVane said:
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